Fixed: Improved wording based on review

OCFL · Mar 4, 2020 · 84f63d0 · 84f63d0
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@@ -701,11 +701,12 @@ <h2>Version</h2>
                         </p>
                         <p>
                             <a href="#logical-path">Logical paths</a> present the structure of an OCFL Object at a
-                            given version. This is given as an array of file paths, with the following restrictions
-                            provide for path safety in this common case. The logical path MUST be interpreted as a
-                            set of one or more path elements joined by a <code>/</code> path separator. Path elements
-                            MUST NOT be <code>.</code>, <code>..</code>, or empty (<code>//</code>). Additionally,
-                            a logical path MUST NOT begin with a leading <code>/</code>.
+                            given version. This is given as an array of values, with the following restrictions to
+                            provide for path safety in the common case of the logical path value representing a file
+                            path. The logical path MUST be interpreted as a set of one or more path elements joined by
+                            a <code>/</code> path separator. Path elements MUST NOT be <code>.</code>, <code>..</code>,
+                            or empty (<code>//</code>). Additionally, a logical path MUST NOT begin with a leading
+                            <code>/</code>.
                         </p>
                         <blockquote class="informative">
                             <p>