diff --git a/src/ch14-03-cargo-workspaces.md b/src/ch14-03-cargo-workspaces.md
index aae75f9eaa..13ea37769c 100644
--- a/src/ch14-03-cargo-workspaces.md
+++ b/src/ch14-03-cargo-workspaces.md
@@ -28,7 +28,8 @@ Next, in the *add* directory, we create the *Cargo.toml* file that will
configure the entire workspace. This file won’t have a `[package]` section or
the metadata we’ve seen in other *Cargo.toml* files. Instead, it will start
with a `[workspace]` section that will allow us to add members to the workspace
-by specifying the path to our binary crate; in this case, that path is *adder*:
+by specifying the path to the package with our binary crate; in this case,
+that path is *adder*:
Filename: Cargo.toml
@@ -65,7 +66,7 @@ in your *add* directory should look like this:
```
The workspace has one *target* directory at the top level for the compiled
-artifacts to be placed into; the `adder` crate doesn’t have its own *target*
+artifacts to be placed into; the `adder` package doesn’t have its own *target*
directory. Even if we were to run `cargo build` from inside the *adder*
directory, the compiled artifacts would still end up in *add/target* rather
than *add/adder/target*. Cargo structures the *target* directory in a workspace
@@ -75,9 +76,9 @@ recompile each of the other crates in the workspace to have the artifacts in
its own *target* directory. By sharing one *target* directory, the crates can
avoid unnecessary rebuilding.
-### Creating the Second Crate in the Workspace
+### Creating the Second Package in the Workspace
-Next, let’s create another member crate in the workspace and call it `add-one`.
+Next, let’s create another member package in the workspace and call it `add-one`.
Change the top-level *Cargo.toml* to specify the *add-one* path in the
`members` list:
@@ -125,9 +126,10 @@ In the *add-one/src/lib.rs* file, let’s add an `add_one` function:
{{#rustdoc_include ../listings/ch14-more-about-cargo/no-listing-02-workspace-with-two-crates/add/add-one/src/lib.rs}}
```
-Now that we have a library crate in the workspace, we can have the binary crate
-`adder` depend on the library crate `add-one`. First, we’ll need to add a path
-dependency on `add-one` to *adder/Cargo.toml*.
+Now that we have another package in the workspace, we can have the `adder`
+package with our binary depend on the `add-one` package, that has our
+library. First, we’ll need to add a path dependency on `add-one` to
+*adder/Cargo.toml*.
Filename: adder/Cargo.toml
@@ -149,8 +151,8 @@ function to call the `add_one` function, as in Listing 14-7.
{{#rustdoc_include ../listings/ch14-more-about-cargo/listing-14-07/add/adder/src/main.rs}}
```
-Listing 14-7: Using the `add-one` library crate from the
-`adder` crate
+Listing 14-7: Using the `add-one` library crate from the
+ `adder` crate
Let’s build the workspace by running `cargo build` in the top-level *add*
directory!
@@ -187,12 +189,12 @@ Hello, world! 10 plus one is 11!
This runs the code in *adder/src/main.rs*, which depends on the `add-one` crate.
-#### Depending on an External Crate in a Workspace
+#### Depending on an External Package in a Workspace
Notice that the workspace has only one *Cargo.lock* file at the top level of
the workspace rather than having a *Cargo.lock* in each crate’s directory. This
ensures that all crates are using the same version of all dependencies. If we
-add the `rand` crate to the *adder/Cargo.toml* and *add-one/Cargo.toml*
+add the `rand` package to the *adder/Cargo.toml* and *add-one/Cargo.toml*
files, Cargo will resolve both of those to one version of `rand` and record
that in the one *Cargo.lock*. Making all crates in the workspace use the same
dependencies means the crates in the workspace will always be compatible with
@@ -237,7 +239,7 @@ The top-level *Cargo.lock* now contains information about the dependency of
`add-one` on `rand`. However, even though `rand` is used somewhere in the
workspace, we can’t use it in other crates in the workspace unless we add
`rand` to their *Cargo.toml* files as well. For example, if we add `use rand;`
-to the *adder/src/main.rs* file for the `adder` crate, we’ll get an error:
+to the *adder/src/main.rs* file for the `adder` package, we’ll get an error: