From a00e53bf34d296212332d7c434204620e4bc46c3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Daniel A. Wozniak" Date: Wed, 6 Sep 2023 14:48:36 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Fix spelling and grammar --- 0000-master-cluster.md | 20 ++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/0000-master-cluster.md b/0000-master-cluster.md index e80f9ea..13daebe 100644 --- a/0000-master-cluster.md +++ b/0000-master-cluster.md @@ -12,13 +12,13 @@ Add the ability to create a cluster of Masters that run behind a load balancer. # Motivation [motivation]: #motivation -The current [high availability features](https://docs.saltproject.io/en/latest/topics/highavailability/index.html) in the Salt ecosystem allow minions to have back up masters. There are two flavors of Multi Master which Minions can be configured. +The current [high availability features](https://docs.saltproject.io/en/latest/topics/highavailability/index.html) in the Salt ecosystem allow minions to have back up masters. There are two flavors of Multi Master which can be configured on a Minion. Minions can connect to [multiple masters simultaneously](https://docs.saltproject.io/en/latest/topics/tutorials/multimaster.html). -Minions can also be configure to one master at a time [using fail over](https://docs.saltproject.io/en/latest/topics/tutorials/multimaster_pki.html#multiple-masters-for-a-minion). +Minions can also be configured to connect to one master at a time [using fail over](https://docs.saltproject.io/en/latest/topics/tutorials/multimaster_pki.html#multiple-masters-for-a-minion). @@ -35,18 +35,18 @@ It would be much more ideal if jobs could scale across multiple masters. # Design [design]: #detailed-design -In order to accomplish this we will need to change the way jobs execute. -Currently new jobs get send directly to the publish server from the request +In order to accomplish this, we will need to change the way jobs execute. +Currently new jobs get sent directly to the publish server from the request server. -If we forward IPC Events between Masters we can get the return flow to be shared, as shown below. +If we forward IPC Events between Masters, we can get the return flow to be shared, as shown below: -To get job publishes to work we need to make sure publishes also travel over the IPC Event bus. +To get job publishes to work, we need to make sure publishes also travel over the IPC Event bus. @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ Jobs can come and go through all the masters in our master pool. From a minion's > [!IMPORTANT] -> THe current work for this SEP can be found [here](https://github.com/saltstack/salt/pull/64936) +> The current work for this SEP can be found [here](https://github.com/saltstack/salt/pull/64936) ## Alternatives @@ -75,6 +75,6 @@ None as of this time. # Drawbacks [drawbacks]: #drawbacks -The biggest drawback is the fact that we'll need to maintain the three ways of -doing HA. This adds complexity however, if successfull. We can potential -depericate some of or all of the exiting HA functionality. +The biggest drawback is the fact that we will need to maintain three ways of +doing HA. This adds complexity however, if successfull. We can potentially +depericate some of, or all of, the exiting HA functionality.