From 661991b7b47a3bb43768259108b65ec275049112 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Patrick H. Lauke" <redux@splintered.co.uk>
Date: Sat, 5 Nov 2022 16:22:44 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Tweak collapse prose

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 site/content/docs/5.2/components/collapse.md | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/site/content/docs/5.2/components/collapse.md b/site/content/docs/5.2/components/collapse.md
index e53fb5458f66..95abc536c43b 100644
--- a/site/content/docs/5.2/components/collapse.md
+++ b/site/content/docs/5.2/components/collapse.md
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Click the buttons below to show and hide another element via class changes:
 - `.collapsing` is applied during transitions
 - `.collapse.show` shows content
 
-Generally, we recommend using a button with the `data-bs-target` attribute. While not recommended from a semantic point of view, you can also use a link with the `href` attribute (and a `role="button"`). In both cases, the `data-bs-toggle="collapse"` is required.
+Generally, we recommend using a `<button>` with the `data-bs-target` attribute. While not recommended from a semantic point of view, you can also use an `<a>` link with the `href` attribute (and a `role="button"`). In both cases, the `data-bs-toggle="collapse"` is required.
 
 {{< example >}}
 <p>
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ Generally, we recommend using a button with the `data-bs-target` attribute. Whil
 
 ## Horizontal
 
-The collapse plugin also supports horizontal collapsing. Add the `.collapse-horizontal` modifier class to transition the `width` instead of `height` and set a `width` on the immediate child element. Feel free to write your own custom Sass, use inline styles, or use our [width utilities]({{< docsref "/utilities/sizing" >}}).
+The collapse plugin supports horizontal collapsing. Add the `.collapse-horizontal` modifier class to transition the `width` instead of `height` and set a `width` on the immediate child element. Feel free to write your own custom Sass, use inline styles, or use our [width utilities]({{< docsref "/utilities/sizing" >}}).
 
 {{< callout info >}}
 Please note that while the example below has a `min-height` set to avoid excessive repaints in our docs, this is not explicitly required. **Only the `width` on the child element is required.**
@@ -63,10 +63,10 @@ Please note that while the example below has a `min-height` set to avoid excessi
 </div>
 {{< /example >}}
 
-## Multiple targets
+## Multiple toggles and targets
 
-A `<button>` or `<a>` can show and hide multiple elements by referencing them with a selector in its `href` or `data-bs-target` attribute.
-Multiple `<button>` or `<a>` can show and hide an element if they each reference it with their `href` or `data-bs-target` attribute
+A `<button>` or `<a>` element can show and hide multiple elements by referencing them with a selector in its `data-bs-target` or `href` attribute.
+Conversely, multiple `<button>` or `<a>` elements can show and hide the same element if they each reference it with their `data-bs-target` or `href` attribute.
 
 {{< example >}}
 <p>