diff --git a/docs/install-1.7.md b/docs/install-1.7.md
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@@ -8,11 +8,13 @@ The aggregator allows user-defined, Kubernetes compatible API servers to come
 and go inside the cluster, and register themselves on demand to augment the 
 externally facing API that kubernetes offers.
 
-Instead of running multiple API servers on different ports, API aggregation 
-allows many servers to run inside the cluster, and all of their APIs to be
-combined into one externally facing API. This system is very useful from an
-end-user's perspective, as it allows the client to use a single API point
-with familiar tooling, authentication and authorization.
+Instead of requiring the end-user to access multiple API servers, the API 
+aggregation system allows many servers to run inside the cluster, and combines
+all of their APIs into one externally facing API. 
+
+This system is very useful from an end-user's perspective, as it allows the 
+client to use a single API point with familiar tooling, authentication and 
+authorization.
 
 The Service Catalog utilizes API aggregation to present its API. Read on
 to discover how to install it.