diff --git a/src/ch07-03-paths-for-referring-to-an-item-in-the-module-tree.md b/src/ch07-03-paths-for-referring-to-an-item-in-the-module-tree.md
index 8cb0dfadc4..ad584b72b4 100644
--- a/src/ch07-03-paths-for-referring-to-an-item-in-the-module-tree.md
+++ b/src/ch07-03-paths-for-referring-to-an-item-in-the-module-tree.md
@@ -22,9 +22,8 @@ removing some of the modules and functions. We’ll show two ways to call the
 the crate root. The `eat_at_restaurant` function is part of our library crate’s
 public API, so we mark it with the `pub` keyword. In the [”Exposing Paths with
 the `pub` Keyword”][pub]<!-- ignore --> section, we’ll go into more detail
-about `pub`.
-
-Note that this example won’t compile just yet; we’ll explain why in a bit.
+about `pub`. Note that this example won’t compile just yet; we’ll explain why
+in a bit.
 
 <span class="filename">Filename: src/lib.rs</span>
 
diff --git a/src/ch07-04-bringing-paths-into-scope-with-the-use-keyword.md b/src/ch07-04-bringing-paths-into-scope-with-the-use-keyword.md
index 3fcdb4bbe2..af15ace8b4 100644
--- a/src/ch07-04-bringing-paths-into-scope-with-the-use-keyword.md
+++ b/src/ch07-04-bringing-paths-into-scope-with-the-use-keyword.md
@@ -291,14 +291,14 @@ crate.
 
 If we’re using multiple items defined in the same package or same module,
 listing each item on its own line can take up a lot of vertical space in our
-files. For example, these two `use` statements we had in Listing 2-4 in the
-Guessing Game bring items from `std` into scope:
+files. For example, these two `use` statements we had in the Guessing Game in
+Listing 2-4 bring items from `std` into scope:
 
 <span class="filename">Filename: src/main.rs</span>
 
 ```rust
-use std::cmp::Ordering;
 use std::io;
+use std::cmp::Ordering;
 // ---snip---
 ```
 
diff --git a/src/ch09-02-recoverable-errors-with-result.md b/src/ch09-02-recoverable-errors-with-result.md
index 7d666e42e0..85c4192836 100644
--- a/src/ch09-02-recoverable-errors-with-result.md
+++ b/src/ch09-02-recoverable-errors-with-result.md
@@ -528,7 +528,7 @@ fn main() -> Result<(), Box<dyn Error>> {
 }
 ```
 
-The `Box<dyn Error>` type is called a *trait object*, which we’ll talk about in
+The `Box<dyn Error>` type is called a trait object, which we’ll talk about in
 the [“Using Trait Objects that Allow for Values of Different
 Types”][trait-objects]<!-- ignore --> section in Chapter 17. For now, you can
 read `Box<dyn Error>` to mean “any kind of error.” Using `?` in a `main`
diff --git a/src/ch11-01-writing-tests.md b/src/ch11-01-writing-tests.md
index b5c645f34c..42a5391878 100644
--- a/src/ch11-01-writing-tests.md
+++ b/src/ch11-01-writing-tests.md
@@ -282,11 +282,12 @@ larger rectangle can indeed hold a smaller rectangle</span>
 
 Note that we’ve added a new line inside the `tests` module: `use super::*;`.
 The `tests` module is a regular module that follows the usual visibility rules
-we covered in Chapter 7 in the [“Modules as the Privacy
-Boundary”][modules-as-privacy-boundary]<!-- ignore --> section. Because the
-`tests` module is an inner module, we need to bring the code under test in the
-outer module into the scope of the inner module. We use a glob here so anything
-we define in the outer module is available to this `tests` module.
+we covered in Chapter 7 in the [“Paths for Referring to an Item in the Module
+Tree”][paths-for-referring-to-an-item-in-the-module-tree]<!-- ignore -->
+section. Because the `tests` module is an inner module, we need to bring the
+code under test in the outer module into the scope of the inner module. We use
+a glob here so anything we define in the outer module is available to this
+`tests` module.
 
 We’ve named our test `larger_can_hold_smaller`, and we’ve created the two
 `Rectangle` instances that we need. Then we called the `assert!` macro and
@@ -849,4 +850,4 @@ ch08-02-strings.html#concatenation-with-the--operator-or-the-format-macro
 ch11-02-running-tests.html#controlling-how-tests-are-run
 [derivable-traits]: appendix-03-derivable-traits.html
 [doc-comments]: ch14-02-publishing-to-crates-io.html#documentation-comments-as-tests
-[modules-as-privacy-boundary]: ch07-02-defining-modules-to-control-scope-and-privacy.html
+[paths-for-referring-to-an-item-in-the-module-tree]: ch07-03-paths-for-referring-to-an-item-in-the-module-tree.html
diff --git a/src/ch11-03-test-organization.md b/src/ch11-03-test-organization.md
index 56bbccbae4..bc8255e306 100644
--- a/src/ch11-03-test-organization.md
+++ b/src/ch11-03-test-organization.md
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ fn it_adds_two() {
 ```
 
 Note that the `mod common;` declaration is the same as the module declaration
-we demonstrated in Listing 7-25. Then in the test function, we can call the
+we demonstrated in Listing 7-21. Then in the test function, we can call the
 `common::setup()` function.
 
 #### Integration Tests for Binary Crates
diff --git a/src/title-page.md b/src/title-page.md
index 18a664a6b4..bc7fb9031b 100644
--- a/src/title-page.md
+++ b/src/title-page.md
@@ -2,15 +2,14 @@
 
 *by Steve Klabnik and Carol Nichols, with contributions from the Rust Community*
 
-Welcome to *The Rust Programming Language* book! This version of the text assumes
-you’re using Rust 1.31.0 or later with `edition="2018"` in *Cargo.toml* of
-all projects to use Rust 2018 Edition idioms. See the [“Installation” section
-of Chapter 1][install]<!-- ignore --> to install or update Rust, and see the
-new [Appendix E][editions]<!-- ignore --> for information on what editions of
-Rust are.
+This version of the text assumes you’re using Rust 1.31.0 or later with
+`edition="2018"` in *Cargo.toml* of all projects to use Rust 2018 Edition
+idioms. See the [“Installation” section of Chapter 1][install]<!-- ignore -->
+to install or update Rust, and see the new [Appendix E][editions]<!-- ignore
+--> for information on editions.
 
 The 2018 Edition of the Rust language includes a number of improvements that
-make Rust more ergonomic and easier to learn. This printing of the book
+make Rust more ergonomic and easier to learn. This iteration of the book
 contains a number of changes to reflect those improvements:
 
 - Chapter 7, “Managing Growing Projects with Packages, Crates, and Modules,”
@@ -20,7 +19,7 @@ contains a number of changes to reflect those improvements:
   Types that Implement Traits” that explain the new `impl Trait` syntax.
 - Chapter 11 has a new section titled “Using `Result<T, E>` in Tests” that
   shows how to write tests that use the `?` operator.
-- The “Advanced Lifetimes” section of Chapter 19 was removed because compiler
+- The “Advanced Lifetimes” section in Chapter 19 was removed because compiler
   improvements have made the constructs in that section even rarer.
 - The previous Appendix D, “Macros,” has been expanded to include procedural
   macros and was moved to the “Macros” section in Chapter 19.
@@ -31,7 +30,7 @@ contains a number of changes to reflect those improvements:
 - We fixed a number of small errors and imprecise wording throughout the book.
   Thank you to the readers who reported them!
 
-Note that any code in the first printing of *The Rust Programming Language*
+Note that any code in earlier iterations of *The Rust Programming Language*
 that compiled will continue to compile without `edition="2018"` in the
 project’s *Cargo.toml*, even as you update the Rust compiler version you’re
 using. That’s Rust’s backward compatibility guarantees at work!