Aharen: subtitles feedback

[3gf8jv4dv]

Feedback

Ep. 02

~ 11:32
那你两个就来当模特吧
那你兩個就來當模特兒吧

你两个/你兩個 -> 你俩/你倆 or -> 你们两个/你們兩個 maybe better.

Ep. 03

~ 19:31
事已至此 我也该做好觉悟了
事已至此 我也該做好覺悟了

觉悟/覺悟 -> (心理)准备/準備 maybe better.

~ 19:56
不对 是成为油管上代表世界的的男女组合
不對 是成為油管上代表世界的的男女組合

It looks like there is an extra 的.

~ 20:15
录制的很完美
錄製的很完美

的 -> 得 maybe better.

~ 21:45
即使分开了我也把笔记借给你看的
即使分開了我也把筆記借給妳看的

(OPTIONAL) 我也把 -> 我也会把/我也會把 maybe better.

Ep. 04

~ 00:46
这里的いと是强调副词 表示「非常」
這里的いと是強調副詞 表示「非常」
~ 00:51
而这里的あはれ 意思是「钟情」 用这个词表现出心情激动
而這里的あはれ 意思是「鍾情」 用這個詞表現岀心情激動

(OPTIONAL) In subsequent similar sentences, Japanese vocabulary parts are quoted using square quotation marks, but there are none here.

~ 09:32
阿波连同学交流的最好方法
阿波連同學交流的最好方法

Consider adding a 和 at the beginning.

Ep. 05

~ 05:01
来堂输
來堂輸

There are no spaces in the middle of the sentences here, and half-width spaces are added to the memory quotations that follow. (Including subsequent episodes)

Preview

~ 21:25
我也没觉得你平常又给我添过麻烦
我也沒覺得妳平常又給我添過麻煩

The word 又 sounds a bit strange here. I looked it up, maybe it is a typo? (-> 有 or remove it)

Ep. 06

~ 09:15
阿波连 来堂
阿波連 來堂

The subtitles look skewed here compared to the video.

~ 10:44
这种投法也太强吧
這種投法也太強吧

(OPTIONAL) 太强吧/太強吧 -> 太强了吧/太強了吧 maybe better.

~ 19:23

Here Raido said a sentence, but the subtitles did not appear. The subtitles appear again in the subsequent dialogue.

Ep. 07

~ 21:42
然后在找110…
然後再找110…

在 -> 再. CHT looks fine.

Ep. 08

~ 15:17
不用说能看到好多穿着浴衣和和服的人
不用說能看到好多穿著浴衣和和服的人

(OPTIONAL) The two 和 are too close. Maybe it can be changed to 或和服.

Ep. 09

~ 10:34

Here Reina says Eru’s name, but the subtitles do not appear. The subtitles appear again in subsequent dialogue.

~ 19:36
这里就该有我来向他说明这个道理
這裡就該有我來向他說明這個道理

有 -> 由.

Ep. 10

~ 09:59
遇难时要首先保持冷静
遇難時要首先保持冷靜

要首先 -> 首先要 maybe better.

~ 11:54
帮我把忘带食材送过来了啊 谢谢
幫我把忘記帶食材送過來了啊 謝謝

(OPTIONAL) 忘带食材/忘記帶食材 -> 忘带的食材/忘記帶的食材 maybe better.

~ 19:39
他们俩人果然还是和以往一样呢
他們兩人果然還是和以往一樣呢
~ 19:55
那个时候还期待两人之间会发生些什么呢
那個時候還期待兩人之間會發生些什麼事呢

俩人/两人 the wording should be unified. CHT looks fine.

Ep. 11

~ 04:08
从未想过能在上学途中能这么悠闲地喝咖啡
從未想過能在上學途中能這麼悠閒地喝咖啡

There seems to be a repetition of 能. Maybe one of them should be removed.

~ 16:29
我家只有年菜会做的很豪华
我家只有年菜會做的很豪華

的 -> 得 maybe better.

Ep. 12

~ 04:11
送来堂下地狱
送來堂下地狱

The end time of the screen text is not aligned with the scene change frame.

Preview

~ 04:48
说得也是 那我就放心了
說得也是 那我就放心了

Throughout the anime, 说的也是/說的也是 is used in some places and 说得也是/說得也是 is used in other places. Should it be unified?

~ 17:39
从战国时代至安土桃山時代一直在弘扬茶道的茶匠
從戰國時代至安土桃山時代一直在弘揚茶道的茶匠

There is a character 時 in CHS that should not be converted to traditional Chinese:

~ 09:57
我…喜欢阿波连同学
我…喜歡阿波連同學
~ 18:50
我喜欢你 阿波连同学
我喜歡妳 阿波連同學
~ 11:49
我也喜欢来堂同学
我也喜歡來堂同學
~ 18:56
我也喜欢你 来堂同学
我也喜歡你 來堂同學

(OPTIONAL) There is a difference between the translation that appears the first time and the memory scenes that appear later. Not sure if it was intentional.

~ 19:14
致 宫平老师 桃原老师
致 宫平老師 桃原老師

The end time of the screen text is not aligned with the scene change frame.

Preview

~ 22:55
这世上有很多温柔的人
這世上有很多温柔的人

There is a long pause in the middle of this sentence. Should an ellipsis be added?

Unified vocabulary translation

Nui, the golden retriever of the Aharen family, seems to have a different translation every time he appears.

Preview

The word YouTuBer that appears in the subtitles might be more appropriately written as YouTuber in a more standard way?

Others

Lyrics for the opening sections of the first two episodes and the ending sections of the first three episodes have not yet been added.

A very small number of subtitles start slightly behind the time the dialogue sounds appear. Since it is not a big problem, I did not pay special attention to this issue.

Sources

Unbatch releases.

[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][01][1080p][CHS].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][01][1080p][CHT].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][02][1080p][CHS].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][02][1080p][CHT].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][03][1080p][CHS].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][03][1080p][CHT].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][04][1080p][CHS].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][04][1080p][CHT].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][05][1080p][CHS].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][05][1080p][CHT].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][06][1080p][CHS].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][06][1080p][CHT].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][07][1080p][CHS].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][07][1080p][CHT].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][08][1080p][CHS][v2].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][08][1080p][CHT][v2].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][09][1080p][CHS].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][09][1080p][CHT].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][10][1080p][CHS].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][10][1080p][CHT].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][11][1080p][CHS].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][11][1080p][CHT].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][12][1080p][CHS].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][Aharen-san wa Hakarenai][12][1080p][CHT].mp4