MakeContributions · ming-tsai · Apr 16, 2022 · Apr 15, 2022 · Apr 15, 2022 · Apr 15, 2022
diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/0/1-1DC.md b/english/normal-dungeon/0/1-1DC.md
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ In either a move of defiance or sheer stupidity, you decide to continue lying on
 
 Your stomach hurts so badly that you can hardly imagine standing up.
 
-You think of home and all of the sweet, sweet bacon 🥓 just sitting in your pantry as the dungeon slowly fades away.
+You think of home and all the sweet, sweet bacon 🥓 just sitting in your pantry as the dungeon slowly fades away.
 
 You starve to death ☠.
 

diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/1/3.md b/english/normal-dungeon/1/3.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-This is a long-distance⏳ transportation circle and you found a 🐉dragon sleeping💤.
+This is a long-distance⏳ transportation circle, and you found a 🐉dragon sleeping💤.
 
 - [Sneak towards it 🤫👟](4.md)
 - [Leave it alone ](../2/1.md)

diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/2/1.md b/english/normal-dungeon/2/1.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 You see a shady figure 🕴 in the distance.
-The lights around you are dead, so you cannot see who it is. You see a short blade 🗡 nearby.
+The surrounding lights are dead, so you cannot see who it is. You see a short blade 🗡 nearby.
 
 * [Approach them](3.md)
 * [Pick up the blade 🗡](1-A.md)
diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/3/2.md b/english/normal-dungeon/3/2.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-As you approach your home, the 🚪door is ajar, ever so slightly, 🕯candlight emanating from the cracks.
+As you approach your home, the 🚪door is ajar, ever so slightly, 🕯candlelight emanating from the cracks.
 
 ⚔️[Approach the door from the front?](3.md)
 

diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/3/4-1.md b/english/normal-dungeon/3/4-1.md
@@ -1,3 +1,3 @@
-You run after the 🐰 with the ⏱, the thicket 🌿 gets higher and tigther, until you can see only a wild pattern of greens. You make a further step...
+You run after the 🐰 with the ⏱, the thicket 🌿 gets higher and tighter, until you can see only a wild pattern of greens. You make a further step...
 
 ⚫ [You fall into a hole](../0/0.md)
diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/6/1.md b/english/normal-dungeon/6/1.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
- While heading upstairs, you find another trail of blood🩸. There are shattered windows 🪟 and glass shards are scattered all over the place.
+ While heading upstairs, you find another trail of blood🩸. There are broken windows 🪟 and glass shards are scattered all over the place.
 
  A loud noise emanates from the master bedroom. 🛌
 

diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/6/2.md b/english/normal-dungeon/6/2.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
- You enter the bedroom 🛏 and stumble upon the 😈 thrusting his 🔪 into another victim.
+ You enter the bedroom 🛏 and stumble upon the murderer 😈 thrusting his knife 🔪 into another victim.
 
  He spots you 👀 while committing this heinous crime.😱
 

diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/6/4.md b/english/normal-dungeon/6/4.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
  While leaving the house 🏃🏻‍♂️🏠, you are hit 🎯 at the base of your skull 🤕. 
- Pain overwhelmes you as you lose consciousness 😵.
+ Pain overwhelms you as you lose consciousness 😵.
 
 - [Regain consciousness 😖](../0/0.md)
diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/9/1.md b/english/normal-dungeon/9/1.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-You stand in front of a large, ominious castle 🏰, gargoyle statues 🗿 standing guard at either side of the entrance way. 
+You stand in front of a large, ominous castle 🏰, gargoyle statues 🗿 standing guard at either side of the entrance way. 
 
-Torches 🔥, long since burnt out, stand parallel to the rather large, forboding oak door 🚪. You notice the door 🚪 stands slightly ajar, indicating you may not be the first person to have stopped here today...
+Torches 🔥, long since burnt out, stand parallel to the rather large, foreboding oak door 🚪. You notice the door 🚪 stands slightly ajar, indicating you may not be the first person to have stopped here today...
 
 - [➡️ Enter inside](2.md)
 - [There may be someone inside; let's enter cautiously 😐...](2.md)
diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/9/3-CA.md b/english/normal-dungeon/9/3-CA.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-Dust covers the scattered papers 📰 that lie upon the desk, all written in a language you cannot read 😐. No notes seems to be on the piece of papers 📰 or in it's drawers.
+Dust covers the scattered papers 📰 that lie upon the desk, all written in a language you cannot read 😐. No notes seems to be on the piece of papers 📰 or in its drawers.
 
 ***What will you do next?***
 

diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/9/5-CA.md b/english/normal-dungeon/9/5-CA.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 Leisurely thumbing through whatever book 📔 catches your eye 👁, you find some books on poetry 🎼, some books on geography 🌍, and some books in a language you cannot read 😕.
 
- Still, you feel as though you have come out of this somewhat more knowledgable than you were before.
+ Still, you feel as though you have come out of this somewhat more knowledgeable than you were before.
 
 - [Go back 🔙](3-A.md)
diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/9/6-DA.md b/english/normal-dungeon/9/6-DA.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-You shine your light over the chest to your left. It looks like your regular old chest, but as you approach it slowly, an foul stench hits your nostrils.
+You shine your light over the chest to your left. It looks like your regular old chest, but as you approach it slowly, a foul stench hits your nostrils.
 
 Something doesn't feel right. You feel like you're being watched. You feel fear slowly creep into your veins as you are a few feet away from the container.
 

diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/9/6-DB.md b/english/normal-dungeon/9/6-DB.md
@@ -2,6 +2,6 @@ You approach the chest to your right. You investigate it with the help of your t
 
 You try to force the chest open, but it won't budge. It seems that whatever loot is inside the chest is going to have to keep waiting.
 
-You feel a strange presence eminating from behind you, but when you turn around, it's just another chest. You feel like you're being watched, but you quickly dismiss the feeling as you head back to the corridor.
+You feel a strange presence emanating from behind you, but when you turn around, it's just another chest. You feel like you're being watched, but you quickly dismiss the feeling as you head back to the corridor.
 
 - [Head back to the corridor ↗](6-C.md)
diff --git a/english/normal-dungeon/9/6-EA.md b/english/normal-dungeon/9/6-EA.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-You unroll the the piece of parchment and discover that it's a map!
+You unroll the piece of parchment and discover that it's a map!
 
 The map details the different rooms of the dungeon, including the room you are in. Apparently, the dungeon was used to house a minotaur! A beast that is half-man, half-bull. He is located at the other side of the dungeon in what seems to be the biggest cell in the building.