conll2014b.json

[
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "more",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The use of the word \"more\" implies that the term \"genetic risk\" has been used inaccurately, so the author is clarifying the correct definition. Without previous context or any other usage of the term to compare against, this is confusing, so it's best to delete \"more.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 13,
        "incorrect sentence": "Genetic risk refers more to your chance of inheriting a disorder or disease .",
        "correct sentence": "Genetic risk refers to your chance of inheriting a disorder or disease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "disease",
                "correct": "diseases",
                "explanation": "Assuming that there exists more than one disease that is caused by genetic changes, the plural is appropriate here."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27,
        "incorrect sentence": "People get certain disease because of genetic changes .",
        "correct sentence": "People get certain diseases because of genetic changes ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The combination of \"certain\" and a noun requires either the indefinite article \"a\" or the plural form. Though there may be cases where someone is diagnosed with multiple diseases at the same time, given the use of the singular \"this result\" in the second clause, it sounds like the sentence is referring to a single disease, hence the indefinite article."
            },
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "out",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "It is ungrammatical to say \"diagnosed out with.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 106,
        "incorrect sentence": "When we are diagonosed out with certain genetic disease , are we suppose to disclose this result to our relatives ?",
        "correct sentence": "When we are diagonosed with certain a genetic disease , are we suppose to disclose this result to our relatives ?"
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "firghtenning",
                "correct": "frightening",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"frightening.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 150,
        "incorrect sentence": "On one hand , we do not want this potential danger causing firghtenning affects in our families ' later lives .",
        "correct sentence": "On one hand , we do not want this potential danger causing frightening affects in our families ' later lives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The combination of \"certain\" and a noun requires either the indefinite article \"a\" or the plural form. Though there may be cases where someone is diagnosed with multiple diseases at the same time, it is more common to assume a single disease, hence the indefinite article."
            },
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "altitudes",
                "correct": "attitudes",
                "explanation": "The word \"altitude\" means height, especially in relation to ground or sea level. The correct word here is \"attitude,\" meaning a way of thinking or feeling."
            },
            {
                "start": 20,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "for",
                "explanation": "The verb \"care\" requires the preposition \"for\" in order to connect to the object, or the person receiving the care."
            }
        ],
        "id": 216,
        "incorrect sentence": "When people around us know that we got certain disease , their altitudes will be easily changed , whether caring us too much or keeping away from us .",
        "correct sentence": "When people around us know that we got a certain disease , their attitudes will be easily changed , whether caring for us too much or keeping away from us ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "going",
                "correct": "go",
                "explanation": "It is not grammatically correct to use a gerund \"going\" after the auxiliary verb \"can.\" The correct verb form is the bare infinitive, \"go.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "thses",
                "correct": "these",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"these.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 25,
                "error": "process",
                "correct": "processes",
                "explanation": "The word \"these\" is used to refer to multiple different processes (\"controlling\" and \"curing\"), so it's correct to use plural form."
            }
        ],
        "id": 332,
        "incorrect sentence": "On the other hand , if there are ways can help us to control or cure the disease , we can going through thses process from the scope of the whole family .",
        "correct sentence": "On the other hand , if there are ways can help us to control or cure the disease , we can go through these processes from the scope of the whole family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "an",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "While it's not grammatically incorrect, the phrase \"for example\" is as a set phrase, and it is not common to include an article."
            }
        ],
        "id": 385,
        "incorrect sentence": "For an example , if exercising is helpful for family potential disease , we can always look for more chances for the family to go exercise .",
        "correct sentence": "For example , if exercising is helpful for family potential disease , we can always look for more chances for the family to go exercise ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "Forest'view",
                "correct": "Forest 's view",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. It should read \"Forest's\" (with the apostrophe and \"s\" to indicate possession), followed by a space and then \"view.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 466,
        "incorrect sentence": "Here I want to share Forest'view on this issue .",
        "correct sentence": "Here I want to share Forest 's view on this issue ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "absolute",
                "correct": "absolutely",
                "explanation": "The adjective \"absolute\" cannot modify the adjectives \"right\" and \"wrong\", so the adverb \"absolutely\" is the correct form."
            }
        ],
        "id": 507,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nothing is absolute right or wrong .",
        "correct sentence": "Nothing is absolutely right or wrong ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "As above in Line 14, the combination of \"certain\" and a noun requires either the indefinite article or the plural form, and it seems like singular is more appropriate than plural in the context of testing."
            }
        ],
        "id": 559,
        "incorrect sentence": "If certain disease genetic test is very accurate and it is unavoidable and necessary to get treatment and known by others , it is OK to disclose the result .",
        "correct sentence": "If a certain disease genetic test is very accurate and it is unavoidable and necessary to get treatment and known by others , it is OK to disclose the result ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "has",
                "correct": "have",
                "explanation": "The singular verb form \"has\" does not agree with the plural \"families,\" so it should be changed to the plural \"have\" form."
            }
        ],
        "id": 623,
        "incorrect sentence": "Afterall , what affects one family may or may not affect another although the families has a common genetic make up , shared by either of the parents .",
        "correct sentence": "Afterall , what affects one family may or may not affect another although the families have a common genetic make up , shared by either of the parents ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 25,
                "error": "entire",
                "correct": "entirely",
                "explanation": "The adjective \"entire\" cannot modify the adjective \"sure\", thus the adverb \"entirely\" should be used here."
            },
            {
                "start": 48,
                "end": 49,
                "error": "cousin",
                "correct": "cousins",
                "explanation": "Generally the plural would be used here on the assumption that it is more likely for a person to have multiple cousins than one single cousin. Also, for parallel structure's sake, it's better to pluralize consistently within the list, which has already used the plural for \"uncles\" and \"aunts.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "on",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"on\" means related to or concerning, while the preposition \"of\" refers to a relationship between components/substance and the thing that they constitute. \"The issue of the right to know\" means that the right to know is what constitutes the substance of the issue."
            }
        ],
        "id": 747,
        "incorrect sentence": "The issue on right to know or not to know is highly debatable although it is a genetic risk , one can not be entire sure because the genetic information could possibly result from the families of either parents - his maternal and paternal uncles , aunts or cousin .",
        "correct sentence": "The issue of right to know or not to know is highly debatable although it is a genetic risk , one can not be entirely sure because the genetic information could possibly result from the families of either parents - his maternal and paternal uncles , aunts or cousins ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "\"Knowledge\" is an uncountable and abstract noun, so it cannot be made singular or plural, thus it cannot be used with the indefinite article 'a.'"
            }
        ],
        "id": 784,
        "incorrect sentence": "This also means that as soon a person is made aware of his or her genetic profile , he or she concurently has a knowledge about others .",
        "correct sentence": "This also means that as soon a person is made aware of his or her genetic profile , he or she concurently has knowledge about others ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "relavant",
                "correct": "relevant",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"relevant.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 809,
        "incorrect sentence": "This knowledge maybe relavant to them , and vice versa .",
        "correct sentence": "This knowledge maybe relevant to them , and vice versa ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "moral",
                "correct": "morals",
                "explanation": "An individual's value system consists of multiple elements, so the plural \"morals\" is correct. The singular \"moral\" is used mostly to refer to a lesson gleaned from a parable, e.g. \"the moral of the story.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"personal morals\" is an abstract noun and does not generally require an article. It only uses an article when referring to the values of a specific person, for example, \"the personal morals of an individual.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 1194,
        "incorrect sentence": "Whose duty it is to inform at risk relatives or not greatly depends on the personal moral and the nature of how 'directive ' the risk is to them .",
        "correct sentence": "Whose duty it is to inform at risk relatives or not greatly depends on personal moral morals the nature of how 'directive ' the risk is to them ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "relationship",
                "correct": "relationships",
                "explanation": "The noun phrase \"blood relationship\" should be either \"a blood relationship\" or \"blood relationships.\" Either is acceptable but it is not grammatically correct to mix them."
            }
        ],
        "id": 1207,
        "incorrect sentence": "People with close blood relationship generally carry some similar genes .",
        "correct sentence": "People with close blood relationships generally carry some similar genes ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "Because there are many different genetic risks that a person could carry, the indefinite article \"a\" is appropriate here. Using \"a\" implies that this statement should apply regardless of what kind of disease the genetic risk is for."
            },
            {
                "start": 37,
                "end": 38,
                "error": "known",
                "correct": "know",
                "explanation": "\"Let [someone] know\" is a phrasal verb , and \"let\" is a causative verb which should be followed by the bare infinitive."
            },
            {
                "start": 44,
                "end": 45,
                "error": "familay",
                "correct": "family",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"family.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 52,
                "end": 53,
                "error": "excesses",
                "correct": "exercises",
                "explanation": "Two different words are being confused here. The correct word, \"exercise,\" means physical activity, whereas \"excesses\" is the plural of \"excess,\" meaning surplus or overabundance."
            },
            {
                "start": 68,
                "end": 69,
                "error": "correspongding",
                "correct": "corresponding",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"corresponding.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 1306,
        "incorrect sentence": "In this case , if one of the family members or close relatives is found to carry genetic risk , it is better for the patient to tell his/her close relatives about the issue and let others known about the risk so that his/her familay members are able to perform some daily excesses to prevent the potential disease or they may go to hospital and check for the correspongding flows .",
        "correct sentence": "In this case , if one of the family members or close relatives is found to carry a genetic risk , it is better for the patient to tell his/her close relatives about the issue and let others know about the risk so that his/her family members are able to perform some daily exercises to prevent the potential disease or they may go to hospital and check for the corresponding flows ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 25,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "The phrases \"chance to\" and \"chance of\" have different meanings. The former refers to an opportunity. For example, \"I didn't have a chance to read his email\" would mean that the speaker lacked the time or the means to read an email that they received. By contrast, the latter refers to the probability or odds of something occurring. In the context of genetic risk, we are referring to probability and so \"chance of\" is correct here."
            },
            {
                "start": 26,
                "end": 27,
                "error": "carry",
                "correct": "carrying",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"chance of\" requires the gerund \"carrying,\" which can act as a noun."
            }
        ],
        "id": 1459,
        "incorrect sentence": "Large numbers of patients with the genetic risk would want to keep it as a secret as the genetic risk may indicates their high chance to carry certain disease .",
        "correct sentence": "Large numbers of patients with the genetic risk would want to keep it as a secret as the genetic risk may indicates their high chance of carrying certain disease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"the unmarried young people,\" with the definite article \"the,\" refers not to all unmarried young people but to a specific subset of that group, for example, \"the unmarried young people who [verb].\" This statement is referring broadly to all unmarried young people, so the definite article should be removed."
            }
        ],
        "id": 1557,
        "incorrect sentence": "Especially for the young people without marrige , if he/she is known to have some genetic risk , it may have certain chance that his/her child would carry the same disease , but not in certain .",
        "correct sentence": "Especially for young people without marrige , if he/she is known to have some genetic risk , it may have certain chance that his/her child would carry the same disease , but not in certain ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "from",
                "explanation": "The phrasal verb \"to keep [something] from [someone]\" means to keep a secret. The preposition \"from\" is used because it implies a separation or an act of removal. In contrast, \"to\" refers to the direction of flow toward someone, so it would not make sense to use it in the sense of keeping a secret."
            },
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "spouce",
                "correct": "spouse",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"spouse.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 1601,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , to keep the information as secret to his/her future spouce would help the relationship .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , to keep the information as secret from his/her future spouse would help the relationship ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 49,
                "end": 50,
                "error": "check",
                "correct": "checks",
                "explanation": "The noun phrase \"additional check\" requires either the indefinite article \"a\" or the plural form \"checks.\" Here, the plural is more understandable, because if someone seeks additional medical information due to concern for their health, it's likely that multiple tests or checks would be performed, rather than just one."
            }
        ],
        "id": 1749,
        "incorrect sentence": "Secondly , annouance the potential risk would cause the family member to be scared of this certain issue , although the factor would not be that serious , people would still fear that they would have some potential disease in the future thus go to hospital and do additional check or take more medicine in order to prevent the disease , and this creats unnecessary costs to the family .",
        "correct sentence": "Secondly , annouance the potential risk would cause the family member to be scared of this certain issue , although the factor would not be that serious , people would still fear that they would have some potential disease in the future thus go to hospital and do additional checks or take more medicine in order to prevent the disease , and this creats unnecessary costs to the family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 25,
                "error": "extend",
                "correct": "extent",
                "explanation": "Two different words are being confused here. \"Extend\" is a verb meaning to make longer or wider, or to hold something out. \"Extent\" is a noun indicating the scale of something, which is what the statement is trying to convey here."
            },
            {
                "start": 39,
                "end": 40,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "The relationship between \"impact\" and its object is usually expressed with \"on.\" This conveys that an effect is exerted over the object."
            }
        ],
        "id": 1896,
        "incorrect sentence": "On the other hand , if the genetic risk is kept as a secret , although it may benefit the carrier to a certain extend and help to keep the privacy , but it has much larger negative impacts to the family members and relatives .",
        "correct sentence": "On the other hand , if the genetic risk is kept as a secret , although it may benefit the carrier to a certain extent and help to keep the privacy , but it has much larger negative impacts on the family members and relatives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "for",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"in the case of\" has a conditional meaning; in other words, \"in the case of marriage\" means \"if a person is married.\" This conditionality is not conveyed by \"for,\" so it should be changed."
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "marrige",
                "correct": "marriage",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"marriage.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 26,
                "end": 27,
                "error": "offsprings",
                "correct": "offspring",
                "explanation": "The noun \"offspring\" is uncountable, so it does not take a plural \"s.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "spouce",
                "correct": "spouse",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"spouse.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 1962,
        "incorrect sentence": "First , for the case of marrige , people should be honest and tell his/her spouce they may carry certain genetic risk that may affect their offsprings .",
        "correct sentence": "First , in the case of marriage , people should be honest and tell his/her spouse they may carry certain genetic risk that may affect their offspring ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "sugars",
                "correct": "sugar",
                "explanation": "The noun \"sugar\" is uncountable here, as it's impractical to count grains of sugar in this context (assessing dietary intake). The word \"sugars\" is used to refer to different types of sugar, such as sucrose, fructose, glucose, etc."
            },
            {
                "start": 51,
                "end": 52,
                "error": "becouse",
                "correct": "because",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"because.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 2186,
        "incorrect sentence": "In this case , the carrier can eat less candies and chocolates to prevent intake to much sugars , and at the same time , if the carrier tell this information to the relatives , it will be useful for them to know that they may have diabetes in the future becouse of related genes and they can perform the same exercise to intake less sugar to prevent the disease .",
        "correct sentence": "In this case , the carrier can eat less candies and chocolates to prevent intake to much sugar , and at the same time , if the carrier tell this information to the relatives , it will be useful for them to know that they may have diabetes in the future because of related genes and they can perform the same exercise to intake less sugar to prevent the disease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "diabete",
                "correct": "diabetes",
                "explanation": "The correct spelling is \"diabetes.\" The name of the disease is usually treated as a singular or non-count noun."
            }
        ],
        "id": 2223,
        "incorrect sentence": "Otherwise , if the other parties did not know , they may end up with to have diabete in the future without any prevention .",
        "correct sentence": "Otherwise , if the other parties did not know , they may end up with to have diabetes in the future without any prevention ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "disorder",
                "correct": "disorders",
                "explanation": "The noun phrase \"genetic disorder\" requires either the indefinite article \"a\" or the plural \"disorders.\" Because this statement should apply to multiple different disorders, not one single specific disorder, it's preferable to use the plural here."
            }
        ],
        "id": 2385,
        "incorrect sentence": "Genetic disorder may or may not be hirataged hereditary disease and it is sometimes hard to find out one has these kinds of diseases .",
        "correct sentence": "Genetic disorders may or may not be hirataged hereditary disease and it is sometimes hard to find out one has these kinds of diseases ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "Privicy",
                "correct": "Privacy",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. \"Privacy\" is the correct spelling."
            }
        ],
        "id": 2579,
        "incorrect sentence": "Privicy protection belongs to one 's human rights .",
        "correct sentence": "Privacy protection belongs to one 's human rights ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "Here, \"one\" is being used as a personal pronoun, like \"he\" or \"she.\" Pronouns do not take an article, so \"the\" should not be used."
            },
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "An apostrophe makes a word possessive. Writing \"others'\" (with an apostrophe) creates a possessive relationship between \"others\" and \"his or her privacy,\" which implies that the individual's privacy now belongs to others, and not to the individual his or herself."
            }
        ],
        "id": 2635,
        "incorrect sentence": "If a law requires someone to tell others ' his or her privacy especially when the one is not willing to do so .",
        "correct sentence": "If a law requires someone to tell others his or her privacy especially when the is not willing to do so ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "include",
                "correct": "includes",
                "explanation": "The subject \"spirit\" is singular, so because of subject-verb agreement, the verb form should be \"includes.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "\"Fairness\" is an abstract noun and does not generally require an article. It only uses an article when referring to fairness in a specific instance, for example, \"the fairness of the situation.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 2680,
        "incorrect sentence": "The law 's spirit also include the fairness .",
        "correct sentence": "The law 's spirit also includes fairness ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "disorder",
                "correct": "disorders",
                "explanation": "This question is referring to all genetic disorders, as a category, and so the plural \"disorders\" should be used."
            },
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": ".",
                "correct": "?",
                "explanation": "The sentence begins with \"What is,\" making it a question, which necessitates the use of a question mark \"?\" rather than a period \".\" at the end."
            }
        ],
        "id": 2702,
        "incorrect sentence": "What is the basic difference between genetic disorder and other disorders .",
        "correct sentence": "What is the basic difference between genetic disorders and other disorders ?"
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"the genetic disorder\" would imply one single specific genetic disorder, but this statement is referring to all genetic disorders, as a category, so the article should be removed."
            },
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "disorder",
                "correct": "disorders",
                "explanation": "This statement is referring to all genetic disorders, as a category, and so the plural \"disorders\" should be used."
            }
        ],
        "id": 2741,
        "incorrect sentence": "It is unfair to release a law only point to the genetic disorder .",
        "correct sentence": "It is unfair to release a law only point to genetic disorders ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "ralatives",
                "correct": "relatives",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"relatives.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 2802,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , there are many problems againt the execution of asking a carrier to tell his or her ralatives the cause of his or her diseases .",
        "correct sentence": "However , there are many problems againt the execution of asking a carrier to tell his or her relatives the cause of his or her diseases ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 21,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "The comma should be added for clarity. The conjunction \"or\" serves to connect the two questions in the two clauses, but without a comma, it's possible to misinterpret it as a continuation of the list of \"parents and brothers and sisters.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 2852,
        "incorrect sentence": "For example , does the carrier only need to tell his or her direct relatives like parents and brothers and sisters or does he also need to tell relatives like his grandmother 's sister 's son 's daughter 's nephew ?",
        "correct sentence": "For example , does the carrier only need to tell his or her direct relatives like parents and brothers and sisters , or does he also need to tell relatives like his grandmother 's sister 's son 's daughter 's nephew ?"
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"possibilities to\" would be ungrammatical. The preposition \"of\" conveys the relationship between the noun \"possibilities\" and the phrase it modifies i.e. \"to have such kind of disease\". It shows what sort of possibility is being discussed, or in other words, the odds or chance of having a disease. "
            }
        ],
        "id": 2913,
        "incorrect sentence": "Other relatives may have the same possibilities to have such kind of disease .",
        "correct sentence": "Other relatives may have the same possibilities of have such kind of disease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "potetial",
                "correct": "potential",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"potential.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 2935,
        "incorrect sentence": "How can a law made by government exempt such a group of people from preparing to face their potetial disease ?",
        "correct sentence": "How can a law made by government exempt such a group of people from preparing to face their potential disease ?"
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "Here, \"illnesses or diseases\" is a general concept that is well understood and accepted. There's no need to add the definite article and it's more natural not to do so."
            }
        ],
        "id": 3403,
        "incorrect sentence": "It is able to detect the illnesses or diseases and even a child 's parentage .",
        "correct sentence": "It is able to detect illnesses or diseases and even a child 's parentage ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "have",
                "correct": "be",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"there might be\" refers to the possibility of existence. The verb \"be\" denotes existence while \"have\" does not."
            }
        ],
        "id": 3526,
        "incorrect sentence": "If the knowledge of the genetic risk was to be shared within the family or relatives , there might have chances for them to have it in their blood , which they may do necessary precautions to prevent .",
        "correct sentence": "If the knowledge of the genetic risk was to be shared within the family or relatives , there might be chances for them to have it in their blood , which they may do necessary precautions to prevent ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "said",
                "correct": "say",
                "explanation": "The present tense phrase \"some say\" is generally used to refer to common wisdom that is currently circulating in society, while the past tense phrase \"some said\" refers to events that occurred in the past. This statement is referring to the present, so the present tense should be used."
            },
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The noun \"information\" is uncountable and therefore does not take the indefinite article."
            }
        ],
        "id": 3654,
        "incorrect sentence": "Some said that the genetic risk that is found in a person should be kept secret because it is considered as a personal information which should be kept confidential .",
        "correct sentence": "Some say that the genetic risk that is found in a person should be kept secret because it is considered as personal information which should be kept confidential ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "conditions",
                "correct": "condition",
                "explanation": "The singular \"condition\" is used to refer to a person's physical health, while the plural \"conditions\" would serve to reference a variety of different circumstances or elements."
            }
        ],
        "id": 3681,
        "incorrect sentence": "Most patients will be depressed after realising his or her conditions .",
        "correct sentence": "Most patients will be depressed after realising his or her condition ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 25,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "dishearten",
                "correct": "disheartening",
                "explanation": "The verb phrase \"end up\" requires the gerund \"disheartening,\" which acts as a noun, therefore it should not be followed by the bare infinitive \"dishearten.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 3724,
        "incorrect sentence": "If one has a genetic disease after the test , he or she might not wish to inform the relatives as he might ended up dishearten his extended family .",
        "correct sentence": "If one has a genetic disease after the test , he or she might not wish to inform the relatives as he might ended up disheartening his extended family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "\"In\" is redundant with \"into,\" and it's unnatural to use the two words together."
            }
        ],
        "id": 3747,
        "incorrect sentence": "Some will wish to keep it to themselves and hope to ensure that they will not bring in any pessimism into their family .",
        "correct sentence": "Some will wish to keep it to themselves and hope to ensure that they will not bring any pessimism into their family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The statement is confusing two phrases: \"keep confidential\" and \"in confidence.\" The phrase \"keep confidential\" is common and is used without variation in wording."
            }
        ],
        "id": 3812,
        "incorrect sentence": "Hence , some seen it as being considerate in keeping the genetic risk of getting the disease in confidential .",
        "correct sentence": "Hence , some seen it as being considerate in keeping the genetic risk of getting the disease confidential ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 26,
                "end": 27,
                "error": "getting",
                "correct": "having",
                "explanation": "\"Getting\" would mean to acquire something one doesn't already have. Because genetic risk is inherited and therefore present from birth, \"having\" is more accurate."
            }
        ],
        "id": 3844,
        "incorrect sentence": "On the other hand , others may think that it will be considerate to tell the relatives because the latter will have a higher tendency of getting the same genetic risk .",
        "correct sentence": "On the other hand , others may think that it will be considerate to tell the relatives because the latter will have a higher tendency of having the same genetic risk ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "do",
                "correct": "take",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"take measures\" is a collocation. The word \"take\" emphasizes that measures are an action. \"Do measures\" is not commonly used."
            }
        ],
        "id": 3867,
        "incorrect sentence": "Hence , they will be able to seek help from medical specialists to find a cure or to do some measures to prevent the risk of getting the disease .",
        "correct sentence": "Hence , they will be able to seek help from medical specialists to find a cure or to take some measures to prevent the risk of getting the disease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 26,
                "end": 27,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "by",
                "explanation": "\"By\" denotes the relationship between the action (getting a checkup) and its outcome (realising that one has a disease). It should say \"save them by\" to convey that the checkup is the process through which the outcome occurs."
            }
        ],
        "id": 3987,
        "incorrect sentence": "Hence , with the knowledge of having genetic risk , the relatives of this genetic disease will do a medical check-up , which might save them in realising it at a earlier stage .",
        "correct sentence": "Hence , with the knowledge of having genetic risk , the relatives of this genetic disease will do a medical check-up , which might save them by realising it at a earlier stage ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "issue",
                "correct": "issues",
                "explanation": "\"Issues\" should be plural here to allow for the possibility of various different problems that can affect a person's finances."
            },
            {
                "start": 26,
                "end": 27,
                "error": "rights",
                "correct": "right",
                "explanation": "This statement is referring to one specific right, and therefore it should be singular."
            },
            {
                "start": 27,
                "end": 28,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "to",
                "explanation": "Rights are commonly enumerated with the word \"to,\" which conveys the quality of entitlement to or access to the thing in question. The word \"right\" should be followed by a noun phrase, as in \"the right to + (noun)\" or \"the right to + (verb).\""
            },
            {
                "start": 32,
                "end": 33,
                "error": "inherented",
                "correct": "inherited",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"inherited.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 4070,
        "incorrect sentence": "Although there might be a lot of challenges along the way in seeking medical attention , such as financial issue , everyone should be given the rights of knowing their family 's inherented medical conditions .",
        "correct sentence": "Although there might be a lot of challenges along the way in seeking medical attention , such as financial issues , everyone should be given the right to knowing their family 's inherited medical conditions ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 20,
                "end": 21,
                "error": "adding",
                "correct": "add",
                "explanation": "Because the second clause is in the future tense, using the modal verb \"will,\" it has to use the bare infinitive \"add,\" not the gerund \"adding.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "on",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "\"Add to\" and \"add on to\" have a slight difference in meaning. \"Add to\" means to make something larger, better, or greater. \"Add on to\" (or simply \"add on\") means to put something with another thing or group of things. In this sentence, the meaning is to make someone's misery worse, so it should be changed to \"add to.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 4150,
        "incorrect sentence": "In addition , some may think that even knowing about having genetic risk of the disease , it will just adding on to their misery as there is nothing that they can do about it .",
        "correct sentence": "In addition , some may think that even knowing about having genetic risk of the disease , it will just add to their misery as there is nothing that they can do about it ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 29,
                "end": 30,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"of\" conveys the relationship between the noun \"possibilities\" and the phrase it modifies, \"curing or preventing it.\" It shows what sort of possibility is being discussed, or in other words, the odds or chance of curing or preventing disease. The phrase \"possibilities in\" would be ungrammatical."
            }
        ],
        "id": 4194,
        "incorrect sentence": "All-in-all , it depends on individual and also the nature of the disease , but he or she should be obligated to inform the relatives if there are possibilities in curing or preventing it .",
        "correct sentence": "All-in-all , it depends on individual and also the nature of the disease , but he or she should be obligated to inform the relatives if there are possibilities of curing or preventing it ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "kowledge",
                "correct": "knowledge",
                "explanation": "This is a typo. The correct spelling is \"knowledge.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 4229,
        "incorrect sentence": "Genectic testing is a personal decision , with the kowledge that there is a possiblity that one could be a carrier or not .",
        "correct sentence": "Genectic testing is a personal decision , with the knowledge that there is a possiblity that one could be a carrier or not ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "though",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"even though,\" like \"although,\" refers to a state that contradicts reality, while the phrase \"even if\" is conditional, meaning that the state is uncertain or undecided. It cannot be known whether there is a risk without performing genetic testing, so the phrase \"even though there is no risk at all,\" which presumes that there is no risk, is illogical."
            }
        ],
        "id": 4244,
        "incorrect sentence": "Those who are born into a family with a history of genetic disease should be allowed to undergo genetic testing , even though if there is no risk at all .",
        "correct sentence": "Those who are born into a family with a history of genetic disease should be allowed to undergo genetic testing , even if there is no risk at all ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "obligied",
                "correct": "obliged",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"obliged.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 4308,
        "incorrect sentence": "There should not be forced or obligied to do so , as it may negatively and drastically affect the emotions of the genetic risk carrier .",
        "correct sentence": "There should not be forced or obliged to do so , as it may negatively and drastically affect the emotions of the genetic risk carrier ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 29,
                "end": 30,
                "error": "patients",
                "correct": "patient 's",
                "explanation": "The possessive is used here, meaning that the \"parents or legal guardian\" are of the patient, that they belong to or pertain to the patient. The apostrophe plus \"s\" is what makes \"patient\" possessive."
            }
        ],
        "id": 4363,
        "incorrect sentence": "If the genetic risk carrier is a minor or a child , then most likely the decision of informing the relative should be made with the consideration of the patients parents or legal guardian .",
        "correct sentence": "If the genetic risk carrier is a minor or a child , then most likely the decision of informing the relative should be made with the consideration of the patient 's parents or legal guardian ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "from",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "The clearest wording is \"the consent of.\" The preposition \"of\" denotes the relationship between the two concepts; \"the consent of [someone]\" belongs to that person. The use of the definite article \"the\" reinforces this, emphasizing that the consent belongs to that specific individual and not to other people. Also, while I wouldn't say there is a grammatical issue with \"consent from,\" especially in casual speech, there is something unnatural about the phrase \"the consent from.\" "
            },
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "A comma is usually used with transition words like \"furthermore\" both because there is a natural pause in speech and because it helps to provide order while linking to the previous idea."
            }
        ],
        "id": 4423,
        "incorrect sentence": "Furthermore the act of informing others without the consent from their parents or the patients itself could harm the psychological state of the affected family .",
        "correct sentence": "Furthermore , the act of informing others without the of from their parents or the patients itself could harm the psychological state of the affected family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "need",
                "correct": "needs",
                "explanation": "The verb form should be \"needs\" because of subject-verb agreement. The subject is \"thought,\" which is treated as uncountable here because it's referring to the process of thinking or consideration, not to individual ideas, in which case it could correctly be referred to with the plural \"thoughts.\" But because the statement is referring to the process of thinking, which is singular, it does not take a pluralizing \"s\" and does take a singular verb form. "
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "caused",
                "correct": "cause",
                "explanation": "The statement is referring to a potential event that has not yet taken place and may not ever take place, so it is inaccurate to use the past tense \"caused.\" Also the verb \"could\" is a modal auxiliary verb and therefore needs to be used with the bare infinitive."
            }
        ],
        "id": 4501,
        "incorrect sentence": "Thus , much thought need to put on the immediate family as it could caused a stir of unwanted events from the patient or the family members itself .",
        "correct sentence": "Thus , much thought needs to put on the immediate family as it could cause a stir of unwanted events from the patient or the family members itself ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "testingto",
                "correct": "testing to",
                "explanation": "A space is always required between words. Because \"testing\" and \"to\" are two different words, they need a space between them."
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "tosimilarly",
                "correct": "to similarly",
                "explanation": "A space is always required between words. Because \"to\" and \"similarly\" are two different words, they need a space between them."
            }
        ],
        "id": 4641,
        "incorrect sentence": "Also , this known information will help their relatives to make informed decisions and tosimilarly undergo genetic testingto find out about the outcome .",
        "correct sentence": "Also , this known information will help their relatives to make informed decisions and to similarly undergo genetic testing to find out about the outcome ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "emotinal",
                "correct": "emotional",
                "explanation": "This is a typo. The correct spelling is \"emotional.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 4675,
        "incorrect sentence": "Thus , having the knowledge that such genetic disorder is benign would be beneficial towards their emotinal thoughts .",
        "correct sentence": "Thus , having the knowledge that such genetic disorder is benign would be beneficial towards their emotional thoughts ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "for",
                "explanation": "The word \"for\" conveys the nature of the connection between \"prepare\" and \"the future outcome.\" The preparations are for the sake of the future outcome, or in other words, the family is readying themselves emotionally and psychologically toward the outcome."
            }
        ],
        "id": 4710,
        "incorrect sentence": "And if the results turn out to be otherwise , then the family can be prepared emotionally and psychologically of the future outcome and aid them in making upcoming decisions .",
        "correct sentence": "And if the results turn out to be otherwise , then the family can be prepared emotionally and psychologically for the future outcome and aid them in making upcoming decisions ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "are",
                "correct": "is",
                "explanation": "Gerund phrases like \"having support\" are singular, and so in order for the subject and verb to agree, the verb should be \"is\" instead of \"are.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 4797,
        "incorrect sentence": "Having support from relatives are vital as they ensure the genetic risk carrier that he/she is not alone in facing this illness and it will certainly provide a morale boost as the whole family will share a common sentiment with regards towards the future prospect of the genetic disorder which could be inherited by anyone in the family .",
        "correct sentence": "Having support from relatives is vital as they ensure the genetic risk carrier that he/she is not alone in facing this illness and it will certainly provide a morale boost as the whole family will share a common sentiment with regards towards the future prospect of the genetic disorder which could be inherited by anyone in the family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"on\" (or \"upon\") better reflects the nature of the relationship. \"Dependent\" means to be contingent on or resting on some factor. That factor is foundational to whatever is dependent upon it, as if it were positioned on top of it. At the base of the decision of whether to inform the relatives is their situation and background; the decision therefore depends \"on\" it."
            },
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "backgroung",
                "correct": "background",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is background."
            }
        ],
        "id": 4851,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , the decision to inform relatives of such genetic disorder will be dependent of the situation and backgroung of the affected family , with the liberty of choice given to them in making the decision of informing others .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , the decision to inform relatives of such genetic disorder will be dependent on the situation and background of the affected family , with the liberty of choice given to them in making the decision of informing others ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "offsprings",
                "correct": "offspring",
                "explanation": "The noun \"offspring\" is uncountable, so it does not take a plural \"s.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 4952,
        "incorrect sentence": "Genetic disorder inheritance is generation by generation , but not all of the offsprings show the relevant symptoms .",
        "correct sentence": "Genetic disorder inheritance is generation by generation , but not all of the offspring show the relevant symptoms ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "happen",
                "correct": "happens",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"one of the members,\" and the subject is \"one.\" The statement is referring only to one person, so the subject is singular and the verb should be as well for subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 5055,
        "incorrect sentence": "As a result , in the case that when one of the members happen to feel uncomfortable or unnormal , he or she should aware that whether the disorder in his or her body is a genetic risk or not .",
        "correct sentence": "As a result , in the case that when one of the members happens to feel uncomfortable or unnormal , he or she should aware that whether the disorder in his or her body is a genetic risk or not ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "kid",
                "correct": "child",
                "explanation": "The issue here is stylistic, not grammatical. The word \"kid\" is colloquial and can be used in casual speech, but feels out of place in a text like this. \"Child\" is more standard and neutral, and should therefore be used instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 5146,
        "incorrect sentence": "If the disorder symptoms reflect on a kid , the parent will be informed by the medics for sure , then the whole family will stay alert to their bodies ' condition .",
        "correct sentence": "If the disorder symptoms reflect on a child , the parent will be informed by the medics for sure , then the whole family will stay alert to their bodies ' condition ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"risk of\" is a collocation that is always used with the gerund. Therefore, it should be changed from the infinitive \"to become\" to the gerund \"becoming.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 32,
                "end": 33,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "by",
                "explanation": "There's an additional grammatical error here that needs to be addressed before the explanation of Correction1 will make sense. Instead of \"the risk might [as] well inherit by his child,\" it should use the passive voice, \"the risk might [as] well be inherited by his child.\" This is because the subject of the sentence is \"the risk.\" The passive voice construction focuses on what is done to the subject \"by\" an actor. The risk is the subject, and what happens to the risk is that it is inherited. The actors who inherits the risk is the child. Thus, the risk is inherited by the child."
            },
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "become",
                "correct": "becoming",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"risk of\" needs to be followed by a noun, and \"become\" is a verb. The gerund \"becoming\" acts as a noun, so the sentence should read \"risk of becoming.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 5358,
        "incorrect sentence": "Think of the other way , if a child of the family knows that he has the risk to become a genetic risk carrier , and the risk might as well inherit to his child in the future , his whole life will be in a dilenma .",
        "correct sentence": "Think of the other way , if a child of the family knows that he has the risk of becoming a genetic risk carrier , and the risk might as well inherit by his child in the future , his whole life will be in a dilenma ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "child",
                "correct": "children",
                "explanation": "\"Any\" means \"one of a large number of things,\" so the noun it modifies is plural. Even when in a negative statement, a noun modified by \"any\" is treated as plural. The plural of \"child\" is \"children,\" so \"children\" should be used here.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 5404,
        "incorrect sentence": "And of course , he or she will think of not having any child after getting married , and the same thought goes to the cousins as well .",
        "correct sentence": "And of course , he or she will think of not having any children after getting married , and the same thought goes to the cousins as well ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "by",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "When referencing time, the phrase \"stops by\" would imply a deadline, meaning that it was expected, necessary, or inevitable that this particular family line would stop. The intended meaning in this sentence is to convey that the family line would stop if and when the carrier announced an issue, so you should delete \"by.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 5429,
        "incorrect sentence": "As a result , the family generation stops by the moment the adult carrier announces his issue .",
        "correct sentence": "As a result , the family generation stops the moment the adult carrier announces his issue ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "\"Traditional cultural background\" is a noun phrase that requires an article. The indefinite article \"a\" conveys the idea of \"one of multiple potential [nouns].\" This statement is referring to the traditional cultural background of China, which is one of multiple potential backgrounds, so it should use \"a.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "culture",
                "correct": "cultural",
                "explanation": "\"Culture\" is a noun and cannot modify another noun, so the adjective form, \"cultural,\" is used to modify \"background.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 5483,
        "incorrect sentence": "In China , the older generation with traditional culture background , will always think of having more children as well as grandchildren , to make the family liven up and stronger .",
        "correct sentence": "In China , the older generation with a traditional cultural background , will always think of having more children as well as grandchildren , to make the family liven up and stronger ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "encourage",
                "correct": "encouraged",
                "explanation": "The statement is referring to past events, so the past tense should be used. It should be \"encouraged\" rather than \"encourage.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 5534,
        "incorrect sentence": "The reason behind is that after WOWII the population of China decreased dramatically and so the government encourage the people to give more birth .",
        "correct sentence": "The reason behind is that after WOWII the population of China decreased dramatically and so the government encouraged the people to give more birth ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "member",
                "correct": "members",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"one of\" implies that there are multiple potential members of a group, so what comes after it must be plural. \"Members\" is the plural of \"member.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "dilenma",
                "correct": "dilemma",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"dilemma.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 5607,
        "incorrect sentence": "During that period , if one of the family member reflects genetic disorder symptoms , he will fell in an ethical dilenma for sure .",
        "correct sentence": "During that period , if one of the family members reflects genetic disorder symptoms , he will fell in an ethical dilemma for sure ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "is",
                "correct": "was",
                "explanation": "This statement is referring to past events, so past tense should be used, and \"was\" is the past tense of \"is.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 5627,
        "incorrect sentence": "The medical treatment technology during that time is not advanced enough to completely cure him .",
        "correct sentence": "The medical treatment technology during that time was not advanced enough to completely cure him ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "prosperity",
                "correct": "prosperous",
                "explanation": "\"Prosperity\" and \"family\" are both nouns. A noun cannot modify another noun, so the adjective form, \"prosperous\" needs to be used instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "has",
                "correct": "had",
                "explanation": "This statement is referring to past events, so the past tense \"had\" should be used instead of the present \"has.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "generic",
                "correct": "genetic",
                "explanation": "This statement is confusing two different words. \"Genetic\" means relating to genes or heredity, while \"generic\" means unspecific, characteristic of or relating to a group of things, or an unbranded consumer product."
            }
        ],
        "id": 5671,
        "incorrect sentence": "He has to choose whether to protect his family or make his family more prosperity with a potential generic risk .",
        "correct sentence": "He had to choose whether to protect his family or make his family more prosperous with a potential genetic risk ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "generic",
                "correct": "genetic",
                "explanation": "This statement is confusing two different words. \"Genetic\" means relating to genes or heredity, while \"generic\" means unspecific, characteristic of or relating to a group of things, or an unbranded consumer product."
            }
        ],
        "id": 5698,
        "incorrect sentence": "And so , he would have chosen not to undergo generic disorder testing and let the truth be mined forever .",
        "correct sentence": "And so , he would have chosen not to undergo genetic disorder testing and let the truth be mined forever ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The word \"others\" refers to every person in the world other than the person affected. Because it is so nonspecific, it is unnatural to use the definite article \"the\" here."
            }
        ],
        "id": 5717,
        "incorrect sentence": "This kind of ethical issue can not be judged by the others because they will not understand the position and duty of the carrier in the family .",
        "correct sentence": "This kind of ethical issue can not be judged by others because they will not understand the position and duty of the carrier in the family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "conclude",
                "correct": "conclusion",
                "explanation": "The phrase is \"in conclusion,\" and \"in conclude\" is never used. \"Conclude\" is a verb, so it doesn't fit with \"in\" grammatically. The noun form \"conclusion\" needs to be used instead. "
            },
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "generic",
                "correct": "genetic",
                "explanation": "This statement is confusing two different words. \"Genetic\" means relating to genes or heredity, while \"generic\" means unspecific, characteristic or relating to a group of things, or an unbranded consumer product."
            }
        ],
        "id": 5785,
        "incorrect sentence": "In conclude , people should think carefully of what is the consequences of telling the relatives his or her generic disorder issue .",
        "correct sentence": "In conclusion , people should think carefully of what is the consequences of telling the relatives his or her genetic disorder issue ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "Regardlessly",
                "correct": "Regardless",
                "explanation": "The word \"regardlessly\" is unusual because it can already be used as an adjective without the \"ly\" suffix. The word \"regardlessly\" does not exist."
            },
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "caused",
                "correct": "cause",
                "explanation": "Because this sentence uses the present tense, it's inappropriate to include the past form \"caused,\" which refers to events that have already occurred in the past. The bare infinitive \"cause\" should be used after \"does not.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 5859,
        "incorrect sentence": "Regardlessly , if the disorder is rarely to be fatal , or it does not caused any inconvenience to the carrier , revealing the truth is always the right thing to do .",
        "correct sentence": "Regardless , if the disorder is rarely to be fatal , or it does not cause any inconvenience to the carrier , revealing the truth is always the right thing to do ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The noun \"support\" is treated as collective or uncountable, and therefore it cannot be singular and does not take the indefinite article \"a.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "with",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"go through with\" means to carry out an action to completion or a conclusion. It refers to a voluntary action on the part of the subject. What this statement is actually referring to is a situation, something that happens to the subject, regardless of their will. The situation will occur and continue through to its conclusion, regardless of what decision the subject takes. The phrase that expresses this is \"go through,\" meaning to endure or undergo."
            }
        ],
        "id": 5922,
        "incorrect sentence": "One of the reasons why is because as a carrier , she or he needs a mental support to go through with this situation .",
        "correct sentence": "One of the reasons why is because as a carrier , she or he needs mental support to go through this situation ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"tell\" does not usually take a preposition. In some cases, it's grammatical (if a little unnatural) to say something like \"He told the story to his family,\" but that is only in a specific situation. \"Tell\" is a ditransitive verb, which means it can take two objects. In the example above, the direct object \"the story\" and the indirect object \"his family.\" The indirect object is separated from the verb by the direct object. The preposition \"to\" can serve to emphasize or bolster the connection between the indirect object and the verb. But in the example in Correction0, there is only one object, \"his or her family,\" and nothing separates it from the verb. Since there's no need to reestablish the connection with the verb, it would be unnatural to use \"to\" here."
            },
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "The comma is required in order to separate the different clauses. The sentence could also read \"By telling [his or] her family, they could possibly help her to get alternative solutions to the problem that she is facing right now\" and that would be grammatical, but here, the two clauses are interrupted by the phrase \"other than being a support.\" This phrase requires commas on either side in order to punctuate it and establish a clear sentence structure. Without the comma after \"family,\" it's unclear which part of the sentence the phrase is referring to."
            }
        ],
        "id": 6018,
        "incorrect sentence": "By telling to his or her family other than being a support , they could possibly help her to get alternative solutions to the problem that she is facing right now .",
        "correct sentence": "By telling his or her family , other than being a support , they could possibly help her to get alternative solutions to the problem that she is facing right now ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 25,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "member",
                "correct": "members",
                "explanation": "The word \"other\" implies that the noun that follows is plural and nonspecified, so it's unnatural to use the singular \"member.\" Instead, it should be the plural \"members.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 6068,
        "incorrect sentence": "Furthermore , as it is a genetic problem , it will be better for the carrier to inform his or her family as other family member might experience the same thing .",
        "correct sentence": "Furthermore , as it is a genetic problem , it will be better for the carrier to inform his or her family as other family members might experience the same thing ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "is",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"pros and cons\" is plural, so because of subject-verb agreement, it needs to be \"there are\" rather than \"there is.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 6144,
        "incorrect sentence": "For every action there is always pros and cons .",
        "correct sentence": "For every action there are always pros and cons ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" refers to a specific thing, so \"the burden\" implies that every family has one specific burden. The phrase \"a burden,\" with the indefinite article \"a,\" implies that the carrier does not want to cause any burden to her family due to her condition. Therefore, it is more appropriate to say \"a burden.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 6226,
        "incorrect sentence": "Furthermore , as it could incur spending a lots of money for the treatment , the carrier might not want to be the burden in her family .",
        "correct sentence": "Furthermore , as it could incur spending a lots of money for the treatment , the carrier might not want to be a burden in her family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "thefamily",
                "correct": "the family",
                "explanation": "There should always be a space between words. \"The\" and \"family\" are different words, so they need a space to separate them."
            }
        ],
        "id": 6272,
        "incorrect sentence": "She or he does not want to be the source of unhappiness in thefamily .",
        "correct sentence": "She or he does not want to be the source of unhappiness in the family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "decide",
                "correct": "decides",
                "explanation": "The subject \"the carrier\" is singular, and so for subject-verb agreement, the third-person singular \"decides\" needs to be used."
            },
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The noun \"condition\" is already modified by the pronoun \"his or her.\" Pronouns do not take an article because it would be redundant, so \"the\" should not be used here."
            }
        ],
        "id": 6323,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , we will never know whether this negative effects will happen when the carrier decide to tell his or her family of the his or her condition .",
        "correct sentence": "However , we will never know whether this negative effects will happen when the carrier decides to tell his or her family of his or her condition ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "feeling",
                "correct": "feelings",
                "explanation": "The singular \"feeling\" is only used when talking about one specified emotion. This sentence is describing an individual's attitude toward a situation, or the collective sum of their emotions, opinions, and thoughts. To reflect this complexity, the plural \"feelings\" is used instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 28,
                "end": 29,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "The sentence is talking about the events of a person's life. Something happening to someone is seen as being part of their life, or, figuratively, inside their life. In contrast, the preposition \"to\" would imply directionality or a force that is directed at them. Also, the phrase \"what's going on in [someone's] life\" is a set phrase, so it isn't natural to say \"going on to [someone's] life.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 6380,
        "incorrect sentence": "The carrier should be honest with his or her feeling and I find that it is the right of the family member to know what is going on to his or her life .",
        "correct sentence": "The carrier should be honest with his or her feelings and I find that it is the right of the family member to know what is going on in his or her life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "s",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "A person who is being treated for cancer is referred to as a \"cancer patient.\" It's unnatural to say \"cancer's patient\" because the possessive apostrophe + \"s\" would indicate that the patient belongs to the cancer, which is not the case. "
            },
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "patient",
                "correct": "patients",
                "explanation": "The statement is referring to many people, as indicated by \"lots of,\" so the plural should be used here. "
            },
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "\"Second chance\" is a noun phrase that requires an article. The definite article \"the\" would imply that every cancer patient will naturally get a second chance, which is sadly not the case. The indefinite article \"a\" fits because the \"chance\" is singular (i.e. patients who do get a second chance will only get that chance a single time; a second chance followed by another chance would technically be a third chance, which is not an expression)."
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "choice",
                "correct": "chance",
                "explanation": "The statement is confusing two words: \"choice,\" which means decision or selection, and \"chance,\" which means opportunity. \"Chance\" is the appropriate word here."
            },
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 25,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "\"Support\" is treated like a collective/uncountable noun and cannot take the indefinite article \"a\" or plural."
            },
            {
                "start": 31,
                "end": 32,
                "error": "one",
                "correct": "ones",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"loved one\" isn't technically ungrammatical, but it is unnatural because the set phrase is \"loved ones.\" It means the inner circle of people that someone loves and cares about, and it is not typically used in the singular."
            }
        ],
        "id": 6637,
        "incorrect sentence": "True enough that there are lots of cancer 's patient who were given second choice to live as a normal person as they have a strong mental support from their loved one .",
        "correct sentence": "True enough that there are lots of cancer patients who were given a second chance to live as a normal person as they have strong mental support from their loved ones ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "\"Technology\" is a widely understood general concept and it would be unnatural to use an article here. The use of the definite article \"the\" would refer to one specific technology, particularly one that was mentioned earlier in the text and therefore recognized by the reader. Since the text hasn't mentioned such a technology, so it sounds unnatural here. [There's also a misspelling--it should be \"technology\" and not \"techonology.\"]"
            },
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "acutual",
                "correct": "actual",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"actual.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 6702,
        "incorrect sentence": "As the techonology has been advancing , it has reached a stage whereby the advancement triggers some ethical dilemmas in relation to the acutual use of the techonology .",
        "correct sentence": "As techonology has been advancing , it has reached a stage whereby the advancement triggers some ethical dilemmas in relation to the actual use of the techonology ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 27,
                "end": 28,
                "error": ",",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The comma causes an unnatural split between \"the carrier\" and \"the family,\" making the sentence harder to understand. It's more clear to remove the comma in this case."
            }
        ],
        "id": 6749,
        "incorrect sentence": "If used for a good purpose , it can prevent unnecessary unhappiness , however , it could also make situation worse by revealing who the carrier is , in the family .",
        "correct sentence": "If used for a good purpose , it can prevent unnecessary unhappiness , however , it could also make situation worse by revealing who the carrier is in the family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 36,
                "end": 37,
                "error": "belive",
                "correct": "believe",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"believe.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 6803,
        "incorrect sentence": "The question given is whether a carrier of a known genetic risk should be obligated to tell his or her relatives and I think that the carrier should not be obligated to do so because I belive that he or she has right not to know .",
        "correct sentence": "The question given is whether a carrier of a known genetic risk should be obligated to tell his or her relatives and I think that the carrier should not be obligated to do so because I believe that he or she has right not to know ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "with",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"live in\" refers dwelling or residing in a place, which is not what is being conveyed here. The correct phrase is \"live with,\" which can refer to enduring, tolerating, or accepting a difficult or unpleasant truth. This sentence is talking about a person accepting the difficult truth of carrying a known genetic risk and going about their life, so \"live with\" is the appropriate phrase here."
            },
            {
                "start": 29,
                "end": 30,
                "error": "is",
                "correct": "was",
                "explanation": "The statement is referring to past events and to a situation that is no longer true. The use of the present tense \"is\" implies that the situation is ongoing today and is incongruous with the phrase \"to everyone in the past.\" The verb should be \"was\" instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 38,
                "end": 39,
                "error": "gentic",
                "correct": "genetic",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"genetic.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 6917,
        "incorrect sentence": "If he chooses to live in the uncertainty that the gene holds and willing to accept it , he could do that , and it has been something that is 'normal ' to everyone in the past as gentic testing was not possible .",
        "correct sentence": "If he chooses to live with the uncertainty that the gene holds and willing to accept it , he could do that , and it has been something that was 'normal ' to everyone in the past as genetic testing was not possible ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 27,
                "end": 28,
                "error": "kid",
                "correct": "child",
                "explanation": "The issue here is stylistic, not grammatical. The word \"kid\" is colloquial and can be used in casual speech, but feels out of place in a text like this. \"Child\" is more standard and neutral, and should therefore be used instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 7010,
        "incorrect sentence": "I personally think this ist he right purpose of going through the genetic testing , so that a family who can not afford to have a disabled kid do not have to give birth to their child and make the entire family suffer .",
        "correct sentence": "I personally think this ist he right purpose of going through the genetic testing , so that a family who can not afford to have a disabled child do not have to give birth to their child and make the entire family suffer ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "belive",
                "correct": "believe",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"believe.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "Human rights typically take the definite article \"the\" because they are things that humans are endowed with and entitled to. The definite article best expresses this specificity."
            },
            {
                "start": 20,
                "end": 21,
                "error": "an",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"take an action\" would refer to one concrete (but unspecified) action. Without the indefinite article, the phrase has a slightly different meaning: to do something in order to achieve a desired outcome or in order to address a situation. In this case, the person is doing something in order to achieve the result of preventing an ethical dilemma. The phrase \"take action\" communicates this better."
            }
        ],
        "id": 7074,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , I belive that the carrier has right not to obligate to tell anyone but has responsibility to take an action to prevent any ethical dilemma .",
        "correct sentence": "However , I believe that the carrier has the right not to obligate to tell anyone but has responsibility to take action to prevent any ethical dilemma ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "belive",
                "correct": "believe",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"believe.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 7126,
        "incorrect sentence": "I belive that even the carrier has the right not to know the true fact .",
        "correct sentence": "I believe that even the carrier has the right not to know the true fact ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "int",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"in.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 7204,
        "incorrect sentence": "It could possibly causes a problem in a family due to the fact and creates more unhappiness int the family .",
        "correct sentence": "It could possibly causes a problem in a family due to the fact and creates more unhappiness in the family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "belive",
                "correct": "believe",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"believe.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 7254,
        "incorrect sentence": "Overall , I belive that it entirely depends on the carrier to share the hard facts and face it with relatives but he has no obligation to tell still .",
        "correct sentence": "Overall , I believe that it entirely depends on the carrier to share the hard facts and face it with relatives but he has no obligation to tell still ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "tak",
                "correct": "take",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"take.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 25,
                "error": "an",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"take an action\" would refer to one concrete (but unspecified) action. Without the indefinite article, the phrase has a slightly different meaning: to do something in order to achieve a desired outcome or in order to address a situation. In this case, the person is doing something in order to achieve the result of preventing an ethical dilemma. The phrase \"take action\" communicates this better."
            }
        ],
        "id": 7306,
        "incorrect sentence": "In fact , I strongly think that the carrier should weigh both the positive and negative consequences of taking the genetic testing and tak an appropriate action to the results .",
        "correct sentence": "In fact , I strongly think that the carrier should weigh both the positive and negative consequences of taking the genetic testing and take appropriate action to the results ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "guilty",
                "correct": "guilt",
                "explanation": "\"Guilty\" is an adjective and \"guilt\" is a noun. To create a noun phrase, it needs to be \"sense of guilt.\" \"Sense of guilt\" is a set phrase, and \"sense of guiltiness\" is not commonly used."
            }
        ],
        "id": 7367,
        "incorrect sentence": "The emotional depression that the carrier might get and the sense of guilty can be more than expected and could be a burden in mind for the rest of the life .",
        "correct sentence": "The emotional depression that the carrier might get and the sense of guilt can be more than expected and could be a burden in mind for the rest of the life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 26,
                "end": 27,
                "error": "diability",
                "correct": "disability",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"disability.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 7404,
        "incorrect sentence": "On the other hand , without knowing any genetic disorder and accepting the fact , the family will stay positive and work together to overcome the diability .",
        "correct sentence": "On the other hand , without knowing any genetic disorder and accepting the fact , the family will stay positive and work together to overcome the disability ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "healty",
                "correct": "healthy",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"healthy.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "emtional",
                "correct": "emotional",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"emotional.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 7430,
        "incorrect sentence": "I think the family will stay mentally healty as it is , without having emtional stress .",
        "correct sentence": "I think the family will stay mentally healthy as it is , without having emotional stress ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 32,
                "end": 33,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The use of the definite article \"the\" would imply that there is only one topic that is worthy of discussion, and that readers will recognize that fact. Since that is not the case, the indefinite article \"a\" is better."
            }
        ],
        "id": 7522,
        "incorrect sentence": "Any individual at risk for a disorder has the right to undergo genetic testing , but whether the results should be informed to others , especially close family or relatives , is the topic that worth discussing .",
        "correct sentence": "Any individual at risk for a disorder has the right to undergo genetic testing , but whether the results should be informed to others , especially close family or relatives , is a topic that worth discussing ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "need",
                "correct": "needs",
                "explanation": "The word \"issue\" is singular, and so for subject-verb agreement, the verb has to be \"needs.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 7561,
        "incorrect sentence": "This is an issue need to be addressed as family-related ethical dilemma is involved .",
        "correct sentence": "This is an issue needs to be addressed as family-related ethical dilemma is involved ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The expression \"in support of\" is a commonly used, and it does not use an article."
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "There are many different views that could be addressed here. The use of the definite article \"the\" means that the sentence is referring to one specific view, namely, that the carrier of a known genetic risk should tell their relatives."
            }
        ],
        "id": 7626,
        "incorrect sentence": "In this essay , few arguments will be pointed out in the support of view for any carrier of that known genetic risk to tell his or her relatives .",
        "correct sentence": "In this essay , few arguments will be pointed out in support of the view for any carrier of that known genetic risk to tell his or her relatives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "are",
                "correct": "were",
                "explanation": "This clause is referring to past events, so it's incongruous to use the present tense \"are.\" Also, the previous verb in the clause is also the past tense: \"We were crying hard.\" For both of these reasons, it should be \"we were not alone.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 7688,
        "incorrect sentence": "We were crying hard but we are not alone , it 's our family and relatives that grow us up .",
        "correct sentence": "We were crying hard but we were not alone , it 's our family and relatives that grow us up ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "The sentence is confusing two extremely similar phrases. The phrase \"point of\" may be used to question or define the value of an action: for example, \"What's the point of trying?\" or \"The point of practicing is to improve our skills.\" The \"of\" shows the relationship between \"point\" and \"sharing\"; the value belongs to or comes from the activity. But \"point of\" is not used in negative statements. Instead, we say \"there's no point in,\" which implies that there is no meaning or value to be found in the action. If it seems there's no point to sharing, then it means that even if you search, there is no meaning there to find. "
            },
            {
                "start": 31,
                "end": 31,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "There are two similar ways to phrase this, which may be the source of the mistake. The first is a verb phrase, \"sharing bad news,\" which does not require an article because \"sharing\" functions as a verb. The second is a noun phrase \"the sharing of bad news.\" The addition of the word \"of\" to connect the first noun (gerund) \"sharing\" with the second noun phrase \"bad news\" turns it into a noun phrase, necessitating the use of the definite article \"the.\" "
            }
        ],
        "id": 7807,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , in the case pertaining to any health issue or to the extent of serious disorder , it may seems no point of sharing but this involves more than just sharing of bad news .",
        "correct sentence": "However , in the case pertaining to any health issue or to the extent of serious disorder , it may seems no point in sharing but this involves more than just the sharing of bad news ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "s",
                "correct": "is",
                "explanation": "This is a stylistic issue and not a grammatical one. The phrase \"it's also one's responsibility\" would be grammatical in casual speech and many listeners would not be able to perceive the difference, but in a written text like this, it sounds unnatural to use the contraction \"it's,\" particularly midway through a sentence. In writing, \"it is\" sounds more standard and is preferable."
            }
        ],
        "id": 7838,
        "incorrect sentence": "One definitely has the right to disclose his or her health issues to anyone , but it 's also one 's responsibility to inform the family and close relatives .",
        "correct sentence": "One definitely has the right to disclose his or her health issues to anyone , but it is also one 's responsibility to inform the family and close relatives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "issue",
                "correct": "issues",
                "explanation": "There are many different health issues that are related to genetic risks, so it would be unusual to use the singular \"issues\" here. It is grammatical when talking about an individual with a single issue, but given that this is a generic statement that applies to multiple unknown people, the plural \"issues\" is preferable here."
            }
        ],
        "id": 7902,
        "incorrect sentence": "As the case of health issue is related to genetic risk , with keyword on \" genetic \" which highlights the risk of passing down the disorder to the next generation .",
        "correct sentence": "As the case of health issues is related to genetic risk , with keyword on \" genetic \" which highlights the risk of passing down the disorder to the next generation ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"to\" is appropriate when \"agree\" is used with a noun, as in \"Please agree to our Terms and Conditions,\" or when someone consents to doing something, as in \"I agreed to take out the trash\" (though in the latter case, the \"to\" is part of the infinitive verb \"to take\" and not to \"agree\"). But when expressing endorsement of an idea, it takes either the preposition \"with\" or no preposition at all. This is probably because \"agree\" comes from the Latin \"ad gratus,\" in which \"ad\" means \"to,\" to the meaning is already implied."
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"known genetic risk\" is a noun phrase that requires an article or pluralization, and the indefinite article \"a\" is the most appropriate choice because the subject is the singular \"carrier\" (so a plural would be incongruous) and the disease that they carry the risk for is unspecified (so the definite article \"the\" would be incongruous). "
            }
        ],
        "id": 7975,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , I would agree to that it 's obligated for a carrier of known genetic risk to tell his or her relatives to avoid any family-related ethical dilemma that could be raise up in the future .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , I would agree that it 's obligated for a carrier of a known genetic risk to tell his or her relatives to avoid any family-related ethical dilemma that could be raise up in the future ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "s",
                "correct": "is",
                "explanation": "This is a stylistic issue and not a grammatical one. The use of \"it's\" would be grammatical in casual speech and many listeners would not be able to perceive the difference, but in a written text like this, it sounds unnatural to use the conjunction \"it's.\" In writing, \"it is\" sounds more standard and is preferable."
            },
            {
                "start": 25,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "s",
                "correct": "is",
                "explanation": "This is a stylistic issue and not a grammatical one. The use of \"it's\" would be grammatical in casual speech and many listeners would not be able to perceive the difference, but in a written text like this, it sounds unnatural to use the conjunction \"it's.\" In writing, \"it is\" sounds more standard and is preferable."
            }
        ],
        "id": 8069,
        "incorrect sentence": "Despite one may argue that it 's still up to the individual to disclose such health issue or to bear it within him/herself , it 's certainly helpful to share with close relatives , for a proper discussion for solutions .",
        "correct sentence": "Despite one may argue that it is still up to the individual to disclose such health issue or to bear it within him/herself , it is certainly helpful to share with close relatives , for a proper discussion for solutions ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The noun phrase \"next generation\" requires an article, and the word \"next\" can only take the definite article \"the\" because it refers to the subsequent or following item in a series. Because of this implied order, only a singular, specified thing can come next. This specificity rules out the indefinite article \"a,\" so \"the\" is used with next."
            }
        ],
        "id": 8147,
        "incorrect sentence": "On top of that , as the genetic risk may pass down to next generation , thus it will involve more than just one family .",
        "correct sentence": "On top of that , as the genetic risk may pass down to the next generation , thus it will involve more than just one family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 25,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "None"
            }
        ],
        "id": 8234,
        "incorrect sentence": "It is therefore I would agree for the obligation of telling the relatives of both parties when one is about to get married and have a plan for giving birth .",
        "correct sentence": "It is therefore I would agree for the obligation of telling the relatives of both parties when one is about to get married and have plan for giving birth ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "dilemma",
                "correct": "dilemmas",
                "explanation": "This is a general statement, referring to many unspecified people. It should be the plural \"dilemmas\" both because \"people\" is plural and also because there is a range of potential ethical issues. "
            }
        ],
        "id": 8256,
        "incorrect sentence": "This would avoid the rise of more family-related ethical dilemma .",
        "correct sentence": "This would avoid the rise of more family-related ethical dilemmas ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The noun phrase \"known genetic risk\" requires a pluralization or an article. The plural \"risks\" could be misunderstood to mean that it is only necessary to inform one's relatives if one carries multiple risks, which is not the case, so an article is preferable. Because the statement here applies to carriers of many different known genetic risks, the indefinite article \"a\" should be used rather than the definite article \"the,\" which would apply to one specific genetic risk. "
            }
        ],
        "id": 8310,
        "incorrect sentence": "In conclusion , in order to avoid the family-related ethical dilemma , it is best for any carrier of known genetic risk to inform his/her relatives .",
        "correct sentence": "In conclusion , in order to avoid the family-related ethical dilemma , it is best for any carrier of a known genetic risk to inform his/her relatives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "supports",
                "correct": "support",
                "explanation": "In the context of care and aid from other people, the word \"support\" is an uncountable noun and is not pluralized. It generally refers to actions or gestures, which are not tangible and cannot be counted. The word \"supports\" is a verb form or a noun referring to the structural components of a building that allow it to withstand force."
            }
        ],
        "id": 8410,
        "incorrect sentence": "More supports must be provided through different means to give better direction when one is standing of such junction whether should him/her to inform the relatives .",
        "correct sentence": "More support must be provided through different means to give better direction when one is standing of such junction whether should him/her to inform the relatives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"society\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific groups society instead of to society in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 8433,
        "incorrect sentence": "This is the common law in the society .",
        "correct sentence": "This is the common law in society ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"people\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific groups of people instead of to people in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 8488,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , there is still a diversity of point of views among the people .",
        "correct sentence": "However , there is still a diversity of point of views among people ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "with",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "It's not grammatically correct to use two prepositions in a row. Either \"fight against\" or \"fight with\" would be acceptable, but \"fight against with\" is redundant and confusing. "
            }
        ],
        "id": 8709,
        "incorrect sentence": "With the families ' support , there must be more energy to fight against with the demon .",
        "correct sentence": "With the families ' support , there must be more energy to fight against the demon ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "elements",
                "correct": "element",
                "explanation": "The subject of the statement is \"that,\" which is singular, so the noun that describes it should be singular as well."
            }
        ],
        "id": 8805,
        "incorrect sentence": "That is the most essential elements to overcome the challenges .",
        "correct sentence": "That is the most essential element to overcome the challenges ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "very",
                "correct": "so",
                "explanation": "The grammatical structure being used here is \"so [adjective] that [outcome/condition].\" This structure means that the degree of the adjective (which is usually extreme) results in the stated outcome/condition. Here, the adjective is \"serious\" and the condition is \"that [the risk] cannot be described.\" Though the risk is \"very serious,\" the word \"very\" alone does not communicate the connection with the outcome/condition, so it needs to be replaced with \"so.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 8837,
        "incorrect sentence": "Besides that , the risk of the known genetic is very serious that it can not be described .",
        "correct sentence": "Besides that , the risk of the known genetic is so serious that it can not be described ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "die",
                "correct": "dying",
                "explanation": "The bare infinitive \"die\" cannot be the subject of a sentence, so it needs to be changed to the gerund \"dying,\" which refers to the process of dying. This also contributes to parallel structure, as \"dying\" it matches the gerund \"lying\" at the start of the sentence."
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "Using the definite article \"the\" implies that the sentence contains an exhaustive list of consequences that we cannot imagine. This would mean that there are only two such consequences, but in reality, there is an indeterminate number of potential consequences. Given this, it's better to remove the definite article and leave the number of consequences indeterminate."
            }
        ],
        "id": 8914,
        "incorrect sentence": "Lying on the bed for the remaining life , and even die immediately , these are the consequences which we can not imagine .",
        "correct sentence": "Lying on the bed for the remaining life , and even dying immediately , these are consequences which we can not imagine ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "an",
                "explanation": "The use of the definite article \"the\" implies that there is only one specific role in our lives that is irreplaceable. There are many different things or people that can play such a role. If there are many possibilities, the indefinite article \"an\" is appropriate."
            }
        ],
        "id": 8979,
        "incorrect sentence": "They play the important role in our life which can not be substituted .",
        "correct sentence": "They play an important role in our life which can not be substituted ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" is required in order to convey that this is a specific individual, not just any carrier of genetic risk, but the specific person whose family they are going to inform. \"The carrier\" means the carrier concerned, or the relevant carrier."
            }
        ],
        "id": 9031,
        "incorrect sentence": "Generally , the clinic or hospital will not tell the carrier 's families without the agreement of carrier .",
        "correct sentence": "Generally , the clinic or hospital will not tell the carrier 's families without the agreement of the carrier ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "case",
                "correct": "cases",
                "explanation": "The plural \"cases\" should be used when referring to multiple things. The use of the singular \"special case\" implies that there is only one particular special case that is hard to define. Logically, this is not true because there are many potential cases that would be difficult to define or anticipate in advance. Also, \"some\" is generally used with plural nouns. Therefore, \"cases\" should be used here."
            }
        ],
        "id": 9200,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , there may be some special case that is hard to be defined .",
        "correct sentence": "However , there may be some special cases that is hard to be defined ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "an",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"play a role\" is a common expression, and it is used with the indefinite article. The use of the definite article \"the\" implies that there is only one factor that is important for the carrier to consider. With the indefinite article, \"a\" (if the word that follows begins with a consonant) or \"an\" (if it begins with a vowel), the phrase \"an important role\" implies that other important considerations exist as well."
            }
        ],
        "id": 9225,
        "incorrect sentence": "Thus , advice from hospital plays the important role for this .",
        "correct sentence": "Thus , advice from hospital plays an important role for this ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "Carrier",
                "correct": "The carrier",
                "explanation": "This statement is referring to a specific carrier in a specific situation: a carrier of a genetic risk who needs advice from the hospital because their circumstances are complicated. The definite article \"the\" is used to reflect that this statement applies to this carrier specifically, rather than any person who is, knowingly or unknowingly, a carrier of any genetic risk."
            },
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "for",
                "explanation": "Either of the prepositions \"to\" or \"for\" can be used with regard to responsibility, but they mean different things. The former, \"to\" means toward or in relation to, so \"responsible to\" would refer to the party to which one has an obligation or to which one reports. For example, an elected official is \"responsible to\" their constituents, and a company is \"responsible to\" its clients. The latter, \"for,\" implies that something is for a purpose or intended goal. Being \"responsible for\" an action means it is their duty to ensure its achievement. It is the carrier's duty to balance the interests and benefits, so \"for\" is the correct choice here."
            },
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "balance",
                "correct": "balancing",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"responsible for\" requires a noun or gerund. The bare infinitive \"balance\" cannot be treated as a noun, so the gerund form \"balancing\" must be used."
            }
        ],
        "id": 9280,
        "incorrect sentence": "Carrier is responsible to balance his or her own interest and the benefits of family and even society .",
        "correct sentence": "The carrier is responsible for balancing his or her own interest and the benefits of family and even society ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "being",
                "correct": "having",
                "explanation": "A \"genetic disorder is a noun, and it is a condition that a person has, not a quality that constitutes their identity. Therefore, it is not common to refer to a person as \"being\" a genetic disorder. Instead, \"having\" a genetic disorder is more commonly used."
            },
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "done",
                "correct": "made",
                "explanation": "\"Make a decision\" is a collocation. The phrase \"do a decision\" is not commonly used, but it would sound mechanical or mindless, like there was only one possible path to take."
            }
        ],
        "id": 9351,
        "incorrect sentence": "With the risk of being genetically disorder , many individuals have done the decision to undergo genetic testing .",
        "correct sentence": "With the risk of having genetically disorder , many individuals have made the decision to undergo genetic testing ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 26,
                "end": 27,
                "error": "face",
                "correct": "faces",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"each individual,\" which means \"each and every single person.\" Because this is singular, the verb form \"faces\" should be used instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 9433,
        "incorrect sentence": "With the nature that the results will be known once the tests are done , each individual that is diagnosed to be a genetic risk carrier face an ethical problem : They should warn their relatives about the risking of being the same genetic risk carrier .",
        "correct sentence": "With the nature that the results will be known once the tests are done , each individual that is diagnosed to be a genetic risk carrier faces an ethical problem : They should warn their relatives about the risking of being the same genetic risk carrier ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "right",
                "correct": "rights",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"human rights\" refers to the various rights inherent to all human beings. It is always plural, except when referring to a single, specified human right, like the human right to life or the human right to education."
            }
        ],
        "id": 9508,
        "incorrect sentence": "First of all , from the angle of human right , a genetic risk carrier should not be obligated to tell the truth to others .",
        "correct sentence": "First of all , from the angle of human rights , a genetic risk carrier should not be obligated to tell the truth to others ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "do",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb phrase \"may not want\" already contains an auxiliary verb: \"may.\" It is not grammatically correct to use two auxiliary verbs in succession. To convey the nuance of both, it would be acceptable to say \"It may be that they do not want...\" but \"may do not want\" is redundant and incorrect."
            }
        ],
        "id": 9579,
        "incorrect sentence": "They may do not want this truth to influence their life or want to keep it as a secret and do not others know about it .",
        "correct sentence": "They may not want this truth to influence their life or want to keep it as a secret and do not others know about it ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "against",
                "explanation": "The verb \"discriminate\" is always used together with \"against\" when describing treating someone differently or unfairly. The preposition \"against\" can convey the idea of opposition to the object, indicate who is harmed by an action, or mean that an action is unfavorable to someone. These meanings are consistent with the meaning of \"discriminate.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 9659,
        "incorrect sentence": "This is reasonable since the exposure of the truth of being a carrier may make them be discriminated or sympothized by others which is not positive factors brought to their life .",
        "correct sentence": "This is reasonable since the exposure of the truth of being a carrier may make them be discriminated against or sympothized by others which is not positive factors brought to their life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "dignosis",
                "correct": "diagnosis",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"diagnosis.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "Seconly",
                "correct": "Secondly",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"Secondly.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 9683,
        "incorrect sentence": "Seconly , the relatives of the carrier can also choose to do genetic testing regardless of the dignosis of the carrier .",
        "correct sentence": "Secondly , the relatives of the carrier can also choose to do genetic testing regardless of the diagnosis of the carrier ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "about",
                "explanation": "The idiom \"think much of\" refers to the level of respect that the thinker has toward something or someone. Therefore, the phrase \"do not want to think too much of\" means not wanting to respect their diagnosis excessively, which is not logical. To convey the meaning of considering a subject or decision, the phrase \"think about\" should be used instead, as it means to contemplate or examine."
            }
        ],
        "id": 9730,
        "incorrect sentence": "If they do not want to think too much of it and view it as a trouble , they may just ignore the possibility .",
        "correct sentence": "If they do not want to think too much about it and view it as a trouble , they may just ignore the possibility ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists but in an unspecified manner or amount. The phrase \"higher risk\" means a risk that is higher than zero, so the risk does exist, but the level of risk is unknown. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\" "
            },
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "have",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The past perfect tense is made up of a form of the verb \"have\" plus the past participle \"been.\" The phrase \"may have been scared\" would be grammatically correct, but this sentence is about the present, and the past perfect refers to events that took place at some point in the past. Therefore, it should be changed to the present tense \"be scared.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 32,
                "end": 33,
                "error": "spouse",
                "correct": "spouses",
                "explanation": "Wrong correction. The subject of the sentence is \"one such relative,\" which is singular. One person can only have one spouse, so if the subject is singular, then it should be \"spouse,\" not \"spouses.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 9954,
        "incorrect sentence": "If one such relative is told that he or she may have higher risk of getting sick , he or she may have be scared about the unknown life , partners , spouse and colleagues may choose to leave , and many other situations may happen which means the relative 's life may be ruined .",
        "correct sentence": "If one such relative is told that he or she may have a higher risk of getting sick , he or she may be scared about the unknown life , partners , spouses and colleagues may choose to leave , and many other situations may happen which means the relative 's life may be ruined ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "side",
                "correct": "hand",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"on the other side\" is likely understandable, but is not really used in English. The sentence is much easier to understand with the common set phrase idiom \"on the other hand.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "want",
                "correct": "wants",
                "explanation": "The subject, \"a person\" is singular, and so for the sake of subject-verb agreement, the verb should be \"wants,\" not \"want.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 9990,
        "incorrect sentence": "On the other side , as stated above , a person who want to confirm and has been prepared to face the result can choose to do the genetic testing individually .",
        "correct sentence": "On the other hand , as stated above , a person who wants to confirm and has been prepared to face the result can choose to do the genetic testing individually ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "right",
                "correct": "rights",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"human rights\" refers to the various rights inherent to all human beings. It is always plural, except when referring to a single, specified human right, like the human right to life or the human right to education."
            }
        ],
        "id": 10026,
        "incorrect sentence": "This should be accepted from the point of human right , freedom of acceptance of relatives as well as many other social reasons .",
        "correct sentence": "This should be accepted from the point of human rights , freedom of acceptance of relatives as well as many other social reasons ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "restric",
                "correct": "restrict",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"restrict.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 10045,
        "incorrect sentence": "Otherwise , making it an obligation will restric the choice of carriers and bring a lot of confusion to their relatives .",
        "correct sentence": "Otherwise , making it an obligation will restrict the choice of carriers and bring a lot of confusion to their relatives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "rather",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The word \"more\" means to a greater degree or extent, and the phrase \"rather than\" means in place of or instead of. The phrase \"rather than getting the disorder\" means \"instead of getting the disorder,\" implying that instead of getting the disorder, the carrier is facing a dilemma. That is not the intended meaning. \"Rather\" should be removed so that it means causing a greater dilemma."
            }
        ],
        "id": 10109,
        "incorrect sentence": "For a carrier of genetic disorder to know the fact that he or she is a carrier , it causes more dilemma rather than getting the disorder .",
        "correct sentence": "For a carrier of genetic disorder to know the fact that he or she is a carrier , it causes more dilemma than getting the disorder ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 25,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "by",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"inherited to\" is not commonly used. This sentence uses the verb \"inherit\" in the passive voice, which focuses on what is done to the object \"by\" an actor. The object here is the disorder, and the actor is the child. What happens to the chance is that it is inherited, and the actor who inherits it is the child; thus it is inherited \"by\" the child."
            }
        ],
        "id": 10203,
        "incorrect sentence": "Firstly , the carrier and his or her family can take precautions , physically by actions to reduce the chance of it being inherited to offspring and , mentally if the action fails to prevent it being inherited .",
        "correct sentence": "Firstly , the carrier and his or her family can take precautions , physically by actions to reduce the chance of it being inherited by offspring and , mentally if the action fails to prevent it being inherited ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "is",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"people,\" which is plural, so it should use the verb form \"are\" for subject-verb agreement."
            },
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The word \"proportion\" refers to the relationship between the size, number, or amount of two things. The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists but in an unspecified manner or amount. The phrase \"a high proportion of\" means an amount that is higher than average, so the risk does exist, but the exact level is unknown. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 10462,
        "incorrect sentence": "Unlike people with high proportion of skin pigment , people with albinism is prone to sunburn and other skin diseases .",
        "correct sentence": "Unlike people with a high proportion of skin pigment , people with are is prone to sunburn and other skin diseases ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The word \"outdoors\" is an adjective, so it does not use a preposition."
            }
        ],
        "id": 10503,
        "incorrect sentence": "If they do n't treat their body well , such as by using sunglasses or wearing sunscreen in outdoor , the chances are good that they will get skin problems that may also lead to cancer .",
        "correct sentence": "If they do n't treat their body well , such as by using sunglasses or wearing sunscreen outdoor , the chances are good that they will get skin problems that may also lead to cancer ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "from",
                "explanation": "The phrasal verb \"prevent from\" always uses the preposition \"from.\" Also, it is used with nouns or gerunds, but \"happen\" is the bare infinitive verb form. It should be changed to the gerund \"happening,\" which can be the object of a verb."
            }
        ],
        "id": 10546,
        "incorrect sentence": "To prevent the bigger problem to happen , it takes a lot of effort to take care of your body .",
        "correct sentence": "To prevent the bigger problem from happen , it takes a lot of effort to take care of your body ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "problem",
                "correct": "problems",
                "explanation": "Using the singular \"problem\" implies that a blood blockage is the only circulatory problem that exists, which is not true. Also \"circulatory problems\" is followed by \"such as,\" which means for example. An example is something that proves a general rule, and a general rule cannot exist without multiple examples, so examples and nouns modified by \"such as\" are usually plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 10591,
        "incorrect sentence": "Usually people are not aware if they carry the sickle cell gene and this may lead to circulatory problem such as blood blocking .",
        "correct sentence": "Usually people are not aware if they carry the sickle cell gene and this may lead to circulatory problems such as blood blocking ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The collocation \"give a boost\" is always used with the indefinite article \"a.\" The article never changes."
            },
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "for",
                "correct": "to",
                "explanation": "\"To\" means toward or in the direction of. When something is given, it moves from the giver to the recipient. Therefore, the object of the verb \"give\" is typically marked with \"to.\" "
            }
        ],
        "id": 10656,
        "incorrect sentence": "Fourthly , it is important for the parents to give mental boost for their children with genetic disorder .",
        "correct sentence": "Fourthly , it is important for the parents to give a mental boost to their children with genetic disorder ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"mock\" does not require the preposition \"of.\" The subject mocks the object, with no need for a preposition."
            }
        ],
        "id": 10680,
        "incorrect sentence": "People and friends often mock of your conditions .",
        "correct sentence": "People and friends often mock your conditions ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"technologies\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific categories of technologies instead of to technologies in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 10813,
        "incorrect sentence": "In this modern world , the technologies were improved a lot compared with the last century .",
        "correct sentence": "In this modern world , technologies were improved a lot compared with the last century ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "claimed",
                "correct": "claim",
                "explanation": "The past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past, while the present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often. The past tense \"claimed\" implies that doctors no longer say this today, but they do. Therefore, it should be the present tense \"claim\" instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 10881,
        "incorrect sentence": "The medical authorities claimed that only the individual who is at risk for a genetic disorder can make the decision to undergo genetic testing .",
        "correct sentence": "The medical authorities claim that only the individual who is at risk for a genetic disorder can make the decision to undergo genetic testing ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 43,
                "end": 44,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "The nature of a risk is explained with the preposition \"of,\" which means involving or dealing with (something) or can indicate what something is made from or includes. It is not common to use \"to\" with risks."
            }
        ],
        "id": 10989,
        "incorrect sentence": "As many people realize , a genetic disorder can be related to the carrier 's relatives , that is , one of the family members is at risk for a genetic disorder means that other family members also have almost the equally risk to have it , so this problem should be treated seriously by the family .",
        "correct sentence": "As many people realize , a genetic disorder can be related to the carrier 's relatives , that is , one of the family members is at risk for a genetic disorder means that other family members also have almost the equally risk of have it , so this problem should be treated seriously by the family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "from",
                "explanation": "The phrasal verb \"prevent from\" always uses the preposition \"from.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "affect",
                "correct": "affecting",
                "explanation": "The phrasal verb \"prevent from\" is used with nouns or gerunds, but \"to affect\" is the infinitive verb form. It should be changed to the gerund \"affecting,\" which can be the object of a verb."
            }
        ],
        "id": 11126,
        "incorrect sentence": "The next point is that telling relatives can raise their awareness of having the similar genetic disorder , preventing certain genetic disorders to affect themselves .",
        "correct sentence": "The next point is that telling relatives can raise their awareness of having the similar genetic disorder , preventing certain genetic disorders from affecting themselves ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 26,
                "end": 27,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "from",
                "explanation": "The phrasal verb \"prevent from\" always uses the preposition \"from.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 27,
                "end": 28,
                "error": "happen",
                "correct": "happening",
                "explanation": "The phrasal verb \"prevent from\" is used with nouns or gerunds, but \"to happen\" is the infinitive verb form. It should be changed to the gerund \"happening,\" which can be the object of a verb."
            }
        ],
        "id": 11198,
        "incorrect sentence": "In addition , doctors usually quote a statement , \" Prevention is better than curation \" ; this gives us an idea that preventing a disorder to happen has far more advantages than curing it .",
        "correct sentence": "In addition , doctors usually quote a statement , \" Prevention is better than curation \" ; this gives us an idea that preventing a disorder from happening has far more advantages than curing it ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "from",
                "explanation": "The phrasal verb \"prevent from\" always uses the preposition \"from.\" Also, it is used with nouns or gerunds, but \"to happen\" is the infinitive verb form. It should be changed to the gerund \"happening,\" which can be the object of a verb."
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "When \"such\" modifies a noun, it generally takes the indefinite article \"an\" except in special cases. In legal documents, for example, it is common to say \"such disorder\" to mean \"said disorder\" or \"the aforementioned disorder,\" but outside of these special cases, it is almost always \"such a disorder\" instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 11285,
        "incorrect sentence": "People who aware of having such disorder can prevent the disorder to happen by adapting a healthy lifestyle , including having a balanced diet and at least having exercise for 30 minutes every day .",
        "correct sentence": "People who aware of having such a disorder can prevent the from to happen by adapting a healthy lifestyle , including having a balanced diet and at least having exercise for 30 minutes every day ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "from",
                "explanation": "The phrasal verb \"prevent from\" always uses the preposition \"from.\" Also, it is used with nouns or gerunds, but \"to happen\" is the infinitive verb form. It should be changed to the gerund \"happening,\" which can be the object of a verb."
            }
        ],
        "id": 11331,
        "incorrect sentence": "This is their human right to know about that , and this may also save their lives by preventing the disorder to happen .",
        "correct sentence": "This is their human right to know about that , and this may also save their lives by preventing the disorder from happen ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "decades,medical",
                "correct": "decades , medical",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary between words or after a comma."
            },
            {
                "start": 69,
                "end": 70,
                "error": "become",
                "correct": "becomes",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"a question,\" which is singular, so for the sake of subject-verb agreement, the verb should be \"become\" and not \"becomes.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 79,
                "end": 80,
                "error": "opinion,I",
                "correct": "opinion , I",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary between words or after a comma."
            },
            {
                "start": 81,
                "end": 82,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" refers to a specific strong urge, especially one that is known to the reader or was mentioned earlier in the text. Because nothing like this has been mentioned, it should be changed to the indefinite article \"a,\" which refers to one single unspecified urge out of multiple potential urges."
            }
        ],
        "id": 11497,
        "incorrect sentence": "Together with the advancement of technology over past decades,medical advancement has increased exponentially and further enhancements are still constantly upgrading.Empower doctors with advance medical knowledge,doctors are able to diagnose and undergo genetic testing for patients to help them prevent and take necessary steps to protect their life.However , once a test has been conducted and the results are known,a question of disclosing the results to his or her relatives become a challenging issue to both patient and doctor.In my opinion,I feel the strong urge to support the obligation to inform patient relatives .",
        "correct sentence": "Together with the advancement of technology over past decades , medical advancement has increased exponentially and further enhancements are still constantly upgrading.Empower doctors with advance medical knowledge,doctors are able to diagnose and undergo genetic testing for patients to help them prevent and take necessary steps to protect their life.However , once a test has been conducted and the results are known,a question of disclosing the results to his or her relatives becomes a challenging issue to both patient and doctor.In my opinion , I feel a strong urge to support the obligation to inform patient relatives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "risk,the",
                "correct": "risk , the",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary between words or after a comma."
            },
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "s",
                "explanation": "The possessive indicates a relationship of belonging. In order to convey that the next-of-kin belongs to the patient, the word \"patient\" should be changed to \"patient's,\" with an apostrophe and the letter \"s.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 37,
                "end": 38,
                "error": "occur.For",
                "correct": "occur . For",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary between words or after a period."
            },
            {
                "start": 38,
                "end": 39,
                "error": "example,if",
                "correct": "example , if",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary between words or after a comma."
            },
            {
                "start": 73,
                "end": 74,
                "error": "letting",
                "correct": "making",
                "explanation": "The verb phrase \"to make aware\" is a collocation, and the verb cannot be substituted. Beyond this idiom, it is generally common to use \"make\" to denote changes in state like changing from ignorance to awareness. This is because \"make\" can mean to cause something to exist, happen, or appear."
            },
            {
                "start": 95,
                "end": 96,
                "error": "children.However",
                "correct": "children . However",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary between words or after a period."
            },
            {
                "start": 98,
                "end": 99,
                "error": "ethic",
                "correct": "ethical",
                "explanation": "The word \"ethic\" is a noun, and so is the word it modifies, \"issues.\" The adjective form \"ethical\" should be used instead as it can modify a noun."
            },
            {
                "start": 105,
                "end": 105,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "\"Biggest\" is the superlative form of big, and it means \"as big as possible.\" Combined with the definite article \"the,\" which refers to specific things, \"the biggest concerns\" creates a group of specific concerns that rank highest in importance or relevance."
            },
            {
                "start": 120,
                "end": 120,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "",
                "explanation": "The possessive indicates a relationship of belonging. In order to convey that the relatives belong to the patients, the plural \"patients\" should be changed to the plural possessive \"patients',\" which has an apostrophe after the letter \"s.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 120,
                "end": 121,
                "error": "relatives.It",
                "correct": "relatives . It",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary between words or after a period."
            },
            {
                "start": 144,
                "end": 145,
                "error": "States,there",
                "correct": "States , there",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary between words or after a comma."
            }
        ],
        "id": 11926,
        "incorrect sentence": "As it is a genetic risk,the patient next-of-skin might have a high chance of carrying the risk,hence the need to inform their relatives is important so that necessary prevention actions could be taken before unforeseen circumstances might occur.For example,if you are the only child in a family and unfortunately,you are suffering from a genetic disease that the genetic trait might be passed on to your next generation if you have a child,hence by letting your family members aware of the situation,it would lessen family stresses and suffering on forcing you to settle down and have children.However , social ethic issues like discrimination and privacy are biggest concerns and potential barriers to enforce patients or doctors to disclose information to patients relatives.It challenges the confidentiality and privacy principles.Currently , under the Health Insurance Portability and Accountability Act of 1996 ( HIPAA ) in the United States,there is no legal obligation requirement to disclose information to relatives,it is up to the patient 's wish to disclose to their family members.Early disclosement to family members brings in positive reaction and prevention,as in the case of Angelina Jolie,she chose to disclose information and underwent treatment to reduce the risk of breast cancer significantly to under five percent.I still can recall her reason for disclosing her own story was that she does not want to live under the shadow of cancer .",
        "correct sentence": "As it is a genetic risk , the patient s next-of-skin might have a high chance of carrying the risk,hence the need to inform their relatives is important so that necessary prevention actions could be taken before unforeseen circumstances might occur . For example , if you are the only child in a family and unfortunately,you are suffering from a genetic disease that the genetic trait might be passed on to your next generation if you have a child,hence by making your family members aware of the situation,it would lessen family stresses and suffering on forcing you to settle down and have children . However , social ethical issues like discrimination and privacy are the biggest concerns and potential barriers to enforce patients or doctors to disclose information to patients  relatives . It challenges the confidentiality and privacy principles.Currently , under the Health Insurance Portability and Accountability Act of 1996 ( HIPAA ) in the United States , there is no legal obligation requirement to disclose information to relatives,it is up to the patient 's wish to disclose to their family members.Early disclosement to family members brings in positive reaction and prevention,as in the case of Angelina Jolie,she chose to disclose information and underwent treatment to reduce the risk of breast cancer significantly to under five percent.I still can recall her reason for disclosing her own story was that she does not want to live under the shadow of cancer ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 76,
                "end": 77,
                "error": "thousand",
                "correct": "thousands",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"thousands of\" means multiple thousands, or more than two or three thousand but less than ten thousand. Because it refers to multiple thousands, it cannot be singular."
            },
            {
                "start": 89,
                "end": 90,
                "error": "helps",
                "correct": "help",
                "explanation": "The noun \"help\" is treated as collective or uncountable, and therefore it is not pluralized. The word \"helps\" is only a verb form."
            },
            {
                "start": 91,
                "end": 92,
                "error": "supports",
                "correct": "support",
                "explanation": "The noun \"support\" is treated as collective or uncountable, and therefore it is not pluralized. The word \"supports\" is either a verb form or a noun used in construction or architecture, meaning the structural components of a building that allow it to withstand force."
            },
            {
                "start": 94,
                "end": 95,
                "error": "needs",
                "correct": "need",
                "explanation": "The sentence is referring to one specific need, so it should be singular, not plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 12209,
        "incorrect sentence": "However,there are still people against the decision of revealing private information.As in the case of Alzheimer patients,it is up to the patient 's own choice to disclose information.However,research has shown that doctors have tried to interpret who,how and whom will Alzheimer disease be disclosed to minimise potential negative impact to families members ( DementiaToday,2012 ) .There are associations provide helps to Alzheimer patients like Alzheimer 's Association ( Alzheimer 's Association,1980 ) .Although there are still thousand of genetic risk diseases out there that might not be receiving all helps and supports from everyone,the needs to receive immediate understanding and support from family members is an utmost help that patients need in their difficult time .",
        "correct sentence": "However,there are still people against the decision of revealing private information.As in the case of Alzheimer patients,it is up to the patient 's own choice to disclose information.However,research has shown that doctors have tried to interpret who,how and whom will Alzheimer disease be disclosed to minimise potential negative impact to families members ( DementiaToday,2012 ) .There are associations provide helps to Alzheimer patients like Alzheimer 's Association ( Alzheimer 's Association,1980 ) .Although there are still thousands of genetic risk diseases out there that might not be receiving all help and support from everyone,the need to receive immediate understanding and support from family members is an utmost help that patients need in their difficult time ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 41,
                "end": 41,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" is used when referring to a specific thing. This sentence is referring to a specific individual patient, so the definite article is necessary. It conveys that the decision can only be made by the patient concerned, and not by any other patient."
            },
            {
                "start": 80,
                "end": 81,
                "error": "ethic",
                "correct": "ethical",
                "explanation": "The word \"ethic\" is a noun, and so is the word it modifies, \"issues.\" The adjective form \"ethical\" should be used instead as it can modify a noun."
            },
            {
                "start": 82,
                "end": 83,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"in the long term\" is a common expression, and the article does not change. It is similar to \"in the future,\" which almost always uses the definite article. It is common to treat the future as one single path forward."
            },
            {
                "start": 91,
                "end": 92,
                "error": "government,more",
                "correct": "government , more",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary between words or after a comma."
            }
        ],
        "id": 12475,
        "incorrect sentence": "In conclusion,the state should have passed a legal bill to measure and provide information to doctors that till which extend should a doctor opt to reveal to relatives members about the genetic disease and in which situations it is open to patient 's decision.In addition,the state could also encourage to create assistance schemes to aid necessary help to needy patients to encourage them to open up for the benefit of own and family members.Although it may face challenges from social ethic issues,in a long term,with appropriate encouragement and aid from the government,more individuals would have a different view of acceptance and take appropriate measurements to protect their own health and their loved ones .",
        "correct sentence": "In conclusion,the state should have passed a legal bill to measure and provide information to doctors that till which extend should a doctor opt to reveal to relatives members about the genetic disease and in which situations it is open to the patient 's decision.In addition,the state could also encourage to create assistance schemes to aid necessary help to needy patients to encourage them to open up for the benefit of own and family members.Although it may face challenges from social ethical issues,in the long term,with appropriate encouragement and aid from the government , more individuals would have a different view of acceptance and take appropriate measurements to protect their own health and their loved ones ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"technological advancement\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific advancement instead of the progress of technology in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 12523,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nowadays , the study in the genetic field has gone further and further due to the high-velocity technological advancement .",
        "correct sentence": "Nowadays , the study in the genetic field has gone further and further due to high-velocity technological advancement ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "An appositive phrase requires commas on either side to create an easily understandable sentence structure. An appositive phrase is a phrase that explains or identifies the noun before it. The phrase \"which enables... disorder\" describes the noun \"genetic testing,\" so it is an appositive phrase and therefore requires a comma at the end as well."
            }
        ],
        "id": 12600,
        "incorrect sentence": "In comparison , in the field of genetic testing which enables people to be aware of the risk of a possible genetic disorder , as the technology has been very mature already , an even more popular topic arises .",
        "correct sentence": "In comparison , in the field of genetic testing , which enables people to be aware of the risk of a possible genetic disorder , as the technology has been very mature already , an even more popular topic arises ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "get",
                "correct": "put",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"put in danger\" is a common expression and the verb does not change. The verb \"put\" means to cause someone to be in a particular place or position."
            }
        ],
        "id": 12747,
        "incorrect sentence": "How can they not tell their loved ones who they really are and get their loved ones in danger ?",
        "correct sentence": "How can they not tell their loved ones who they really are and put their loved ones in danger ?"
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "love",
                "correct": "loves",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"everyone,\" which is singular. It refers to multiple people, but treats them as individuals. Because the subject is singular, for subject-verb agreement's sake, the verb should be \"loves.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 12767,
        "incorrect sentence": "The basis of a family is that everyone trusts and love each other with no doubts .",
        "correct sentence": "The basis of a family is that everyone trusts and loves each other with no doubts ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "life",
                "correct": "lives",
                "explanation": "\"Lives\" should be plural because it belongs to \"patients,\" which is plural. One person has one life, so multiple people have multiple lives."
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "is",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"patients' lives,\" which is plural. For the sake of subject-verb agreement, the verb should be \"are.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 12841,
        "incorrect sentence": "Without the support of loved ones , patients ' life is no better than death .",
        "correct sentence": "Without the support of loved ones , patients ' lives are no better than death ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "group",
                "correct": "groups",
                "explanation": "I disagree with this correction. It should be either \"as the closest group\" or \"as one of the closest groups.\" The former means that there is one group of people on the top tier of closeness: the victim's family. The phrase \"the closest\" refers to only one group because it combines the definite article \"the,\" which refers to a specific thing, with the superlative \"closest,\" which means the most close. The latter means that the top tier of closeness includes the family and multiple other groups. The subject of the phrase \"one of the groups\" is \"one,\" so it is singular. It means one group of multiple potential groups. The word \"of\" cannot be omitted without losing the meaning. To conclude, either of these options is acceptable, but \"one the closest group\" is not."
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "is",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"family members,\" which is plural. For the sake of subject-verb agreement, the verb should be \"are.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 12907,
        "incorrect sentence": "Family members , as one the closest group of people from whom they can get comfort , is a crucial factor for them to successfully get over any possible troubles as a result of genetic disorder .",
        "correct sentence": "Family members , as one the closest groups of people from whom they can get comfort , are a crucial factor for them to successfully get over any possible troubles as a result of genetic disorder ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "by",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"of\" indicates the object of an action, while the preposition \"by\" indicates an agent performing an action. The phrase \"a study of New York University\" means that someone conducted a study of New York University, while \"A study by New York University\" means that the university or someone affiliated with it conducted the study, in other words, that it was conducted by the university."
            },
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"take care of\" is a collocation meaning to look after or tend to someone. "
            }
        ],
        "id": 12951,
        "incorrect sentence": "A study of New York University in 2010 shown that patients with family members around generally recovers 2-4 days faster than those taken care by professional nurses .",
        "correct sentence": "A study by New York University in 2010 shown that patients with family members around generally recovers 2-4 days faster than those taken care of by professional nurses ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 28,
                "end": 28,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" is used when referring to a specific thing. This sentence is referring to a specific bond: the bond that is established between family members who have suffered together. Therefore, \"the\" is necessary."
            }
        ],
        "id": 13083,
        "incorrect sentence": "While every family need to go through this or that kind of troublesome situations , the more troubles that a family has gone through together , the greater bond will be established between the family members as well as the greater amount of trust , love and understanding .",
        "correct sentence": "While every family need to go through this or that kind of troublesome situations , the more troubles that a family has gone through together , the greater the bond will be established between the family members as well as the greater amount of trust , love and understanding ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": ",all",
                "correct": ", all",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary after a comma."
            }
        ],
        "id": 13130,
        "incorrect sentence": "Hence , for a family in which every member is truly believing in each other and loving each other ,all these troubles are just testaments to make them stronger .",
        "correct sentence": "Hence , for a family in which every member is truly believing in each other and loving each other , all these troubles are just testaments to make them stronger ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "make",
                "correct": "makes",
                "explanation": "The subject \"what doesn't kill you\" is singular, so for the sake of subject-verb agreement, the verb form should be \"makes,\" not \"make.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 13157,
        "incorrect sentence": "Just as the lyrics of Kelly Clarkson , what does n't kill you make you stronger .",
        "correct sentence": "Just as the lyrics of Kelly Clarkson , what does n't kill you makes you stronger ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "an",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"an\" indicates an unspecified option from among multiple choices. There are multiple societies within Asia, and the author lives in one but does not specify which, so \"an\" is suitable."
            }
        ],
        "id": 13195,
        "incorrect sentence": "Being in Asian society where genetic testing is not a common practice , I do think that it is the choice of the patient whether he or she wants to tell his or her relatives about his or her disease .",
        "correct sentence": "Being in an Asian society where genetic testing is not a common practice , I do think that it is the choice of the patient whether he or she wants to tell his or her relatives about his or her disease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "fell",
                "correct": "feel",
                "explanation": "The correct word is \"feel,\" meaning to think or hold an opinion. The word \"fell\" is the past tense of the verb \"to fall,\" meaning to come or go down quickly from a high place or position."
            }
        ],
        "id": 13308,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nevertheless , while I fell that a carrier should not be obligated to tell his or her relatives about the genetic risk , I would like to suggest the person to at least share the information with her or his potential partner ( husband or wife ) since the individual 's genetic risk may affect their future children .",
        "correct sentence": "Nevertheless , while I feel that a carrier should not be obligated to tell his or her relatives about the genetic risk , I would like to suggest the person to at least share the information with her or his potential partner ( husband or wife ) since the individual 's genetic risk may affect their future children ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "against",
                "explanation": "The verb \"discriminate\" is always used together with \"against\" when describing treating someone differently or unfairly. The preposition \"against\" can convey the idea of opposition to the object, indicate who is harmed by an action, or mean that an action is unfavorable to someone. These meanings are consistent with the meaning of \"discriminate.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 13393,
        "incorrect sentence": "While we do know that we should not discriminate them based on their limitations , many people still do it with or without them realizing it .",
        "correct sentence": "While we do know that we should not discriminate against them based on their limitations , many people still do it with or without them realizing it ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "about",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"discuss\" does not take the preposition \"about.\" While \"about\" is used with similar verbs like \"tell\" or \"talk,\" in the case of \"discuss,\" the object simply comes directly after, with no need for a preposition."
            }
        ],
        "id": 13421,
        "incorrect sentence": "In this particular case , we are discussing about whether a person should tell his relatives about him having a RISK of a particular genetic disease .",
        "correct sentence": "In this particular case , we are discussing whether a person should tell his relatives about him having a RISK of a particular genetic disease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "for",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The noun \"demand\" uses the preposition \"for,\" but the verb \"demand\" does not. The object comes directly after, with no need for a preposition."
            },
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The noun \"treatment\" can be either countable or uncountable, depending on its meaning. It is countable when it refers to tangible things, like a medical or beauty treatment, a chemical treatment, or a kind of film script called a treatment. It is uncountable when it refers to intangible things, like how one thinks/acts toward a person or how a subject is discussed or dealt with. In this sentence, it is intangible, so it is uncountable. Uncountable nouns cannot be made singular or plural, so the indefinite article \"a\" cannot be used."
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"others\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific group of other people, instead of simply everyone in the world except the person or people affected."
            },
            {
                "start": 45,
                "end": 46,
                "error": "differently.Many",
                "correct": "differently . Many",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary after a period."
            }
        ],
        "id": 13486,
        "incorrect sentence": "It is normal for people to demand for a fair and similar treatment as the others and therefore it is normal for people to try to keep some of their secrets or personal issues to themselves in case some people judge them or treat them differently.Many people really love to hear what they want to hear and therefore they may just ignore the word 'risk ' and assume that the person has suffered from the disease .",
        "correct sentence": "It is normal for people to demand fair and similar treatment as others and therefore it is normal for people to try to keep some of their secrets or personal issues to themselves in case some people judge them or treat them differently . Many people really love to hear what they want to hear and therefore they may just ignore the word 'risk ' and assume that the person has suffered from the disease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "May be",
                "correct": "Maybe",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The adverb \"maybe,\" which means possibly but not certainly, is one word. It modifies the auxiliary verb phrase \"can trust.\" In contrast, the phrase \"may be\" is also an auxiliary verb phrase, so it needs the conjunction \"that\" if it is used before another verb phrase. Either \"Maybe we can trust\" or \"It may be that we can trust\" is grammatically correct, but they cannot be mixed."
            }
        ],
        "id": 13577,
        "incorrect sentence": "May be we can trust our immediate family members but can we really trust all the other relatives ?",
        "correct sentence": "Maybe we can trust our immediate family members but can we really trust all the other relatives ?"
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 28,
                "end": 29,
                "error": "it",
                "correct": "they",
                "explanation": "The verb \"encourage\" can mean to make someone more likely to do something. The object of the verb is the person being prompted to do something. In this case, the object is the patient, who is prompted or persuaded to tell their partner. The construction \"it should be encouraged to\" is understandable, but is less clear and less common than \"they should encourage.\" Also, the pronoun \"it\" is used twice in the same clause to refer to two different things. In \"it should be encouraged,\" it refers to the act of telling their partner, while in \"tell it to,\" it refers to the genetic risk. This should be changed to avoid confusion."
            }
        ],
        "id": 13747,
        "incorrect sentence": "This piece of information does play a role in family planning matters , therefore although no one is obliged to tell about their genetic risk to anyone , it should be encouraged to tell it to their future partner .",
        "correct sentence": "This piece of information does play a role in family planning matters , therefore although no one is obliged to tell about their genetic risk to anyone , they should be encouraged to tell it to their future partner ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used to express one option out of multiple options. The phrase \"a new life with a genetic risk\" means one potential lifestyle out of many, with one potential genetic risk out of many. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 13950,
        "incorrect sentence": "With the improvements of technology , a new life with genetic risk can be detected .",
        "correct sentence": "With the improvements of technology , a new life with a genetic risk can be detected ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "to",
                "explanation": "The verb \"refers\" always uses the preposition \"to\" when it means to talk about or discuss. \"To\" can be used to indicate the person or thing that receives an object or action."
            }
        ],
        "id": 13968,
        "incorrect sentence": "Genetic refers the chance of inheriting a disorder or disease .",
        "correct sentence": "Genetic refers to the chance of inheriting a disorder or disease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used to express one option out of multiple options. The phrase \"a new life with a genetic risk\" means one potential lifestyle out of many, with one potential genetic risk out of many. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 14015,
        "incorrect sentence": "This essay will discuss the reasons why the relatives are obligated to be informed that their children have genetic risk .",
        "correct sentence": "This essay will discuss the reasons why the relatives are obligated to be informed that their children have a genetic risk ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 20,
                "end": 21,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "The adjective \"capable\" is never followed by an infinitive verb, like \"to raise.\" It uses the preposition \"of,\" which can indicate what something is made from or includes. Raising a child with a genetic risk constitutes a capability, therefore it is phrased as \"capable of raising.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "raise",
                "correct": "raising",
                "explanation": "\"Capable\" is an adjective, so it modifies a noun. \"To raise\" is an infinitive verb, so the gerund \"raising\" should be used instead of the infinitive \"to raise.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 25,
                "end": 25,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used to express one out of multiple options. The phrase \"a child with a genetic risk\" means any child, with any genetic risk. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 14050,
        "incorrect sentence": "One of the reasons that the parents should be informed is that they have to decide whether they are capable to raise a child with genetic risk .",
        "correct sentence": "One of the reasons that the parents should be informed is that they have to decide whether they are capable of raising a child with a genetic risk ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "worst",
                "correct": "worse",
                "explanation": "The superlative noun \"worst\" means the lowest possible point. The sentence states that the situation may deteriorate, so it is not yet at its lowest possible point. Therefore, it should be changed to \"worse,\" the comparative adjective, which means that it could deteriorate further than its current state."
            }
        ],
        "id": 14250,
        "incorrect sentence": "The situation may become worst if the child has diseases like cancer or heart disease , which means that parents have another heavy baggage named medication fees .",
        "correct sentence": "The situation may become worse if the child has diseases like cancer or heart disease , which means that parents have another heavy baggage named medication fees ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "are",
                "correct": "is",
                "explanation": "The subject is \"a new life,\" which is singular. The article \"a\" is always used with a singular noun. For the sake of subject-verb agreement, the verb form should be \"is.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 25,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"pain\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific type or instance of pain, instead of the concept in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 14324,
        "incorrect sentence": "It is still early for parents to decide whether they can foster a new life that are not able to work and may suffer the pain in the entire life .",
        "correct sentence": "It is still early for parents to decide whether they can foster a new life that is not able to work and may suffer pain in the entire life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "report",
                "correct": "reports",
                "explanation": "The word \"always\" implies that this type of incident has occurred many times and has been covered in the newspaper multiple times. This means it cannot be treated as singular. Also, the verb \"are\" is always used for plural nouns. Therefore, it should be the plural noun \"reports.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 14414,
        "incorrect sentence": "There are always newspaper report that a new born baby has be abandoned at hospital after they realized the baby have diseases that need a huge amount of money to secure .",
        "correct sentence": "There are always newspaper reports that a new born baby has be abandoned at hospital after they realized the baby have diseases that need a huge amount of money to secure ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"countries\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific groups of countries instead of to countries in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 14451,
        "incorrect sentence": "For the countries like Singapore , they are short of manpower to contribute to the nation .",
        "correct sentence": "For countries like Singapore , they are short of manpower to contribute to the nation ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "The verb \"concentrate\" uses the preposition \"on\" when talking about an object of focus. This is because \"on\" can be used to indicate the subject of something. The phrase \"concentrate to\" is not commonly used, and it sounds like \"to\" is being used to indicate the direction of something."
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "develop",
                "correct": "developing",
                "explanation": "The verb phrase \"concentrate on\" cannot be followed by an infinitive verb like \"to develop.\" It should be changed to the gerund \"developing.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 21,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The noun \"military\" means the armed forces of a country. Because of the implication that it belongs to a specific country, it usually takes the definite article \"the,\" which refers to a specific thing."
            }
        ],
        "id": 14570,
        "incorrect sentence": "Without increasing number of disables in a nation , the government is able to concentrate to develop in other ways like military and education .",
        "correct sentence": "Without increasing number of disables in a nation , the government is able to concentrate on developing in other ways like the military and education ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "When the verb \"live\" means to exist or reside somewhere, it requires the preposition \"in\" to connect it to the place. Therefore, it should be changed to \"in the world we are living in,\" or preferably \"in the world in which we live,\" which is a more appropriate position for a preposition in formal writing."
            }
        ],
        "id": 14604,
        "incorrect sentence": "Moreover , in the world we are living today , many miscarriages conducted in hospital every day .",
        "correct sentence": "Moreover , in the world we are living in today , many miscarriages conducted in hospital every day ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "their",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"human right\" typically uses the definite article \"the\" because it is something specific that humans are endowed with. The definite article best expresses this specificity. In some special cases, a pronoun can be used instead, such as \"He insisted on his right to trial\" or \"She waived her right to an attorney.\" However, in these cases, the pronoun is used to emphasize what an individual person chooses to do about their own right. This is not the meaning in this general context, so it should be changed to \"the.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 14633,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore I believe the parents have their right to know the healthiness of their child .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore I believe the parents have the right to know the healthiness of their child ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "with",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"support\" does not use a preposition. The object comes directly after, with no need for a preposition."
            },
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used to express one option out of multiple options, and the definite article \"the\" is used to refer to a specific thing. This sentence is referring to a specific theory, that every person has the right to enjoy the world, so the definite article is necessary. It conveys that the work in question was for this specific project. The phrase \"a theory\" means an unspecified or unknown theory."
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "have",
                "correct": "has",
                "explanation": "I don't agree with this correction. The subject is \"every people,\" which is grammatically incorrect because \"every\" is used with singular nouns and \"people\" is plural. It can be changed to the singular \"every person,\" in which case the verb form should be corrected to \"has,\" to match, or the verb form can stay and the subject should be changed to the plural \"all people.\" Either is acceptable, but \"every people has\" is not."
            }
        ],
        "id": 14689,
        "incorrect sentence": "Many people may support with a theory that every people have their right to enjoy the world , especially people with religions .",
        "correct sentence": "Many people may support the theory that every people has their right to enjoy the world , especially people with religions ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "\"The right decision\" is an idiom, and the article does not change. The indefinite article \"a\" refers to one unspecified thing and the definite article \"the\" to one specific thing. Idiomatically, it is thought that only one \"right decision\" exists, so it is common to refer to decisions as \"the right decision\" or \"the wrong decision,\" only using the definite article."
            }
        ],
        "id": 14759,
        "incorrect sentence": "Parents know what the best is for their children , thus they will make a right decision after they have be informed .",
        "correct sentence": "Parents know what the best is for their children , thus they will make the right decision after they have be informed ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "being",
                "correct": "beings",
                "explanation": "This statement is referring to multiple people because it is not likely that the author is asking one singular human being to improve the medical field. Therefore, the plural \"beings\" should be used instead of the singular \"human being.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "happen",
                "correct": "happening",
                "explanation": "I agree with this edit but further corrections are needed. The verb \"prevent\" is used with nouns or gerunds, but \"happen\" is the bare infinitive verb form. It should be changed to the gerund \"happening,\" which can be the object of a verb. Also, \"prevent from\" is a phrasal verb that always requires the preposition \"from.\" Finally, the phrase \"the tragedy\" with the definite article \"the\" refers to a specific tragedy. In a general statement like this, it is better to use the plural \"tragedies,\" which refers to any and all tragedies that can happen."
            }
        ],
        "id": 14794,
        "incorrect sentence": "Also , human being should improve the medical field in order to prevent the tragedy happen .",
        "correct sentence": "Also , human beings should improve the medical field in order to prevent the tragedy happening ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The noun \"treatment\" can be either countable or uncountable, depending on its meaning. It is countable when it refers to tangible things and uncountable when it refers to intangible things. In this sentence, it means the ability to manage or regulate something, which is intangible, so it is uncountable. It is uncommon to use an article with the intangible meaning of \"control.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 25,
                "error": "some one",
                "correct": "someone",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. \"Someone\" is a single word and does not contain a space."
            }
        ],
        "id": 14836,
        "incorrect sentence": "One should have the full control of his/her information and it is his/her right to decide whether or not to disclose it to some one else .",
        "correct sentence": "One should have full control of his/her information and it is his/her right to decide whether or not to disclose it to someone else ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used to express one option out of multiple options. This sentence refers to any person who has Disease C, and this is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 14981,
        "incorrect sentence": "If person has a disease C that might be a result of gene A .",
        "correct sentence": "If a person has a disease C that might be a result of gene A ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "has",
                "correct": "have",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"parents,\" which is plural. Because of subject-verb agreement, the appropriate verb form is \"have.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "under",
                "correct": "at",
                "explanation": "While the phrase \"under risk of\" makes logical sense and would be understood, it is not used in English. It's typical to say \"at risk of,\" because the preposition \"at\" can denote the idea of being in a particular state or condition, such as being exposed to risk."
            },
            {
                "start": 35,
                "end": 36,
                "error": "under",
                "correct": "at",
                "explanation": "While the phrase \"under risk of\" makes logical sense and would be understood, it is not used in English. It's typical to say \"at risk of,\" because the preposition \"at\" can denote the idea of being in a particular state or condition, such as being exposed to risk."
            },
            {
                "start": 26,
                "end": 27,
                "error": "runing",
                "correct": "running",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"running\" because the final consonant is doubled when the verb ends with a vowel followed by a consonant."
            }
        ],
        "id": 15065,
        "incorrect sentence": "This means both of his parents has gene A and they are both under high risk of having disease C. They could save the cost of runing two separate tests to see whether they are under high risk of having disease C. If he runs a test and know that he has the gene Aa .",
        "correct sentence": "This means both of his parents have gene A and they are both at high risk of having disease C. They could save the cost of running two separate tests to see whether they are at high risk of having disease C. If he runs a test and know that he has the gene Aa ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "against",
                "explanation": "The verb \"discriminate\" is always used together with \"against\" when describing treating someone differently or unfairly. The preposition \"against\" can convey the idea of opposition to the object, indicate who is harmed by an action, or mean that an action is unfavorable to someone. These meanings are consistent with the meaning of \"discriminate.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 15209,
        "incorrect sentence": "If a person is obliged to tell his/her relatives , he or she might be discriminated by those who do not carry this gene .",
        "correct sentence": "If a person is obliged to tell his/her relatives , he or she might be discriminated against by those who do not carry this gene ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "adviced",
                "correct": "advised",
                "explanation": "The word \"advice\" is a noun, and the verb is \"to advise,\" hence the past participle \"advised.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 15224,
        "incorrect sentence": "He or she might even be adviced not to get married or have children .",
        "correct sentence": "He or she might even be advised not to get married or have children ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "seriou",
                "correct": "serious",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"serious.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 15252,
        "incorrect sentence": "For example , if an unmarried person has gene Aa and gene aa is sufficient for a very seriou disease .",
        "correct sentence": "For example , if an unmarried person has gene Aa and gene aa is sufficient for a very serious disease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "and",
                "explanation": "The sentence is describing a situation in which two conditions are true: first, that the gene runs in the family, and second, that a family member tests positive. There is no connection between these conditions, so conjunction \"and\" is needed to link them."
            },
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "member",
                "correct": "members",
                "explanation": "The expression \"one of the\" is used to refer to a single member of a group, which implies the existence of multiple members. This means that the noun it modifies must inherently be plural, as there are multiple members."
            },
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "test",
                "correct": "tests",
                "explanation": "The subject is \"one,\" meaning any single person from among the members of the family. This makes the subject singular, and so the verb should be \"tests\" for the sake of subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 15390,
        "incorrect sentence": "If a gene runs in the family , one of the family member test positive , whom does he need to tell .",
        "correct sentence": "If a gene runs in the family , and one of the family members tests positive , whom does he need to tell ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "tell",
                "correct": "tells",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"Person A,\" which is singular, so the verb should be \"tells\" and not \"tell\" for subject-verb agreement."
            },
            {
                "start": 37,
                "end": 38,
                "error": "cousine",
                "correct": "cousin",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"cousin.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 30,
                "end": 31,
                "error": "needed",
                "correct": "needs",
                "explanation": "The verb form \"needed\" is the past tense, which refers to events that were completed in the past. This sentence refers to theoretical events in the present, so the present tense \"needs\" should be used instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 15456,
        "incorrect sentence": "Spouses usually have very close relationships , if person A tell his family that he has this gene , his uncle C knows and tells his wife D that he needed to run a test because his cousine has this disease .",
        "correct sentence": "Spouses usually have very close relationships , if person A tells his family that he has this gene , his uncle C knows and tells his wife D that he needs to run a test because his cousin has this disease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The expression \"under risk of\" is not used in English, so this correction is difficult to evaluate with any certainty. However, there is the commonly used prepositional phrase \"at risk of,\" which never takes an article, so if \"under risk of\" did exist, it would probably not use an article either."
            }
        ],
        "id": 15479,
        "incorrect sentence": "However wife D is not even under the risk of having this disease .",
        "correct sentence": "However wife D is not even under risk of having this disease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 33,
                "end": 33,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount, or to express one out of multiple options. The phrase \"a genetic risk which can affect their next generation\" means one potential genetic risk out of many. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 15696,
        "incorrect sentence": "Since the technology of modern society has been so advanced , it becomes possible for people to make decision to take genetic test so as to be clear whether or not they carry genetic risk which can affect their next generation .",
        "correct sentence": "Since the technology of modern society has been so advanced , it becomes possible for people to make decision to take genetic test so as to be clear whether or not they carry a genetic risk which can affect their next generation ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists but in an unspecified manner or amount. The phrase \"great possibility\" means a significant possibility, but the exact level of possibility is unknown. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 15871,
        "incorrect sentence": "Because if you are carrying that genetic risk , then there is great possibility that your relatives like parents or siblings are carrying the same genetic risk as well .",
        "correct sentence": "Because if you are carrying that genetic risk , then there is a great possibility that your relatives like parents or siblings are carrying the same genetic risk as well ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"both you and your relatives\" means one person who has not undergone genetic testing and that person's relatives. The commonly used phrase \"both of you\" means the person being addressed and one other person, so \"both of you and your relatives\" means two people and their relatives. Therefore,\"of\" should be removed."
            }
        ],
        "id": 15915,
        "incorrect sentence": "If you have n't undergone the genetic testing , it 's just odd and fate for what will happen to both of you and your relatives .",
        "correct sentence": "If you have n't undergone the genetic testing , it 's just odd and fate for what will happen to both you and your relatives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "give",
                "correct": "gives",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"your wife,\" which is singular. The verb should be \"gives\" for subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 16077,
        "incorrect sentence": "If your wife is not aware of the truth and give birth to the baby , it will be possible for your child to carry the same genetic risk as well .",
        "correct sentence": "If your wife is not aware of the truth and gives birth to the baby , it will be possible for your child to carry the same genetic risk as well ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 31,
                "end": 32,
                "error": "gene",
                "correct": "genes",
                "explanation": "The technology to alter genetic material could be applied not just to a single gene but any and all genes. For that reason, it's correct to use the plural \"genes\" rather than the singular \"gene.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 16274,
        "incorrect sentence": "And if you still decide to have the baby , since the technology has been developed so advanced , it might be possible in the future that the application of altering gene is perfected and widely used , you can then choose to give birth to babies by giving them a brighter future .",
        "correct sentence": "And if you still decide to have the baby , since the technology has been developed so advanced , it might be possible in the future that the application of altering genes is perfected and widely used , you can then choose to give birth to babies by giving them a brighter future ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "at",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "The idiom \"in the first place\" always uses the preposition \"in.\" The phrase \"at the first place\" means a literal place, the first of multiple locations in a series. "
            }
        ],
        "id": 16302,
        "incorrect sentence": "And in my opinion , this seems to be the main purpose of undergoing that genetic testing at the first place .",
        "correct sentence": "And in my opinion , this seems to be the main purpose of undergoing that genetic testing in the first place ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" refers to a specific person, especially one that was mentioned earlier in the text. Because no such genetic risk carrier was mentioned, it should be changed to the indefinite article \"a,\" which refers to one unspecified carrier of a genetic risk."
            }
        ],
        "id": 16429,
        "incorrect sentence": "We found that we actually are the genetic risk carrier .",
        "correct sentence": "We found that we actually are a genetic risk carrier ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "This comparative construction requires that the definite article \"the\" be used multiple times, and it does not use the indefinite article \"a.\" The common example \"The earlier, the better\" means that the speaker wants something to happen soon, preferably as soon as possible. In this sentence, the author argues that if someone is given more time to address their genetic risks, they will use that time to make better and better habits for a healthier life."
            }
        ],
        "id": 16624,
        "incorrect sentence": "The earlier we tell them , a better habit they will arise and better for the rest of their lives .",
        "correct sentence": "The earlier we tell them , the better habit they will arise and better for the rest of their lives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "The adverb phrase \"what's more\" is always followed by a comma at the start of a sentence. This makes the sentence easier to understand."
            }
        ],
        "id": 16657,
        "incorrect sentence": "What 's more they may undergo genetic test as well to see whether they are carrying it or not which is also better for them .",
        "correct sentence": "What 's more , they may undergo genetic test as well to see whether they are carrying it or not which is also better for them ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "When the adverb \"especially\" is used mid-sentence to give an example, it always requires a comma. This makes the sentence easier to understand."
            }
        ],
        "id": 16714,
        "incorrect sentence": "Sometimes it becomes extremely hard for them to accept this news especially if they are going to know that they or their descendants may have a severe disease like blood disease which is untreatable .",
        "correct sentence": "Sometimes it becomes extremely hard for them to accept this news , especially if they are going to know that they or their descendants may have a severe disease like blood disease which is untreatable ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "some",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"some possibility\" means a fairly large possibility, while \"a possibility\" means that the possibility is higher than zero but its exact level is unknown. The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount, so this condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "possibilities",
                "correct": "possibility",
                "explanation": "The plural \"possibilities\" means multiple potential future outcomes, but that is not the meaning here. This sentence is referring to the likelihood of something occurring, in which case the singular \"possibility\" is used. "
            }
        ],
        "id": 16775,
        "incorrect sentence": "Imagine you are living like a normal person but suddenly one day your relative comes tells you that actually there are some possibilities that you may encounter some disease in the future , what kind of feeling are you going to have ?",
        "correct sentence": "Imagine you are living like a normal person but suddenly one day your relative comes tells you that actually there are a possibility that you may encounter some disease in the future , what kind of feeling are you going to have ?"
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 30,
                "end": 31,
                "error": "carry",
                "correct": "carrying",
                "explanation": "The verb \"avoid\" is used with nouns or gerunds, but \"carry\" is an infinitive verb form. It should be changed to the gerund \"carrying,\" which can be the object of a verb."
            }
        ],
        "id": 16974,
        "incorrect sentence": "They will consider whether to give a birth to a new baby because of this genetic problem and they will start finding ways to try to avoid their baby to carry this genetic risk as well .",
        "correct sentence": "They will consider whether to give a birth to a new baby because of this genetic problem and they will start finding ways to try to avoid their baby to carrying this genetic risk as well ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "for",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "The prepositional phrase \"for the consideration of\" is a common expression that refers to informing someone of something so that they can consider it. The preposition is always \"of,\" not \"for.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 17239,
        "incorrect sentence": "So for the consideration for the other family members , the relatives should be informed .",
        "correct sentence": "So for the consideration of the other family members , the relatives should be informed ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "genetic",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The adjective \"genetic\" means of or relating to genes, so \"genetic genes\" is redundant and \"genetic\" should be deleted."
            },
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "gene",
                "correct": "genes",
                "explanation": "The word \"some\" means an unspecified amount or a large amount. It is usually used with plural nouns. Also, it is unlikely that there is only one gene that can only be inherited by a specific gender, so logically it is more likely to be the plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 17331,
        "incorrect sentence": "Some genetic gene will pass only to boys rather than girls , some are on the contrary .",
        "correct sentence": "Some genes will pass only to boys rather than girls , some are on the contrary ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "on",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"in\" is used for information from print media, and \"on\" is used for information from broadcast media. This is a collocation, or it may be because printed media is opened or unfolded before being read, so the information is inside it, while broadcast media transmits information over the air, on radio waves."
            }
        ],
        "id": 17381,
        "incorrect sentence": "I noticed a real story on newspaper years ago .",
        "correct sentence": "I noticed a real story in newspaper years ago ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "have",
                "correct": "had",
                "explanation": "This sentence is about past events, but the present tense \"have\" indicates that the situation is still ongoing. The past tense \"had\" should be used instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 17403,
        "incorrect sentence": "A couple in China have a son of 5 years old .",
        "correct sentence": "A couple in China had a son of 5 years old ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "with",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"with\" can refer to the condition of having or possessing something. It is often used to refer to diagnoses or medical conditions. The verb \"diagnose\" always uses \"with\" when it means to recognize a disease or illness in someone."
            }
        ],
        "id": 17432,
        "incorrect sentence": "Their son unfortunately fell ill and he was diagnosis a kind of genetic disease which is very serious .",
        "correct sentence": "Their son unfortunately fell ill and he was diagnosis with a kind of genetic disease which is very serious ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "have",
                "correct": "had",
                "explanation": "This sentence is about past events, but the present tense \"have\" indicates that the situation is still ongoing. The past tense \"had\" should be used instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 20,
                "end": 21,
                "error": "tragic",
                "correct": "tragedy",
                "explanation": "The word \"tragic\" is an adjective and \"tragedy\" is a noun. An adjective cannot be the subject of a clause, so it needs to be changed to the noun \"tragedy.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "happen",
                "correct": "have happened",
                "explanation": "The first clause uses the past perfect, which refers to events that were complete as of a certain point in the past. Therefore, the second clause cannot use \"would happen,\" which refers to future events. Instead, it needs to use the past unreal conditional \"would have happened,\" which theorizes about past events and how they could have had a different outcome if the conditions in the first clause were true."
            }
        ],
        "id": 17569,
        "incorrect sentence": "If the wife had not hind the truth and asked for doctor 's advice before they have baby , the tragic would not happen .",
        "correct sentence": "If the wife had not hind the truth and asked for doctor 's advice before they had baby , the tragedy would not have happened ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The noun \"testing\" is uncountable, so the indefinite article \"a\" should be deleted. The noun \"test\" is countable, so either \"a genetic test\" or \"genetic testing\" would be acceptable."
            }
        ],
        "id": 17652,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nowadays , with the advancement of technology , it is easy to do a genetic testing .",
        "correct sentence": "Nowadays , with the advancement of technology , it is easy to do genetic testing ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"genetic testing\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific type or instance of genetic testing, instead of the concept in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 17684,
        "incorrect sentence": "We can not deny that the genetic testing really helps people a lot when they face the disorder problem .",
        "correct sentence": "We can not deny that genetic testing really helps people a lot when they face the disorder problem ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"genetic testing\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific type or instance of genetic testing, instead of the concept in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "thought",
                "correct": "think",
                "explanation": "The past tense \"thought\" refers to past events, so it means that the author no longer thinks this. Therefore, it should be changed to the present tense \"think.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 17730,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , I thought that the genetic information is one person 's personal privacy which should be protected by the law .",
        "correct sentence": "However , I think that genetic information is one person 's personal privacy which should be protected by the law ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "thought",
                "correct": "think",
                "explanation": "The past tense \"thought\" refers to past events, so it means that the author no longer thinks this. Therefore, it should be changed to the present tense \"think.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 17756,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , I thought a known genetic risk should not be obligated to tell his or her family or relatives .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , I think a known genetic risk should not be obligated to tell his or her family or relatives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The word \"concerning\" is a preposition, so it does not take a preposition like \"to.\" A preposition cannot be followed with another preposition."
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "personally",
                "correct": "personal",
                "explanation": "The word \"personally\" is an adverb and so can only modify a verb, so it should be changed to \"personal,\" which is an adjective and can modify the pronoun \"something.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 17835,
        "incorrect sentence": "Firstly , the information concerning to the genetic is something personally which is also a privacy like people 's bank card key .",
        "correct sentence": "Firstly , the information concerning the genetic is something personal which is also a privacy like people 's bank card key ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "or",
                "explanation": "The incorrect sentence gives two possible outcomes, but there is no conjunction to specify the relationship between them. It needs the conjunction \"or,\" which indicates that either outcome is a possibility."
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "his",
                "correct": "him",
                "explanation": "In this sentence, the person is the object of the verb. \"His\" is a possessive pronoun, which means something belongs to the person, so the object pronoun \"him\" should be used instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 17943,
        "incorrect sentence": "They may set a bias on this person even abandon his or her .",
        "correct sentence": "They may set a bias on this person or even abandon him or her ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "gene",
                "correct": "genes",
                "explanation": "This sentence is not referring to one single gene, but to the overall genetic makeup of a human being. Therefore, it should be the plural \"genes,\" which refers to multiple or all genes."
            }
        ],
        "id": 17978,
        "incorrect sentence": "People do not have the ability to choose their gene , they should not be thought badly because of bad gene .",
        "correct sentence": "People do not have the ability to choose their genes , they should not be thought badly because of bad gene ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "When the adverb \"even\" is used mid-sentence to give an example of something extreme, it always requires a comma. The phrase \"even his or her family or relatives\" is a participial phrase, and mid-sentence participial phrases require a comma to make the sentence easier to understand."
            }
        ],
        "id": 18040,
        "incorrect sentence": "So I think whatever the genetic is or whether the gene is match with their parents , it should not be told to anyone even his or her family or relatives .",
        "correct sentence": "So I think whatever the genetic is or whether the gene is match with their parents , it should not be told to anyone , even his or her family or relatives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "relation",
                "correct": "relationship",
                "explanation": "The words \"relation\" and \"relationship\" have different meanings. Both refer to how multiple people or parties interact, but \"relation\" mostly refers to countries or large groups of people, while \"relationship\" refers to the connections between specific people or small groups of people. \"Relationships\" is the right word choice in the context of familial relationships."
            }
        ],
        "id": 18105,
        "incorrect sentence": "Secondly , the carrier of a known genetic risk may destroy the peace of a family even broken the relation between children with the adult .",
        "correct sentence": "Secondly , the carrier of a known genetic risk may destroy the peace of a family even broken the relationship between children with the adult ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "The verb \"rely\" always uses the preposition \"on\" or \"upon.\" It is a collocation, and it reflects the relationship of dependence. If A relies on B, then figuratively, A is supported by or resting on B."
            },
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "parent",
                "correct": "parents",
                "explanation": "The subject is \"children,\" which is plural. Because the statement refers to multiple children, it involves multiple parents, so \"parents\" should be plural too."
            }
        ],
        "id": 18254,
        "incorrect sentence": "The children rely the parent to live .",
        "correct sentence": "The children rely on the parents to live ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" refers to a specific family, especially one that was mentioned earlier in the text or that is known to the reader. Because no such family is mentioned, it should be changed to the indefinite article \"a,\" which can mean any family, or one unspecified family out of many potential families."
            }
        ],
        "id": 18328,
        "incorrect sentence": "Everyone does not want to see the scene of the broken family due to the carrier of a known genetic risk .",
        "correct sentence": "Everyone does not want to see the scene of a broken family due to the carrier of a known genetic risk ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"privacy\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific instance or example of privacy, instead of to privacy in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 18525,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , considering the people 's privacy and the existence of wrong testing , for the peace of the family , I support that a know genetic risk should not be obligated to tell his or her family or relatives without the person 's permission .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , considering people 's privacy and the existence of wrong testing , for the peace of the family , I support that a know genetic risk should not be obligated to tell his or her family or relatives without the person 's permission ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "illness",
                "correct": "illnesses",
                "explanation": "The author is expressing the idea that the number of genetically related illnesses is growing, which means that the number must be more than one. Therefore, the plural \"illnesses\" should be used instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"medical technology\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific technologies instead of to technology in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 18575,
        "incorrect sentence": "More and more illness are discovered to be related to some genes with the development of the medical technology .",
        "correct sentence": "More and more illnesses are discovered to be related to some genes with the development of medical technology ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "on",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "Genetic traits are thought of as being carried inside of human genes, so the phrase \"in [one's] genes\" is commonly used. This is a collocation and the preposition does not change."
            }
        ],
        "id": 18609,
        "incorrect sentence": "People will know about whether they carry a disease on their genes after they have done the genetic test .",
        "correct sentence": "People will know about whether they carry a disease in their genes after they have done the genetic test ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "own",
                "correct": "have",
                "explanation": "\"Have\" is used to express possession in a general sense. \"Own\" is more specific, and is usually used in regard to legal or rightful ownership, such as of property, goods, or capital. This concept is not relevant to the relationship between a person and their forefathers, so the more general \"have\" should be used instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 18749,
        "incorrect sentence": "But they are all from one family and own the same forefather , then of course they own the same genes in some part .",
        "correct sentence": "But they are all from one family and have the same forefather , then of course they own the same genes in some part ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "be",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "Both \"shy\" and \"afraid\" can be modified by the same verb, so there is no need to state it twice. This makes the sentence redundant and less impactful, so it's better to remove the second \"be.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 18771,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore there is nothing to be shy for or be afraid of .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore there is nothing to be shy for or afraid of ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "tell",
                "correct": "tells",
                "explanation": "The subject here is the singular \"a person,\" so for the sake of subject-verb agreement, \"tells\" should be used rather than \"tell.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 28,
                "end": 29,
                "error": "get",
                "correct": "have",
                "explanation": "\"Get\" means to acquire something one doesn't already have. Genetic risk is inherited and therefore present from birth, so \"have\" is more accurate."
            }
        ],
        "id": 18827,
        "incorrect sentence": "If the person tell their relatives that he or she carries a disease gene , his or her relatives can go to hospital to check whether they also get a disease gene .",
        "correct sentence": "If the person tells their relatives that he or she carries a disease gene , his or her relatives can go to hospital to check whether they also have a disease gene ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "from",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"from\" can indicate separation or removal, so it's used with the verb \"prevent,\" which means to stop something from happening or to stop someone from doing something. The phrase \"prevent to\" is not used, as \"to\" can imply the opposite idea: \"in order to,\" meaning to achieve a stated purpose."
            },
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "occur",
                "correct": "occurring",
                "explanation": "The verb \"prevent\" is used with nouns or gerunds, but \"occur\" is the bare infinitive verb form. It should be changed to the gerund \"occurring,\" which can be the object of a verb."
            }
        ],
        "id": 18854,
        "incorrect sentence": "Then the relatives can prepare themselves to prevent the disease to occur .",
        "correct sentence": "Then the relatives can prepare themselves to prevent the disease from occurring ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "an",
                "explanation": "Whether to use \"a\" or \"an\" depends on the word that comes next. The article \"a\" is used if it begins with a consonant or a consonant sound. The article \"an\" is used if the word that follows begins with a vowel or a vowel sound. In this sentence, it's followed by \"unhealthy,\" which starts with a vowel sound, it should be \"an.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 26,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" is used when referring to a specific thing. This sentence is referring to the end of a marriage. Any marriage can only end once, so the definite article is necessary."
            }
        ],
        "id": 19025,
        "incorrect sentence": "Or else , if he holds back the genetic risk , they may have a unhealthy baby and may cause the death of the baby or end of their marriage .",
        "correct sentence": "Or else , if he holds back the genetic risk , they may have an unhealthy baby and may cause the death of the baby or the end of their marriage ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "with",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"divorce\" does not take a preposition. The object comes directly after. The adjective \"divorced\" uses a preposition, but \"with\" implies togetherness. This is incongruous because divorce is a separation, so it uses \"from,\" which can imply a separation or removal."
            }
        ],
        "id": 19133,
        "incorrect sentence": "The woman did not know the test result , but she overheard the talk and decided to divorce with her husband .",
        "correct sentence": "The woman did not know the test result , but she overheard the talk and decided to divorce her husband ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "rights",
                "correct": "right",
                "explanation": "This statement is talking about one specific right, \"the right to know,\" so it should be singular. This right belongs to the patient's relatives, which is plural, but each of them has his or her own individual right. The plural \"rights\" is used mostly when talking about human rights generally."
            }
        ],
        "id": 19346,
        "incorrect sentence": "I am most inclined to believe that his or her relatives have the rights to know the result .",
        "correct sentence": "I am most inclined to believe that his or her relatives have the right to know the result ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "at",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "\"Look on the bright side\" is an idiom, and the preposition cannot be changed. It uses the word \"look\" figuratively, referring to a person's outlook on life. \"Look at\" is used when speaking literally, referring to moving one's eyes or body to see someone or something."
            }
        ],
        "id": 19455,
        "incorrect sentence": "Everything is not that bad if you know how to look at the bright side with hope .",
        "correct sentence": "Everything is not that bad if you know how to look on the bright side with hope ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "time",
                "correct": "times",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" is used to refer to specific things. The singular \"the hard time\" would refer only to one single, specific incident of pain but the plural \"the hard times\" is an idiom that means all of the difficulties that a person experiences in life. It always uses the article \"the,\" which conveys that every life will have periods of difficulty."
            }
        ],
        "id": 19604,
        "incorrect sentence": "It is just because that you do not become strong enough to overcome the hard time .",
        "correct sentence": "It is just because that you do not become strong enough to overcome the hard times ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" refers to one specific thing and the indefinite article \"a\" to an unspecified thing, or one option out of many. \"As the result\" means that this is the only possible outcome of a given situation. If there are multiple possible outcomes, it should be \"as a result,\" which implies that the outcome is one of several."
            }
        ],
        "id": 19699,
        "incorrect sentence": "As the result , it is in the interests of the carriers and their relatives , telling the genetic testing result is needed .",
        "correct sentence": "As a result , it is in the interests of the carriers and their relatives , telling the genetic testing result is needed ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"society\" is a general concept and can be widely assumed to be understood by the reader. For that reason, it's unusual to use the definite article \"the\" with \"society\" when referring to modern society as a whole."
            }
        ],
        "id": 19763,
        "incorrect sentence": "That plays an important role in the possibility that relatives can overcome the discrimination of the society and anxiety about the risks .",
        "correct sentence": "That plays an important role in the possibility that relatives can overcome the discrimination of society and anxiety about the risks ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "\"In a nutshell\" is an idiom, and the article does not change. The phrase \"in the nutshell\" is not used, but the specificity of \"the\" makes it sound literal. Instead of referring figuratively to something very simple, it would mean something that is literally inside a nutshell."
            }
        ],
        "id": 19802,
        "incorrect sentence": "To put it in the nutshell , I believe that people should have the obligation to tell their relatives about the genetic testing result for the good of their health .",
        "correct sentence": "To put it in a nutshell , I believe that people should have the obligation to tell their relatives about the genetic testing result for the good of their health ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "years",
                "correct": "year",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"one year\" is singular. \"One\" cannot be used with the plural \"years,\" so it should be the singular \"year.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 19983,
        "incorrect sentence": "I started invoving into Facebook one years ago,when I just arrived singapore .",
        "correct sentence": "I started invoving into Facebook one year ago,when I just arrived singapore ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 20056,
        "incorrect sentence": "We know each others ' status , changements and so on through the social media .",
        "correct sentence": "We know each others ' status , changements and so on through social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "an",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "\"For example\" is a collocation that does not use an article. The similar phrase \"As an example\" does use the indefinite article \"an,\" but \"for example\" does not."
            },
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "Generally, \"each of\" is used before a pronoun or a noun with a determiner like the, my, some, or this. \"Each\" is used when no determiner is present, and since \"individual\" does not use a determiner, it should be \"each\" rather than \"each of.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 20096,
        "incorrect sentence": "For an example , if we change our contact numbers , we will not send SMS to each of individual any longer .",
        "correct sentence": "For example , if we change our contact numbers , we will not send SMS to each individual any longer ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "convinient",
                "correct": "convenient",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"convenient.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 20181,
        "incorrect sentence": "It is becoming even more convinient than talking throught the phone since it is free .",
        "correct sentence": "It is becoming even more convenient than talking throught the phone since it is free ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "space.Our",
                "correct": "space . Our",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary between words."
            },
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "every thing",
                "correct": "everything",
                "explanation": "\"Everything\" is a singular word, meaning all things. The correct spelling does not have a space."
            }
        ],
        "id": 20222,
        "incorrect sentence": "We discuss every thing we like and we have more personal space.Our friends also got more access to know what we are doing and what we like .",
        "correct sentence": "We discuss everything we like and we have more personal space.Our space . Our also got more access to know what we are doing and what we like ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "Socia",
                "correct": "Social",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"Social.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 20288,
        "incorrect sentence": "Socia media allows them to explain to or inform people what is going on .",
        "correct sentence": "Social media allows them to explain to or inform people what is going on ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "convinient",
                "correct": "convenient",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"convenient.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 20384,
        "incorrect sentence": "With more convinient and humanian communications , the relationship between government and people get largely improved .",
        "correct sentence": "With more convenient and humanian communications , the relationship between government and people get largely improved ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "medias",
                "correct": "media",
                "explanation": "\"Media\" is a collective noun, so it can be used as singular or plural. It does not use a pluralizing \"s.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The word \"various\" is an adjective, so it can modify a noun. Therefore it doesn't need a preposition to modify the noun \"cultures.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 20407,
        "incorrect sentence": "What 's more , various of cultures can be shown to us through social medias .",
        "correct sentence": "What 's more , various cultures can be shown to us through social medias media"
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "socia",
                "correct": "social",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"social.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "medias",
                "correct": "media",
                "explanation": "\"Media\" is a collective noun, so it can be used as singular or plural. It does not use a pluralizing \"s.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 20441,
        "incorrect sentence": "We can know more news and cultures through socia medias .",
        "correct sentence": "We can know more news and cultures through social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "convinient",
                "correct": "convenient",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"convenient.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "talk",
                "correct": "talking",
                "explanation": "Assuming the intended meaning is that people have fewer opportunities to talk, then I would correct the sentence differently. The phrase \"we give less chance to\" is not used and sounds unnatural. It is more natural to say \"we don't give much of a chance.\" Since this sentence is referring to conversation, it should be changed to \"we don't give each other much of a chance\" because \"each other\" reflects that a conversation requires action by two people. Finally, \"chance to\" is used with the infinitive and not the gerund, so the verb \"talk\" should remain as it is."
            }
        ],
        "id": 20519,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , we get less chance and less importance to talk face to face since social media is so convinient , advanced and interesting .",
        "correct sentence": "However , we get less chance and less importance to talking face to face since social media is so convenient , advanced and interesting ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "about",
                "explanation": "The verb \"talk\" on its own just means to speak or have a conversation. To convey a specific topic of discussion, it needs the preposition \"about,\" which is used to indicate the subject of a spoken or written statement."
            },
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "(I am interpreting \"even we gather together\" to mean \"even when we gather together.\") \nUnless it is very short, an adverb phrase at the beginning of a sentence is usually followed by a comma. This makes the sentence easier to understand. It can also make an argument more impactful. The word \"even\" indicates that something is surprising or unlikely, so the adverb phrase \"even when we gather together\" implies that it is unusual for people to gather together. The comma creates a pause, so the reader stops and anticipates what will happen when people get together."
            }
        ],
        "id": 20595,
        "incorrect sentence": "And even we gather together more people find themselves has less topics to talk than before and choose to digging from their social media again .",
        "correct sentence": "And even we gather together , more people find themselves has less topics to about talk than before and choose to digging from their social media again ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 29,
                "end": 30,
                "error": "are",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "Both \"are\" and \"seem\" are verbs, and two verbs cannot be used in a row. Only \"seem\" is necessary for the meaning of the sentence, so \"are\" should be removed."
            }
        ],
        "id": 20640,
        "incorrect sentence": "When we are far away , social media makes it as we are infront of each other ; sometimes when we are by each others ' side , we are seem to be further than far away .",
        "correct sentence": "When we are far away , social media makes it as we are infront of each other ; sometimes when we are by each others ' side , we seem to be further than far away ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "shwing",
                "correct": "showing",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"showing.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "experience",
                "correct": "experiences",
                "explanation": "The noun \"experience\" can be either countable or uncountable, depending on its meaning. It is countable when it refers to events in a person's life and It is uncountable when it refers to work experience or skills or knowledge gained by doing something. intangible things. In the context of sharing photos on social media, it means life events, so it is countable. It should be made plural because the photos show multiple events in the lives of different people."
            }
        ],
        "id": 20685,
        "incorrect sentence": "Besides , there are more people shwing their pictures of yummy food or travelling experience .",
        "correct sentence": "Besides , there are more people showing their pictures of yummy food or travelling experiences ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "beatiful",
                "correct": "beautiful",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"beautiful.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "firneds",
                "correct": "friends",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"friends.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 20769,
        "incorrect sentence": "For myself , I am long to some places after I saw those beatiful pictures taken by my firneds .",
        "correct sentence": "For myself , I am long to some places after I saw those beautiful pictures taken by my friends ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "canoot",
                "correct": "can not",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"cannot.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 20787,
        "incorrect sentence": "Sometimes I even canoot sleep well because of excitement .",
        "correct sentence": "Sometimes I even can not sleep well because of excitement ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "requires",
                "correct": "require",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"interpersonal skills\" is plural, and so for purposes of subject-verb agreement, the verb should be \"require.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "An nonrestrictive clause adds additional information to a sentence and can be removed without destroying the meaning of the sentence. It requires commas on either side to create an easily understandable sentence structure. The phrase \"like any other skills\" describes the noun \"interpersonal skills,\" but can be removed without loss of meaning. Therefore, it is a non-restrictive phrase, so it requires a comma at the end as well."
            }
        ],
        "id": 20853,
        "incorrect sentence": "Interpersonal skills , like any other skills requires practice .",
        "correct sentence": "Interpersonal skills , like any other skills require requires practice ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "requires",
                "correct": "require",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"skills\" is plural, and so for purposes of subject-verb agreement, the verb should be \"require.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 20876,
        "incorrect sentence": "Besides that , these skills requires time to develop and adapted .",
        "correct sentence": "Besides that , these skills require time to develop and adapted ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "an",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "\"For example\" is an idiom that does not use an article. The similar phrase \"As an example\" does use the indefinite article \"an,\" but \"for example\" does not."
            }
        ],
        "id": 21013,
        "incorrect sentence": "For an example , one is able to send notifications and other information we use to have them in hardcopy previously , over the web and the process takes seconds .",
        "correct sentence": "For example , one is able to send notifications and other information we use to have them in hardcopy previously , over the web and the process takes seconds ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"the many\" is a collocation meaning the public or a very large group of people, so the definite article \"the\" should be removed. However, this correction does not fix the issue because it is not clear what \"many\" refers to in \"one of many.\" From the examples after \"such as,\" it probably refers to means of communication, so it should be changed to \"one of many means, such as...\""
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "are",
                "correct": "was",
                "explanation": "This sentence is talking about past events, but the present tense \"are\" refers to things that are happening currently. The past tense \"was\" should be used instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 21114,
        "incorrect sentence": "In the past , vast communication are done by one of the many such a telegram , snail mail and poor-quality voice calls .",
        "correct sentence": "In the past , vast communication was done by one of many such a telegram , snail mail and poor-quality voice calls ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "application",
                "correct": "applications",
                "explanation": "The author lists two examples of applications, so the statement applies to multiple applications and therefore should be plural."
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": ",",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "\"Most of\" is a phrase meaning the majority of something. This comma appears in between the two words of the phrase, making it difficult to understand. The comma should be removed in order to ensure that the expression is understood."
            }
        ],
        "id": 21161,
        "incorrect sentence": "With the welcoming of application such as Skype and Facetime , any individual can phase off most , of the olden days communication methods .",
        "correct sentence": "With the welcoming of applications such as Skype and Facetime , any individual can phase off most of the olden days communication methods ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "I disagree with this correction. The phrase \"good practice\" is a noun phrase that requires a plural or an article. The plural \"good practices\" refers to multiple practices, but refraining from social media use is one practice. The definite article \"the\" refers to one specific practice, implying that there exists only one good practice. The indefinite article \"a\" means one good practice out of multiple potential options. This is what the intended meaning is here, so \"a\" should not be deleted."
            }
        ],
        "id": 21228,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , it is a good practice not to intesively use social media all the time .",
        "correct sentence": "However , it is good practice not to intesively use social media all the time ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"touch\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific type or instance of touch instead of to touch in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 21264,
        "incorrect sentence": "Intimate interaction greatly lack in social media interactions , particularly the touch .",
        "correct sentence": "Intimate interaction greatly lack in social media interactions , particularly touch ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "necessarily",
                "correct": "necessary",
                "explanation": "\"Necessarily\" is an adverb, so it is used to modify verbs, while \"necessary\" is an adjective, so it is used to modify nouns. Here, the word it is modifying is \"parts,\" which is a noun, so the adjective \"necessary\" should be used."
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of relationships is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes an article only when referring to specific types or instances of relationships instead of to touch in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 21353,
        "incorrect sentence": "As a result , one does not train the necessarily parts of the skills required for a proper interpersonal relations .",
        "correct sentence": "As a result , one does not train the necessary parts of the skills required for proper interpersonal relations ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "entire",
                "correct": "entirely",
                "explanation": "\"Entire\" is an adjective, so it is used to modify nouns, while \"entirely\" is an adverb, so it is used to modify verbs or adjectives. Here, the word it is modifying is \"incorrect,\" which is an adjective, so the adverb \"entirely\" should be used."
            },
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "skill",
                "correct": "skills",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"interpersonal skills\" refers to the skills needed to get along with people well. Interpersonal skills are considered to require a variety of different abilities, such as kindness, listening, the ability to read social cues, etc. Therefore, \"skills\" is always plural in the phrase \"interpersonal skills.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 21381,
        "incorrect sentence": "It is also entire incorrect to fault social media alone for the lack of interpersonal skill .",
        "correct sentence": "It is also entirely incorrect to fault social media alone for the lack of interpersonal skills ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 25,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "has",
                "correct": "have",
                "explanation": "The pronoun \"some\" is used to indicate groups of more than one person, so it is plural. For subject-verb agreement, the verb should be changed to \"have.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 29,
                "end": 30,
                "error": "does",
                "correct": "do",
                "explanation": "The pronoun \"some\" is used to indicate groups of more than one person, so it is plural. For subject-verb agreement, the verb should be changed to \"do.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 21415,
        "incorrect sentence": "Howard Garner studied the effect of multiple intelligences amongst people and stated that interpersonal intelligence is a form of skills on its own - some has it , some does not .",
        "correct sentence": "Howard Garner studied the effect of multiple intelligences amongst people and stated that interpersonal intelligence is a form of skills on its own - some have it , some do not ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "\"Use\" is a noun here, and it is followed directly by another noun, \"social media.\" One noun needs a preposition in order to modify another, and the preposition \"of\" is used because it can indicate that \"social media\" is the subject of the action \"use.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 21505,
        "incorrect sentence": "For people who are living very far from one another , the intensive use social media is justified .",
        "correct sentence": "For people who are living very far from one another , the intensive use of social media is justified ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "lives",
                "correct": "live",
                "explanation": "The pronoun \"those\" is plural, and so the verb should be changed to \"live\" for subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 21549,
        "incorrect sentence": "For those who lives within the community should at least meet up , and not use social media as the primary source of communcation with each other .",
        "correct sentence": "For those who live within the community should at least meet up , and not use social media as the primary source of communcation with each other ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "skill",
                "correct": "skills",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"interpersonal skills\" refers to the skills needed to get along with people well. Interpersonal skills are considered to require a variety of different abilities, such as kindness, listening, the ability to read social cues, etc. Therefore, \"skills\" is always plural in the phrase \"interpersonal skills.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "betwwen",
                "correct": "between",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"between.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 21622,
        "incorrect sentence": "And at the same time , improves the interpersonal skill , through dynamic practises betwwen individuals and realtime presence .",
        "correct sentence": "And at the same time , improves the interpersonal skills , through dynamic practises between individuals and realtime presence ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "connection",
                "correct": "connections",
                "explanation": "The noun \"connection\" can be either countable or uncountable, depending on its meaning. It is countable when it refers to the act of physically connecting things or the state of physical connection or connection to the Internet, but otherwise, it is countable. In this case, it refers to human relationships, so it is countable. The singular \"connection\" refers only to one relationship, but this sentence is a general statement. Social media has helped many people to form closer connections, so it should be plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 21690,
        "incorrect sentence": "Recently , the rise of social media helped people to have more closer connection with each other , it is a more convenient and cheaper way to have online contact compared with face to face meetings .",
        "correct sentence": "Recently , the rise of social media helped people to have more closer connections with each other , it is a more convenient and cheaper way to have online contact compared with face to face meetings ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "websides",
                "correct": "websites",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"websites.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 21728,
        "incorrect sentence": "In my opinion , social media websides such as Twitter and Facebook will not affect the chance for people to have face to face contact and thus negatively affects interpersonal skills .",
        "correct sentence": "In my opinion , social media websites such as Twitter and Facebook will not affect the chance for people to have face to face contact and thus negatively affects interpersonal skills ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "contacts",
                "correct": "contact",
                "explanation": "The noun \"contact\" can be either countable or uncountable, depending on its meaning. When it means the state in which people communicate with each other, it is uncountable. That is the meaning here, and uncountable nouns cannot be made plural, so it should be \"contact\" instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 21755,
        "incorrect sentence": "On the other hand , it may even increase the chance of having face to face contacts amoung people .",
        "correct sentence": "On the other hand , it may even increase the chance of having face to face contact amoung people ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "lot",
                "correct": "large",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"a lot\" means many, and \"large\" means great in size or amount. The word being modified is \"user base,\" which refers to the overall number of users as a group. Because the phrase \"user base\" already refers to all of a network's users, a network cannot have more than one user base, so \"a lot\" cannot be used. The correct word is \"large,\" which refers to the size of the user base."
            }
        ],
        "id": 21789,
        "incorrect sentence": "First , social media networks have a lot user base , it helps to link people from different parts of the world .",
        "correct sentence": "First , social media networks have a large user base , it helps to link people from different parts of the world ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social networks\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social networks instead of to these sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 21846,
        "incorrect sentence": "In the days without the social networks , people may not have the chance to know others from different countries or the ones they never meet before .",
        "correct sentence": "In the days without social networks , people may not have the chance to know others from different countries or the ones they never meet before ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "Their",
                "correct": "The",
                "explanation": "\"They\" is already used in the phrase \"people that they know,\" so it is redundant to say \"their.\" Also, the construction \"their number of X\" is not commonly used. It is more common to say \"the number of X that...\""
            },
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"like classmates...\" is an appositive phrase, which explains or identifies the noun before it, \"people.\" The word \"like\" does not usually need a comma when used as a preposition, but it is necessary here because appositive phrases must be separated from the noun by a comma."
            }
        ],
        "id": 21898,
        "incorrect sentence": "Their number of people that they know may only limited to the people they meet in daily life like classmates and working partners .",
        "correct sentence": "The number of people that they know may only limited to the people they meet in daily life , like classmates and working partners ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"business people\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific groups of business people instead of to business people in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22133,
        "incorrect sentence": "For example , if social network does not exist , the business people need to meet each other face to face and it is other time consuming , even sometimes with business that is not so important , it still takes a lot time on travel which is a wastage .",
        "correct sentence": "For example , if social network does not exist , business people need to meet each other face to face and it is other time consuming , even sometimes with business that is not so important , it still takes a lot time on travel which is a wastage ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "easier",
                "correct": "easily",
                "explanation": "The word \"easier\" is an adjective, so it is used to modify nouns, whereas the word \"easily\" is an adverb, so it is used to modify verbs. Here, the phrase that it is modifying is \"to meet and chat,\" which is a verb phrase, so the adverb \"easily\" should be used."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22177,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , social network helps people to meet and chat much more easier , they can even use video chat and create group chat to chat with multiple parties at the same time .",
        "correct sentence": "However , social network helps people to meet and chat much more easily , they can even use video chat and create group chat to chat with multiple parties at the same time ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "interview",
                "correct": "interviews",
                "explanation": "This sentence is a general statement that refers to many companies. In such cases, it is common to use the plural. Also, it is logical to assume that a company that is seeking job applicants will conduct more than one interview, so even for a single company, it usually makes sense to use the plural \"interviews\" unless referring to a specific interview."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22209,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nowadays , even some companies conduct online video interview with their applicants as it saves time and cost .",
        "correct sentence": "Nowadays , even some companies conduct online video interviews with their applicants as it saves time and cost ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"people\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific groups of people instead of to people in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22253,
        "incorrect sentence": "The social network may also creat some negative impacts for the people .",
        "correct sentence": "The social network may also creat some negative impacts for people ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 20,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "When used as a noun, \"Internet\" almost always takes the definite article \"the.\" This may be an idiomatic use, or it may be because everyone who uses the Internet is connected to the same network, no matter where they are."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22282,
        "incorrect sentence": "The largest negative impact is that due to the online network , some people start to use and rely on internet every minute .",
        "correct sentence": "The largest negative impact is that due to the online network , some people start to use and rely on the internet every minute ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb phrase \"take time\" requires a gerund and does not take the preposition \"of.\" Also, the phrase \"time of using\" means the time at which use occurs, not the amount of time a person spends using social media. Therefore, \"of\" should be removed."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22325,
        "incorrect sentence": "They take too much time of using online social network and thus do not have time to have their daily meeting with people in their real life .",
        "correct sentence": "They take too much time using online social network and thus do not have time to have their daily meeting with people in their real life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "affect",
                "correct": "affects",
                "explanation": "The subject \"it\" is singular and therefore, for subject-verb agreement, the verb should be \"affects.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"interpersonal skills\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific skills involved in interpersonal relationships, instead of to the concept in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "too",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"too much\" uses the word \"too,\" meaning to a high degree. The preposition \"to\" is a different word."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22393,
        "incorrect sentence": "It not only affect the interpersonal skills but also bad for people 's health if the ones spend to much time on the social media .",
        "correct sentence": "It not only affects the interpersonal skills but also bad for people 's health if the ones spend too much time on social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "network",
                "correct": "networks",
                "explanation": "When referencing social networks as a general concept, the plural \"networks\" should be used because there are multiple different networks that are in wide use. The singular \"network\" is used when referring to one network."
            },
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "informations",
                "correct": "information",
                "explanation": "\"Information\" is an uncountable noun, so it cannot be pluralized."
            },
            {
                "start": 40,
                "end": 40,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "",
                "explanation": "The plural \"others\" means people other than the person or group concerned. The plural possessive \"others'\" (with an apostrophe after the s) means belonging to people other than the person or group concerned. It needs to be made possessive to indicate that the personal information belongs to others."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22453,
        "incorrect sentence": "Secondly , social network may leak certain personal informations to the public , as the cyber environment is not perfect and not safe , people may not protect their privacy online effectively and sometimes , some people may use others personal information to deceive .",
        "correct sentence": "Secondly , social networks may leak certain personal information to the public , as the cyber environment is not perfect and not safe , people may not protect their privacy online effectively and sometimes , some people may use others  personal information to deceive ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "spend",
                "correct": "spending",
                "explanation": "A bare infinitive verb like \"spend\" cannot be the subject of a sentence. It should be changed to the gerund \"spending,\" which can be the object of a verb."
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "When used as a noun, \"Internet\" almost always takes the definite article \"the.\" This may be an idiomatic use, or it may be because everyone who uses the Internet is connected to the same network, no matter where they are."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22509,
        "incorrect sentence": "In conclusion , although the unsafe online environment , spend too much time on internet may be the potential negative factors of using online social networks .",
        "correct sentence": "In conclusion , although the unsafe online environment , spending too much time on the internet may be the potential negative factors of using online social networks ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount, or to express one out of multiple options. The phrase \"convenient contact environment\" means one potential environment out of many, with varying degrees of convenience. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 22552,
        "incorrect sentence": "It provides people with more convenient contact environment and improve the frequency of meeting with each others .",
        "correct sentence": "It provides people with a more convenient contact environment and improve the frequency of meeting with each others ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "chating",
                "correct": "chatting",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"chatting\" because the final consonant is doubled when the verb ends with a vowel followed by a consonant."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22565,
        "incorrect sentence": "It also helps people to develop their interpersonal skills through online chating .",
        "correct sentence": "It also helps people to develop their interpersonal skills through online chatting ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"costs\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific costs instead of costs in general. The common phrase \"The costs outweigh the benefits\" uses the definite article, but it is referring to specific costs because it's a shorter way of saying \"The costs (of doing X) outweigh the benefits (of the same).\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 22580,
        "incorrect sentence": "Overall , there are more benefits than the costs .",
        "correct sentence": "Overall , there are more benefits than costs ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "wolrd",
                "correct": "world",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"world.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "website",
                "correct": "websites",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"social network websites\" is modified by \"all kinds of,\" which means various different types of websites. Since it means multiple websites, \"websites\" should be plural. Also it is followed by two examples: Facebook and Twitter. If a sentence gives multiple examples of a noun phrase, the noun phrase should be plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22644,
        "incorrect sentence": "The wolrd is incresingly becoming flat by all kinds of social network website such as facebook and twitter .",
        "correct sentence": "The world is incresingly becoming flat by all kinds of social network websites such as facebook and twitter ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "media",
                "explanation": "\"Social\" is an adjective, and an adjective alone can't be the subject of a sentence. The word \"media\" has been omitted and should be added."
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "let",
                "correct": "letting",
                "explanation": "I partially agree with this correction. The word \"let\" appears after the preposition \"by,\" so the gerund \"letting\" should be used instead of the verb. However, I don't think this is the right word choice. The verb \"let\" tends to refer to granting permission, but \"allow\" has the nuance of making it possible for someone to do something. Therefore, it's best to change this to \"allowing.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 22718,
        "incorrect sentence": "From some points of view , social really has a lot of advantages by let us communicate with friends cheaper and more conveniently .",
        "correct sentence": "From some points of view , social media really has a lot of advantages by letting us communicate with friends cheaper and more conveniently ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "ingnored",
                "correct": "ignored",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"convenient.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "cosider",
                "correct": "consider",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"consider.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 22751,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , its disadvantages also can not be ingnored when you cosider it as a platform to show off and a stage for cyber crime .",
        "correct sentence": "However , its disadvantages also can not be ignored when you consider it as a platform to show off and a stage for cyber crime ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "with",
                "explanation": "The verb \"provides\" is a ditransitive verb, which means that it can take two objects: an indirect object and a direct object. The direct object is the thing that is provided, and the indirect object is the party that receives the direct object. In this case, the object \"convenience\" is provided to the direct object \"us.\" When \"provides\" takes two objects, the preposition \"with\" marks the direct object. The preposition is necessary to separate the direct and indirect object and to prevent confusion, so it should be added here."
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "convenience",
                "correct": "conveniences",
                "explanation": "The adjective \"many\" means a large number of something, so the noun it modifies must be plural."
            },
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "provides",
                "correct": "provide",
                "explanation": "The subject is \"social network(ing) sites,\" which is plural. For the sake of subject-verb agreement, the verb that follows should be \"provide.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 22781,
        "incorrect sentence": "Social network sites provides us many convenience .",
        "correct sentence": "Social network sites provide us with many conveniences ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "When used to refer to the means of communication, the phone almost always takes the definite article \"the.\" This may be an idiomatic use, or it may be because everyone who uses the phone is connected to the same network, no matter where they are. An exception is the phrase \"by phone,\" which does not use an adjective."
            },
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "scaning",
                "correct": "scanning",
                "explanation": "\"Scan\" is a bare infinitive verb so it cannot be the object of a clause. Therefore, it should be changed to the gerund \"scanning.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 22835,
        "incorrect sentence": "Without hanging out with friends or talking with friends through phone , we can know his of her latest news by scaning the webpage .",
        "correct sentence": "Without hanging out with friends or talking with friends through the phone , we can know his of her latest news by scanning the webpage ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "singer",
                "correct": "singers",
                "explanation": "I'm not sure if I agree with the correction because the meaning of the sentence is unclear. If it means that you have a friend who has multiple favorite singers, one of whom is Justin Bieber, then I agree. In that case, \"one of\" is modifying \"favorite singers,\" and \"one of\" is always followed by a plural noun because it means \"one of several.\" However, if it means that you have multiple friends, one of whom considers Justin Bieber their favorite singer, then I disagree. In that case, \"one of\" is modifying \"friends,\" and the possessive should be corrected to \"one of your friends' favorite singer,\" or to \"the favorite singer of one of your friends,\" which is more common in formal written English."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22895,
        "incorrect sentence": "For example , if you find out one of your friend 's favourite singer is Justin Biber through facebook , you can give him or her Justin Biber 's new album or concert ticket as a birthday gift .",
        "correct sentence": "For example , if you find out one of your friend 's favourite singers is Justin Biber through facebook , you can give him or her Justin Biber 's new album or concert ticket as a birthday gift ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "surelly",
                "correct": "surely",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"surely.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 22912,
        "incorrect sentence": "It will be really sweet and you two will surelly become closer .",
        "correct sentence": "It will be really sweet and you two will surely become closer ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "site",
                "correct": "sites",
                "explanation": "This is a general statement that applies to most or all social networking sites, so it should be plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22930,
        "incorrect sentence": "In addition , social network site can help you keep in touch with friends living very far away .",
        "correct sentence": "In addition , social network sites can help you keep in touch with friends living very far away ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "canadian",
                "correct": "Canadian",
                "explanation": "Nationalities are always capitalized. Canadian is a nationality, so it should be capitalized."
            }
        ],
        "id": 22942,
        "incorrect sentence": "I met some canadian friends in Egypt .",
        "correct sentence": "I met some Canadian friends in Egypt ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "thought",
                "correct": "thoughts",
                "explanation": "The singular noun \"thought\" refers to a single idea or opinion. For example, \"I think I'd like eggs for breakfast\" or \"She thinks it would be fun to try beekeeping\" are two thoughts. But this sentence is referring to a person's worldview, overall thinking, set of values, or general outlook. In this context, \"thoughts\" should be pluralized."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23055,
        "incorrect sentence": "A research shows that people will unconsciously hide his or her real thought when he or her say or post something that will be exposed to the public .",
        "correct sentence": "A research shows that people will unconsciously hide his or her real thoughts when he or her say or post something that will be exposed to the public ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "thought",
                "correct": "thoughts",
                "explanation": "The singular noun \"thought\" refers to a single idea or opinion. For example, \"I think I'd like eggs for breakfast\" or \"She thinks it would be fun to try beekeeping\" are two thoughts. But this sentence is referring to a person's worldview, overall thinking, set of values, or general outlook. In this context, \"thoughts\" should be pluralized."
            },
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "personalities",
                "correct": "personality",
                "explanation": "The singular noun \"personality\" means a collection of traits, behaviors, or emotional qualities that make up an individual's character. The plural noun \"personalities\" refers to the personalities of multiple people."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23096,
        "incorrect sentence": "It means that one can not know another 's real thought and personalities by reading things that he or she put on social network media .",
        "correct sentence": "It means that one can not know another 's real thoughts and personality by reading things that he or she put on social network media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 25,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "but",
                "correct": "and",
                "explanation": "The conjunction \"and\" is used to introduce new information that adds on to or agrees with a previous idea, while \"but\" is used to introduce new information that contradicts existing information or subverts expectations. With \"and,\" the sentence means that one might neglect people in order to use Facebook instead, or that one is neglecting people while also using Facebook. The use of \"but\" implies that ignoring people and using Facebook are somehow contradictory."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23140,
        "incorrect sentence": "In addition , with all those \" nice \" guys around on the social network website , one may neglect people surrounding him or her but just communicate with friends on facebook .",
        "correct sentence": "In addition , with all those \" nice \" guys around on the social network website , one may neglect people surrounding him or her and just communicate with friends on facebook ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "for",
                "explanation": "The expression \"is good to (someone)\" means being kind or considerate to someone. It almost always refers to intentional actions from one person to another, as the preposition \"to\" indicates the direction in which actions flow. The correct expression here is \"good for,\" which indicates that a thing or action is beneficial for someone or conducive to something. \"Not good for\" conveys that this behavior is not conducive to psychological health."
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "\"Research\" is an uncountable noun, so it does not take the indefinite article \"a.\" To refer to one specific study, it is common to say \"according to a research study\" or \"according to research by [author/institution],\" but for research-based knowledge in general, the phrase is \"according to research.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 23189,
        "incorrect sentence": "This kind of behaviour is not good to people 's psychological health according to a research .",
        "correct sentence": "This kind of behaviour is not good for people 's psychological health according to research ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "depends",
                "correct": "depend",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"people,\" which is plural, and so for the sake of subject-verb agreement, the verb should be \"depend.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 25,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"real-life communication\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific instances of real-life communication instead of general communication in real life."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23236,
        "incorrect sentence": "The cyber communication is quite different to face to face communication and people who depends on cyber communication too much will not get used to the real life communication .",
        "correct sentence": "The cyber communication is quite different to face to face communication and people who depend on cyber communication too much will not get used to real life communication ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "relationship",
                "correct": "relationships",
                "explanation": "When referencing cyber relationships as a general concept, the plural \"relationships\" should be used because it references multiple relationships between many different people. The singular \"relationship\" is used to refer to individual relationships, with \"a cyber relationship\" meaning any such relationship and \"the cyber relationship\" meaning one such relationship specifically."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23250,
        "incorrect sentence": "In addition , cyber relationship can not always work in real life .",
        "correct sentence": "In addition , cyber relationships can not always work in real life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "possibly",
                "correct": "likely",
                "explanation": "The verb phrase \"be likely to\" is a commonly used. It is not common to say \"be possibly to,\" though \"be possible to\" is used."
            },
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "relationship",
                "correct": "relationships",
                "explanation": "When referencing relationships as a general concept, the plural \"relationships\" should be used because it references multiple relationships between many different people. The singular \"relationship\" is used to refer to individual relationships, with \"a relationship\" meaning any relationship and \"the relationship\" meaning one relationship specifically."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23288,
        "incorrect sentence": "With no close relationship in real life but only close cyber friends , one is more possibly to feel lonely because the physiological need of human beings is to feel the bond with others by our five senses .",
        "correct sentence": "With no close relationships in real life but only close cyber friends , one is more likely to feel lonely because the physiological need of human beings is to feel the bond with others by our five senses ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "site",
                "correct": "sites",
                "explanation": "When referencing social networking sites as a general concept, the plural \"sites\" should be used because it refers to the many different sites in use. The singular \"site\" is used to refer to individual sites, with \"a site\" meaning any site and \"the site\" meaning one site specifically."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23334,
        "incorrect sentence": "With the willing of people to become the best among others , social network site now become a place to show off .",
        "correct sentence": "With the willing of people to become the best among others , social network sites now become a place to show off ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The modal verb \"will\" is always followed by the bare infinitive, never the infinitive. \"To post\" is the infinitive, so it should be changed to the bare infinitive \"post.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 23383,
        "incorrect sentence": "Some people will to post their expensive thing or the oversea places of interest they have been on the social network and get a feeling of satisfaction by doing so .",
        "correct sentence": "Some people will post their expensive thing or the oversea places of interest they have been on the social network and get a feeling of satisfaction by doing so ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "I disagree with this correction. I agree that \"It is a mental unhealth\" is incorrect, but removing the article doesn't fix the problem, which is that the phrase \"mental unhealth\" is not used. The opposite of the common phrase \"mental health\" is \"mentally unhealthy\" or \"not good for one's mental health\" when referring to a behavior, or \"mental illness\" or \"mentally ill\" when referring to a health condition."
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "A nonrestrictive clause adds additional information to a sentence and can be removed without destroying the meaning of the sentence. It requires commas on either side to create an easily understandable sentence structure. The phrase \"especially teenagers\" describes the noun \"people,\" but can be removed without loss of meaning. Therefore, it is a non-restrictive phrase, so it requires commas on both sides."
            },
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "A nonrestrictive clause adds additional information to a sentence and can be removed without destroying the meaning of the sentence. It requires commas on either side to create an easily understandable sentence structure. The phrase \"especially teenagers\" describes the noun \"people,\" but can be removed without loss of meaning. Therefore, it is a non-restrictive phrase, so it requires commas on both sides."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23438,
        "incorrect sentence": "It is a mental unhealth and it may trigger people especially teenagers to become material .",
        "correct sentence": "It is mental unhealth and it may trigger people , especially teenagers , to become material ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 25,
                "error": "criminal",
                "correct": "criminals",
                "explanation": "When referencing criminals as a general concept, the plural \"criminals\" should be used because it refers to multiple people. The singular \"criminal\" is used to refer to individuals, with \"a criminal\" meaning any criminal and \"the criminal\" meaning one criminal specifically."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23478,
        "incorrect sentence": "The last but not the least , with all kinds of personal information on one 's social network page , it is covenient for criminal to make use of this information to commit a crime .",
        "correct sentence": "The last but not the least , with all kinds of personal information on one 's social network page , it is covenient for criminals to make use of this information to commit a crime ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 30,
                "end": 31,
                "error": "put",
                "correct": "putting",
                "explanation": "When the verb appears after the phrase \"such as,\" it is common to use the gerund form of a verb, which functions as a noun."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23558,
        "incorrect sentence": "Above all , social network site is like a two sided knife and people can only take good advantage of it by avoiding the possible disadvantages of it such as put less personal information on his or her facebook page .",
        "correct sentence": "Above all , social network site is like a two sided knife and people can only take good advantage of it by avoiding the possible disadvantages of it such as putting less personal information on his or her facebook page ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"contemporary society\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific contemporary societies instead of the concept in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23622,
        "incorrect sentence": "Today , social media sites , such as Facebook and Twitter , are relatively common within the contemporary society ; and , people can communicate with each other , online or offline , on these social networking platforms .",
        "correct sentence": "Today , social media sites , such as Facebook and Twitter , are relatively common within contemporary society ; and , people can communicate with each other , online or offline , on these social networking platforms ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "with",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "In the clause \"...that the existence of social media sites has,\" the subject is \"the existence of social media.\" However, when \"with\" is added in \"...that, with the existence of social media sites, has...\", the phrase \"with the existence of social media sites\" becomes a nonrestrictive clause, which means it can be removed from the sentence without destroying the meaning. In that case, the verb \"has\" loses its subject. Either \"with\" should be removed, or the sentence should be changed to restore the subject, such as in \"...critics may argue that, with the existence of social media sites, physical human interactions among people have been reduced...\" In this case, \"physical human interactions\" is the subject. Either of these is acceptable, but removing \"with\" is preferable because the sentence structure is more straightforward and easy to understand."
            },
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "have",
                "correct": "has",
                "explanation": "The subject of the sentence is \"the existence,\" which is singular. Therefore, because of subject-verb agreement, the verb should be \"has.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 23688,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , critics may argue that with the existence of social media sites have reduced physical human interactions among people as they will prefer sitting in front of a computer to going out and meeting new friends .",
        "correct sentence": "However , critics may argue that the existence of social media sites has reduced physical human interactions among people as they will prefer sitting in front of a computer to going out and meeting new friends ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "about",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"discuss\" does not take the preposition \"about.\" While \"about\" is used with similar verbs like \"tell\" or \"talk,\" in the case of \"discuss,\" the object simply comes directly after, with no need for a preposition."
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"contemporary society\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific contemporary society instead of the general concept."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23714,
        "incorrect sentence": "This essay will discuss about both the benefits and down sides of using social media in the contemporary society .",
        "correct sentence": "This essay will discuss both the benefits and down sides of using social media in contemporary society ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "about",
                "correct": "About",
                "explanation": "I disagree with this correction. English only capitalizes proper nouns and the first word of a sentence. Because \"about\" is neither, it should not be capitalized."
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"people\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific groups of people instead of to people in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23766,
        "incorrect sentence": "There are about 50 % of the people who have learnt about breaking news from social media .",
        "correct sentence": "There are About 50 % of people who have learnt about breaking news from social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "immediate",
                "correct": "immediately",
                "explanation": "\"Immediate\" is an adjective, so it modifies nouns, while \"immediately\" is an adverb, so it modifies verbs. Here, the word being modified is \"disseminate,\" which is a verb, so the adverb, \"immediately,\" should be used."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23817,
        "incorrect sentence": "Hence , social media has benefited the masses by equipping them with a powerful tool to disseminate information almost immediate to the people around them .",
        "correct sentence": "Hence , social media has benefited the masses by equipping them with a powerful tool to disseminate information almost immediately to the people around them ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "are",
                "correct": "is",
                "explanation": "Both \"information\" and \"news\" are uncountable nouns, so they are not pluralized and the verb should be \"is.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 23832,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , critics may argue that not all information or news disseminated are reliable .",
        "correct sentence": "However , critics may argue that not all information or news disseminated is reliable ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "at",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"at\" is used to express speed because it indicates position on a scale or in a series. \"In\" indicates being inside of or within something, so it is not used to indicate speed."
            },
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "realtively",
                "correct": "relatively",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"relatively.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 23915,
        "incorrect sentence": "The spreading of false information can be a potential psychological threat to everyone , given that social media can disseminate information in a realtively fast speed .",
        "correct sentence": "The spreading of false information can be a potential psychological threat to everyone , given that social media can disseminate information at a relatively fast speed ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "polices",
                "correct": "police",
                "explanation": "The noun \"police\" is plural, so it does not need to be pluralized. The singular is \"police officer\" or \"policeman.\" "
            }
        ],
        "id": 23935,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nevertheless , there are cyber polices who roam around these social networking platforms to prevent these hoaxes spreading around .",
        "correct sentence": "Nevertheless , there are cyber police who roam around these social networking platforms to prevent these hoaxes spreading around ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "relationship",
                "correct": "relationships",
                "explanation": "When referencing relationships as a general concept, the plural \"relationships\" should be used because it references multiple relationships between many different people. The singular \"relationship\" is used to refer to individual relationships, with \"a relationship\" meaning any relationship and \"the relationship\" meaning one relationship specifically."
            }
        ],
        "id": 23980,
        "incorrect sentence": "Social media are able to improve relationship and make new friends , provided that there is mutual trust and mutual understanding between both parties .",
        "correct sentence": "Social media are able to improve relationships and make new friends , provided that there is mutual trust and mutual understanding between both parties ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "claimed",
                "correct": "claim",
                "explanation": "The past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past, while the present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often. The past tense \"claimed\" implies that teenagers no longer say this, which is contradicted by the use of \"today.\" Since it is referring to a current condition, it should be the present tense \"claim\" instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24002,
        "incorrect sentence": "Many of the teenagers today claimed that they are able to keep in touch with their friends through social media , regardless of their location .",
        "correct sentence": "Many of the teenagers today claim that they are able to keep in touch with their friends through social media , regardless of their location ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "writing",
                "correct": "write",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"used to\" is always followed by the bare infinitive verb. \"Writing\" is the gerund, so it should be changed to \"write.\" "
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount. The phrase \"relatively long time\" means a period of time that is comparatively long, but its exact length is unspecified. This is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 24038,
        "incorrect sentence": "In the past , people used to writing letters to their friends and it will take relatively long time to send the letter over .",
        "correct sentence": "In the past , people used to write letters to their friends and it will take a relatively long time to send the letter over ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "wth",
                "correct": "with",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"with.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 24047,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , with the help of technology , people are able to catch up wth each other conveniently .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , with the help of technology , people are able to catch up with each other conveniently ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "relationship",
                "correct": "relationships",
                "explanation": "When referencing relationships as a general concept, the plural \"relationships\" should be used because it references multiple relationships between many different people. The singular \"relationship\" is used to refer to individual relationships, with \"a relationship\" meaning any relationship and \"the relationship\" meaning one relationship specifically."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24094,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , in order for people to maintain their relationship as well as making new friends , it requires mutual trust and understanding between both parties .",
        "correct sentence": "However , in order for people to maintain their relationships as well as making new friends , it requires mutual trust and understanding between both parties ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "relationship",
                "correct": "relationships",
                "explanation": "When referencing relationships as a general concept, the plural \"relationships\" should be used because it references multiple relationships between many different people. The singular \"relationship\" is used to refer to individual relationships, with \"a relationship\" meaning any relationship and \"the relationship\" meaning one relationship specifically."
            },
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "understand",
                "correct": "understanding",
                "explanation": "\"Mutual\" is an adjective, and it cannot modify a verb, so the bare infinitive \"understand\" should be changed to the gerund \"understanding,\" which functions as a noun."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24144,
        "incorrect sentence": "But , if there is trust and mutual understand on social media , it will be ideal for people to improve relationship and make new friends .",
        "correct sentence": "But , if there is trust and mutual understanding on social media , it will be ideal for people to improve relationships and make new friends ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"contemporary society\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific contemporary society instead of the general concept."
            },
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "relationship",
                "correct": "relationships",
                "explanation": "When referencing relationships as a general concept, the plural \"relationships\" should be used because it references multiple relationships between many different people. The singular \"relationship\" is used to refer to individual relationships, with \"a relationship\" meaning any relationship and \"the relationship\" meaning one relationship specifically."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24179,
        "incorrect sentence": "In conclusion , social media in the contemporary society is able to help one improve relationship and make new friends , as well as , disseminate information efficiently to the masses .",
        "correct sentence": "In conclusion , social media in contemporary society is able to help one improve relationships and make new friends , as well as , disseminate information efficiently to the masses ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "meida/electronic",
                "correct": "media/electronic",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"media/electronic.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 24276,
        "incorrect sentence": "With just a touch away from any meida/electronic devices , one can easily interact and communicate with his friends without much hassle .",
        "correct sentence": "With just a touch away from any media/electronic devices , one can easily interact and communicate with his friends without much hassle ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "relationship",
                "correct": "relationships",
                "explanation": "When referencing relationships as a general concept, the plural \"relationships\" should be used because it references multiple relationships between many different people. The singular \"relationship\" is used to refer to individual relationships, with \"a relationship\" meaning any relationship and \"the relationship\" meaning one relationship specifically."
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "friendship",
                "correct": "friendships",
                "explanation": "When referencing relationships as a general concept, the plural \"friendship\" should be used because it references multiple friendships between many different people. The singular \"friendship\" is used to refer to individual friendships, with \"a friendship\" meaning any friendship and \"the relationship\" meaning one friendship specifically."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24309,
        "incorrect sentence": "Thus , long distance relationship or friendship can be maintain and keeping in touch with your circle of friends has been made much easier .",
        "correct sentence": "Thus , long distance relationships or friendships can be maintain and keeping in touch with your circle of friends has been made much easier ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "feeling",
                "correct": "feelings",
                "explanation": "The singular \"feeling\" is only used when talking about one emotion. This sentence is describing an individual's attitude toward a situation, or the collective sum of their emotions, opinions, and thoughts. In this case, the plural \"feelings\" is used instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24397,
        "incorrect sentence": "With the sharing of personal photos , posting of status of one 's personal feeling or experience and able to reply to these posts allowed human interaction to be engage and expand with ease .",
        "correct sentence": "With the sharing of personal photos , posting of status of one 's personal feelings or experience and able to reply to these posts allowed human interaction to be engage and expand with ease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 25,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "platform",
                "correct": "platforms",
                "explanation": "When referencing social media platforms as a general concept, the plural \"platforms\" should be used because it references most or all of the platforms in use. The singular \"platform\" is used to refer to an individual platform, with \"a social media platform\" meaning any such platform and \"the social media platform\" meaning one such platform specifically."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24427,
        "incorrect sentence": "Introverts or those who are shy to communicate with their friends are now able to do so in the form of words via social media platform .",
        "correct sentence": "Introverts or those who are shy to communicate with their friends are now able to do so in the form of words via social media platforms ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "The noun \"reliance\" always uses the preposition \"on\" or \"upon.\" It is a common collocation, and it may reflect the relationship of dependence. If A relies on B, then figuratively, A is supported by or resting on B."
            },
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites instead of to the concept in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24529,
        "incorrect sentence": "With the frequent usage and reliance of the social media and the Internet , a society that socialises through the cyber will be more advance and adapted to the highly connected world .",
        "correct sentence": "With the frequent usage and reliance on social media and the Internet , a society that socialises through the cyber will be more advance and adapted to the highly connected world ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "platform",
                "correct": "platforms",
                "explanation": "When referencing social media platforms as a general concept, the plural \"platforms\" should be used because it references most or all of the platforms in use. The singular \"platform\" is used to refer to an individual platform, with \"a social media platform\" meaning any such platform and \"the social media platform\" meaning one such platform specifically."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24550,
        "incorrect sentence": "Disadvantages : One of the main concerns of using social media platform to communicate is credibility .",
        "correct sentence": "Disadvantages : One of the main concerns of using social media platforms to communicate is credibility ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "received",
                "correct": "receive",
                "explanation": "The past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past, while the present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often. The past tense \"received\" implies that people no longer receive posts or information, so it should be the present tense \"receive\" instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24608,
        "incorrect sentence": "We can not be certain for sure the reliabilty or truth of some posts or information we received through the Inetrnet .",
        "correct sentence": "We can not be certain for sure the reliabilty or truth of some posts or information we receive through the Inetrnet ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "be",
                "explanation": "This sentence is using the present continuous tense, which is made up of the verb \"to be\" plus the gerund \"communicating.\" The verb \"to be\" is always necessary in this construction."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24653,
        "incorrect sentence": "We may in actual fact communicating with a hoax Facebook acccount of a cyber friend , which we assume to be real but in reality , it is a fake account .",
        "correct sentence": "We may in actual fact be communicating with a hoax Facebook acccount of a cyber friend , which we assume to be real but in reality , it is a fake account ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "informations",
                "correct": "information",
                "explanation": "\"Information\" is an uncountable noun, so it cannot be pluralized."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24671,
        "incorrect sentence": "Photos and informations retrieved from their profile page may be fabricated to suit certain personal agenda .",
        "correct sentence": "Photos and information retrieved from their profile page may be fabricated to suit certain personal agenda ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "emocons",
                "correct": "emoticons",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"emoticons.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "observed",
                "correct": "observe",
                "explanation": "The past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past, while the present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often. The past tense \"observed\" implies that people no longer observe their friends today, so it should be the present tense \"observe\" instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24733,
        "incorrect sentence": "Although emocons can be used to show certain emotion , this differs from the real authentic emotion of your friends when you observed them through their body language and their facial expression .",
        "correct sentence": "Although emoticons can be used to show certain emotion , this differs from the real authentic emotion of your friends when you observe them through their body language and their facial expression ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "artiste",
                "correct": "artist",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"artist.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 24878,
        "incorrect sentence": "People use Twitter to follow the artiste or celebrity they love and Facebook to see what is their friends ' recent activity .",
        "correct sentence": "People use Twitter to follow the artist or celebrity they love and Facebook to see what is their friends ' recent activity ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "do",
                "correct": "make",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"do a call\" is unusual and is only used in specific contexts, such as participating in a scheduled business call. In almost all other situations, the correct phrase is \"make calls.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "call",
                "correct": "calls",
                "explanation": "When referencing phone calls as a general concept, the plural \"calls\" should be used because it references calls made by multiple people. The singular \"call\" is used to refer to an individual call, with \"a call\" meaning any call and \"the call\" meaning one call specifically."
            }
        ],
        "id": 24936,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nevertheless , they still can use phone to do normal call and message to contact .",
        "correct sentence": "Nevertheless , they still can use phone to make normal calls and message to contact ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "computer",
                "correct": "computers",
                "explanation": "The plural noun \"devices\" is followed by a list, so that list should also be plural. Also, when referencing computers as a general concept, the plural \"computers\" should be used because it references multiple types. The singular \"computer\" is used to refer to an individual computer, with \"a computer\" meaning any computer and \"the computer\" meaning one computer specifically."
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "laptop",
                "correct": "laptops",
                "explanation": "The plural noun \"devices\" is followed by a list, so that list should also be plural. Also, when referencing laptops as a general concept, the plural \"laptops\" should be used because it references multiple types. The singular \"laptop\" is used to refer to an individual laptop, with \"a laptop\" meaning any laptop and \"the laptop\" meaning one laptop specifically."
            },
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "tablet",
                "correct": "tablets",
                "explanation": "The plural noun \"tablet\" is followed by a list, so that list should also be plural. Also, when referencing tablets as a general concept, the plural \"tablets\" should be used because it references multiple types. The singular \"tablet\" is used to refer to an individual tablet, with \"a tablet\" meaning any tablet and \"the tablet\" meaning one tablet specifically."
            },
            {
                "start": 31,
                "end": 31,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "When used as a noun, \"Internet\" almost always takes the definite article \"the.\" This may be an idiomatic use, or it may be because everyone who uses the Internet is connected to the same network, no matter where they are."
            },
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "did",
                "correct": "do",
                "explanation": "The past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past, while the present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often. The past tense \"did\" implies that the phone is no longer involved in people's work, so it should be the present tense \"do\" instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 25009,
        "incorrect sentence": "Not only the phone did the jobs for them , but also devices like personal computer , laptop , tablet , and many other devices which are able to connect to internet .",
        "correct sentence": "Not only the phone do the jobs for them , but also devices like personal computers , laptops , tablets , and many other devices which are able to connect to the internet ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "connect",
                "correct": "connects",
                "explanation": "When used as a noun, \"Internet\" almost always takes the definite article \"the.\" This may be an idiomatic use, or it may be because everyone who uses the Internet is connected to the same network, no matter where they are."
            }
        ],
        "id": 25038,
        "incorrect sentence": "It is obvious to see that internet saves people 's time and also connect people globally .",
        "correct sentence": "It is obvious to see that internet saves people 's time and also connects people globally ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "dinners",
                "correct": "dinner",
                "explanation": "The plural \"dinners\" refers either to each family member's individual orders at the restaurant or to multiple instances of gathering for dinner. A meal is still referred to in the singular when it is shared by multiple people. Therefore, it should be \"having dinner\" rather than \"having dinners.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 25211,
        "incorrect sentence": "A family of four having dinners in a restaurant without any chatting , because their holding and looking at their display screen with one hand when the other hand is holding a fork .",
        "correct sentence": "A family of four having dinner in a restaurant without any chatting , because their holding and looking at their display screen with one hand when the other hand is holding a fork ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "The",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"children\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific groups of children instead of children in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 25301,
        "incorrect sentence": "The children nowadays do not know what is neighbourhood games and who is staying beside them , all they know is pressing icons on the screens .",
        "correct sentence": "children nowadays do not know what is neighbourhood games and who is staying beside them , all they know is pressing icons on the screens ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites instead of the concept in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "socia",
                "correct": "social",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"social.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 25324,
        "incorrect sentence": "These are some concrete examples of how the socia media reduce face-to-face human contact .",
        "correct sentence": "These are some concrete examples of how social media reduce face-to-face human contact ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "to",
                "explanation": "\"Get used to\" is a phrasal verb that means to become accustomed or acclimated to doing something. The preposition does not change. \"To\" expresses that the action is a condition to which the subject becomes accustomed, while \"of\" would mean that the action belongs to the \"use\" or is part of it."
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "socia",
                "correct": "social",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"social.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 25375,
        "incorrect sentence": "When people get use of using socia media to contact other people , what will happen is that their interpersonal communicating skills will degrade and lost eventually .",
        "correct sentence": "When people get use to using social media to contact other people , what will happen is that their interpersonal communicating skills will degrade and lost eventually ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "being",
                "correct": "beings",
                "explanation": "This statement is referring to multiple people, saying that social media benefits the human race as a whole. Therefore, the plural \"beings\" should be used instead of the singular \"human being.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 25468,
        "incorrect sentence": "Social media does have some other advantages beside their general benefits to human being .",
        "correct sentence": "Social media does have some other advantages beside their general benefits to human beings ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "saves",
                "correct": "save",
                "explanation": "The subject of this sentence is \"people,\" which is plural, and so the verb form \"save\" should be used for subject-verb agreement."
            },
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "When used as a noun, \"Internet\" almost always takes the definite article \"the.\" This may be an idiomatic use, or it may be because everyone who uses the Internet is connected to the same network, no matter where they are."
            }
        ],
        "id": 25507,
        "incorrect sentence": "First of all , people saves money by using internet to contact other people and reading news .",
        "correct sentence": "First of all , people save money by using the internet to contact other people and reading news ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "an",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount, or to express one out of multiple options. The phrase \"make a call\" means one unspecified instance of a call, which can be expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "socia",
                "correct": "social",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"social.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 25569,
        "incorrect sentence": "A father may be able to make a call to his daughter who is in other country via socia media software instead of making international call which costs a lot to normal salary family .",
        "correct sentence": "A father may be able to make a call to his daughter who is in other country via social media software instead of making an international call which costs a lot to normal salary family ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "When used as a noun, \"Internet\" almost always takes the definite article \"the.\" This may be an idiomatic use, or it may be because everyone who uses the Internet is connected to the same network, no matter where they are."
            },
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "her",
                "correct": "his",
                "explanation": "The possessive pronoun \"her\" is used to indicate something belonging to or associated with a woman or girl, and \"his\" for a man or boy. The phrase \"talk to her daughter\" indicates a mother or another woman. The subject of this sentence is the father, so it should be \"talk to his daughter.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 25596,
        "incorrect sentence": "He can even talk to her daughter face-to-face using video call via internet .",
        "correct sentence": "He can even talk to his daughter face-to-face using video call via the internet ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "makes",
                "correct": "make",
                "explanation": "The subject of this sentence is \"people,\" which is plural, and so the verb form \"make\" should be used for subject-verb agreement."
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "\"Able\" is an adjective that requires the verb \"to be\" to connect it to a noun, so the verb form \"are\" should be added."
            }
        ],
        "id": 25636,
        "incorrect sentence": "Secondly , people makes friends all over the world and able to update their friends his recent activity easily .",
        "correct sentence": "Secondly , people make friends all over the world and are able to update their friends his recent activity easily ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "conclude",
                "correct": "conclusion",
                "explanation": "\"In conclusion\" is an idiom, and \"in conclude\" is never used. \"Conclude\" is a verb, so the correct way to use it in this context would be \"to conclude.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "at",
                "explanation": "\"At the same time\" is a common expression and the preposition does not vary. The phrase \"in the same time\" does not mean simultaneously. It refers to the state of being accomplished during the same amount of time."
            },
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "socia",
                "correct": "social",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"social.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 25729,
        "incorrect sentence": "In conclude , socia media benefits people in several ways but in the same time harms people .",
        "correct sentence": "In conclusion , social media benefits people in several ways but at the same time harms people ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "socia",
                "correct": "social",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"social.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 25743,
        "incorrect sentence": "People should avoid the misuse of socia media and use it in the proper way .",
        "correct sentence": "People should avoid the misuse of social media and use it in the proper way ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "bonds",
                "correct": "bond",
                "explanation": "The subject of this clause is \"people,\" which is plural, and so the verb form \"bond\" should be used for subject-verb agreement."
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "human",
                "correct": "humans",
                "explanation": "This statement is referring to the human race as a whole. Therefore, the plural \"humans\" should be used instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "lives",
                "correct": "live",
                "explanation": "The subject of this clause is \"humans,\" which is plural, and so the verb form \"live\" should be used for subject-verb agreement."
            },
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "aids",
                "correct": "aid",
                "explanation": "The noun \"aid\" can be either countable or uncountable, depending on its meaning. It is countable only when it refers to tangible things, such as mobility aids, visual aids, and other objects that provide assistance. It is uncountable when it refers to the intangible act of helping or supporting someone or something. Uncountable nouns cannot be made singular or plural, so it cannot be pluralized."
            }
        ],
        "id": 25781,
        "incorrect sentence": "With the aids of social media , people bonds globally , information flows rapidly , and human lives happily .",
        "correct sentence": "With the aid of social media , people bond globally , information flows rapidly , and humans live happily ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "withthe",
                "correct": "with the",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary between words."
            }
        ],
        "id": 25825,
        "incorrect sentence": "It started withthe invention of technology which has evolved tremendously over the past few decades .",
        "correct sentence": "It started with the invention of technology which has evolved tremendously over the past few decades ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "travel",
                "correct": "travelled",
                "explanation": "The past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past, while the present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often. The present tense \"travel\" implies that it is still the norm to travel by ship, so it should be the past tense \"travelled\" for UK English or \"traveled\" for US English."
            }
        ],
        "id": 25851,
        "incorrect sentence": "In the past , we travel by ship and now we can use airplane to do so .",
        "correct sentence": "In the past , we travelled by ship and now we can use airplane to do so ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "need",
                "correct": "needed",
                "explanation": "The past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past, while the present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often. The present tense \"need\" implies that it is still the norm to travel by ship, so it should be the past tense \"needed\" instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 25908,
        "incorrect sentence": "In the past , it took a few days to receive a message as we need to post our letter and now , we can use e-mail which stands for electronic message to send messages to our friends or even use our handphone to send our messages .",
        "correct sentence": "In the past , it took a few days to receive a message as we needed to post our letter and now , we can use e-mail which stands for electronic message to send messages to our friends or even use our handphone to send our messages ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "one",
                "correct": "ones",
                "explanation": "\"Loved ones\" is a collocation. It means the inner circle of people that someone cares about, and it is not used in the singular."
            },
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "are",
                "correct": "is",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"distance,\" which is singular, so the verb form should be changed to \"is\" for subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 25955,
        "incorrect sentence": "From the example that I have mentioned earlier we can see that distance between us and our loved one are getting further apart .",
        "correct sentence": "From the example that I have mentioned earlier we can see that distance between us and our loved ones is getting further apart ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "medium",
                "correct": "mediums",
                "explanation": "The noun \"medium\" is the singular of \"media.\" It's sometimes pluralized as \"media\" and sometimes as \"mediums.\" Either is acceptable, but because \"medium\" is singular, it can never be used with \"one of the,\" which means any one of multiple things and is only used with plural nouns."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26047,
        "incorrect sentence": "Thus , this makes Twitter and Facebook become one of the medium that we need .",
        "correct sentence": "Thus , this makes Twitter and Facebook become one of the mediums that we need ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "Nevertheless,everything",
                "correct": "Nevertheless , everything",
                "explanation": "A space is always necessary between words."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26056,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nevertheless,everything in life has positive and negative effects .",
        "correct sentence": "Nevertheless , everything in life has positive and negative effects ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "about",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"discuss\" does not take the preposition \"about.\" While \"about\" is used with similar verbs like \"tell\" or \"talk,\" in the case of \"discuss,\" the object simply comes directly after, with no need for a preposition."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26077,
        "incorrect sentence": "The next two paragraphs will be discussing about the advantages and disadvantages of using social media in our society .",
        "correct sentence": "The next two paragraphs will be discussing the advantages and disadvantages of using social media in our society ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "connect",
                "correct": "connects",
                "explanation": "The subject of this clause is \"social media,\" which is collective and therefore treated as singular, and so the verb form \"connects\" should be used for subject-verb agreement."
            },
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"distance\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific distance of time or space, instead of the concept in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26183,
        "incorrect sentence": "The social media is beneficial as it connect you and your loved one even though you are separated by the distance .",
        "correct sentence": "The social media is beneficial as it connects you and your loved one even though you are separated by distance ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "is",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "When using the phrase \"there is/there are,\" the verb form must agree with the noun that comes after. The noun \"disadvantages\" is plural, so \"are\" should be used instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26215,
        "incorrect sentence": "As I mentioned in the beginning , there is also disadvantages of social media tools .",
        "correct sentence": "As I mentioned in the beginning , there are also disadvantages of social media tools ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "A nonrestrictive clause adds additional information to a sentence and can be removed without destroying the meaning of the sentence. When used at the end of a sentence, it requires a comma to create an easily understandable sentence structure. The phrase \"especially among youngsters\" describes the action \"reduce the level of concentration,\" but can be removed without loss of meaning. Therefore, it is a non-restrictive phrase, so it requires a comma."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26247,
        "incorrect sentence": "One of them is that it reduce the level of concentration especially among the youngsters .",
        "correct sentence": "One of them is that it reduce the level of concentration , especially among the youngsters ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"to be supposed (to do)\" is a modal verb phrase, and it always requires a form of the verb \"to be.\" The subject is \"students,\" which is plural, so \"are\" should be added."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26304,
        "incorrect sentence": "This means that the students are not concetrating when they supposed to do so .",
        "correct sentence": "This means that the students are not concetrating when they are supposed to do so ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "for",
                "explanation": "The verb phrase \"take responsibility for\" is a common expression, and the pronoun does not change. \"For\" is used because it implies that something is for a purpose or intended goal. Being \"responsible for\" an action means it is someone's duty to ensure its achievement, while the phrase \"responsibility of\" refers to the party to whom a responsibility belongs, such as \"Customs clearance is the responsibility of the buyer.\" "
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "\"The right decision\" is a common expression, and the article does not change. The indefinite article \"a\" refers to one unspecified thing and the definite article \"the\" to one specific thing. Idiomatically, it is thought that only one \"right decision\" exists, so it is common to refer to decisions as \"the right decision\" or \"the wrong decision,\" only using the definite article."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26356,
        "incorrect sentence": "In my opinion , every individual has to take responsibility of their own lives by making a right decision .",
        "correct sentence": "In my opinion , every individual has to take responsibility for their own lives by making the right decision ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"striking a balance\" is a common collocation, and the article is never omitted. In most cases, it uses the indefinite article \"a.\" There are special cases where it can use the definite article \"the,\" such as in \"We try to strike the right balance.\" However, this is because \"the right balance\" is a collocation as well. Outside of special cases, however, it always uses the article \"a.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "I partially agree with this correction. Punctuation is necessary, but it should be a semicolon instead because the adverb \"however\" cannot be used in this position on its own. If preceded with a semicolon, \"however\" can also be used in the middle of a sentence, where it functions as a conjunctive adverb to connect two complete sentences. Therefore, this sentence should be \"...; however, in this case, ...\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 26395,
        "incorrect sentence": "There are advantages and disadvantages in using social media sites , however in this case striking balance between social media and lives is the most important thing to do .",
        "correct sentence": "There are advantages and disadvantages in using social media sites , however in this case , a striking balance between social media and lives is the most important thing to do ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "sociall",
                "correct": "social",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"social.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "In modern English, the word \"commonplace\" is used as an adjective and therefore it does not use an article. It used to be a noun as well, but this usage is no longer common and would not be understood."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26422,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nowadays , the use of the sociall media platforms is a commonplace in our lives .",
        "correct sentence": "Nowadays , the use of the social media platforms is commonplace in our lives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "an",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount, or to express one out of multiple options. The phrase \"increasingly globalized world\" means a world with a greater level of globalization than in the past, but the exact level is not specified. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "enhances",
                "correct": "enhance",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"platforms,\" which is plural, so for subject-verb agreement, the verb should be \"enhances.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 26462,
        "incorrect sentence": "In increasingly globalised world , such platforms even enhances and compliccates the links between indivduals in the world .",
        "correct sentence": "In an increasingly globalised world , such platforms even enhance and compliccates the links between indivduals in the world ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"face-to-face human contact\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific instances or types of face-to-face contact instead of the concept in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "contacts",
                "correct": "contact",
                "explanation": "The noun \"contact\" can be either countable or uncountable, depending on its meaning. When it means the state in which people communicate with each other, it is uncountable. That is the meaning here, and uncountable nouns cannot be made plural, so it should be \"contact\" instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26549,
        "incorrect sentence": "As people spend more and more time on such social media sites , the importance of the face-to-face human contacts has decresed .",
        "correct sentence": "As people spend more and more time on such social media sites , the importance of face-to-face human contact has decresed ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount, or on a scale or spectrum. If a person is said to lack certain skills, it could mean that they have absolutely no experience or aptitude in any related skills, that they are somewhat competent but not totally, or anywhere in between. The indefinite article \"a\" is appropriate to express this range."
            },
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "individual",
                "correct": "individuals",
                "explanation": "When referencing individual people as a general concept, the plural \"individuals\" should be used because it references multiple people. The singular \"individual\" is used to refer to a single person, with \"an individual\" meaning any individual and \"the individual\" meaning one specific individual."
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"have the option to\" is an idiom and the article is not omitted or varied. This is because the definite article \"the\" refers to a specific thing, in this case, a specific choice to make to the exclusion of other choices. The use of \"the\" sets this option apart from other options."
            },
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"turn one's back to\" is literal, meaning to physically turn so that one's back is facing something. The idiom \"turn one's back on\" is figurative, meaning to forsake, ignore, or betray something or someone. Here, it means to ignore real life and go online, so it should be \"turn their back on.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"real life\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only in special cases, such as referring to the real life of a specific person."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26636,
        "incorrect sentence": "This results in lack of interpersonal skills in individual , especially young students as they always have option to turn their back to the real-life and go online .",
        "correct sentence": "This results in a lack of interpersonal skills in individuals , especially young students as they always have the option to turn their back on real-life and go online ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 26,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "with",
                "explanation": "The verb \"interact\" refers to actions that take place between two or more people. It always uses the preposition \"with,\" which serves to emphasize the involvement of multiple people."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26666,
        "incorrect sentence": "As they are so used to having an online avatar , they may lose their self-identity in real life and may not realise how to interact people in real-life .",
        "correct sentence": "As they are so used to having an online avatar , they may lose their self-identity in real life and may not realise how to interact with people in real-life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": ",",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "This comma should be deleted because it makes the meaning unclear. The conjunction \"that\" is used to join \"the problem is\" and clause \"the benefits from...\" but the comma separates these ideas, so it should be removed."
            },
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "relfected",
                "correct": "reflected",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"reflected.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 26705,
        "incorrect sentence": "Another problem with social media is that , the benefits from investing such enormous time and energy is not relfected as something positive to the users .",
        "correct sentence": "Another problem with social media is that the benefits from investing such enormous time and energy is not reflected as something positive to the users ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": ",",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "This comma should be deleted because it makes the meaning unclear. The conjunction \"that\" is used to join \"the reason why\" and the clause \"the more people get into...\" but the comma separates these ideas, so it should be removed."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26739,
        "incorrect sentence": "The reason why it is so addictive is , that the more people get into the social media , they seek attention from their friends .",
        "correct sentence": "The reason why it is so addictive is that the more people get into the media , they seek attention from their friends ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "is",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"sparks,\" which is plural, so the verb should be changed to \"are\" for subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26789,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , such sparks of sudden attention is extremely short-termed and gone eaily thus does not add any value or meaning to the user 's life .",
        "correct sentence": "However , such sparks of sudden attention are extremely short-termed and gone eaily thus does not add any value or meaning to the user 's life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "\"Research\" is an uncountable noun, so it does not take the indefinite article \"a.\" To refer to one specific study, it is common to say \"according to a research study\" or \"according to research by [author/institution],\" but for research-based knowledge in general, the phrase is \"according to research.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"users\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific groups of users instead of to users in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "Names of websites are proper nouns and therefore do not take an article in general. As an exception, organizational names that contain \"Group,\" \"Association,\" or similar words often have \"the\" added when used in a sentence, like \"the American Medical Association\" or \"the Sony Group.\" But outside of these special cases, there should be no article."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26832,
        "incorrect sentence": "Also , according to a research , it has been proven that the users feel more sad after using the Facebook and this is because users unknowingly compare their lives with other people 's lives .",
        "correct sentence": "Also , according to research , it has been proven that users feel more sad after using Facebook and this is because users unknowingly compare their lives with other people 's lives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"people\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific groups of people instead of to people in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26876,
        "incorrect sentence": "Social media definitely has some other strong benefits that make the users stay is the links among the people .",
        "correct sentence": "Social media definitely has some other strong benefits that make the users stay is the links among people ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"friendship\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific friendships, instead of the concept of friendship in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"real life\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific person's real life, instead of real life in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 26951,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , the friendship on such virtual world is so superficial which is not so relevant to the real-life .",
        "correct sentence": "However , friendship on such virtual world is so superficial which is not so relevant to real-life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"privacy issues\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific instances of privacy issues, instead of such issues in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "Names of websites are proper nouns and therefore do not take an article in general. As an exception, organizational names that contain \"Group,\" \"Association,\" or similar words often have \"the\" added when used in a sentence, like \"the American Medical Association\" or \"the Sony Group.\" But outside of these special cases, there should be no article."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27034,
        "incorrect sentence": "Furthermore this also possibly triggers the privacy issues as the Facebook allows some other profit-driven companies to have access to the information on the users .",
        "correct sentence": "Furthermore this also possibly triggers privacy issues as Facebook allows some other profit-driven companies to have access to the information on the users ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "pron",
                "correct": "prone",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"prone.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 27055,
        "incorrect sentence": "As this happens , users are more and more pron to any possible frauds .",
        "correct sentence": "As this happens , users are more and more prone to any possible frauds ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "peaks",
                "correct": "peak",
                "explanation": "The singular \"peaks\" means the highs and lows of individual social media sites, but this sentence is talking about a high in the usage of social media, or a peak for these sites as a whole. In this case, the plural \"peaks\" is more common."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27107,
        "incorrect sentence": "Social media sites are at their peaks at the moment , however , I believe that when people realize that such sites are not making them better persons in real-life , they will not be indulged in it as much as they are now .",
        "correct sentence": "Social media sites are at their peak at the moment , however , I believe that when people realize that such sites are not making them better persons in real-life , they will not be indulged in it as much as they are now ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": ",",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The use of a comma here disrupts the flow of meaning and makes it unclear what \"from around the world\" is referencing. With the comma, it could be either \"social media sites from around the world\" or \"people from around the world.\" The comma should be removed to maintain the meaning of \"people from around the world.\" In a special case, if it means to connect people in general but especially individuals from different parts of the world, it could say \"...with the intention of connecting people, especially people from around the world.\" Otherwise, however, the comma should be removed."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27195,
        "incorrect sentence": "Social media sites like Facebook and Twitter are born with the intention of connecting people , from around the world .",
        "correct sentence": "Social media sites like Facebook and Twitter are born with the intention of connecting people from around the world ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "A nonrestrictive clause adds additional information to a sentence and can be removed without destroying the meaning of the sentence. It requires commas on either side to create an easily understandable sentence structure. The phrase \"even the older generation\" describes the noun \"people,\" but can be removed without loss of meaning. Therefore, it is a non-restrictive phrase, so it requires commas on both sides."
            },
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "A nonrestrictive clause adds additional information to a sentence and can be removed without destroying the meaning of the sentence. It requires commas on either side to create an easily understandable sentence structure. The phrase \"even the older generation\" describes the noun \"people,\" but can be removed without loss of meaning. Therefore, it is a non-restrictive phrase, so it requires commas on both sides."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27226,
        "incorrect sentence": "The idea seems great , and nowadays most people even the older generation will have at least one social media platform like Facebook .",
        "correct sentence": "The idea seems great , and nowadays most people , even the older generation , will have at least one social media platform like Facebook ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 25,
                "error": "on",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "The phrase is \"in real time\" is a commonly used expression, and the preposition never varies. The preposition \"in\" is used because it can express a period of time in which an event happens, while \"on\" is only used for time when referring to a date or day of the week."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27262,
        "incorrect sentence": "The parents are now the \" friends \" of their kids , and they can now \" follow \" their kids more closely and on real time .",
        "correct sentence": "The parents are now the \" friends \" of their kids , and they can now \" follow \" their kids more closely and in real time ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"reduce\" does not use a preposition. The object comes directly after. A preposition is only necessary for the noun form \"reduction.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 27314,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , as we then tend to spend too much time on this and have significantly reduced in face-to-face human contact , that eventually affects our interpersonal skills .",
        "correct sentence": "However , as we then tend to spend too much time on this and have significantly reduced face-to-face human contact , that eventually affects our interpersonal skills ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "on",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"share\" does not use a preposition. The object comes directly after."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27328,
        "incorrect sentence": "First and foremost , I would like to share on the advantages of using such social media in my daily life .",
        "correct sentence": "First and foremost , I would like to share the advantages of using such social media in my daily life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "background",
                "correct": "backgrounds",
                "explanation": "This statement is referring to multiple people, each of whom has their own background, so \"backgrounds\" should be plural. "
            },
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "at",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"at\" refers to locations, especially locations where an activity takes place, while \"in\" refers to an environment. The word \"setting\" encompasses the place, conditions, the time, the atmosphere, etc., so \"in\" fits better than \"at.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 27348,
        "incorrect sentence": "As a student , I tend to meet lots of people from different background and at different settings .",
        "correct sentence": "As a student , I tend to meet lots of people from different backgrounds and in different settings ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "account",
                "correct": "accounts",
                "explanation": "The verb \"exchange\" refers to an inaction between two or more people. If only one person gives their Facebook account information, then it is not an exchange, so the plural \"accounts\" should be used here."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27368,
        "incorrect sentence": "We may meet only once but we exchange our contact numbers as well as facebook account in order to keep in touch .",
        "correct sentence": "We may meet only once but we exchange our contact numbers as well as facebook accounts in order to keep in touch ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is singular, so it cannot be used with the plural \"birthday wishes.\" Either \"birthday wishes\" or \"a birthday wish\" would be acceptable."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27608,
        "incorrect sentence": "For example , we tend send a birthday wishes when Facebook promts us \" Today is someone 's birthday \" .",
        "correct sentence": "For example , we tend send birthday wishes when Facebook promts us \" Today is someone 's birthday \" ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "season",
                "correct": "seasons",
                "explanation": "The singular \"festive season like Chinese New Year\" implies that this is the only festive season, so it should be the plural \"seasons\" instead. Also, this sentence uses the word \"like\" to mean \"for example.\" An example is something that proves a general rule, and a general rule cannot exist without multiple examples, so when \"like\" is used to give examples, it is usually used with plural nouns. "
            }
        ],
        "id": 27658,
        "incorrect sentence": "We used to send wishes cards during festive season like Chinese New Year , and we feel so good to write one and of course to receive one with stamps on it .",
        "correct sentence": "We used to send wishes cards during festive seasons like Chinese New Year , and we feel so good to write one and of course to receive one with stamps on it ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "were",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "\"Gone are those times\" is an idiomatic phrase, and the tense does not change. To rephrase it, it means \"Those times are gone,\" so it's about how things are today, but the past tense \"gone were\" refers to a point in the past where these times had already ceased to exist. Therefore it should be the present tense \"are\" instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "those",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"the times\" refers to specific instances of the same event that occurred multiple times. However, the phrase \"those times\" refers nostalgically to an era of the past. That is the meaning here, so it should be changed to \"those.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 27693,
        "incorrect sentence": "Gone were the times , and now we do mass sending and the receiver may feel less meaning in such online wishes .",
        "correct sentence": "Gone are those times , and now we do mass sending and the receiver may feel less meaning in such online wishes ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "passed",
                "correct": "passes",
                "explanation": "The past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past, while the present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often. The past tense \"passed\" implies that the author's perspective is in the past, but this sentence is about events in the present. Therefore, the present tense \"passes\" should be used."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27707,
        "incorrect sentence": "As time passed , we may have more \" friends \" on the list , but the meaning of friends needs to be redefined .",
        "correct sentence": "As time passes , we may have more \" friends \" on the list , but the meaning of friends needs to be redefined ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"society\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific societies, instead of society in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27780,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nowadays , social media sites are commonly used in the society .",
        "correct sentence": "Nowadays , social media sites are commonly used in society ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "percents",
                "correct": "percent",
                "explanation": "The word \"percent\" is never pluralized. It means a specified amount or part for every hundred, so it cannot be pluralized. It is correct to say \"one percent,\" or \"one hundred percent,\" or any percentage in between."
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "plays",
                "correct": "use",
                "explanation": "The verb \"play\" is not used to refer to internet usage. It can be used for certain sports and musical instruments and for games and videogames, but websites are referred to with \"use\" or \"spend time on.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 27803,
        "incorrect sentence": "I believe 80 percents of people plays social media sites .",
        "correct sentence": "I believe 80 percent of people use social media sites ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"society\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific societies, instead of modern society in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27887,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , there are also some disadvantages occur due to the social media which are concerned in the society .",
        "correct sentence": "However , there are also some disadvantages occur due to social media which are concerned in society ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "life",
                "correct": "lives",
                "explanation": "When referencing people's daily lives as a general concept, the plural \"lives\" should be used because it references multiple people. The singular \"life\" is used to refer to an individual life, with \"a life\" meaning any life and \"the life\" meaning one life. As an exception, a family or a couple might refer to \"our life (together),\" but generally the lives of different people will always be treated as plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27897,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , this article is written to explain the pros and cons of using social media in our daily life .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , this article is written to explain the pros and cons of using social media in our daily lives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"people\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific groups of people, instead of people in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 29,
                "end": 29,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "A nonrestrictive clause adds additional information to a sentence and can be removed without destroying the meaning of the sentence. It requires commas on either side to create an easily understandable sentence structure. The phrase \"even strangers\" adds additional information on who people can interact with, but it can be removed without loss of meaning. Therefore, it is a non-restrictive phrase, so it requires commas on both sides."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27944,
        "incorrect sentence": "First , with the function of social media sites that connects the people , everyone is able to interact and communicate with friends and families , or even strangers without any time and place constraints .",
        "correct sentence": "First , with the function of social media sites that connects people , everyone is able to interact and communicate with friends and families , or even strangers , without any time and place constraints ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27959,
        "incorrect sentence": "Through the social media sites , we can chat with our friends who stay in Europe and New Zealand .",
        "correct sentence": "Through social media sites , we can chat with our friends who stay in Europe and New Zealand ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The noun \"thousand\" cannot be used on its own. It needs to be pluralized or to be preceded by a number or the indefinite article \"a,\" in which case it means \"one thousand.\" The definite article \"the thousand\" is used only in adjective phrases referring to a specific group of one thousand things or people, such as \"The thousand people who signed the petition.\" However, this is a special case, and the phrase \"a thousand\" should be used in most general contexts."
            }
        ],
        "id": 27975,
        "incorrect sentence": "There are over thousand miles between Singapore and these two countries .",
        "correct sentence": "There are over a thousand miles between Singapore and these two countries ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "at",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "First, it is not common to use \"stay\" to refer to long-term residence, so \"stay\" should be changed to \"live.\" \nWhen referring to a residence, \"at\" is used for addresses or for a temporary place of stay, like a hotel. It is common to use the preposition \"in,\" which means inside a place or area. It is used both for the type of dwelling, such as a house or apartment, and for the country, state, city, etc."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28035,
        "incorrect sentence": "It saves a lot of money and time as well as strengthen our relationship although we stay at different places around the world .",
        "correct sentence": "It saves a lot of money and time as well as strengthen our relationship although we stay in different places around the world ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "company",
                "correct": "companies",
                "explanation": "When referencing companies as a general concept, the plural \"companies\" should be used because it references many or all companies. The singular \"company\" is used to refer to an individual company, with \"a company\" meaning any company and \"the company\" meaning one company."
            },
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"meeting\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific meetings instead of to the concept of meetings in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28089,
        "incorrect sentence": "Besides that , company also can use the convenience of social media sites , such as Facebook chat or Skype to facilitate the meeting with parties of project from around the world .",
        "correct sentence": "Besides that , companies also can use the convenience of social media sites , such as Facebook chat or Skype to facilitate meeting with parties of project from around the world ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "cost",
                "correct": "costs",
                "explanation": "The plural \"costs\" can refer to a variety of different expenses, including airfare, transportation, hotels, per diem, etc. The singular \"cost\" is used to refer to an individual cost, with \"a cost\" meaning any cost and \"the cost\" meaning one specific cost."
            },
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "is",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "If the subject is the plural \"costs,\" then the verb that follows should be \"are\" for subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28114,
        "incorrect sentence": "Substantial cost is saved without the tiring travel from one point to another point .",
        "correct sentence": "Substantial costs are saved without the tiring travel from one point to another point ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"other sectors\" means every sector other than the current sector. With the definite article, \"the other sectors\" means a specific group of sectors, so \"the\" should be removed. "
            },
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" is used to refer to a specific company: in this case, the example company that is saving money through online meetings. The use of \"the\" indicates that this company is the same company that has been mentioned previously."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28165,
        "incorrect sentence": "With the huge amount of cost savings , this capital can be utilized in the other sectors which benefits company more and boost up the company 's profit .",
        "correct sentence": "With the huge amount of cost savings , this capital can be utilized in other sectors which benefits the company more and boost up the company 's profit ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "human",
                "correct": "humans",
                "explanation": "A connection refers to linking multiple people or things together, so there have to be at least two people involved to constitute a connection. Therefore, \"human\" should be changed to the plural \"humans.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 28219,
        "incorrect sentence": "Some scholars argue that the usage of social media reduces the face-to-face connection between human .",
        "correct sentence": "Some scholars argue that the usage of social media reduces the face-to-face connection between humans ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "human",
                "correct": "humans",
                "explanation": "An interaction refers to exchange between multiple people or things, so there have to be at least two people involved to constitute an interaction. Therefore, \"human\" should be changed to the plural \"humans.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "by",
                "correct": "to",
                "explanation": "The expression is always \"face to face,\" and the preposition does not vary. The use of \"to\" can indicate correspondence between two similar things, meaning that people are facing one another, looking at one another's faces, etc. The phrase \"face by face\" would refer to an action where a series of faces were counted, looked at, etc., one by one."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28249,
        "incorrect sentence": "Since ancient times , human interact with others face by face .",
        "correct sentence": "Since ancient times , humans interact with others face to face ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "Assuming that the meaning is \"facial expression,\" this is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. The definite article \"the\" is used only when referring to specific facial expressions or instances of facial expressions, instead of the concept in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28273,
        "incorrect sentence": "Without the facial impression , it is easier to misunderstand the intention of speakers .",
        "correct sentence": "Without facial impression , it is easier to misunderstand the intention of speakers ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "I partially agree with this correction because \"of\" needs to be removed, but that does not fix the problem. The sentence should be rephrased as \"the more time spent on social media sites, the more a person's writing skills will be reduced.\" First, this construction does not use \"of.\" Second, it always consists of two phrases, and the first is always the cause and the second is always the outcome. Therefore, \"time spent on social media\" should come first and \"writing skills will be reduced\" should come second. \nThis suggestion also fixes the other grammar issues. First, it is not common to say \"time used on social media sites.\" Instead, it is common to say \"time spent on social media sites\" or \"time spent using social media sites.\" Second, the phrase \"the more of the writing skills\" is not commonly used and is different to understand. Also, it is not clear to whom the phrase \"writing skills\" refers, so it should be changed to \"the more a person's writing skills.\" This makes the meaning clear."
            },
            {
                "start": 20,
                "end": 21,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "When talking about \"time spent,\" English uses the preposition \"in\" for physical locations and \"on\" for activities or pursuits. For example, a dedicated scholar might spend a lot of time in the library or spend a lot of time on her studies. Social media is not a physical location, so \"on\" is appropriate here. "
            }
        ],
        "id": 28399,
        "incorrect sentence": "Based on the statistic report , the more of the writing skills will be reduced when the more time used in the social media sites .",
        "correct sentence": "Based on the statistic report , the more the writing skills will be reduced when the more time used on the social media sites ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "forget",
                "correct": "forgetting",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"the experience of\" is used to define a type of experience, which is a noun. Therefore, the phrase requires a noun, so the bare infinitive \"forget\" should be changed to \"forgetting.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 28416,
        "incorrect sentence": "I believe most of us have the experience of suddenly forget how to write a word that we should know .",
        "correct sentence": "I believe most of us have the experience of suddenly forgetting how to write a word that we should know ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "device",
                "correct": "devices",
                "explanation": "Auto-correct is a feature that is common to many different electronic devices, so the plural \"devices\" should be used. The singular \"device\" is used to refer to individual devices, with \"a device\" meaning any device and \"the device\" meaning one specific device."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28454,
        "incorrect sentence": "The auto correction software is so effective when using electronic device until we did not realize the importance of writing .",
        "correct sentence": "The auto correction software is so effective when using electronic devices until we did not realize the importance of writing ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "for",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"of\" indicates an attribute, so it implies that this skill is something inherent to certain people. The preposition \"for\" can mean the purpose for which something is done, or in order to help or cause something. The phrase \"an essential skill for a person who...\" means in order to be a person who can express their own feelings and emotions. Therefore, \"of\" should be changed to \"for.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 28486,
        "incorrect sentence": "Writing is an essential skill of person who express their own feelings and opinions .",
        "correct sentence": "Writing is an essential skill for person who express their own feelings and opinions ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" refers to a specific word, implying that only one word has been popular. The indefinite article \"a\" should be used instead because it refers to one of the many words that has been popular."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28526,
        "incorrect sentence": "Privacy ' , this is the word that popular in these few decades .",
        "correct sentence": "Privacy ' , this is a word that popular in these few decades ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "Human",
                "correct": "Humans",
                "explanation": "The singular \"human\" refers to one person. This statement refers to multiple people, so it should be \"humans.\" Also, the pronoun \"their\" is generally plural and is only used for singular subjects in special circumstances."
            },
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "has",
                "correct": "have",
                "explanation": "The subject is \"humans,\" which is plural, so the verb should be \"have\" for subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28552,
        "incorrect sentence": "Human has their own rights and privacy .",
        "correct sentence": "Humans have their own rights and privacy ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "with",
                "correct": "for",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"with cash imbursement\" means that the social media sites provided companies with both user information and cash reimbursement. The preposition \"for\" can mean in exchange, so \"for cash reimbursement\" means that companies paid social media sites in order to receive user information."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28588,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , there is news about the social media sites leaks users ' information to companies with cash reimbursement .",
        "correct sentence": "However , there is news about the social media sites leaks users ' information to companies for cash reimbursement ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "transfer",
                "correct": "transferred",
                "explanation": "This is the passive voice, continuing from the phrase \"is recorded.\" The passive voice requires a form of the verb \"to be\" followed by a secondary verb, which is always the past participle. Therefore, it should be changed from the present form \"transfer\" to the past participle \"transferred.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 28623,
        "incorrect sentence": "Everything we type in the social media sites is recorded in the server and then transfer to the companies for spying and advertising .",
        "correct sentence": "Everything we type in the social media sites is recorded in the server and then transferred to the companies for spying and advertising ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "The word \"spy\" on its own just means to try to secretly get information about something. It does not have the connotation of monitoring/observing people without the preposition \"on.\" \"On\" can mean over or on top of, indicating that a person and their activities are being watched over."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28671,
        "incorrect sentence": "You are not only controlled by the government laws but also spied by the government .",
        "correct sentence": "You are not only controlled by the government laws but also spied on by the government ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The noun phrase \"the next generation\" is almost always used with the definite article \"the.\" Generations come one after another in series, so there can only be one \"next\" generation. This is best reflected by \"the,\" which refers to one specific thing."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28749,
        "incorrect sentence": "Thus , the new technology will be able to bring a prosperous future for our and next generation .",
        "correct sentence": "Thus , the new technology will be able to bring a prosperous future for our and the next generation ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "obvioualy",
                "correct": "obvious",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"obvious.\" Also, it looks like the author intended to use the word \"obviously,\" which is an adverb. Adverbs are used to modify verbs, but in this sentence, the word follows \"it is\" and therefore should be a noun."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28816,
        "incorrect sentence": "On one side , it is obvioualy that many advantages have been brought to our lives .",
        "correct sentence": "On one side , it is obvious that many advantages have been brought to our lives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "keep",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The structure \"by keep doing something\" is not used. Also, the preposition \"by\" has to be followed by a noun, and \"keep\" is a bare infinitive verb. It could be rephrased using a gerund, as in \"by writing comments back and forth continuously\" or \"by exchanging comments all the time.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 28886,
        "incorrect sentence": "Even when people are thousands of miles apart , social media make it possible to have interaction by keep writing comments .",
        "correct sentence": "Even when people are thousands of miles apart , social media make it possible to have interaction by writing comments ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"get in contact\" is a commonly used phrase and it always requires the preposition \"in.\" It refers to achieving the state of being in communication with someone, and \"in\" is used to reflect state or condition."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28918,
        "incorrect sentence": "When our phones are accidentally done , we can also use the social media to get contact with our friends .",
        "correct sentence": "When our phones are accidentally done , we can also use social media to get in contact with our friends ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The commonly used phrase \"the public\" refers to the people of a society as a whole. Without the indefinite article \"the,\" the commonly used phrase \"in public\" means in a place where people might observe. This is the meaning in the concept of a group chat, so \"the\" should be removed."
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of a \"group chat\" is a general concept and can be widely assumed to be understood by the audience. For that reason, it's unusual to use the definite article \"the\" with \"group chatting\" when referring to the concept in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 28954,
        "incorrect sentence": "Some people who are try to talk in the public can also actively take part in the group chatting via social media .",
        "correct sentence": "Some people who are try to talk in public can also actively take part in group chatting via social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "have",
                "correct": "has",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"popularity,\" which is singular, so for subject-verb agreement, the verb should be changed to \"has.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "with",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"contact\" does not take a preposition. It modifies the object directly. The preposition \"with\" is used in phrases where \"contact\" is used as a noun, but not when it is a verb."
            },
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "ot",
                "correct": "to",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"to.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 29009,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , the popularity of social media sites have made it more convenient for people ot update friends ' status and contact with friends more frequently .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , the popularity of social media sites has made it more convenient for people to update friends ' status and contact friends more frequently ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29049,
        "incorrect sentence": "On the other side , we need to rethink about the influences brought by the social media .",
        "correct sentence": "On the other side , we need to rethink about the influences brought by social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "s",
                "explanation": "A life belongs to the person who lives it, so the possessive is used when \"life\" is used in relation to a person or people. Therefore, \"people\" should be changed to the possessive \"people's.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "life",
                "correct": "lives",
                "explanation": "When referencing people's lives as a general concept, the plural \"lives\" should be used because it references multiple people. The singular \"life\" is used to refer to an individual life, with \"a life\" meaning any life and \"the life\" meaning one life. As an exception, a family or a couple might refer to \"our life (together),\" but generally the lives of different people will always be treated as plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29094,
        "incorrect sentence": "While social media brings convenience to people life , people are more and more willing to use social media for chatting instead of face-to-face chatting which has a time and place requirement .",
        "correct sentence": "While social media brings convenience to people s lives , people are more and more willing to use social media for chatting instead of face-to-face chatting which has a time and place requirement ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 31,
                "end": 32,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "The noun \"dependence\" always uses the preposition \"on\" or \"upon.\" It is a collocation, and it reflects the relationship of reliance. If A depends on B, then figuratively, A is supported by or resting on B."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29163,
        "incorrect sentence": "Secondly , people 's over-addition may avoidably , to some degree , exacerbate social alienation , and this kind of alienation causes some social media users to suffer from the over-dependence of virtual social networking .",
        "correct sentence": "Secondly , people 's over-addition may avoidably , to some degree , exacerbate social alienation , and this kind of alienation causes some social media users to suffer from the over-dependence on virtual social networking ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "When used as a noun, \"Internet\" almost always takes the definite article \"the.\" This may be an idiomatic use, or it may be because everyone who uses the Internet is connected to the same network, no matter where they are."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29175,
        "incorrect sentence": "More and more networking has been transferred to internet from real life .",
        "correct sentence": "More and more networking has been transferred to the internet from real life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "standard",
                "correct": "standards",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"a lot of\" means \"many,\" so it is only used with plural nouns. Therefore, \"the plural \"standards\" should be used."
            },
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "life",
                "correct": "lives",
                "explanation": "When referencing people's lives as a general concept, the plural \"lives\" should be used because it references multiple people. The singular \"life\" is used to refer to an individual life, with \"a life\" meaning any life and \"the life\" meaning one life. As an exception, a family or a couple might refer to \"our life (together),\" but generally the lives of different people will always be treated as plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29255,
        "incorrect sentence": "Thirdly , a lot of updating of luxury living standard as well as other show-off situations may make people 's daily life more and more grandiloquent , which is not an accurate social growing trend .",
        "correct sentence": "Thirdly , a lot of updating of luxury living standards as well as other show-off situations may make people 's daily lives more and more grandiloquent , which is not an accurate social growing trend ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "addition",
                "correct": "addiction",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"addiction,\" referring to a dependence on or a strong need or desire for something. The word \"addition,\" means the process of adding to something, or something that has been added to something else."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29277,
        "incorrect sentence": "Again , there is a trend for them to suffer from social media addition and their study and work may be greatly influenced .",
        "correct sentence": "Again , there is a trend for them to suffer from social media addiction and their study and work may be greatly influenced ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 20,
                "end": 21,
                "error": "be",
                "correct": "being",
                "explanation": "The verb \"avoid\" is used with nouns or gerunds, but \"be\" is the bare infinitive verb form. It should be changed to the gerund \"being,\" which can be the object of a verb."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29331,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , everytime when we use social media , we should take both sides into consideration and try to avoid be affected by the disadvantages .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , everytime when we use social media , we should take both sides into consideration and try to avoid being affected by the disadvantages ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29344,
        "incorrect sentence": "Only by absorbing the essence and discarding the dregs can we make better use of the social media .",
        "correct sentence": "Only by absorbing the essence and discarding the dregs can we make better use of social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "\"Biggest\" is the superlative form of big, and it means \"as big as possible.\" Combined with \"ever,\" it creates an idiomatic construction meaning the greatest of all time. The idiom always uses the definite article \"the,\" as \"the\" always refers to a specific thing."
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "big",
                "correct": "biggest",
                "explanation": "\"The biggest ever\" is a commonly used phrase, and it always uses the superlative form. Therefore the adjective \"big\" should be changed to the superlative \"biggest.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 29454,
        "incorrect sentence": "Telephone may be perceived as a big innovation created ever when the first time Graham Bell introduced it .",
        "correct sentence": "Telephone may be perceived as the biggest innovation created ever when the first time Graham Bell introduced it ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "When used as a noun, \"Internet\" almost always takes the definite article \"the.\" This may be an idiomatic use, or it may be because everyone who uses the Internet is connected to the same network, no matter where they are."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29500,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , since internet were known , telephone started to give way to social media sites .",
        "correct sentence": "However , since the internet were known , telephone started to give way to social media sites ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "relationship",
                "correct": "relationships",
                "explanation": "When referencing relationships as a general concept, the plural \"relationships\" should be used because it references multiple relationships between many different people. The singular \"relationship\" is used to refer to individual relationships, with \"a relationship\" meaning any relationship and \"the relationship\" meaning one relationship."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29534,
        "incorrect sentence": "Through Facebook , peope are able to maintain relationship with their old acquaintances .",
        "correct sentence": "Through Facebook , peope are able to maintain relationships with their old acquaintances ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "address",
                "correct": "addresses",
                "explanation": "When referencing addresses as a general concept, the plural \"addresses\" should be used because it refers to multiple people and therefore to multiple places to live. The singular \"address\" is used to refer to an individual address, with \"an address\" meaning any address and \"the address\" meaning one specific address."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29588,
        "incorrect sentence": "This benefit can not be obtained through telephone or mail because people 's particular and address may change from time to time while on Facebook , people can keep in contact with old friends just by using name and photo , for example , as the identifier .",
        "correct sentence": "This benefit can not be obtained through telephone or mail because people 's particular and addresses may change from time to time while on Facebook , people can keep in contact with old friends just by using name and photo , for example , as the identifier ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "add-on",
                "correct": "add-ons",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"and other\" is used with plural nouns because it indicates a list of examples. An example is something that proves a general rule, and a general rule cannot exist without multiple examples, so it tends to be plural. Also, this sentence lists multiple examples of entertainment add-ons, so it would be contradictory to end it with the singular \"add-on.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 29630,
        "incorrect sentence": "Facebook is like a combination of message and chatting service , personal profile , media of sharing , and other entertainment add-on ( i.e .",
        "correct sentence": "Facebook is like a combination of message and chatting service , personal profile , media of sharing , and other entertainment add-ons ( i.e ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount. The phrase \"more simplified function\" means a function that is more simplified than that of Facebook, but the exact level is unspecified. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "an",
                "explanation": "I would add additional edits. The plural noun \"media\" is used when referring to multiple things, so it is unusual for it to use the singular indefinite article \"an.\" I think the most natural correction is to change \"media\" to the singular \"medium,\" because this sentence is referring to a single social network in particular."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29705,
        "incorrect sentence": "Twitter , that has more simplified function compared to Facebook , gives more benefit if used as information sharing media .",
        "correct sentence": "Twitter , that has a more simplified function compared to Facebook , gives more benefit if used as an information sharing media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "allow",
                "correct": "allows",
                "explanation": "The subject is \"Twitter,\" a singular proper noun, so for subject-verb agreement's sake, the verb should be \"allows.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "update",
                "correct": "updates",
                "explanation": "The plural form \"update\" is used because it is assumed that Twitter users will make multiple updates over time, rather than just one. Also, the \"updates\" are made by \"users,\" which is plural, so even if each user makes only one update, it still constitutes multiple updates."
            },
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "is",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "The subject is \"updates,\" so the verb should be changed to \"are\" for subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29762,
        "incorrect sentence": "Twitter only allow users to give update that is limited to short sentences in order to spread the words fast , that only highlighted messages are delivered .",
        "correct sentence": "Twitter only allows users to give updates that are limited to short sentences in order to spread the words fast , that only highlighted messages are delivered ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "comes",
                "correct": "come",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"advantages,\" which is a plural noun, so for subject-verb agreement's sake, the verb should be \"come.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "application",
                "correct": "applications",
                "explanation": "When referencing applications as a general concept, the plural \"applications \" should be used because it references multiple applications for different purposes or services. The singular \"application\" is used to refer to an individual application, with \"an application\" meaning any application and \"the application\" meaning one specific application."
            },
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"on\" is used for apps on smartphones. This is a collocation, and it may reflect that smartphones transmit information over the air, on radio waves. In any case, \"in our smartphones\" refers to the internal physical structure of the smartphone devices."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29817,
        "incorrect sentence": "These advantages also comes in handy as most of these social media sites are accessible through mobile application in our smartphones .",
        "correct sentence": "These advantages also come in handy as most of these social media sites are accessible through mobile applications on our smartphones ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "Researches",
                "correct": "Research",
                "explanation": "\"Research\" is an uncountable noun, so it does not take the indefinite article \"a.\" To refer to one specific study, it is common to say \"according to a research study\" or \"according to research by [author/institution],\" but for research-based knowledge in general, the phrase is \"according to research.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "show",
                "correct": "shows",
                "explanation": "The subject is \"research,\" which is singular, so the verb should be changed to \"shows\" for subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29869,
        "incorrect sentence": "Researches show that face-to-face meeting frequency among people that are addicted to social media sites has been decreasing .",
        "correct sentence": "Research shows that face-to-face meeting frequency among people that are addicted to social media sites has been decreasing ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 25,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "picture",
                "correct": "pictures",
                "explanation": "When referencing pictures as a general concept, the plural \"pictures \" should be used because it references how the different family members are posting pictures to their own devices. The singular \"picture\" is used to refer to an individual picture, with \"a picture\" meaning any picture and \"the picture\" meaning one specific picture."
            },
            {
                "start": 26,
                "end": 27,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"in\" is used for information from print media, and \"on\" is used for information from the Internet. This is a collocation, and it may reflect how printed media is opened or unfolded before being read, so the information is inside it, while the Internet transmits information over the air, on radio waves."
            }
        ],
        "id": 29989,
        "incorrect sentence": "There is a situation where a family is having a dinner together in a restaurant but everybody is busy with their own gadget , posting picture in Facebook , updating status on Twitter , or even chatting with friends .",
        "correct sentence": "There is a situation where a family is having a dinner together in a restaurant but everybody is busy with their own gadget , posting pictures on Facebook , updating status on Twitter , or even chatting with friends ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "skill",
                "correct": "skills",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"interpersonal skills\" refers to the skills needed to get along with people well. Interpersonal skills are considered to require a variety of different abilities, such as kindness, listening, the ability to read social cues, etc. Therefore, \"skills\" is always plural in the phrase \"interpersonal skills.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "gadget",
                "correct": "gadgets",
                "explanation": "When referencing gadgets as a general concept, the plural \"gadgets\" should be used because it refers to multiple different types of devices. The singular \"gadget\" is used to refer to an individual person, with \"a gadget\" meaning any gadget and \"the gadget\" meaning one specific gadget."
            },
            {
                "start": 28,
                "end": 29,
                "error": "being",
                "correct": "beings",
                "explanation": "When referencing pictures as a general concept, the plural \"human beings\" should be used because it refers to multiple people. The singular \"human being\" is used to refer to an individual person, with \"a human being\" meaning any picture and \"the human being\" meaning one specific person (though this phrase is rarely used)."
            }
        ],
        "id": 30127,
        "incorrect sentence": "This is related to the interpersonal skill that is mentioned before , that can be decreasing qualitatively if we are used to facing gadget , not facing human being .",
        "correct sentence": "This is related to the interpersonal skills that is mentioned before , that can be decreasing qualitatively if we are used to facing gadgets , not facing human beings ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "part",
                "correct": "parts",
                "explanation": "The sentence argues that people are building a false image, and building something typically requires multiple elements. The plural \"parts\" should be used because it refers to different aspects of life that people would post about, like material success, work achievements, romantic life, etc. The singular \"part\" is used to refer to an individual aspect, with \"a part\" meaning any part\" and \"the part\" meaning one specific part."
            },
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount, or to express one out of multiple options. The phrase \"false image\" refers to something that could take many different forms depending on many factors. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 30154,
        "incorrect sentence": "Another disadvantage that affects other people is that by only showing selected part of our lives , we build \" false image \" in public .",
        "correct sentence": "Another disadvantage that affects other people is that by only showing selected parts of our lives , we build a \" false image \" in public ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "problem",
                "correct": "problems",
                "explanation": "When referencing problems as a general concept, the plural \"problems\" should be used because it refers to a variety of problems. The singular \"problem\" is used to refer to an individual problem, with \"a problem\" meaning any problem and \"the problem\" meaning one specific problem."
            }
        ],
        "id": 30185,
        "incorrect sentence": "Because of this , other people start to think that our lives are full of happiness with no problem at all .",
        "correct sentence": "Because of this , other people start to think that our lives are full of happiness with no problems at all ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"realize\" does not require a preposition, so \"of\" should be removed."
            }
        ],
        "id": 30261,
        "incorrect sentence": "There are a lot of disadvantages that people may not realize of .",
        "correct sentence": "There are a lot of disadvantages that people may not realize ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "technologies",
                "correct": "technology",
                "explanation": "The noun \"technology\" can be either countable or uncountable, depending on its meaning. It is countable when it refers to machinery, methods, etc., and uncountable when it refers to the use of science in industry or engineering, or to modern technology in general. In this case, it means modern technology in general, and uncountable nouns cannot be made singular or plural, so it cannot be pluralized."
            },
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "life",
                "correct": "lives",
                "explanation": "When referencing people's lives as a general concept, the plural \"lives\" should be used because it references multiple people. The singular \"life\" is used to refer to an individual life, with \"a life\" meaning any life and \"the life\" meaning one life. As an exception, a family or a couple might refer to \"our life (together),\" but generally the lives of different people will always be treated as plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 30322,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nowadays , the advancement of technologies improves the life of many people a lot .",
        "correct sentence": "Nowadays , the advancement of technology improves the lives of many people a lot ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "\"Most\" is used when referring to an unspecified group of people or things in general, while \"most of\" is used to talk about specific people or things of a certain group. In this sentence, the author is referring to the majority of countries in general, so it should be \"most countries.\" If they were referring to a specific set of countries, they could say \"In most of the countries in the Western hemisphere,\" for example."
            },
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"countries\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific groups of countries, instead of countries in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 30346,
        "incorrect sentence": "In most of the countries , there is an emergence of social media sites such as Facebook and Twitter .",
        "correct sentence": "In most countries , there is an emergence of social media sites such as Facebook and Twitter ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 26,
                "end": 27,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"society\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific societies, instead of modern society in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 30399,
        "incorrect sentence": "Many people think that the social media sites have benefits on the communication between people while some others argue that there are several negative impacts for the society .",
        "correct sentence": "Many people think that the social media sites have benefits on the communication between people while some others argue that there are several negative impacts for society ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"past decades\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only with the singular \"the past decade,\" meaning the last ten years, or with an adjective like \"the past few decades,\" which refer to specific decades, instead of past decades in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "are",
                "correct": "were",
                "explanation": "This sentence is referring to past events, as shown by the phrase \"In past decades.\" The present tense \"observes\" implies that social media sites are still not yet fully developed, so it should be the past tense \"were\" instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "connect",
                "correct": "connected",
                "explanation": "This sentence is referring to past events, as shown by the phrase \"In past decades.\" The present tense \"connect\" implies that phone calls and letters are still the default method of communication, so it should be the past tense \"connected\" instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "live",
                "correct": "lived",
                "explanation": "This sentence is referring to past events, as shown by the phrase \"In past decades.\" It's discussing how people in the past communicated with friends and relatives living far away. Because it is referring to the same time period, the present tense \"live\" should be changed to the past tense \"lived.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 30469,
        "incorrect sentence": "In the past decades , when the social media sites are not yet fully developed , people connect with others who live far away by using a phone , or even a letter .",
        "correct sentence": "In past decades , when the social media sites were not yet fully developed , people connected with others who lived far away by using a phone , or even a letter ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "those",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media sites\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. The phrase \"those social media sites\" would refer to a specific subset of social media sites, particularly one that had been referenced earlier in the text. Since this is a general statement, \"those\" should be removed."
            }
        ],
        "id": 30542,
        "incorrect sentence": "The appearance of those social media sites causes those problems to be solved .",
        "correct sentence": "The appearance of social media sites causes those problems to be solved ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"a phone\" refers to a physical, tangible object. When talking about the medium of communication, it is common to say \"the phone.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 30680,
        "incorrect sentence": "Some of them may have changed their phone numbers and addresses , and we are not able to find them through a phone or a letter .",
        "correct sentence": "Some of them may have changed their phone numbers and addresses , and we are not able to find them through phone or a letter ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "be",
                "explanation": "\"Able\" is an adjective that requires the verb \"to be\" to connect it to a noun, so the verb form \"be\" should be added."
            }
        ],
        "id": 30704,
        "incorrect sentence": "If phone and letter are the only way to contact them , we would probably not able to find them .",
        "correct sentence": "If phone and letter are the only way to contact them , we would probably not be able to find them ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "serves",
                "correct": "serve",
                "explanation": "The subject here is the plural \"social media sites.\" Therefore, for subject-verb agreement, the verb should be changed to \"serve.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 30742,
        "incorrect sentence": "Hence , the social media sites serves as a platform for the connection .",
        "correct sentence": "Hence , the social media sites serve as a platform for the connection ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"people\" is a general concept and can be widely assumed to be understood by the audience. For that reason, it's unusual to use the definite article \"the\" with \"people\" when referring to people in general, rather than singling out a specific group of people for comparison."
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"society\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific society, instead of modern society in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 30805,
        "incorrect sentence": "On the other hand , social media sites also bring some negative impacts for the people and the society .",
        "correct sentence": "On the other hand , social media sites also bring some negative impacts for people and society ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "rather",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "I partially agree with this correction because \"rather\" should be deleted, but the suggested correction does not fix the issue. The sentence is combining two constructions: \"would rather A than B\" and \"prefer A to B.\" Both are acceptable, but they cannot be combined.\nFirst, the phrase \"prefer using those sites to contact each other than talking to each other face to face\" is incorrect because the construction \"prefer A to B\" never uses \"than.\" It is always \"to\", so it should be changed to \"...to talking to each other face to face.\" However, this is wordy overall and it uses the preposition \"to\" three times, so it would be clearer to say \"prefer contacting each other via these sites to talking face-to-face.\" The hyphens in \"face-to-face\" also help with clarity. Alternately, to fix the errors while keeping \"rather A than B,\" which requires the use of \"would,\" it could be changed to \"would rather use those sites to contact each other than talk face-to-face.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 30861,
        "incorrect sentence": "The advancement of those social media sites makes people so rely on them that some of them rather prefer using those sites to contact each other than talking to each other face to face .",
        "correct sentence": "The advancement of those social media sites makes people so rely on them that some of them prefer using those sites to contact each other than talking to each other face to face ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 25,
                "error": "lost",
                "correct": "loss",
                "explanation": "The verb \"cause\" is always followed by a noun, and \"lost\" is the past participle. Therefore, it should be changed to the noun \"loss.\" "
            }
        ],
        "id": 30899,
        "incorrect sentence": "The usage of social media sites indirectly causes a reduction in face-to-face human communication in real life , which will in turn cause the lost of interpersonal skills for many people .",
        "correct sentence": "The usage of social media sites indirectly causes a reduction in face-to-face human communication in real life , which will in turn cause the loss of interpersonal skills for many people ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"interpersonal skills\" refers to the skills needed to get along with people well. Interpersonal skills are considered to require a variety of different abilities, such as kindness, listening, the ability to read social cues, etc. Therefore, \"skills\" is always plural in the phrase \"interpersonal skills.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 30911,
        "incorrect sentence": "As we all know , the interpersonal skills are essential for us to communicate with each other and to present our views and ideas .",
        "correct sentence": "As we all know , interpersonal skills are essential for us to communicate with each other and to present our views and ideas ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "lost",
                "correct": "loss",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"the X of interpersonal skills\" requires a noun because \"of\" indicates the object of an action. \"Lost\" is the past participle verb, and a verb cannot be the object of an action. Therefore, it should be changed to the noun \"loss.\" "
            },
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "for",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"the inability for\" is not commonly used. An ability or inability is a trait or characteristic, so the preposition \"of\" is used because it can indicate a quality that a person has. "
            }
        ],
        "id": 30947,
        "incorrect sentence": "The lost of interpersonal skills results in the inability for people to well present their ideas .",
        "correct sentence": "The loss of interpersonal skills results in the inability of people to well present their ideas ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "in-touch",
                "correct": "in touch",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"keep in touch\" is an idiom that refers to the state of being in contact with a person. It does not commonly use a hyphen and therefore the hyphen should be removed."
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"the latest news\" uses the superlative \"latest,\" and a superlative almost always uses the definite article \"the.\" The definite article \"the\" always refers to a specific thing, so it makes sense with the superlative, which indicates the absolute highest degree of something. Also, even without the superlative, the noun \"the news\" is an idiom meaning current world events overall. In this context, the article is never omitted or changed."
            }
        ],
        "id": 31028,
        "incorrect sentence": "With the advancement of technology in recent years , the need to keep in-touch with people and latest news has become a tremendous demand .",
        "correct sentence": "With the advancement of technology in recent years , the need to keep in touch with people and the latest news has become a tremendous demand ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 30,
                "end": 31,
                "error": "life",
                "correct": "lives",
                "explanation": "When referencing people's lives as a general concept, the plural \"lives\" should be used because it references multiple people. The singular \"life\" is used to refer to an individual life, with \"a life\" meaning any life and \"the life\" meaning one life. As an exception, a family or a couple might refer to \"our life (together),\" but generally the lives of different people will always be treated as plural."
            },
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The noun \"billion\" cannot be used on its own. It needs to be pluralized or to be preceded by a number or the indefinite article \"a,\" in which case it means \"one billion.\" The definite article \"the billion\" is used only in adjective phrases referring to a specific group of one billion things or people, which is rarely used. The phrase \"a billion\" should be used in most general contexts."
            }
        ],
        "id": 31100,
        "incorrect sentence": "With an increasing users of more than billion users from all over the world , social media sites have demonstrated clearly its success in playing an important part of our life .",
        "correct sentence": "With an increasing users of more than a billion users from all over the world , social media sites have demonstrated clearly its success in playing an important part of lives life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "needs",
                "correct": "need",
                "explanation": "I disagree with this correction. Neither \"all users' needs are\" nor \"all users' need is\" is commonly used. I think that the intended meaning was not the plural possessive \"users'\" but \"all users need is,\" which is easy to mishear as \"all users' needs.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "are",
                "correct": "is",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"all users need\" means everything that users need. The pronoun \"all\" is singular, so the verb that follows should be changed to \"is\" for subject-verb agreement."
            },
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The apostrophe should be removed to change the plural possessive \"users'\" to the plural noun \"users.\" The phrase \"All users' needs\" is not commonly used, but \"all users need\" is common and easy to understand. The two phrases sound very similar, so it's possible that the author has misheard this phrase."
            }
        ],
        "id": 31188,
        "incorrect sentence": "All users ' needs are an internet connection and an email account so that everyone can have a Facebook or Twitter ID to start their journey in social media life .",
        "correct sentence": "All users needs need is internet connection and an email account so that everyone can have a Facebook or Twitter ID to start their journey in social media life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "more",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The comparative form of the adjective \"easy\" is \"easier.\" As a rule, the comparative form either ends in \"-er\" or \"-ier\" or is made up of \"more\" plus the adjective. It is grammatically incorrect to use both the ending and the adjective."
            }
        ],
        "id": 31220,
        "incorrect sentence": "Finding old friends through Facebook , for example , is more easier than asking people around in real life .",
        "correct sentence": "Finding old friends through Facebook , for example , is easier than asking people around in real life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"the latest news\" uses the superlative \"latest,\" and a superlative almost always uses the definite article \"the.\" The definite article \"the\" always refers to a specific thing, so it makes sense with the superlative, which indicates the absolute highest degree of something. Also, even without the superlative, the noun \"the news\" is an idiom meaning current world events overall. In this context, the article is never omitted or changed."
            }
        ],
        "id": 31264,
        "incorrect sentence": "Thirdly , social media sites keep us up-to-date on latest news and updates from almost everywhere in the world , all with a click away on the refresh button .",
        "correct sentence": "Thirdly , social media sites keep us up-to-date on the latest news and updates from almost everywhere in the world , all with a click away on the refresh button ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "through",
                "correct": "by",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"through\" is used for a means of achieving a certain outcome, but typically with nouns. \"Allowing\" is a gerund, so \"by\" is used instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 31281,
        "incorrect sentence": "Last but not least , social media sites also link people together through allowing us to create our own groups , pages or sites to share our hobbies , interests and studies in particular subjects .",
        "correct sentence": "Last but not least , social media sites also link people together by allowing us to create our own groups , pages or sites to share our hobbies , interests and studies in particular subjects ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The noun \"majority\" is used with the definite article \"the\" when it means a number that is greater than half of a total and also in figurative uses where it means most of something. In the context of voting, \"majority\" can use the indefinite article \"a\" when it means the portion of votes that is more than half of the total number in a winning vote. But here, it is used figuratively to mean \"most of our time,\" so it takes the article \"the.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 31379,
        "incorrect sentence": "We spend majority of our time on sites like Facebook , Twitter and it affects our daily work productivity and performance .",
        "correct sentence": "We spend the majority of our time on sites like Facebook , Twitter and it affects our daily work productivity and performance ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" differentiates the \"corporate world\" from other worlds, like the fashion world, the music world, the academic world, etc. The definite article is used to refer to a specific thing, so it implies that this world is distinct from other ones."
            },
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "network",
                "correct": "networks",
                "explanation": "When referencing social media networks as a general concept, the plural \"networks\" should be used because it references to most or all networks. An employer blocking websites due to productivity concerns will likely block multiple sites, not just one, which is implied by the singular \"network.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "spend",
                "correct": "spending",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"prevent from\" is a phrasal verb, and the verb is always changed to the gerund after the preposition. Therefore, \"spend\" should be changed to \"spending.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 31437,
        "incorrect sentence": "In corporate world , employers often block social media network to prevent employees to spend their office time on their personal leisure than concentrating on their work .",
        "correct sentence": "In the corporate world , employers often block social media networks to prevent employees to spending their office time on their personal leisure than concentrating on their work ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "I agree that an edit is needed, but I don't agree with this correction. The phrase \"bring in\" is used to mean bringing something to the interior of a building or an organization. When using the verb \"bring\" to refer to an impact, it is common to say \"bring about,\" so \"in\" should be replaced with \"about.\" "
            },
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"in the long term\" is an idiom, and the article does not change. It is similar to \"in the future,\" which almost always uses the definite article. It is common to treat the future as one single path forward."
            },
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "network",
                "correct": "networks",
                "explanation": "When referencing social media networks as a general concept, the plural \"networks\" should be used because it refers to most or all networks. The singular \"network\" is used to refer to an individual network, with \"a network\" meaning any network and \"the network\" meaning one network."
            }
        ],
        "id": 31489,
        "incorrect sentence": "Using text-messaging language as an informal way of communicating on social media network also brings in a bad impact for us in a long term .",
        "correct sentence": "Using text-messaging language as an informal way of communicating on social media networks also brings a bad impact for us in the long term ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "lesser",
                "correct": "less",
                "explanation": "The adjective \"lesser\" means smaller in size, while \"less\" is the comparative form of \"little,\" so it means smaller in amount or number. The subject here is \"time,\" which does not have a size, so \"lesser\" should be changed to \"less.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 31513,
        "incorrect sentence": "The more time we spend on these sites , the lesser time we spend on face-to-face interacting with one another .",
        "correct sentence": "The more time we spend on these sites , the less time we spend on face-to-face interacting with one another ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" is used when referring to a specific thing. This sentence is referring to the time spent on a specific action, not using screens. The definite article conveys that the time in question was spent on this specific action, not on others."
            }
        ],
        "id": 31553,
        "incorrect sentence": "Hence it lessens valuable interaction between human and time we spend away from the computer screen or mobile phone .",
        "correct sentence": "Hence it lessens valuable interaction between human and the time we spend away from the computer screen or mobile phone ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "others",
                "correct": "other",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"each other\" is an idiom and it is never pluralized. The word \"other\" can be pluralized, but \"others\" means other people or everyone except the person or people affected, not one another."
            },
            {
                "start": 49,
                "end": 50,
                "error": "aspect",
                "correct": "role",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"play a role\" is an idiom, and it cannot be modified. The phrase \"play an aspect\" does not exist and would not be understood, so \"aspect\" should be changed to \"role.\" Also, the phrase \"even a more important\" is grammatically incorrect. The word order is always \"even more important,\" and \"even\" begins with a vowel, so \"a\" should be changed to \"an.\" Overall, the phrase should be fixed to say \"play an even more important role.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 31764,
        "incorrect sentence": "With current booming technology , it is agreeable that people become more technology-savvy and they want to spend more time interacting with each others through social media sites , however , it does not mean that we should neglect face-to-face human interaction as it plays even a more important aspect in our life .",
        "correct sentence": "With current booming technology , it is agreeable that people become more technology-savvy and they want to spend more time interacting with each other through social media sites , however , it does not mean that we should neglect face-to-face human interaction as it plays even a more important role in our life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 34,
                "end": 35,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "with",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"have problems\" is connected to its object by a preposition. The preposition \"with\" is used because it can mean in relation to. \"In\" is not commonly used with this phrase so it should be changed."
            }
        ],
        "id": 31808,
        "incorrect sentence": "As more and more social websites such as Twitter , Facebook and Weibo which have become ubiquitous , seamless and imperative in our life , people may worry about the young generation having problems in face-to-face communication skills .",
        "correct sentence": "As more and more social websites such as Twitter , Facebook and Weibo which have become ubiquitous , seamless and imperative in our life , people may worry about the young generation having problems with face-to-face communication skills ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "for",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"for\" is needed here because it indicates that payment is remitted in exchange for an object. With no preposition, the phrase \"paying expensive airplane tickets\" means that the ticket receives the payment, not that it is paid for."
            }
        ],
        "id": 31853,
        "incorrect sentence": "Social media enables us to explore the world far far away without paying expensive airplane tickets and sparing a one-week holiday .",
        "correct sentence": "Social media enables us to explore the world far far away without paying for expensive airplane tickets and sparing a one-week holiday ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 46,
                "end": 47,
                "error": "status",
                "correct": "statuses",
                "explanation": "The plural form \"status\" is used because it is assumed that users will make multiple updates over time, rather than just one. Also, the status updates are made by \"friends,\" which is plural, so even if each friend makes only one status update, it still constitutes multiple statuses."
            }
        ],
        "id": 31886,
        "incorrect sentence": "With a small smart phone or a computer at school , at work or at home , we can easily make friends worldwide with a 'click ' and get to know about their life through having conversations with them , reading their blogs , photos and status .",
        "correct sentence": "With a small smart phone or a computer at school , at work or at home , we can easily make friends worldwide with a 'click ' and get to know about their life through having conversations with them , reading their blogs , photos and statuses ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "is",
                "correct": "was",
                "explanation": "The present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often, while the past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past. The present tense \"is\" implies that the idea of seeking democracy is continuously being passed from Egypt to Zambia, so it should be the past tense \"was\" instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 32139,
        "incorrect sentence": "The idea of searching for democracy is passed from Egyptians to people in Zambia quickly through the use of social media .",
        "correct sentence": "The idea of searching for democracy was passed from Egyptians to people in Zambia quickly through the use of social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" refers to specific things, so \"the 2012 general election in Singapore\" is distinguished from elections held at different times and places. Also, the phrase \"general election is Singapore\" is a mistake, so the verb \"is\" should be changed to the preposition \"in.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 32206,
        "incorrect sentence": "For example , in 2012 general election is Singapore , Dr Tan Chee Keong made use of facebook to spread his campaign videos to the public .",
        "correct sentence": "For example , in the 2012 general election is Singapore , Dr Tan Chee Keong made use of facebook to spread his campaign videos to the public ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "Social",
                "correct": "social",
                "explanation": "In English, we only capitalizes proper nouns and the first word of a sentence. Because \"social\" is a common noun and it appears mid-sentence, it should not be capitalized."
            }
        ],
        "id": 32245,
        "incorrect sentence": "Intensive use of Social media does reduce the time people spend in face-to-face communication .",
        "correct sentence": "Intensive use of social media does reduce the time people spend in face-to-face communication ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"communication\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific instances of communication, instead of the concept in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 32399,
        "incorrect sentence": "Thank to those social media , the communication among people all over the world is possible and can be done with ease .",
        "correct sentence": "Thank to those social media , communication among people all over the world is possible and can be done with ease ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"despite\" does not use a preposition. The similar-sounding phrase \"in spite of\" always uses \"of,\" because \"spite\" is a noun, but the phrase \"despite of\" is not used."
            }
        ],
        "id": 32434,
        "incorrect sentence": "Apart from the ease of communication despite of the distance , many other advantages such as knowledge sharing and trades can be done through social media as well .",
        "correct sentence": "Apart from the ease of communication despite the distance , many other advantages such as knowledge sharing and trades can be done through social media as well ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount. The phrase \"a reduction in face-to-face human contact\" means a reduction of some amount, but the exact level is unknown. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "issue",
                "correct": "issues",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"privacy issues\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific instances of privacy issues, instead of such issues in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 32495,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nevertheless , with those advantages , some disadvantages may appear such as reduction in face-to-face human contact which affects interpersonal skills , privacy issue , as well as some frauds that can be done through social media .",
        "correct sentence": "Nevertheless , with those advantages , some disadvantages may appear such as a reduction in face-to-face human contact which affects interpersonal skills , privacy issues , as well as some frauds that can be done through social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 48,
                "end": 49,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The writer is mixing up two similar phrases \"despite\" and \"in spite of.\" These phrases cannot be used together. \"In spite of\" always includes the preposition \"of,\" while \"despite\" never does. "
            }
        ],
        "id": 32564,
        "incorrect sentence": "Through those sites we are able to talk to them , to know what their activities are and who their friends are , etc. From the surface point of view it is no doubt that these sites help us to have a better relationship with our relatives despite of the distance .",
        "correct sentence": "Through those sites we are able to talk to them , to know what their activities are and who their friends are , etc. From the surface point of view it is no doubt that these sites help us to have a better relationship with our relatives despite the distance ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 41,
                "end": 42,
                "error": "follower",
                "correct": "followers",
                "explanation": "When referencing followers as a general concept, the plural \"followers\" should be used because it references multiple people. The singular \"follower\" is used to refer to an individual follower, with \"a follower\" meaning any follower and \"the follower\" meaning one specific follower."
            }
        ],
        "id": 32628,
        "incorrect sentence": "The sharing of information can be done faster through social media as well , that is why nowadays many news publishers make their own social media account , for example Channel News Asia has a twitter account and will update its follower with headline news .",
        "correct sentence": "The sharing of information can be done faster through social media as well , that is why nowadays many news publishers make their own social media account , for example Channel News Asia has a twitter account and will update its followers with headline news ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "become",
                "correct": "be",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"become ourselves\" does not exist, but \"be oneself\" is an idiomatic expression meaning to behave in a manner that is true to your own internal character. The verb cannot be changed, so \"become\" should be changed to \"be.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 32788,
        "incorrect sentence": "When we write or communicate virtually , we can hide our through feelings and many not become ourselves since we do not want the other party to judge us .",
        "correct sentence": "When we write or communicate virtually , we can hide our through feelings and many not be ourselves since we do not want the other party to judge us ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "skill",
                "correct": "skills",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"interpersonal skills\" refers to the skills needed to get along with people well. Interpersonal skills are considered to require a variety of different abilities, such as kindness, listening, the ability to read social cues, etc. Therefore, \"skills\" is always plural in the phrase \"interpersonal skills.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "trusts",
                "correct": "trust",
                "explanation": "The noun \"trust\" can be either countable or uncountable, depending on its meaning. It is countable when referring to financial trusts, but uncountable when it refers to faith in someone or something. Uncountable nouns cannot be made plural, so it should be \"trust.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "Because the phrase \"interpersonal skills\" is plural, it cannot use the indefinite article \"a,\" which is singular."
            }
        ],
        "id": 32869,
        "incorrect sentence": "This will lead to a bad inter-personal skill as well as a problem of trusts .",
        "correct sentence": "This will lead to bad inter-personal skill skills well as a problem of trusts trust"
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "\"On\" is used for information from social media. This may be an idiom, or it may be because the Internet transmits information over the air, on radio waves."
            }
        ],
        "id": 32917,
        "incorrect sentence": "Some people fake their identities in media sites so that they can know more people or some may even cheat others .",
        "correct sentence": "Some people fake their identities on media sites so that they can know more people or some may even cheat others ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "issue",
                "correct": "issues",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"privacy issues\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific instances of privacy issues, instead of such issues in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "has",
                "correct": "have",
                "explanation": "Because the subject here is the plural \"issues,\" the verb form \"have\" should be used for subject-verb agreement."
            },
            {
                "start": 30,
                "end": 31,
                "error": "at",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "The idiom \"in the first place\" always uses the preposition \"in.\" The phrase \"at the first place\" means a literal place, the first of multiple locations in a series. "
            }
        ],
        "id": 32974,
        "incorrect sentence": "In addition , privacy issue has become more popular nowadays since some people do not realize that they may actually share some information that they are not willing to share at the first place .",
        "correct sentence": "In addition , privacy issues have become more popular nowadays since some people do not realize that they may actually share some information that they are not willing to share in the first place ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"in\" is used for cars, while \"on\" is used for means of public transport. This may be idiomatic, or it may be because trains were an early means of public transport, and they run on a track."
            },
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The noun phrase \"public transport\" does not normally use an article. Either the indefinite or the definite article can be used when referring to specific means of public transport, such as \"on the train\" or \"on a bus,\" but no article is used when referring to public transport as a general concept."
            }
        ],
        "id": 33118,
        "incorrect sentence": "It is a common scene that almost everyone in a public transport is watching at phone or wearing a pair ear piece in this modern society today .",
        "correct sentence": "It is a common scene that almost everyone on public transport is watching at phone or wearing a pair ear piece in this modern society today ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "revolution",
                "correct": "evolution",
                "explanation": "\"Revolution\" means dramatic change, or political overthrow. \"Evolution\" means the process by which organisms develop. This sentence is talking about the development of the human race, so it should be changed to \"evolution.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 33147,
        "incorrect sentence": "Some say that it is a necessary step for human revolution .",
        "correct sentence": "Some say that it is a necessary step for human evolution ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "communicating",
                "correct": "communication",
                "explanation": "\"Communication skills\" is a commonly used phrase, and \"communicating skills\" is not. \"Communication\" is a noun and \"communicating\" is a gerund, and if a verb has both forms, the noun form is used when talking about skills. The verb \"to write,\" for example, has only the gerund \"writing,\" so it is common to say \"writing skills,\" but because \"communicate\" has a noun form too, \"communicating skills\" is not used."
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "is",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "Because the subject of this verb is the plural \"skills,\" the verb form should be changed to \"are\" for subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 33226,
        "incorrect sentence": "It also brings many negative effects such as loss of face-to-face communicating skills which is important in their working place .",
        "correct sentence": "It also brings many negative effects such as loss of face-to-face communication skills which are important in their working place ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "about",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"discuss\" does not take the preposition \"about.\" While \"about\" is used with similar verbs like \"tell\" or \"talk,\" in the case of \"discuss,\" the object simply comes directly after, with no need for a preposition."
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "life",
                "correct": "lives",
                "explanation": "When referencing people's lives as a general concept, the plural \"lives\" should be used because it references multiple people. The singular \"life\" is used to refer to an individual life, with \"a life\" meaning any life and \"the life\" meaning one specific life. As an exception, a family or a couple might refer to \"our life (together),\" but generally the lives of different people will always be treated as plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 33245,
        "incorrect sentence": "This essay will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of using social media in our daily life .",
        "correct sentence": "This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using social media in our daily lives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "site",
                "correct": "sites",
                "explanation": "When referencing social media sites as a general concept, the plural \"sites\" should be used because it references many or all such sites. The singular \"site\" is used to refer to an individual site, with \"a site\" meaning any site and \"the site\" meaning one specific site."
            }
        ],
        "id": 33343,
        "incorrect sentence": "With the help of social media site , people are able to upload their new discoveries and funny scene on it and they can be updated the new information of their friends .",
        "correct sentence": "With the help of social media sites , people are able to upload their new discoveries and funny scene on it and they can be updated the new information of their friends ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "study",
                "correct": "studying",
                "explanation": "This is using the present continuous tense, which is made up of the verb \"to be\" plus a gerund. It means that something is currently occurring or in progress. This construction cannot use the bare infinitive \"study,\" so it should be changed to \"studying.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The adverb \"overseas\" already implies the idea of being in a foreign country or location, as \"over seas\" means \"across the sea.\" It does not need a preposition."
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "friend",
                "correct": "friends",
                "explanation": "When referencing friendships as a general concept, the plural \"friends\" should be used because it references multiple people. The singular \"friend\" is used to refer to an individual friend, with \"a friend\" meaning any friend and \"the friend\" meaning one specific friend."
            }
        ],
        "id": 33413,
        "incorrect sentence": "Personally I am study in oversea , busy study life keeps me away from contact my old friend .",
        "correct sentence": "Personally I am studying oversea , busy study life keeps me away from contact my old friends ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "Malaysian",
                "correct": "Malaysians",
                "explanation": "The word \"many\" is only used with plural nouns. \"Malaysian\" is singular, so it should be changed to the plural \"Malaysians\" to reflect that this statement refers to multiple people."
            }
        ],
        "id": 33478,
        "incorrect sentence": "In Singapore , many Malaysian cross the sea to work here .",
        "correct sentence": "In Singapore , many Malaysians cross the sea to work here ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "with",
                "correct": "from",
                "explanation": "The verb \"separate\" generally uses the preposition \"from.\" This is because \"from\" can imply a separation or removal, but \"with\" implies togetherness, alignment, or synchronicity. This does not fit the idea of separation, so it should be changed to \"from.\"\nAlso, this is not addressed in the correction, but \"separate\" should be changed to \"are separated.\" The adjective \"separated\" is used to refer to the state of two people or things being located far apart from each other. The verb \"separate\" with no object means choosing to stop being together."
            }
        ],
        "id": 33501,
        "incorrect sentence": "Many of them are busy in work and separate with their children .",
        "correct sentence": "Many of them are busy in work and separate from their children ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "Manager",
                "correct": "manager",
                "explanation": "English only capitalizes proper nouns and the first word of a sentence. \"Manager\" can be capitalized in a title like \"Department Manager,\" but in this sentence, it is a common noun, so it should not be capitalized."
            }
        ],
        "id": 33548,
        "incorrect sentence": "After my Manager taught her mother how to use Facebook , she was able to upload video clips of her grandchild .",
        "correct sentence": "After my manager taught her mother how to use Facebook , she was able to upload video clips of her grandchild ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"one of\" implies that there are multiple potential items in a group, so what comes after it must be plural. It would be acceptable to say either \"one useful tool,\" meaning a single useful tool, or \"one of the useful tools,\" which means that there are multiple tools that are useful, and this is one. However, these phrases cannot be mixed."
            }
        ],
        "id": 33718,
        "incorrect sentence": "Thus I believe that social media sites are one of useful tool to help people known each other better .",
        "correct sentence": "Thus I believe that social media sites are one useful tool to help people known each other better ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "I partially agree with this question. The phrase \"bring in\" is used to mean bringing something to the interior of a building or an organization. The word \"bring\" alone does not indicate an impact. When using \"bring\" to refer to an impact, it is correct to say \"bring about.\" Also, the verb form \"bring in\" is acceptable if the subject is the singular \"it,\" but \"it\" is representing \"social media site,\" which should be plural because this sentence is a general statement referring to most or all social media sites. Therefore, the subject should be changed to \"social media sites\" and the pronoun should be changed to the plural pronoun \"they,\" and the second clause should read \"they also bring about some negative effects on our daily lives.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 20,
                "end": 21,
                "error": "life",
                "correct": "lives",
                "explanation": "When referencing people's lives as a general concept, the plural \"lives\" should be used because it references multiple people. The singular \"life\" is used to refer to an individual life, with \"a life\" meaning any life and \"the life\" meaning one life. As an exception, a family or a couple might refer to \"our life (together),\" but generally the lives of different people will always be treated as plural."
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "effect",
                "correct": "effects",
                "explanation": "The noun \"effect\" requires either pluralization or an article. It refers to a result of something, so it is often plural because it is assumed that any action can cause multiple results. Unless it is known that there is only one singular effect, usually it is used in the plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 33787,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , social media site is a double-sided sword , it also bring in some negative effect on our daily life .",
        "correct sentence": "However , social media site is a double-sided sword , it also bring some negative effects on our daily lives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "disadvantage",
                "correct": "disadvantages",
                "explanation": "The noun \"disadvantage\" requires either pluralization or an article. It refers to a result of something, so it is often plural because it is assumed that any action can cause multiple results. Unless it is known that there is only one singular disadvantage, usually it is used in the plural. Also, the phrase \"one of\" implies that there are multiple potential members of a group, so what comes after it must be plural."
            },
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "I partially agree with the correction because \"the\" should be deleted, but that does not fix the issue. The phrase \"lose interest in\" is a commonly used expression, and it never uses an article. The first word is always a verb form, and \"loss\" is a noun, so it should be changed to \"lose.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "of",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"lose interest in\" is a commonly used expression, and it always uses the article \"in.\" The phrase \"lose interest of\" is incorrect, and it would mean that the \"interest\" belongs to face-to-face communication or is an aspect of it."
            }
        ],
        "id": 33850,
        "incorrect sentence": "One of the disadvantage that many people concerns is that people loss the interest of face-to-face communication .",
        "correct sentence": "One of the disadvantages that many people concerns is that people loss interest in face-to-face communication ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "relationship",
                "correct": "relationships",
                "explanation": "When referencing relationships as a general concept, the plural \"relationships\" should be used because it references multiple relationships between many different people. The singular \"relationship\" is used to refer to an individual relationship, with \"a relationship\" meaning any relationship and \"the relationship\" meaning one relationship."
            },
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media sites\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 33926,
        "incorrect sentence": "Although not everyone is good at public relationship even without the existence of the social media sites , we can not deny that it do affect some people in their ability of interpersonal skills .",
        "correct sentence": "Although not everyone is good at public relationships even without the existence of social media sites , we can not deny that it do affect some people in their ability of interpersonal skills ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"way of (gerund)\" is a commonly used phrase that refers to a means of doing something, so \"ways of communicating\" means methods of communication. The expression \"ways in communicating\" is not used, and the phrase \"in communicating,\" which is not commonly used, refers to something that happens within the process of communication."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34016,
        "incorrect sentence": "The use of social media has largely influenced our ways in communicating with one another .",
        "correct sentence": "The use of social media has largely influenced our ways of communicating with one another ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "became",
                "correct": "become",
                "explanation": "The past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past, while the present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often. The past tense \"became\" implies that people no longer become friends today, so it should be the present tense \"became\" instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34027,
        "incorrect sentence": "Online friends became real life friends and real life friends communicate with one another online .",
        "correct sentence": "Online friends become real life friends and real life friends communicate with one another online ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "friendship",
                "correct": "friendships",
                "explanation": "When referencing friendship as a general concept, the plural \"friendships\" should be used because it references multiple relationships between many different people. The singular \"friendship\" is used to refer to an individual friendship, with \"a friendship\" meaning any friendship and \"the friendship\" meaning one friendship."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34081,
        "incorrect sentence": "We share ideas , stories and forge friendship based on mutual respect .",
        "correct sentence": "We share ideas , stories and forge friendships based on mutual respect ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "for",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrasal verb \"seek out\" means to search for something, but the phrase \"seek out for\" is not used. Having an additional preposition is redundant, so it should be deleted."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34185,
        "incorrect sentence": "There is an element of seeking out for attention rather than expressing one 's true opinion on social networks .",
        "correct sentence": "There is an element of seeking out attention rather than expressing one 's true opinion on social networks ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"caring\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific instance or example of caring, instead of to real life in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34284,
        "incorrect sentence": "In real life , establishing friendship requires the all-rounded understanding in one another and the caring for one another .",
        "correct sentence": "In real life , establishing friendship requires the all-rounded understanding in one another and caring for one another ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "with",
                "correct": "by",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"understand (something) with\" refers to a tool or method used in order to understand something, while \"understand (something) by\" refers to the source or process of understanding. \"Stalking\" is an action/process, so it is more appropriate to say \"by\" here."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34329,
        "incorrect sentence": "One can not truly understand a person with only stalking his/her facebook page where he/she carefully chooses what to present .",
        "correct sentence": "One can not truly understand a person by only stalking his/her facebook page where he/she carefully chooses what to present ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "by",
                "correct": "to",
                "explanation": "The object of the verb \"show\" either uses the preposition \"to\" or no preposition, but it does not use \"by.\" The preposition \"to\" indicates flow in the direction of the object, and \"by\" is used to indicate a means by which something is achieved. The phrase \"show by\" refers to the manner in which something is shown, such as \"by texting some =) signs,\" but not the person to whom something is shown."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34349,
        "incorrect sentence": "One can not truly show their emotions by another by texting some = ) signs .",
        "correct sentence": "One can not truly show their emotions to another by texting some = ) signs ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 25,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "status",
                "correct": "statuses",
                "explanation": "The plural form \"status\" is used because it is assumed that users will make multiple updates over time, rather than just one. Also, status updates are made by \"friends,\" which is plural, so even if each friend makes only one status update, it still constitutes multiple statuses."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34378,
        "incorrect sentence": "With my social network account , I seldom read newspapers or go to news websites anymore ; because I can easily read them from the status of my friends .",
        "correct sentence": "With my social network account , I seldom read newspapers or go to news websites anymore ; because I can easily read them from the statuses of my friends ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "on",
                "correct": "in",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"taste in\" is a collocation, and it always uses the preposition \"in,\" because \"in\" can indicate a certain sphere or area. The phrase \"taste on,\" which does not exist, would indicate that people's taste was on the surface of something."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34435,
        "incorrect sentence": "If some of my friends have horrible taste on clothes and he/she posts them often , I can simply block him/her off .",
        "correct sentence": "If some of my friends have horrible taste in clothes and he/she posts them often , I can simply block him/her off ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "got",
                "correct": "gets",
                "explanation": "The subject here is the singular \"information,\" so for subject-verb agreement's sake, the verb form should be \"gets.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 34447,
        "incorrect sentence": "Information got circulated .",
        "correct sentence": "Information gets circulated ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "get",
                "correct": "gets",
                "explanation": "The subject here is the singular \"information,\" so for subject-verb agreement's sake, the verb form should be \"gets.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 34467,
        "incorrect sentence": "The most popular information get circulated the most so I can seldom miss it .",
        "correct sentence": "The most popular information gets circulated the most so I can seldom miss it ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "network",
                "correct": "networks",
                "explanation": "When referencing social networks as a general concept, the plural \"networks\" should be used because it references most or all social networks. The singular \"network\" is used to refer to an individual network, with \"a network\" meaning any network and \"the network\" meaning one specific network."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34488,
        "incorrect sentence": "Social network plays a role in providing and also filtering information .",
        "correct sentence": "Social networks plays a role in providing and also filtering information ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "medias",
                "correct": "media",
                "explanation": "The noun \"media\" is collective, so it cannot be pluralized."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34518,
        "incorrect sentence": "Personally I feel more at ease on social medias .",
        "correct sentence": "Personally I feel more at ease on social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "interest",
                "correct": "interests",
                "explanation": "When referencing people's interests as a general concept, the plural \"interests \" should be used because it refers to multiple interests, and it is assumed that people have more than one interest. The singular \"interest\" is used to refer to an individual interest, with \"an interest\" meaning any interest and \"the interest\" meaning one specific interest."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34593,
        "incorrect sentence": "I also discover some of my friends ' interest which I find common with myself so that talking to one another is much more about life , study , friends , etc .",
        "correct sentence": "I also discover some of my friends ' interests which I find common with myself so that talking to one another is much more about life , study , friends , etc ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "skill",
                "correct": "skills",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"interpersonal skills\" refers to the skills needed to get along with people well. Interpersonal skills are considered to require a variety of different abilities, such as kindness, listening, the ability to read social cues, etc. Therefore, \"skills\" is always plural in the phrase \"interpersonal skills.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "is",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "The subject here is the plural \"skills,\" so for subject-verb agreement's sake, the verb form should be \"are.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 34651,
        "incorrect sentence": "In this case , interpersonal skill is not as important because our goal is not to impress somebody , but to get the information that we are both interested in .",
        "correct sentence": "In this case , interpersonal skills are not as important because our goal is not to impress somebody , but to get the information that we are both interested in ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media sites\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34717,
        "incorrect sentence": "People that living in the modern world really can not live without the social media sites like Twitter and Facebook .",
        "correct sentence": "People that living in the modern world really can not live without social media sites like Twitter and Facebook ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" refers to one specific account, especially one that was mentioned earlier in the text. The subject is plural, so this means that the one specific account is shared by all students and young adults. For large groups of people, it is acceptable to say either \"Facebook or Twitter accounts\" or \"a Facebook or Twitter account\" There is a slight difference: the plural sounds like a general statement about all students and young adults, while the indefinite article \"a\" has the nuance of one account per person."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34730,
        "incorrect sentence": "Almost all students and young adults possess the Facebook or Twitter account .",
        "correct sentence": "Almost all students and young adults possess a Facebook or Twitter account ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media sites\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific site, instead of such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34795,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , it seems that , especially for some those , sharing some parts of their lives such as videos and photos on the social media sites become really necessary .",
        "correct sentence": "However , it seems that , especially for some those , sharing some parts of their lives such as videos and photos on social media sites become really necessary ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "This is a common phrase. When it is singular, there is always an article. It is usually \"there is a need,\" but sometimes \"there is the need,\" referring to a specific need that has already been mentioned in the text or that is being compared to another need. There is no article in the plural \"there are needs,\" but otherwise an article is always used."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34835,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , there is need to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , there is a need to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "with",
                "explanation": "The verb \"provides\" is a ditransitive verb, which means that it can take two objects: an indirect object and a direct object. The direct object is the thing that is provided, and the indirect object is the party that receives the direct object. In this case, the object \"a way of talking\" is provided to the direct object \"people.\" When \"provides\" takes two objects, the preposition \"with\" marks the direct object. The preposition is necessary to separate the direct and indirect object and to prevent confusion, so it should be added."
            }
        ],
        "id": 34964,
        "incorrect sentence": "Social media provides people a way of talking and chatting which can never be considered as a way of communication .",
        "correct sentence": "Social media provides people with a way of talking and chatting which can never be considered as a way of communication ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "length",
                "correct": "lengths",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"go to great lengths\" is an idiom and cannot be altered. It is always \"lengths,\" never \"length.\" "
            },
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "shorter",
                "correct": "short",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"as short as they can\" means \"the shortest possible.\" Because it already contains the nuance of the superlative \"shortest,\" it is redundant to use the comparative \"shorter.\" This construction always uses the adjective, so it should be changed to \"short.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 35053,
        "incorrect sentence": "People indeed go to great length to make their words as shorter as they can .",
        "correct sentence": "People indeed go to great lengths to make their words as short as they can ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "become",
                "correct": "becomes",
                "explanation": "The subject here is the noun phrase \"expressing themselves appropriately,\" which is singular, so the verb form should be changed to \"becomes\" for subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 35100,
        "incorrect sentence": "While , once they are communicating with people in their face , expressing themselves appropriately become really a big problem .",
        "correct sentence": "While , once they are communicating with people in their face , expressing themselves appropriately becomes really a big problem ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "extreme",
                "correct": "extremely",
                "explanation": "\"Extreme\" is an adjective, which means it modifies nouns. \"Extremely\" is an adverb, which means it can modify verbs and adjectives. Here, the word being modified is \"close,\" which is an adjective, so the adverb \"extremely\" should be used."
            }
        ],
        "id": 35181,
        "incorrect sentence": "It makes people feel extreme close to their admirers ' lives and works .",
        "correct sentence": "It makes people feel extremely close to their admirers ' lives and works ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount. The phrase \"a possibility\" means that there is some chance that the person is deceiving you, but the exact level of chance is unknown. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 35295,
        "incorrect sentence": "But there is possibility that the person on the other side is deceiving you in order to obtain your information against you .",
        "correct sentence": "But there is a possibility that the person on the other side is deceiving you in order to obtain your information against you ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "life",
                "correct": "lives",
                "explanation": "\"Lives\" is modified by the possessive \"people's,\" which is the plural form of \"person.\" Generally, English treats lives as individual and not collective, with one person in possession of one life. This means that multiple people would have multiple lives. In some cases, a family or married couple might talk about \"our life together,\" but in more general contexts like this one, it is correct to say \"lives.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 35339,
        "incorrect sentence": "To sum up , social media has advantages and disadvantages in people 's daily life .",
        "correct sentence": "To sum up , social media has advantages and disadvantages in people 's daily lives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "As",
                "correct": "With",
                "explanation": "Either \"As technology develops\" or \"With the development of technology\" is valid, but they cannot be mixed. The conjunction \"as\" refers to how events unfold over time, and it requires a subject and a verb, but \"development of technology\" is a noun phrase, not a clause. The preposition \"with,\" which can be followed by a noun, indicates things happening at the same time or in a way that changes according to something. The phrase \"With the development of technology\" means that social media's role is becoming more significant according to how technology develops."
            },
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"technology\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific technology, instead of to the state of technology in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"play a role\" is an idiom, and it always uses an article or pluralization. The indefinite article \"a\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount. The phrase \"a more and more significant role\" means a risk that is increasingly significant, but the exact level is unknown or constantly changing. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 35433,
        "incorrect sentence": "As the development of the technology , social media becomes more and more significant role in the whole world .",
        "correct sentence": "With the development of technology , social media becomes a more and more significant role in the whole world ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"concerns\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific concerns, instead of the concept in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 35511,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , it also raised the concerns about whether it brings us more benefits or a human disaster .",
        "correct sentence": "However , it also raised concerns about whether it brings us more benefits or a human disaster ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "says",
                "correct": "say",
                "explanation": "The subject here is the plural \"people,\" so for subject-verb agreement's sake, the verb form should be \"say.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific social media site, instead of to such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 35601,
        "incorrect sentence": "Many people says they will support the social media since it really helps them to have a closer view about how their friends are going in other parts of the world .",
        "correct sentence": "Many people say they will support social media since it really helps them to have a closer view about how their friends are going in other parts of the world ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "approach",
                "correct": "use",
                "explanation": "The verb \"approach\" means to draw close to something or someone, or to speak to someone for the first time about a request. Neither of these definitions fit \"resource.\" It is common to use the verb \"use\" to refer to resources."
            }
        ],
        "id": 35679,
        "incorrect sentence": "To them , social media is the only resource they can approach to know everything happened in their home country and the way they can use to show their lives to their lovers as well .",
        "correct sentence": "To them , social media is the only resource they can use to know everything happened in their home country and the way they can use to show their lives to their lovers as well ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"information\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific pieces of information, instead of the concept in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 35699,
        "incorrect sentence": "What 's more , these days social media plays an important role in spreading the information .",
        "correct sentence": "What 's more , these days social media plays an important role in spreading information ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 29,
                "end": 29,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": ",",
                "explanation": "A nonrestrictive clause adds additional information to a sentence and can be removed without destroying the meaning of the sentence. It requires a comma to create an easily understandable sentence structure. The phrase \"which brings us a huge amount of convenience\" adds information but can be removed without loss of meaning. Therefore, it is a non-restrictive phrase, so it needs to be preceded by a comma."
            }
        ],
        "id": 35741,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nowadays , people can just easily put their renting information on their facebook account and wait for the response from others who are from different parts of the world which brings us a huge amount of convenience .",
        "correct sentence": "Nowadays , people can just easily put their renting information on their facebook account and wait for the response from others who are from different parts of the world , which brings us a huge amount of convenience ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "are",
                "explanation": "The word \"against\" is a preposition meaning \"in opposition to.\" It requires a form of the verb \"to be\" in order to convey what people oppose."
            }
        ],
        "id": 35815,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , there are also a great amount of people who against this technology .",
        "correct sentence": "However , there are also a great amount of people who are against this technology ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "effect",
                "correct": "effects",
                "explanation": "The noun \"effect\" requires either pluralization or an article. It refers to a result of something, so it is often plural because it is assumed that any action can have multiple results. Unless it is known that there is only one singular effect, usually it is used in the plural."
            },
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "With the definite article, \"the teenagers\" refers to a specific group of teenagers, while \"teenagers\" simply means all teenagers. In other words, the plural alone refers to the group as a whole, and the plural with the article \"the\" refers to a subset of the group. \"The teenagers who are still developing\" means only the teenagers who are still developing, but all teenagers are still developing, by definition. Therefore, \"the\" should be removed.\nIn addition to this correction, there should be a comma after \"teenagers.\" The phrase \"teenagers who are still developing\" also means a subset of teenagers. To convey that all teenagers are still developing, it should be \"teenagers, who are still developing.\" "
            }
        ],
        "id": 35843,
        "incorrect sentence": "They worry a lot about the bad effect on the teenagers who are still developing themselves .",
        "correct sentence": "They worry a lot about the bad effects on teenagers who are still developing themselves ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "on",
                "correct": "at",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"at\" refers to locations, especially locations where an activity or event takes place, while \"on\" refers to a subject or being on top of something. Parties are events and therefore generally use the preposition \"at.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 35942,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nowadays , it is quite common to see on some party , people would more prefer looking at their phones and reading all the posts on facebook if they feel bored .",
        "correct sentence": "Nowadays , it is quite common to see at some party , people would more prefer looking at their phones and reading all the posts on facebook if they feel bored ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "their",
                "explanation": "An ability is considered to belong to a person or to be part of a person. The possessive \"their\" should be used to indicate this relationship of possession. The definite article \"the\" is used when referring to an ability in general, not in the context of a particular person."
            }
        ],
        "id": 35976,
        "incorrect sentence": "It makes people worry since if all the teenagers continue using social media frequently , they will decrease the ability to talk to people .",
        "correct sentence": "It makes people worry since if all the teenagers continue using social media frequently , they will decrease their ability to talk to people ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "those",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The noun \"time\" can be either countable or uncountable, depending on its meaning. It is countable only when it refers to instances when something occurs. It is uncountable when it refers to an amount of time. Uncountable nouns cannot be made singular or plural, so \"time\" cannot use the plural determiner \"those.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 36126,
        "incorrect sentence": "Think in another way , if we put those time we spend on wandering on those sites , we may already finish one book or do other more meaningful things .",
        "correct sentence": "Think in another way , if we put the time we spend on wandering on those sites , we may already finish one book or do other more meaningful things ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "with",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"contact\" does not require a preposition. It modifies the object directly. The preposition \"with\" is used in noun phrases that use the noun \"contact\" but not when \"contact\" is used as a verb."
            }
        ],
        "id": 36141,
        "incorrect sentence": "We should keep in mind that there are still ways for us to contact with our family or friends .",
        "correct sentence": "We should keep in mind that there are still ways for us to contact our family or friends ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"technology\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific technology, instead of to the state of technology in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 36219,
        "incorrect sentence": "Nowadays , as the technology is becoming increasingly advanced , more and more social media sites are showing up in our daily life .",
        "correct sentence": "Nowadays , as technology is becoming increasingly advanced , more and more social media sites are showing up in our daily life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "playing",
                "correct": "using",
                "explanation": "The verb \"play\" is not used to refer to internet usage. It can be used for certain sports and musical instruments and for games and videogames, but websites are referred to with \"use\" or \"spend time on.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": ",",
                "correct": "and",
                "explanation": "Commas can only be used to link items in a list of three items or longer, and this list is only two items long. Therefore, it requires the conjunction \"and.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 36257,
        "incorrect sentence": "You can see people playing Facebook , Twitter through their smart phones or ipad on buses or on trains .",
        "correct sentence": "You can see people using Facebook and Twitter through their smart phones or ipad on buses or on trains ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "for",
                "correct": "of",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"appearance for\" is not commonly used, and it would refer to the reason why these modern media came into existence. The preposition \"of\" can refer to the subject of an action, so \"the appearance of these modern media\" means that modern media are coming into existence."
            }
        ],
        "id": 36288,
        "incorrect sentence": "Some may say that the appearance for these modern media will reduce the chance for people to communicate face to face .",
        "correct sentence": "Some may say that the appearance of these modern media will reduce the chance for people to communicate face to face ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "Firstly",
                "correct": "First",
                "explanation": "Either \"Firstly\" or \"First of all\" is acceptable, but they cannot be mixed. \"First of all\" is a commonly used phrase, and the wording never varies."
            }
        ],
        "id": 36300,
        "incorrect sentence": "Firstly of all , social media can make it more convenient for people to make friends and contact each other .",
        "correct sentence": "First of all , social media can make it more convenient for people to make friends and contact each other ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 25,
                "end": 26,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "to",
                "explanation": "The preposition \"in\" means in the sphere of something or in relation to something. Therefore, the phrase \"restricted in\" refers to something that happens in an act or process, so it indicates that the acts of making phone calls, sending emails, or writing letters are restricted somehow. The verb phrase \"restrict to\" means only being able to do or have a specific thing. In this sentence, \"restricted to\" means that phone calls, emails, and letters were the only available means of long-distance communication."
            }
        ],
        "id": 36354,
        "incorrect sentence": "Years ago when these modern products have not been popular , the way for people to communicate or contact people far way are still restricted in making phone calls , sending emails or writing letters .",
        "correct sentence": "Years ago when these modern products have not been popular , the way for people to communicate or contact people far way are still restricted to making phone calls , sending emails or writing letters ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"take a long time\" is an idiom, and it is never used without the indefinite article \"a.\" \"A\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount. The phrase \"a long time\" means an amount of time that is considered long, but the exact length is unknown. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 36390,
        "incorrect sentence": "Some will take long time and some are not efficient enough for people to get their response .",
        "correct sentence": "Some will take a long time and some are not efficient enough for people to get their response ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "to",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"limited in\" refers to a restriction or limitation on something. For example, \"limited in number\" means only a small number is available. However, \"limited to\" refers to a restriction to a certain thing or group. The phrase \"limited to words\" means that words are the only way to communicate, so \"not limited to words\" means that there are other ways too."
            }
        ],
        "id": 36421,
        "incorrect sentence": "The communication is also not limited in words .",
        "correct sentence": "The communication is also not limited to words ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "on line",
                "correct": "online",
                "explanation": "When referring to the Internet, the correct word is \"online,\" which is one word with no space. The phrase \"on line\" is used in some dialects to mean queueing or waiting in line, but it never refers to Internet usage."
            }
        ],
        "id": 36446,
        "incorrect sentence": "People can also get to know their friends ' state and mood by looking at their posts on line .",
        "correct sentence": "People can also get to know their friends ' state and mood by looking at their posts online ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "life",
                "correct": "lives",
                "explanation": "When referencing people's lives as a general concept, the plural \"lives\" should be used because it references multiple people. The singular \"life\" is used to refer to an individual life, with \"a life\" meaning any life and \"the life\" meaning one life. As an exception, a family or a couple might refer to \"our life (together),\" but generally the lives of different people will always be treated as plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 36504,
        "incorrect sentence": "These social media makes people 's life much more colorful and provide a lot of fun .",
        "correct sentence": "These social media makes people 's lives much more colorful and provide a lot of fun ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "life",
                "correct": "lives",
                "explanation": "When referencing people's lives as a general concept, the plural \"lives\" should be used because it references multiple people. The singular \"life\" is used to refer to an individual life, with \"a life\" meaning any life and \"the life\" meaning one life. As an exception, a family or a couple might refer to \"our life (together),\" but generally the lives of different people will always be treated as plural."
            }
        ],
        "id": 36515,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , social media may do some harm to people 's life .",
        "correct sentence": "However , social media may do some harm to people 's lives ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "on",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "When the phrase \"spend time\" is followed by a noun, it uses the preposition \"on.\" When it is followed by a gerund, it does not. It is common to say \"spend time on the Internet\" but not \"spend time on chatting.\" "
            },
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "skill",
                "correct": "skills",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"interpersonal skills\" refers to the skills needed to get along with people well. Interpersonal skills are considered to require a variety of different abilities, such as kindness, listening, the ability to read social cues, etc. Therefore, \"skills\" is always plural in the phrase \"interpersonal skills.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 36580,
        "incorrect sentence": "It will make people spend more time on chatting on the internet rather than communicate face to face such that the interpersonal skill will be badly affected .",
        "correct sentence": "It will make people spend more time chatting on the internet rather than communicate face to face such that the interpersonal skills will be badly affected ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "When talking about \"time spent,\" English uses the preposition \"in\" for physical locations and \"on\" for activities or pursuits. For example, a dedicated scholar might spend a lot of time in the library or spend a lot of time on her studies. The Internet is not a physical location, so \"in\" is appropriate here. "
            }
        ],
        "id": 36598,
        "incorrect sentence": "Some people spend a lot of time in it and forget their real life .",
        "correct sentence": "Some people spend a lot of time on it and forget their real life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "knowing",
                "correct": "know",
                "explanation": "The verb is connected to the auxiliary verb \"may,\" which is always followed by the bare infinitive \"know.\" The phrase \"may... not know\" means that there is a possibility that people do not know."
            }
        ],
        "id": 36711,
        "incorrect sentence": "Some may share fewer and fewer time with their family and not knowing how to express themselves .",
        "correct sentence": "Some may share fewer and fewer time with their family and not know how to express themselves ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "friendship",
                "correct": "friendships",
                "explanation": "When referencing friendship as a general concept, the plural \"friendships\" should be used because it references multiple relationships between many different people. The singular \"friendship\" is used to refer to an individual friendship, with \"a friendship\" meaning any friendship and \"the friendship\" meaning one friendship."
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "relationship",
                "correct": "relationships",
                "explanation": "When referencing relationships as a general concept, the plural \"relationships\" should be used because it references multiple relationships between many different people. The singular \"relationship\" is used to refer to individual relationships, with \"a relationship\" meaning any relationship and \"the relationship\" meaning one relationship."
            }
        ],
        "id": 36782,
        "incorrect sentence": "People can promote their friendship and relationship through these social media .",
        "correct sentence": "People can promote their friendships and relationships through these social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "with",
                "explanation": "\"Communication\" usually refers to a reciprocal exchange between multiple people. It is generally used with the preposition \"with,\" which indicates togetherness. This reflects that both or all people are participating. In some contexts, it can use the preposition \"to,\" which indicates a one-way flow. For example, the sentence \"I tried to communicate the danger to him\" implies that the object \"he\" did not listen or could not understand the attempt at communication. However, in general contexts like this one, the preposition should be \"with.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"real life\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific person's real life, instead of to real life in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"affect\" does not use a preposition because it can modify its object directly."
            }
        ],
        "id": 36842,
        "incorrect sentence": "Whereas , it can also make people forget to communicate to their family and friends in the real life and affect negatively to their interpersonal skills .",
        "correct sentence": "Whereas , it can also make people forget to communicate with their family and friends in real life and affect negatively their interpersonal skills ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "its",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages\" is a common phrase, and it cannot be altered in this way. In this sentence, both \"advantages\" and \"disadvantages\" belong to social media, but it sounds like they belong to two different things because the definite article \"the\" is used for the former and the pronoun \"its\" is used for the latter."
            },
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "disadvantage",
                "correct": "disadvantages",
                "explanation": "The noun \"disadvantage\" requires either pluralization or an article. It refers to a result of something, so it is often plural because it is assumed that any action can cause multiple results. Unless it is known that there is only one singular disadvantage, usually it is used in the plural. Also, because of parallel structure, it is preferable for the plural \"advantages\" to be followed by the plural \"disadvantages.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 36865,
        "incorrect sentence": "But overall , the advantages far outweigh its disadvantage .",
        "correct sentence": "But overall , the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "recently",
                "correct": "recent",
                "explanation": "\"Recently\" is an adverb, so it modifies verbs or adjectives. \"Recent\" is an adjective, so it modifies nouns. The word being modified is \"looks,\" which is a noun, so the adjective form \"recent\" should be used."
            },
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "on",
                "correct": "to",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"happen on\" or, more commonly, \"happen upon,\" means to find something by chance. The phrase \"happen to\" is a phrasal verb referring to an event that occurs in someone's life, so \"on\" should be changed to \"to.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 36983,
        "incorrect sentence": "People can know their friends ' recently looks and interesting things happens on that people just by checking their facebook or other social media sites .",
        "correct sentence": "People can know their friends ' recent looks and interesting things happens to that people just by checking their facebook or other social media sites ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"friends\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific groups of friends instead of to people in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37056,
        "incorrect sentence": "We can not deny that the social media sites truly make the old friends do not lose the information and the chances to communicate with you even you are in a different country .",
        "correct sentence": "We can not deny that the social media sites truly make old friends do not lose the information and the chances to communicate with you even you are in a different country ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media sites\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific sites, instead of to such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37095,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , the social media sites truly reduce the communication in face-to-face which truly affects interpersonal skills .",
        "correct sentence": "However , the social media sites truly reduce communication in face-to-face which truly affects interpersonal skills ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37117,
        "incorrect sentence": "There are two advantages and two disadvantages of using the social media in people 's daily life .",
        "correct sentence": "There are two advantages and two disadvantages of using social media in people 's daily life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"words\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific instance or example of words, instead of to words in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"pictures\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific instance or example of a picture, instead of to pictures in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37166,
        "incorrect sentence": "By typing the words and showing the pictures , people can express their emotions that they are too shy to express .",
        "correct sentence": "By typing words and showing pictures , people can express their emotions that they are too shy to express ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" refers to a specific teenager, especially one that was mentioned earlier in the text. Because no such person was mentioned, it should be changed to the indefinite article \"a,\" which refers to any teenager, or one single unspecified teenager."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37245,
        "incorrect sentence": "On the other hand , when the teenager is studying in a foreign country , the internet is the only way that he can communicate with their parents and friends .",
        "correct sentence": "On the other hand , when a teenager is studying in a foreign country , the internet is the only way that he can communicate with their parents and friends ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37256,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , the social media is truly good for people .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , social media is truly good for people ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37279,
        "incorrect sentence": "Secondly , the social media sites can not only connect people with their friends closely .",
        "correct sentence": "Secondly , social media sites can not only connect people with their friends closely ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "celebrity",
                "correct": "celebrities",
                "explanation": "When referencing celebrities as a general concept, the plural \"celebrities \" should be used because it references multiple famous people. The singular \"celebrity\" is used to refer to an individual celebrity, with \"a celebrity\" meaning any celebrity and \"the celebrity\" meaning one celebrity. Also, this sentence lists multiple celebrities, so it would be incongruous to use the singular."
            },
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "\"On\" is used for information that comes from the Internet or social media. This is a collocation, and it reflects that the Internet transmits information over the air, on radio waves."
            },
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"celebrities\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific groups of celebrities, instead of famous people in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"study materials\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific study materials, particularly those known to the reader or mentioned earlier in the text."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37372,
        "incorrect sentence": "People can also know much information about the celebrity in Twitter and Facebook such as Obama , Bill Gates and get the first-hand study materials on it .",
        "correct sentence": "People can also know much information about celebrity celebrities on and Facebook such as Obama , Bill Gates and get the study materials on it ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 24,
                "end": 25,
                "error": "thought",
                "correct": "thoughts",
                "explanation": "The singular noun \"thought\" refers to a single idea or opinion. For example, \"I think I'd like eggs for breakfast\" or \"She thinks it would be fun to try beekeeping\" are two thoughts. But this sentence is referring to a person's worldview, overall thinking, set of values, or general outlook. In this context, \"thoughts\" should be pluralized."
            },
            {
                "start": 27,
                "end": 28,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37413,
        "incorrect sentence": "They can learn how these people succeed and they can also have the chance to talk with them and know these famous persons ' thought by using the social media .",
        "correct sentence": "They can learn how these people succeed and they can also have the chance to talk with them and know these famous persons ' thoughts by using social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 18,
                "end": 19,
                "error": "need",
                "correct": "needs",
                "explanation": "The subject of this verb is \"someone,\" which is singular, so the verb should be \"needs\" for subject-verb agreement."
            },
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"money\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It does not use the definite article in a general context, only when referring to specific instances of money, such as money used, obtained, or allocated for a specific purpose."
            },
            {
                "start": 23,
                "end": 24,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" refers to a specific disease, especially one that was mentioned earlier in the text. Because there was no such mention, it should be changed to the indefinite article \"a,\" which means any disease, or an unspecified disease."
            },
            {
                "start": 27,
                "end": 28,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"help\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific instances where help was given, instead of the concept in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 37,
                "end": 38,
                "error": "know",
                "correct": "knows",
                "explanation": "The subject of this verb is \"one person,\" which is singular, so the verb should be \"knows\" for subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37529,
        "incorrect sentence": "On the other hand , with the help of social media , some homeless people or someone who need the money to cure the disease can get the help from the world quickly because once one person know the information , his or her will share it to their \" friends area \" , then many people will know it and spread the information to the person who can give help .",
        "correct sentence": "On the other hand , with the help of social media , some homeless people or someone who needs money to cure a disease can get help from the world quickly because once one person knows the information , his or her will share it to their \" friends area \" , then many people will know it and spread the information to the person who can give help ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 13,
                "end": 14,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37543,
        "incorrect sentence": "On the other hand , there are also problems with the population of the social media .",
        "correct sentence": "On the other hand , there are also problems with the population of social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 22,
                "error": "communicate",
                "correct": "communicating",
                "explanation": "This is using the present participle \"communicating\" as a gerund. It refers to becoming used to the act of communicating. This construction cannot use the bare infinitive \"communicate,\" so it should be changed to \"communicating.\" Also, the verb \"accustom\" means to cause someone to get used to something. If a person is becoming familiar with something on their own, it is correct to say \"become accustomed to.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 37578,
        "incorrect sentence": "Firstly , when people rely on the social media to communicate with their friends and parents , they will accustom to communicate by typing and not talking .",
        "correct sentence": "Firstly , when people rely on social media to communicate with their friends and parents , they will accustom to communicating by typing and not talking ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"interpersonal skills\" refers to the skills needed to get along with people well. Interpersonal skills are considered to require a variety of different abilities, such as kindness, listening, the ability to read social cues, etc. Therefore, \"skills\" is always plural in the phrase \"interpersonal skills.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 37671,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , the social media truly limit the interpersonal skills such that people lose the chance and the ability to practice talking and connect the relation between him and their friends .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , social media truly limit interpersonal skills such that people lose the chance and the ability to practice talking and connect the relation between him and their friends ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"communication\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific instances of communication, instead of the concept in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"real life\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to the real life of a specific person, instead of the concept in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37726,
        "incorrect sentence": "Secondly , without the truly communication in the real life , people lose the ability to see the truth and false .",
        "correct sentence": "Secondly , without truly communication in real life , people lose the ability to see the truth and false ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "Having a presence on a social media platform is referred to as being \"on\" social media. This is a collocation, or it may be because \"on\" can refer to a state of connection, such as in \"on the Internet\" or \"on the phone.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "image",
                "correct": "images",
                "explanation": "When referencing images as a general concept, the plural \"images\" should be used because it references all or any images. The singular \"image\" is used to refer to an individual image, with \"an image\" meaning any image and \"the image\" meaning one specific image. Also, in this sentence, the images are posted by \"people,\" which is plural, so even if each person only posts one image, it still constitutes multiple images."
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "on",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general. Also, the concept of posts on pages is derived from bulletin boards, where people would post flyers and notices. This used the preposition \"on\" because papers would be attached to the face of the bulletin board."
            },
            {
                "start": 27,
                "end": 28,
                "error": "do",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"may not have\" already has one auxiliary verb: \"may.\" It is incorrect and redundant to have two auxiliary verbs in a row, so \"do\" should be deleted. Also, the subject \"he or she\" is singular, so \"jobs\" should be changed to \"a job\" so that the statement refers to one person."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37798,
        "incorrect sentence": "There are many people in the social media with beautiful image and good content in their pages , however in real life , he or she may do not have jobs or live poorly .",
        "correct sentence": "There are many people on social media with beautiful images and good content on their pages , however in real life , he or she may not have jobs or live poorly ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 2,
                "end": 3,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "for",
                "explanation": "The common phrase \"is good to (someone)\" means being kind or considerate to someone. It almost always refers to intentional actions from one person to another, as the preposition \"to\" indicates the direction in which actions flow. The correct expression is \"good for,\" which indicates that a thing or action is beneficial for someone or conducive to something. \"Not good for\" conveys that this behavior has a harmful effect on the development of teenagers."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37872,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , the social media is not safe which is bad to teenager 's future development .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , social media is not safe which is bad for teenager 's future development ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "to",
                "explanation": "When \"degree\" means a measurable amount or level, it uses the preposition \"to.\" \"To some degree\" is a commonly used phrase, and the preposition \"to\" can indicate the limit or range of something. The phrase \"in some degree\" is understandable, but it is not used."
            }
        ],
        "id": 37904,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , there exits some disadvantages which will affect people in some degree .",
        "correct sentence": "However , there exits some disadvantages which will affect people to some degree ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The expression \"need for\" uses the noun \"need,\" and the preposition \"for\" modifies the clause that follows. Therefore, the phrase \"no need for people to go\" means that people do not need to go. However, the expression \"need to\" uses the verb \"need,\" not the noun, and the \"to\" is part of the infinitive verb that follows. Therefore, the phrase \"no need to go\" means that it is not necessary to go. Either expression is valid, but \"to for\" is incorrect."
            }
        ],
        "id": 38005,
        "incorrect sentence": "There is no need to for people to go out of their home to interact with others , they chat online , share pictures , tell others what they have done or funny stories .",
        "correct sentence": "There is no need for people to go out of their home to interact with others , they chat online , share pictures , tell others what they have done or funny stories ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The indefinite article \"a\" is singular and cannot be used with the plural noun \"relationships.\" The word \"relationships\" alone refers to multiple relationships, so it is often used in general statements. The singular \"relationship\" is used to refer to individual relationships, with \"a relationship\" meaning any relationship and \"the relationship\" meaning one relationship"
            },
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "relationship",
                "correct": "relationships",
                "explanation": "When referencing relationships as a general concept, the plural \"relationships\" should be used because it references multiple relationships between many different people. The singular \"relationship\" is used to refer to individual relationships, with \"a relationship\" meaning any relationship and \"the relationship\" meaning one relationship."
            },
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            },
            {
                "start": 16,
                "end": 17,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"social media\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific social media sites, instead of such sites in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 38060,
        "incorrect sentence": "It seems that people build a good relationship with others by the social media , but the problems come out .",
        "correct sentence": "It seems that people build good relationships with others by social media , but problems come out ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 0,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "Pepope",
                "correct": "People",
                "explanation": "This is a spelling error. The correct spelling is \"People.\""
            },
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"strangers\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific strangers, instead of unknown people in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 38086,
        "incorrect sentence": "Pepope do not know how to talk with others face to face , especially the strangers .",
        "correct sentence": "People do not know how to talk with others face to face , especially strangers ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "convenience",
                "correct": "convenient",
                "explanation": "\"Convenience\" is a noun and \"convenient\" is an adjective, so it can modify nouns. The word being modified here is a noun, so the adjective \"convenient\" should be used instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 38163,
        "incorrect sentence": "One advantage is that it is more convenience to contact others by social media .",
        "correct sentence": "One advantage is that it is more convenient to contact others by social media ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 1,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"in the old days\" is a set phrase, and the article \"the\" is always used. The definite article \"the\" refers to specific things, and in this phrase, it means a specific period in the past."
            },
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "wants",
                "correct": "wanted",
                "explanation": "The present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often, while the past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past. This sentence is referring to how things were \"in the old days,\" which means the past. The present tense \"if one wants\" implies that people still have to use letters when they want to write to faraway friends, so it should be the past tense \"if one wanted\" instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 17,
                "end": 18,
                "error": "lives",
                "correct": "lived",
                "explanation": "The present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often, while the past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past. This sentence is referring to how things were \"in the old days,\" which means the past. The present tense \"lives far away\" implies that people still have to use letters when they want to write to faraway friends, so it should be the past tense \"lived far away\" instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 22,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "needs",
                "correct": "needed",
                "explanation": "The present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often, while the past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past. This sentence is referring to how things were \"in the old days,\" which means the past. The present tense \"he needs to\" implies that people still have to use letters when they want to write to faraway friends, so it should be the past tense \"he needed to\" instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 38256,
        "incorrect sentence": "In old days , if one wants to tell some important news to another one , which lives far away , he needs to write letters and it wastes time .",
        "correct sentence": "In the old days , if one wanted to tell some important news to another one , which lived far away , he needed to write letters and it wastes time ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 5,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "make",
                "correct": "made",
                "explanation": "The present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often, while the past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past. This sentence is referring to how things were \"in the old days,\" which means the past. The present tense \"make... very difficult\" implies that it is still difficult and time-consuming to communicate long distance, so it should be the past tense \"made... very difficult\" instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"messages\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific instances of messages, instead of the concept in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 38292,
        "incorrect sentence": "The long distance and time-consuming make spreading the messages very difficult at that time .",
        "correct sentence": "The long distance and time-consuming made spreading messages very difficult at that time ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 14,
                "end": 15,
                "error": "are",
                "correct": "was",
                "explanation": "The present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often, while the past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past. This sentence is referring to how things were \"in the old days,\" which means the past. The present tense \"unless there is\" implies that people today only contact long-distance friends and relatives unless something important happens, so it should be the past tense \"unless there was\" instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"friends\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to specific friends, instead of the concept of friendship in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 38338,
        "incorrect sentence": "Therefore , people may not contact with the faraway friends and relatives unless there are something important .",
        "correct sentence": "Therefore , people may not contact with faraway friends and relatives unless there are was important ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 7,
                "error": "with",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "Here, the verb \"contact\" is used as a transitive verb that can take a direct object without a preposition. The preposition \"with\" is sometimes used in phrases that use \"contact\" as a noun, but not when it is a verb."
            }
        ],
        "id": 38387,
        "incorrect sentence": "However , people now can contact with anyone all over the world who can use computer at any time , and there is no time delay of messages .",
        "correct sentence": "However , people now can contact anyone all over the world who can use computer at any time , and there is no time delay of messages ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 21,
                "end": 23,
                "error": "on line",
                "correct": "online",
                "explanation": "When referring to the Internet, the correct word is \"online,\" which is one word with no space. The phrase \"on line\" is used in some dialects to mean queueing or waiting in line, but it never refers to Internet usage."
            }
        ],
        "id": 38519,
        "incorrect sentence": "Unlike today , with the help with social media , people can easily get the information they want just by searching on line , and know about what that person did everyday at what time .",
        "correct sentence": "Unlike today , with the help with social media , people can easily get the information they want just by searching online , and know about what that person did everyday at what time ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 20,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "The phrase \"take a long time\" is an idiomatic expression, and it is never used without the indefinite article \"a.\" \"A\" is used when something exists in an unspecified manner or amount. The phrase \"a long time\" means an amount of time that is considered long, but the exact length is unknown. This condition is best expressed by the indefinite article \"a.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 38626,
        "incorrect sentence": "As for the disadvantages of social media in our daily life , wasting time , causing illness related to sitting long time before the computer , quick-spread of rumor and fake news , most importantly , making people lost the ability to talk to others face to face confidently .",
        "correct sentence": "As for the disadvantages of social media in our daily life , wasting time , causing illness related to sitting a long time before the computer , quick-spread of rumor and fake news , most importantly , making people lost the ability to talk to others face to face confidently ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 19,
                "end": 20,
                "error": "with",
                "correct": "to",
                "explanation": "When referring to conversation, the phrases \"talk with\" and \"talk to\" are mostly interchangeable, so I'm not sure if I agree with this correction. I agree that it is more common to say \"talk to\" when the pronoun \"each other\" is used, but \"talk with each other\" is not grammatically incorrect. The phrase \"talk to\" may also have a more general meaning, where \"talk with\" can have the nuance of consulting with someone, or of a conversation between peers or equals."
            },
            {
                "start": 12,
                "end": 13,
                "error": "to",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The verb \"face\" is an intransitive verb meaning to turn one's body or head toward something. It can be used without an object, and it already indicates the direction without a preposition."
            }
        ],
        "id": 38658,
        "incorrect sentence": "It is weird that people sit around the table but all face to their phones and do not talk with each other .",
        "correct sentence": "It is weird that people sit around the table but all face their phones and do not talk with to other ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 20,
                "end": 21,
                "error": "head",
                "correct": "heads",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"some people,\" which is plural. Since all people have a head, if \"people\" is plural, \"heads\" should be used."
            }
        ],
        "id": 38761,
        "incorrect sentence": "No matter it is a party , dinner or just simply get-together , there always are some people bow their head and playing their phones even their family and friends are in front of them .",
        "correct sentence": "No matter it is a party , dinner or just simply get-together , there always are some people bow their heads and playing their phones even their family and friends are in front of them ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 1,
                "end": 2,
                "error": "a",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "\"In conclusion\" is a commonly used expression, and the article is never used. The phrase \"as a conclusion\" or \"as the conclusion\" does use an article, with \"a\" meaning one of multiple conclusions and \"the\" meaning the only conclusion. However, \"in conclusion\" never uses an article."
            }
        ],
        "id": 38780,
        "incorrect sentence": "In a conclusion , there are both advantages and disadvantages of using social media in daily life .",
        "correct sentence": "In conclusion , there are both advantages and disadvantages of using social media in daily life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"society\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific society, instead of the concept in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 38896,
        "incorrect sentence": "The advantages and disadvantages of using such social media in the society are elaborated on as follows .",
        "correct sentence": "The advantages and disadvantages of using such social media in society are elaborated on as follows ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 11,
                "end": 12,
                "error": "communications",
                "correct": "communication",
                "explanation": "The word \"communication\" means the process of transmitting or exchanging information. The word \"communications\" refers to the field of study or activity concerned with the transmission of information. Also, the phrase \"means of communication\" is a commonly used expression, and it always uses \"communication,\" never \"communications.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 38962,
        "incorrect sentence": "Social media is a trending channel and a suitable mean of communications .",
        "correct sentence": "Social media is a trending channel and a suitable mean of communication ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "experiences",
                "correct": "experience",
                "explanation": "The adverb \"every\" is only used with singular nouns, so \"experience\" should be changed to \"experiences.\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 39002,
        "incorrect sentence": "You can share photos , videos and every meaningful experiences of your life .",
        "correct sentence": "You can share photos , videos and every meaningful experience of your life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "-",
                "explanation": "The concept of \"society\" is a general concept and can be assumed to be understood by the reader. It takes the definite article only when referring to a specific society, instead of modern society in general."
            }
        ],
        "id": 39115,
        "incorrect sentence": "On the other hand , social media also has disadvantages which have created worries to the society recently and made it a controversial phenomenon .",
        "correct sentence": "On the other hand , social media also has disadvantages which have created worries to society recently and made it a controversial phenomenon ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 9,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" differentiates the \"social media world\" from the real world. The definite article is used to refer to a specific thing, so it implies that there are other realities than the one that exists in social media, and that social media is distinct from them."
            }
        ],
        "id": 39155,
        "incorrect sentence": "More and more young people tend to live in social media world most of their time and reduce face-to-face human contact , which can affect interpersonal skills and relationships in social life .",
        "correct sentence": "More and more young people tend to live in the social media world most of their time and reduce face-to-face human contact , which can affect interpersonal skills and relationships in social life ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" differentiates the \"social media world\" from the real world. The definite article is used to refer to a specific thing, so it implies that there are other realities than the one that exists in social media, and that social media is distinct from them."
            }
        ],
        "id": 39176,
        "incorrect sentence": "First and foremost , we should realize that social media world is not trustworthy and real .",
        "correct sentence": "First and foremost , we should realize that the social media world is not trustworthy and real ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 3,
                "end": 4,
                "error": "do",
                "correct": "does",
                "explanation": "The subject here is \"social media,\" which is collective and treated as singular, so the verb should be \"does\" for subject verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 39210,
        "incorrect sentence": "Though social media do create relationships , relationships and friendships are only firm and real if people have gone through experiences and communication in face-to-face interaction .",
        "correct sentence": "Though social media does create relationships , relationships and friendships are only firm and real if people have gone through experiences and communication in face-to-face interaction ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 8,
                "end": 9,
                "error": "lives",
                "correct": "lived",
                "explanation": "The present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often, while the past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past. This sentence is referring to a story that has already happened, and the present tense \"lives\" implies that she still spends every night in the social media world. However, because the sentence ends with \"for eight years,\" we know that she no longer does. Therefore, it should be the past tense \"unless there was\" instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 10,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "The definite article \"the\" differentiates the \"social media world\" from the real world. The definite article is used to refer to a specific thing, so it implies that there are other realities than the one that exists in social media, and that social media is distinct from them."
            },
            {
                "start": 15,
                "end": 16,
                "error": "in",
                "correct": "for",
                "explanation": "When the preposition \"in\" is used for time, it refers to the end of a period of time. The phrase \"in eight years\" means either eight years from now, or at the end of eight years. This sentence is talking about an amount or duration of time, in which case the preposition \"for\" is used. The phrase \"for eight years\" means that she spent eight years using social media every night."
            }
        ],
        "id": 39242,
        "incorrect sentence": "There is a story of a girl who lives in social media world every night in eight years .",
        "correct sentence": "There is a story of a girl who lived in the social media world every night for eight years ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "trust",
                "correct": "trusted",
                "explanation": "The present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often, while the past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past. This sentence is referring to a story that has already happened, and the present tense \"trust\" implies that she still trusts them, so it should be the past tense \"trusted\" instead."
            },
            {
                "start": 10,
                "end": 11,
                "error": "share",
                "correct": "shared",
                "explanation": "The present tense refers to actions or states that are currently ongoing or occur often, while the past tense refers to actions or states that were completed in the past. This sentence is referring to a story that has already happened, and the present tense \"share\" implies that she still shares her life with them, so it should be the past tense \"shared\" instead."
            }
        ],
        "id": 39278,
        "incorrect sentence": "She talked with them every night , trust them and share her life with them .",
        "correct sentence": "She talked with them every night , trusted them and shared her life with them ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 6,
                "end": 6,
                "error": "-",
                "correct": "the",
                "explanation": "I don't agree with this correction. The definite article \"the\" is used to refer to specific things, and \"the eight people\" means a group of eight people mentioned earlier. This is the first such mention, so the phrase \"eight people,\" with no article, should be used because it means any eight people, or a group of eight unspecified people. Also, it is not clear who these eight people are, so this information should be added. The sentence should read something like \"...she discovered that eight people she had met online...\""
            }
        ],
        "id": 39305,
        "incorrect sentence": "Then eventually , she discovered that eight people became one as he was using eight different identities to chat with her all the time .",
        "correct sentence": "Then eventually , she discovered that the eight people became one as he was using eight different identities to chat with her all the time ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 7,
                "end": 8,
                "error": "keep",
                "correct": "keeps",
                "explanation": "The subject here is the singular \"situation,\" so the verb form should be \"keeps\" for subject-verb agreement."
            }
        ],
        "id": 39430,
        "incorrect sentence": "As a result , if the situation keep go on in this unexpected trend , it will cause a bad effect on the young generation .",
        "correct sentence": "As a result , if the situation keeps go on in this unexpected trend , it will cause a bad effect on the young generation ."
    },
    {
        "corrections": [
            {
                "start": 4,
                "end": 5,
                "error": "the",
                "correct": "a",
                "explanation": "\"In a nutshell\" is an idiom, and the article does not change. The phrase \"in the nutshell\" is not used, but the specificity of \"the\" makes it sound literal. Instead of referring figuratively to something very simple, it would mean something that is literally inside a nutshell."
            }
        ],
        "id": 39450,
        "incorrect sentence": "To put it in the nutshell , everything has its own pros and cons .",
        "correct sentence": "To put it in a nutshell , everything has its own pros and cons ."
    }
]