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From: Kevin Reid <kpreid@google.com>
Date: Mon, 9 Aug 2021 18:26:58 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Reword description of automatic impls of `Unsize`.
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The existing documentation felt a little unhelpfully concise, so this
change tries to improve it by using longer sentences, each of which
specifies which kinds of types it applies to as early as possible. In
particular, the third item starts with “Structs ...” instead of
saying “Foo is a struct” later.

Also, the previous list items “Only the last field has a type
involving `T`” and “`T` is not part of the type of any other
fields” are, as far as I see, redundant with each other, so I removed
the latter.
---
 library/core/src/marker.rs | 20 +++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/library/core/src/marker.rs b/library/core/src/marker.rs
index fb957348bebd3..556b1a721d303 100644
--- a/library/core/src/marker.rs
+++ b/library/core/src/marker.rs
@@ -99,17 +99,15 @@ pub trait Sized {
 /// `Unsize<dyn fmt::Debug>`.
 ///
 /// All implementations of `Unsize` are provided automatically by the compiler.
-///
-/// `Unsize` is implemented for:
-///
-/// - `[T; N]` is `Unsize<[T]>`
-/// - `T` is `Unsize<dyn Trait>` when `T: Trait`
-/// - `Foo<..., T, ...>` is `Unsize<Foo<..., U, ...>>` if:
-///   - `T: Unsize<U>`
-///   - Foo is a struct
-///   - Only the last field of `Foo` has a type involving `T`
-///   - `T` is not part of the type of any other fields
-///   - `Bar<T>: Unsize<Bar<U>>`, if the last field of `Foo` has type `Bar<T>`
+/// Those implementations are:
+///
+/// - Arrays `[T; N]` implement `Unsize<[T]>`.
+/// - Types implementing a trait `Trait` also implement `Unsize<dyn Trait>`.
+/// - Structs `Foo<..., T, ...>` implement `Unsize<Foo<..., U, ...>>` if all of these conditions
+///   are met:
+///   - `T: Unsize<U>`.
+///   - Only the last field of `Foo` has a type involving `T`.
+///   - `Bar<T>: Unsize<Bar<U>>`, where `Bar<T>` stands for the actual type of that last field.
 ///
 /// `Unsize` is used along with [`ops::CoerceUnsized`] to allow
 /// "user-defined" containers such as [`Rc`] to contain dynamically-sized