From 2dcb44850a04cf0943ce2673e8b264a4f1a64f33 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Christiane (Tina) Heiligers" <christiane.heiligers@elastic.co>
Date: Tue, 10 Dec 2019 12:55:41 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] [Telemetry/Pulse] Updates advanced settings text for usage
 data (#52657)

* [Telemetry/Pulse] Updates advanced settings text for usage data
---
 .../__snapshots__/telemetry_form.test.js.snap | 31 +++++++++++--------
 .../public/components/telemetry_form.js       | 28 +++++++++++------
 2 files changed, 36 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/public/components/__snapshots__/telemetry_form.test.js.snap b/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/public/components/__snapshots__/telemetry_form.test.js.snap
index a7f8d72e016f8..079a43e77616d 100644
--- a/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/public/components/__snapshots__/telemetry_form.test.js.snap
+++ b/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/public/components/__snapshots__/telemetry_form.test.js.snap
@@ -38,7 +38,24 @@ exports[`TelemetryForm renders as expected when allows to change optIn status 1`
             "defVal": true,
             "description": <React.Fragment>
               <p>
-                Help us improve the Elastic Stack by providing usage statistics for basic features. We will not share this data outside of Elastic.
+                <FormattedMessage
+                  defaultMessage="Enabling data usage collection helps us manage and improve our products and services. See our {privacyStatementLink} for more details."
+                  id="telemetry.telemetryConfigAndLinkDescription"
+                  values={
+                    Object {
+                      "privacyStatementLink": <ForwardRef
+                        href="https://www.elastic.co/legal/privacy-statement"
+                        target="_blank"
+                      >
+                        <FormattedMessage
+                          defaultMessage="Privacy Statement"
+                          id="telemetry.readOurUsageDataPrivacyStatementLinkText"
+                          values={Object {}}
+                        />
+                      </ForwardRef>,
+                    }
+                  }
+                />
               </p>
               <p>
                 <ForwardRef
@@ -51,18 +68,6 @@ exports[`TelemetryForm renders as expected when allows to change optIn status 1`
                   />
                 </ForwardRef>
               </p>
-              <p>
-                <ForwardRef
-                  href="https://www.elastic.co/legal/privacy-statement"
-                  target="_blank"
-                >
-                  <FormattedMessage
-                    defaultMessage="Read our usage data privacy statement"
-                    id="telemetry.readOurUsageDataPrivacyStatementLinkText"
-                    values={Object {}}
-                  />
-                </ForwardRef>
-              </p>
             </React.Fragment>,
             "type": "boolean",
             "value": false,
diff --git a/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/public/components/telemetry_form.js b/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/public/components/telemetry_form.js
index d4bbe1029b40d..f6012a271cde5 100644
--- a/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/public/components/telemetry_form.js
+++ b/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/public/components/telemetry_form.js
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ import {
   EuiSpacer,
   EuiText,
 } from '@elastic/eui';
-import { getConfigTelemetryDesc, PRIVACY_STATEMENT_URL } from '../../common/constants';
+import { PRIVACY_STATEMENT_URL } from '../../common/constants';
 import { OptInExampleFlyout } from './opt_in_details_component';
 import { Field } from 'ui/management';
 import { FormattedMessage } from '@kbn/i18n/react';
@@ -162,7 +162,23 @@ export class TelemetryForm extends Component {
 
   renderDescription = () => (
     <Fragment>
-      <p>{getConfigTelemetryDesc()}</p>
+      <p>
+        <FormattedMessage
+          id="telemetry.telemetryConfigAndLinkDescription"
+          defaultMessage="Enabling data usage collection helps us manage and improve our products and services.
+          See our {privacyStatementLink} for more details."
+          values={{
+            privacyStatementLink: (
+              <EuiLink href={PRIVACY_STATEMENT_URL} target="_blank">
+                <FormattedMessage
+                  id="telemetry.readOurUsageDataPrivacyStatementLinkText"
+                  defaultMessage="Privacy Statement"
+                />
+              </EuiLink>
+            )
+          }}
+        />
+      </p>
       <p>
         <EuiLink onClick={this.toggleExample}>
           <FormattedMessage
@@ -171,14 +187,6 @@ export class TelemetryForm extends Component {
           />
         </EuiLink>
       </p>
-      <p>
-        <EuiLink href={PRIVACY_STATEMENT_URL} target="_blank">
-          <FormattedMessage
-            id="telemetry.readOurUsageDataPrivacyStatementLinkText"
-            defaultMessage="Read our usage data privacy statement"
-          />
-        </EuiLink>
-      </p>
     </Fragment>
   )