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This PR includes:

  • restructuring the file organization
  • removing empty pages
  • fixing spelling errors

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  • disappearing navigation fix
  • move API references from tech docs to a special category

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  • New Features

    • Updated sidebar configuration to expand key categories by default for improved navigation.
    • Added an informational block in the Quickstart Guide to assist users unfamiliar with the Cosmos SDK environment.
  • Documentation

    • Revised labels in various documentation categories for clarity, including updates from "Connectors" to "Connectors - WIP ⚙️" and "Intro to Axone" to "Core Concepts."
    • Standardized capitalization of the term "zone" throughout multiple documents for consistency.
    • Enhanced clarity in the Axone Protocol descriptions and links within the documentation.
  • Bug Fixes

    • Corrected terminology in the documentation to ensure accurate descriptions of security implications related to generated files.
  • Style

    • Improved formatting of section headings in the whitepaper for better readability.

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The changes involve updates to various documentation files, primarily focusing on standardizing terminology, particularly the capitalization of the term "zone." Additionally, several labels in JSON configuration files have been modified to enhance clarity, and some documents have been restructured for improved readability. The sidebar configuration has also been adjusted to expand certain categories by default while removing others, resulting in a more streamlined navigation experience.

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File(s) Change Summary
docs/connector/_category_.json Changed label from "Connectors" to "Connectors - WIP ⚙️".
docs/getting-started/core-concepts/_category_.json Changed label from "Intro to Axone" to "Core Concepts".
docs/getting-started/core-concepts/*.md Standardized capitalization of "zone" throughout the documents.
docs/getting-started/quickstart/_category_.json Changed label from "Quickstart Guide" to "Quickstart".
docs/getting-started/quickstart/*.md Added an info block for Cosmos SDK guidance; standardized capitalization of "zone."
docs/index.mdx Refined descriptions of the Axone Protocol and updated a hyperlink.
docs/nodes/run-node.md Corrected "sensible" to "sensitive" regarding security implications.
docs/technical-documentation/governance/*.md Standardized capitalization of "zone" and updated a hyperlink reference for the Axone ontology.
docs/whitepaper/*.md Standardized capitalization of "zone" and made formatting adjustments to section headings.
sidebars.js Added collapsed: false to several categories and removed others for streamlined navigation.

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    User->>Sidebar: Open documentation
    Sidebar->>Documentation: Display expanded categories
    Documentation->>User: Show updated content
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🐰 In a garden bright and fair,
The zones now dance without a care.
With labels clear and paths refined,
Our knowledge grows, our thoughts aligned.
Hooray for changes, one and all!
Let's hop along, we’ll have a ball! 🌼✨

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Actionable comments posted: 3

Outside diff range, codebase verification and nitpick comments (9)
docs/technical-documentation/governance/sources.md (1)

19-19: Consider rewording the sentence to avoid starting with "It's".

The static analysis tool LanguageTool has flagged a style issue related to sentence beginnings. The sentence "It's a crucial aspect of governance, ensuring resources are used appropriately per the relevant parties' expressed will and intentions." can be reworded to avoid starting with "It's".

Here's a suggestion:

-It's a crucial aspect of governance, ensuring resources are used appropriately per the relevant parties' expressed will and intentions.
+Resource consent is a crucial aspect of governance, ensuring resources are used appropriately per the relevant parties' expressed will and intentions.
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[style] ~19-~19: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Context: ... interact with their digital resources. It's a crucial aspect of governance, ensur...

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docs/index.mdx (1)

12-12: Enhance clarity by adding the missing article.

The changes enhance clarity and specificity in the description of the Axone Protocol. Well done!

Please add the missing article "the" before "digital landscape" to further improve the sentence structure.

Apply this diff:

-Axone Protocol is a **decentralized orchestration protocol** designed to transform digital landscape by seamlessly connecting and sharing digital resources effective particularly within the AI stack. Axone empowers AI startups, tech companies, and developers to innovate and create new applications.
+Axone Protocol is a **decentralized orchestration protocol** designed to transform the digital landscape by seamlessly connecting and sharing digital resources effective particularly within the AI stack. Axone empowers AI startups, tech companies, and developers to innovate and create new applications.
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[uncategorized] ~12-~12: You might be missing the article “the” here.
Context: ...ration protocol** designed to transform digital landscape by seamlessly connecting and ...

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[uncategorized] ~12-~12: Possible missing comma found.
Context: ...onnecting and sharing digital resources effective particularly within the AI stack. Axone...

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docs/technical-documentation/governance/rule-of-form.md (1)

17-17: Approve terminology change and consider simplifying "ultimate objective".

The change from "Zone" to "zone" enhances clarity and consistency in terminology. Approved.

The static analysis tool LanguageTool suggests that "ultimate objective" might be wordy. Consider simplifying it to just "objective" as it conveys the same meaning concisely.

-These rules embody the respective zone's essence, intent, reach, and ultimate objective.
+These rules embody the respective zone's essence, intent, reach, and objective.
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[style] ~17-~17: ‘ultimate objective’ might be wordy. Consider a shorter alternative.
Context: ...tive zone's essence, intent, reach, and ultimate objective. ## Content The content specifies the...

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docs/whitepaper/roles.md (1)

79-83: Consider varying the sentence beginnings to improve style.

The static analysis tool flagged a minor style issue - three successive sentences beginning with "They" in the "Data Providers" section:

They are the only ones authorized to modify these rules unless they decide otherwise through these rules of consent. They may also receive compensation from Consumers each time their data is used or purchased, according to the associated governance rules.

While this repetition doesn't significantly impact clarity, varying the sentence structure slightly can improve the writing style.

For example, you could reword it as:

They are the only ones authorized to modify these rules unless they decide otherwise through these rules of consent. Additionally, Data Providers may receive compensation from Consumers each time their data is used or purchased, according to the associated governance rules.

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[style] ~81-~81: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Context: ...herwise through these rules of consent. They may also receive compensation from Cons...

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docs/getting-started/quickstart/describe-zone.mdx (2)

5-5: Consider keeping "Zone" capitalized in the title.

Since "Collaborative AI Zone" appears to be a proper name, it would be appropriate to keep "Zone" capitalized in the title.

-# Describe a zone
+# Describe a Zone

7-7: Phrasing is acceptable.

The static analysis tool suggested that "taking into account" might be wordy. However, in this context, the current phrasing is clear and does not significantly impact readability. Feel free to keep the phrasing as is.

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[style] ~7-~7: ‘taking into account’ might be wordy. Consider a shorter alternative.
Context: ...ources are compatible with these rules, taking into account the associated consents. A resource is ...

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docs/whitepaper/solution.md (2)

57-58: LGTM! Consider a shorter alternative for "taking into account".

The changes from "Zone" to "zone" are consistent with the goal of standardizing the capitalization of the term throughout the document.

Regarding the phrase "taking into account" at line 58, consider using a shorter alternative like "considering" to improve the conciseness of the text.

-A zone is a conceptual framework defined by a set of rules, within which the recognized digital resources are compatible with these rules, taking into account the associated consents.
+A zone is a conceptual framework defined by a set of rules, within which the recognized digital resources are compatible with these rules, considering the associated consents.

Also applies to: 62-64

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148-148: LGTM! Consider a shorter alternative for "takes into account".

The changes from "Zone" to "zone" are consistent with the goal of standardizing the capitalization of the term throughout the document.

Regarding the phrase "takes into account" at line 167, consider using a shorter alternative like "considers" to improve the conciseness of the text.

-This takes into account the context at the time of the request, as the rules and digital resources registered in the blockchain are continuously evolving.
+This considers the context at the time of the request, as the rules and digital resources registered in the blockchain are continuously evolving.

Also applies to: 151-151, 159-159, 167-167, 170-170, 174-175, 190-192

docs/getting-started/core-concepts/protocol-concepts.md (1)

200-210: LGTM!

The changes provide a detailed explanation of the protocol design and underlying infrastructure of the Axone ecosystem. The information about zones and Dataverse is helpful in understanding the decentralized and modular architecture of the protocol. The explanation of the underlying infrastructure based on Cosmos technology and the integration of the IBC module is also insightful in understanding the scalability and interoperability aspects of the ecosystem.

Nitpick: Consider an alternative adjective to strengthen your wording.

At line 206, the phrase "deep chain customization" can be rephrased to use a more precise adjective. For example, you can use "extensive" or "comprehensive" instead of "deep" to convey the level of customization more accurately.

-This foundation allows deep chain customization, providing the flexibility to adapt and update system components to enhance scalability.
+This foundation allows extensive chain customization, providing the flexibility to adapt and update system components to enhance scalability.
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[style] ~206-~206: Consider an alternative adjective to strengthen your wording.
Context: ... infrastructure. This foundation allows deep chain customization, providing the flex...

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docs/technical-documentation/governance/sources.md (2)

15-15: LGTM!

The change from "Zone" to "zone" is consistent with the goal of standardizing terminology throughout the document.


19-19: LGTM!

The change from "Zones" to "zones" is consistent with the goal of standardizing terminology throughout the document.

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docs/index.mdx (3)

14-14: LGTM!

The change emphasizes the protocol's collaborative capabilities, which is a good addition.


16-16: LGTM!

The change enhances the clarity of the protocol's core functionality and benefits.


30-33: LGTM!

The change indicates a shift in focus towards a more specific quickstart guide, which is a good update to improve the user experience.

sidebars.js (4)

10-10: LGTM!

Setting collapsed: false for the "Getting Started" category is a good change that improves the discoverability of the getting started documentation.


23-23: LGTM!

Setting collapsed: false for the "Architecture" category is a good change that improves the visibility of the architecture documentation.


85-85: LGTM!

Setting collapsed: false for the "Running a Node" category is a good change that improves the discoverability of the node running documentation.


98-98: LGTM!

Setting collapsed: false for the "Guides" and "Contribute to Axone" categories is a good change that improves the visibility of the guides and contribution documentation.

Also applies to: 124-124

docs/technical-documentation/ontology/the-power-of-ontologies.md (2)

22-22: LGTM!

The change from "Zone" to "zone" improves the consistency of terminology throughout the document.

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37-37: LGTM!

The code segment is well-written and does not require any changes.

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docs/technical-documentation/ontology/okp4-ontology.md (3)

50-50: LGTM!

The code changes are approved.


75-76: LGTM!

The code changes are approved.


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docs/whitepaper/roles.md (1)

11-11: Formatting changes to section headings look good!

The changes to the emphasis format for section headings across all participant roles improve the visual distinction without altering the content. The new format is applied consistently.

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docs/technical-documentation/governance/decentralized-identity.mdx (2)

208-208: LGTM!

The URL update for the Axone ontology reference is approved.

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[uncategorized] ~208-~208: “its” (belonging to it) seems less likely than “it’s” (it is)
Context: ...in Axone Protocol The Axone ontology is ...

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208-208: Skipping the static analysis hint.

The usage of "its" in the URL slug is correct. The static analysis tool has incorrectly flagged it as a grammar issue.

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[uncategorized] ~208-~208: “its” (belonging to it) seems less likely than “it’s” (it is)
Context: ...in Axone Protocol The Axone ontology is ...

(AI_HYDRA_LEO_CPT_ITS_ITIS)

docs/getting-started/core-concepts/ai-factory.mdx (12)

5-5: LGTM!

The code changes are approved.


48-48: LGTM!

The code changes are approved.


53-53: LGTM!

The code changes are approved.


83-83: LGTM!

The code changes are approved.


87-87: LGTM!

The code changes are approved.


89-89: LGTM!

The code changes are approved.


91-93: LGTM!

The code changes are approved.

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[style] ~91-~91: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Context: ...hese rules are allowed by the zone. All Resources and Services compatible with ...

(ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE)


96-98: LGTM!

The code changes are approved.


100-100: LGTM!

The code changes are approved.


137-137: LGTM!

The code changes are approved.


212-212: LGTM!

The code changes are approved.


91-91: Skipping the static analysis hint.

The repetition of "All" at the beginning of successive sentences is a stylistic choice to emphasize the completeness of the resources and services allowed and compatible with the zone. Rewording or using synonyms may dilute the intended meaning and impact. Therefore, no change is necessary.

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[style] ~91-~91: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Context: ...hese rules are allowed by the zone. All Resources and Services compatible with ...

(ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE)

docs/whitepaper/solution.md (3)

51-51: LGTM!

The change from "Zones" to "zones" is consistent with the goal of standardizing the capitalization of the term throughout the document.


55-55: LGTM!

The change from "Zones" to "zones" is consistent with the goal of standardizing the capitalization of the term throughout the document.


68-69: LGTM!

The changes from "Zone" to "zone" are consistent with the goal of standardizing the capitalization of the term throughout the document.

Also applies to: 127-127

docs/getting-started/quickstart/describe-resource.mdx (2)

9-13: Excellent addition of the info block to guide new users.

The info block provides valuable guidance for users who may be unfamiliar with the Cosmos SDK environment. By linking to relevant resources on Keplr and CLI, you ensure that users have the necessary foundational knowledge before proceeding with the Axone Quickstart Guide. This improves the user experience and sets them up for success.


7-8: Modification to the introductory paragraph is consistent with the new info block.

Removing the reference to the Keplr and CLI guides from the introductory paragraph and moving it into the new info block improves the flow of information. The introductory paragraph now maintains a clear focus on welcoming users and introducing the Axone Quickstart Guide, while the info block provides the necessary additional context.

docs/getting-started/core-concepts/protocol-concepts.md (4)

Line range hint 56-81: LGTM!

The changes provide a clear example of how a zone works and how a consumer can interact with it. The explanation of the interpretation of rules before the execution is also helpful in understanding the process.


79-81: LGTM!

The changes provide additional information about the Orchestration Services and how they can be chosen based on the zone governance framework. This information is helpful in understanding the flexibility and customization options available in the ecosystem.


93-95: LGTM!

The changes provide a clear explanation of the Pactum smart contract and its role in establishing a Service Execution Agreement. The information about how Pactum ensures the composability and integrity of the workflows is also helpful in understanding the reliability of the decentralized process.


Line range hint 169-180: LGTM!

The changes provide a comprehensive explanation of the zone governance in the Axone ecosystem. The information about zones being economic zones and the examples of rules that can be defined within a zone are helpful in understanding the flexibility and customization options available. The explanation of the importance of distinguishing between resources and zones is also insightful.

docs/faq/faq.md (4)

25-27: Capitalization change looks good.

The change from "Zone" to "zone" is consistent with the standardization mentioned in the summary.


46-53: Capitalization change looks good.

The change from "Zone" to "zone" is consistent with the standardization mentioned in the summary.

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[style] ~53-~53: The phrase “a variety of” may be wordy. To make your writing clearer, consider replacing it.
Context: ... scalable, and capable of accommodating a variety of rules and conditions for each zone, the...

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53-53: The phrase "a variety of" is acceptable in this context.

The static analysis hint suggests that the phrase may be wordy, but it is commonly used and does not significantly impact readability here.

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[style] ~53-~53: The phrase “a variety of” may be wordy. To make your writing clearer, consider replacing it.
Context: ... scalable, and capable of accommodating a variety of rules and conditions for each zone, the...

(A_VARIETY_OF)


106-106: The phrase "Our aim is to" is clear and concise.

The static analysis hint suggests that the phrase might be unnecessarily wordy, but it effectively expresses the project's goal and does not require rephrasing.

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[style] ~106-~106: This phrase might be unnecessarily wordy.
Context: ...e participants, and workflow consumers. Our aim is to allow individuals to easily define r...

(MY_HOPE_IS)

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@AnjaMis AnjaMis merged commit 19bbaf1 into main Sep 3, 2024
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