Fix upgrade doc

distribworks · Jul 4, 2019 · fcc2878 · fcc2878
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diff --git a/website/content/upgrading/from_v1_to_v2.md b/website/content/upgrading/from_v1_to_v2.md
@@ -6,15 +6,15 @@ Dkron v2 brings lots of changes to the previous version. To successfully upgrade
 
 ## Migrating Jobs
 
-To migrate jobs from v1 to v2 they should be exported from the v1 cluster and imported into v2.
+To migrate jobs from v1 to v2, export jobs from the v1 cluster and import them into v2.
 
 A basic script to do that can be found [here](https://gist.github.com/pjz/94f4bd81a0897fd64db44593078e2156)
 
-You can take the chance to change your job tags as explained in the following section.
+You can take the opportunity to change your job tags as explained in the following section.
 
 ## Changing tags and metadata
 
-Tags behaves different in dkron 2. There is several dkron tags that changes its name and becomes reserved, the reserved tags are:
+Tags behave different in dkron 2. There are several dkron tags that changed names and have become reserved. The reserved tags are:
 
 - dc
 - region
@@ -26,10 +26,10 @@ Tags behaves different in dkron 2. There is several dkron tags that changes its
 - rpc_addr
 - port
 
-You can not set this tags with the `tags` param but tags `dc` and `region` could be set by `region` and `datacenter` params.
+You can not set these tags with the `tags` param. Tags `region` and `dc` can be set using the `region` and `datacenter` params, respectively.
 
-Dkron 2 change the job filtering API param from `tags` to `metadata`. Jobs have a new param `metadata` you could use to set any data to classificate jobs and then use the API call to filter results.
+In Dkron 2, the job filtering API now filters on the `metadata` instead of the `tags` field. Jobs have a new param `metadata` that can be used to set any data to classify jobs. These can then be used to filter results returned by the API.
 
 ## Selecting storage dir and backup strategies
 
-Dkron 2 implements a new param `data-dir` where the working data directory can be specified. This directory stores all working data of dkron and it should be backed up and handled with special attention.
+Dkron 2 implements a new param `data-dir`, which specifies the working data directory. This directory stores all working data, and it should be backed up and handled with special care.