Small docs fixes for setting up a generic cluster #283
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This reworks things a bit more to read better to native english speakers. It cleans up some grammar, removes a lot of passive voice, and re-organizes things a bit.
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The rendered version is much easier to read to see how this PR looks. |
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LGTM. Thanks for the corrections! 👍 |
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Thanks @SEJeff |
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Inspired by @roffe's work, I decided to clean it up a little bit and reorganize some things.