fixup! Update README

README.md

@@ -30,7 +30,11 @@ Knowing where each user is within an application helps you understand their inte
 
 **What is everyone doing in the application?**
 
-All users should be working on the latest state of the application. If one user makes a change or an update, this change should be synced to a backend database and be immediately reflected in the UI for all users. For example, you can display a typing indicator when a colleague is editing a cell in a spreadsheet. As soon as they save their update, the new cell contents should be visible to all users.
+Changes to the app state made by users not only need to be synced with your backend for validation and long term storage, but also be immediately reflected in the UI so that users are always viewing the latest information. For example, in a spreadsheet application, if one user has entered a value in a cell, all other users need to see that change instantly. Live updates help accomplish this in a collaborative space.
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+## Status
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+The Collaborative Spaces SDK is currently under development. If you are interested in being an early adopter and providing feedback then you can [sign up](https://go.ably.com/spaces-early-access) for early access and are welcome to [provide us with feedback](https://go.ably.com/spaces-feedback).
 
 ## Quickstart
 
@@ -65,7 +69,7 @@ To instantiate the Spaces SDK, create an [Ably client](https://ably.com/docs/get
 import Spaces from '@ably-labs/spaces';
 import { Realtime } from 'ably';
 
-const client = new Realtime.Promise({key: "<API-key>", clientId: "<client-ID"});
+const client = new Realtime.Promise({key: "<API-key>", clientId: "<client-ID>"});
 const spaces = new Spaces(client);
 ```
 
@@ -221,7 +225,3 @@ The above listener will receive a `CursorUpdate` event:
   "data": { "color": "red" }
 }
 ```
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-## Status
-
-The Collaborative Spaces SDK is currently under development. If you are interested in being an early adopter and providing feedback then you can [sign up](https://go.ably.com/spaces-early-access) for early access and are welcome to [provide us with feedback](https://go.ably.com/spaces-feedback).