diff --git a/src/twee/story/_foyer.tw b/src/twee/story/_foyer.tw
index 035a8116..d424b329 100644
--- a/src/twee/story/_foyer.tw
+++ b/src/twee/story/_foyer.tw
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <!-- These passages define the opening narration, and "hub area". -->
 
 :: Life of the Party.
-Your name is Hollis. You are an androgynous gray rabbit, around the age of nineteen.
+Your name is Hollis. You are an androgynous-looking gray rabbit of no particular gender identity, around the age of nineteen.
 
 Right now, you're at a very crowded house party. Drunk and horny college furs are everywhere. Loud music and the smell of cheap booze fills every room. <% if (setup.getAchievements().length > 3) { %>This place seems strangely familiar, though you can't put a paw on it.<% } %>