Fix a whole ton of typos and style issues across the entire script

src/twee/menu/help.tw

@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
 :: Help [no_checkpoint]
-
 ### Keyboard controls
 
 * <kbd>W (K)</kbd> - *Select previous link.*

src/twee/menu/warpzone.tw

@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
 :: Debug console message [script]
-
 $(window).on('sm.story.started', function (event, {
   story
 }) {

src/twee/story/bathroom/hazel-route.tw

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Satisfied, you take your hands out and stop.
 * [[Keep going.|Keep masturbating.]]
 
 :: Keep masturbating.
-...Look, um, I'm not here to judge or anything. Maybe you're just here cause you're curious. Maybe you wanna see all the options. Get all the endings.
+...Look, uh, as your narrator, I'm not here to judge you or anything. Maybe you're just here because you're curious. Maybe you want to see all the options. Get all the endings.
 
 Still, there's plenty of other stuff you could be doing at this party instead. This is kind of... weird?
 
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Still, there's plenty of other stuff you could be doing at this party instead. T
 :: Think about...
 You try to quell the nagging voice in your head by visualizing a huge, voluptuous pair of <%-s.hg?"balls":"breasts"%>.
 
-In your mind's eye, you can see every drop of sweat covering their furry mass, just inches from your face. Perfectly round, firm, and begging to be worshipped. What you wouldn't give to be smothered by those tantalizing orbs...
+In your mind's eye, you can see every drop of sweat covering their furry mass, just inches from your face. Perfectly round, firm, and begging to be worshiped. What you wouldn't give to be smothered by those tantalizing orbs...
 
 There. Happy?
 
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ Suddenly, you hear a loud pounding at the door.
 * [[Escape through window.|Escape through window.]]
 
 :: Finish!!!
-Throwing care to the wind, you yank your pants down and continue abusing your gentials, steadily approaching climax... Getting closer and closer... Until...!!! You achieve orgasm. It feels wonderful. Your body convulses a little, and you let out a loud moan of satisfaction.
+Throwing care to the wind, you yank your pants down and continue abusing your genitals, steadily approaching climax... Getting closer and closer... Until...!!! You achieve orgasm. It feels wonderful. Your body convulses a little, and you let out a loud moan of satisfaction.
 
 Seconds later, the door swings open to reveal a gigantic brown bear wearing a tank top and shorts. "...!!!"
 
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ Thinking quickly, you yank your pants up, pull the nearest window open, and dive
 
 Just then, the door behind you swings open to reveal Hazel Gently, a buxom brown bear.
 
-As you clear the window sill, you look out and realize that this window is on the second story, overlooking the backyard. You faceplant gracelessly in the backyard and rapidly lose consciousness.
+As you clear the window sill, you look out and realize that this window is on the second story, overlooking the backyard. You face-plant gracelessly in the backyard and rapidly lose consciousness.
 
 In your last waking seconds, you realize this was a very stupid idea.
 
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ You groan from under <%-s.hg?"his":"her"%> oppressive mass, and try to say, actu
 :: Struggle under Hazel.
 You attempt to struggle for breath, but as a petite rabbit, you're hopelessly outmatched. <%-s.hg?"He":"She"%> realizes <%-s.hg?"he":"she"%>'s suffocating you, and slowly gets up, squishing <%-s.hg?"his":"her"%> rumbling belly against you in the process.
 
-<%-s.hg?"He":"She"%> eventually towers proudly over your collapsed body. "So. How about we make a little deal? I promise not to share the *embarassing* details of  how you jizzed yourself right in front of me, and in exchange..." A twisted smile comes across <%-s.hg?"his":"her"%> lips. "I get to eat you."
+<%-s.hg?"He":"She"%> eventually towers proudly over your collapsed body. "So. How about we make a little deal? I promise not to share the *embarrassing* details of  how you jizzed yourself right in front of me, and in exchange..." A twisted smile comes across <%-s.hg?"his":"her"%> lips. "I get to eat you."
 * [[What? Never!]]
 * [[O-okay...]]
 
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ The bear's paws clench around your skinny shoulders, and lift you effortlessly f
 :: Hazel noms you. [vore]
 You attempt to squeal out in fear, but Hazel's giant bear mouth has already clamped down hard over your head. Your face is pressed into <%-s.hg?"his":"her"%> slobbery tongue as <%-s.hg?"he":"she"%> effortlessly slides your head and shoulders into <%-s.hg?"his":"her"%> maw.
 
-"Mmmm," Hazel moans as <%-s.hg?"he":"she"%> tastes your fur. You cringe as your face is slowly squeezed into the slimy, suffocating tunnel of <%-s.hg?"his":"her"%> esophagus. You're still wearing your top, but you feel Hazel's paws effortlessly yank your jeans off as <%-s.hg?"he":"she"%> devours you.
+"Mmmm," Hazel moans as <%-s.hg?"he":"she"%> tastes your fur. You cringe as your face is slowly squeezed into the slimy, suffocating tunnel of <%-s.hg?"his":"her"%> esophagus. Hazel's paws effortlessly yank your jeans off as <%-s.hg?"he":"she"%> devours you, leaving you wearing only your top.
 
 You remember reading once that while their stomach acids can easily dissolve fur, flesh, and bone, bears often struggle to digest denim and leather.
 
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ You optimistically ask if that means <%-s.hg?"he":"she"%>'ll let you out now.
 * [[Please let me out of here!|Beg for Hazel to let you out.]]
 
 :: Beg for Hazel to let you out. [vore]
-You tell <%-s.hg?"him":"her"%> you're starting to feel short of breath, and very exhausted. The liquids around you are starting to sting your fur.
+You tell <%-s.hg?"him":"her"%> you're starting to feel short of breath, and very exhausted. The surrounding liquids are starting to sting your fur.
 
 "Awww," Hazel laughs, "is widdle Holly-wolly going nap-naps in the big scary bear's tum-tum?"
 

src/twee/story/bathroom/hazel-vore-epilogue.tw

@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
 :: Epilogue: Hazel Post Vore. [socmed]
-
 <!-- todo: consider trying to generate this HTML automatically-->
 <div.social-card>
 

src/twee/story/living-room/_living-room.tw

@@ -69,21 +69,21 @@ s.partyFlavorState = +s.partyFlavorState || 0;
 
 if (!setup.partyDanceLiterals) {
   setup.partyDanceLiterals = [
-    "You see a group of labradors cheering on their friend as he attempts to do a keg-stand.",
+    "You see a group of Labradors cheering on their friend as he attempts to do a keg-stand.",
 "A pair of black cats are looking on with awe as a dog proudly presents his enormous, swollen belly.",
 `The speakers start playing a techno remix of Marie Predatora's latest rap single: "Belly Drop, Belly Drop (Belly Drop)."`,
-`A grey wolf with a huge protruding gut accidentally bumps into you. "S'cuse me," she mutters as she walks away.`,
+`A grey wolf with a huge protruding gut accidentally bumps into you. "'Scuse me," she mutters as she walks away.`,
 `Your ears perk up: the speakers are a slow-jam by the classic R&B duo, Thumper & Bang. You tap your furry toes happily.`,
 `The sound system blares with the shouty vocals and distorted guitar of "groupie gas (ft. some snack idk)" by LOÜD GRÜMBLE.`,
 `A tall black wolf in a scarf and a flannel shirt brought an acoustic guitar to the party, and is playing "Wonderwall" with an extremely thoughtful expression.`,
 `A slightly chubby owl notices you from across the room and begins licking her beak.`,
-`A drunk labrador begins nuzzling you. "Oh my gooood dudes, this rabbit is soooo soft..." You blush. Surprisingly, his fur is extremely soft as well.`,
+`A drunk Labrador begins nuzzling you. "Oh my gooood dudes, this rabbit is soooo soft..." You blush. Surprisingly, his fur is extremely soft as well.`,
 `A green anaconda wags her tail in time with the music, and accidentally trips two people. "Oh, sorry!" she stammers, ",,,Sorry again!"`,
 `There aren't many other prey at this party. You feel a little small by comparison to all the huge anthros here.`,
 `A nice, easy song starts playing. You consider offering to dance with one of the guys around you, but most of them are several feet taller than you.`,
 `A heavy-set bear with a selfie stick is recording herself as she shakes her massive hips. You try not to stare, but it's absolutely hypnotic.`,
 `A lioness whispers to her friend, "Did you know there's a rabbit here?" They snicker. "Woah. Do you think it has a vore fetish?"`,
-`You see a catboy eagerly following a lioness out of the room. They both seem quite excited.`,
+`You see a cat boy eagerly following a lioness out of the room. They both seem quite excited.`,
 `A big brown stallion in a green jacket seems to take notice of your dancing. He winks at you from across the room.`,
 ].sort(e => 0.5 - Math.random());
 
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ s.partyFlavorDragon = text.includes("green dragon girl");
 s.partyFlavorOwl = text.includes("owl");
 s.partyFlavorWonderwolf = text.includes("wolf in a scarf");
 s.partyFlavorLioness = text.includes("lioness");
-s.partyFlavorLabrador = text.includes("A drunk labrador");
+s.partyFlavorLabrador = text.includes("A drunk Labrador");
 s.partyFlavorGutbump = text.includes("accidentally bumps into you");
 s.partyFlavorBasil = text.includes("brown stallion");
 return text;

src/twee/story/living-room/basil-route.tw

@@ -27,27 +27,27 @@ He shrugs. "Suit yourself," he says, then chugs both bottles in hardly a few sec
 
 Basil stares at your face for a second, and raises an eyebrow.
 
-"...Don't I know you from somwhere?"
+"...Don't I know you from somewhere?"
 
 * [[I don't think so...]]
 * [[My name's Hollis?]]
 
 :: Thanks for the compliment!
 He chuckles. "Y'know, you look familiar..." He spends a few seconds thinking, and raises an eyebrow.
 
-"...Do I know you from somwhere?"
+"...Do I know you from somewhere?"
 
 * [[I don't think so...]]
 * [[My name's Hollis?]]
 
 :: I'd be happy to show you some more...
-He raises an eyebrows, and a satisfied smile comes across his face as he catches your meaning.
+He raises an eyebrow, and a satisfied smile comes across his face as he catches your meaning.
 
-He delicately takes your hand in his, and steps closer to you until he's almost looking straight down at you. It's a little bit intimidating.
+He delicately takes your hand in his, and steps closer to you until he's almost looking straight down at you. It's a little intimidating.
 
 "Y'know, you look kinda familiar..." He spends a few seconds thinking, and raises an eyebrow.
 
-"...Do I know you from somwhere?"
+"...Do I know you from somewhere?"
 
 * [[I don't think so...]]
 * [[My name's Hollis?]]
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ His eyes flash with recognition.
 * [[Oh, right!]]
 
 :: Oh, right!
-You remember him now. Basil was a an award-winning track star, who graduated a year ahead of you. His younger sister once gave you math tutoring.
+You remember him now. Basil was an award-winning track star, who graduated a year ahead of you. His younger sister once gave you math tutoring.
 
 "Yeah, small world, huh?" he says,
 
@@ -148,7 +148,6 @@ He brings himself down to your eye level. "Whaddya say we get a little more... r
 
 You nod, trying to keep your cool, and not betray how excited you are.
 
-* **TODO**
 * [[...Do you want to eat me?]]
 
 :: Is that a threat?
@@ -173,7 +172,7 @@ After several seconds, he separates his lips from yours. "Well Hollis, whaddya s
 :: ...Do you want to eat me?
 *CW: Exhibitionism. Masturbation.*
 
-Basil's face looks serious as you ask this. Unconsciously, he begins salivating. He swallows a little saliva and asks, "Hollis... Do you wanna get eaten?"
+Basil's face looks serious as you ask this. Unconsciously, he begins salivating. He swallows a little saliva and asks, "Hollis... Do *you* want to be eaten?"
 
 * [[Yes.|Yes, eat me Basil.]]
 * [[No.|No thank you. (Basil)]]
@@ -187,14 +186,14 @@ Basil scoffs a little, and raises an eyebrow. "You want me to swallow you in fro
 * [[No, wait.|No, don't eat me Basil.]]
 
 :: No, don't eat me Basil.
-Basil frowns. "Heh. Change your mind?" He smugly twiddles his thumbs, "That's a shame, I was looking forward to get a taste of you... You're sure you don't want it?"
+Basil frowns. "Heh. Change your mind?" He smugly twiddles his thumbs, "That's a shame, I was looking forward to getting a taste of you... You're sure you don't want it?"
 
 * [[Well, as long as you don't digest me...]]
 * [[No, thank you.|No thank you. (Basil)]]
 * [[How about a taste of my tail instead?  (¯- w •¯)|Oh, is my tail giving you ideas?]]
 
 :: Agree to let Basil eat you in the living room.
-Something inside your head is screaming at you to run, begging you to not to succumb to such a pointless fate. Maybe the punch is messing with your head. But right now, all you can think about is the wet, hot flesh inside this horse's slobbery mouth.
+Something inside your head is screaming at you to run, begging you not to succumb to such a pointless fate. Maybe the punch is messing with your head. But right now, all you can think about is the wet, hot flesh inside this horse's slobbery mouth.
 
 You nod your head again. Unconsciously, your tail starts wagging.
 
@@ -205,7 +204,7 @@ Basil rises to his feet, a pleased, benevolent smile on his face. He removes his
 :: Undress in the middle of the party.
 You attract the attention of a few onlookers as you suddenly shuck off your clothes, and drop them on the floor. You hear a few whoops and hollers. Soon, nearly the whole crowd in the living room is looking at you with anticipation, murmuring eagerly amongst themselves.
 
-Basil towers over you. A bit of his drool drips on your left ear, causing you to twitch. You're sure you can make out a bulge in his trousers. "Huh," the horse says, sneaking interested glances at your naked body, "All this time I thought you were... Nevermind." He licks his lips and says, "Let's give these folks a show!"
+Basil towers over you. A bit of his drool drips on your left ear, causing you to twitch. You're sure you can make out a bulge in his trousers. "Huh," the horse says, sneaking interested glances at your naked body, "All this time I thought you were... Never mind." He licks his lips and says, "Let's give these folks a show!"
 
 The stallion grips you by the shoulders and stretches his mouth wide open. Your last thing you see are his flat white teeth, framing the inviting entrance to his gullet.
 
@@ -218,7 +217,7 @@ The party disappears, and your surroundings are swiftly replaced by the darkness
 
 A dozen strangers watch in awe as the massive horse swallows you.
 
-"Woooh," calls a labrador, "Armstrong finally found a snack!"
+"Woooh," calls a Labrador, "Armstrong finally found a snack!"
 
 "Total cutie of a meal!" remarks an owl.
 
@@ -235,7 +234,7 @@ Basil pats his belly with a satisfied smile on his face, and takes a seat in a c
 
 Around him, the scene is a bit chaotic. Following his lead, the room has erupted into a flagrant display of sex and devourment. Clothes and full-bellied predators scatter the room. The few remaining prey are either hiding atop furniture, or actively being seduced by their peckish peers. Those with a penchant for neologism might call it a vorgy.
 
-Some watch enviously as a black cat's tail is slurped up between the lips of a hungry anaconda. Meanwhile, a drunk labrador burps up the clothes of one of his friends. A lioness restrains a Shih Tzu girl's shoulders while her friend swallows her feet-first.
+Some watch enviously as a black cat's tail is slurped up between the lips of a hungry anaconda. Meanwhile, a drunk Labrador burps up the clothes of one of his friends. A lioness restrains a Shih Tzu girl's shoulders while her friend swallows her feet-first.
 
 Basil smiles as the party rages on. Another night well planned.
 
@@ -253,7 +252,7 @@ The next morning, Basil goes to the bathroom.
 
 "Phew," Basil says, squeezing his abdomen, "I'm glad I only ate one last night, otherwise my figure would be completely wrecked." He walks to the living room, to observe the resultant wreckage from last night's rager.
 
-Unsurpsingly, the living room is a complete mess. The floor is scattered with plastic cups and a couple of passed-out predators. Basil grabs a trash bag, and starts to clean up the trash.
+Unsurprisingly, the living room is a complete mess. The floor is scattered with plastic cups and a couple of passed-out predators. Basil grabs a trash bag, and starts to clean up the trash.
 
 As he's nearing the entertainment center, he realizes that his sister's gaming console (a GameStation 4 Pro, to be precise) is missing. The AC adapter has been ripped straight out of the wall, probably by some drunk opportunistic thief.
 
@@ -295,14 +294,14 @@ Basil too is attracting some attention, something you realize when you feel two
 :: What's going on out there? [vore]
 Back outside, a pair of black cats have asked permission to touch Basil's bulging gut. You feel them curiously poking and prodding you, stifling little giggles and gasps as you twitch and move in response. "Woooah," one of them says, "This is *soo* hot. Hope it likes being horseshit!"
 
-Basil winks at the cat, "Stick around, and maybe you'll join them for the afterparty!" They both squeal and scamper off giggling.
+Basil winks at the cat, "Stick around, and maybe you'll join them for the after-party!" They both squeal and scamper off giggling.
 
 * [[Wait, horseshit?]]
 
 :: No thank you. (Basil)
 "...Oh. Of course," Basil says, awkwardly. He stands, and turns to leave. "Just uh, be careful out there, alright?" He starts to walk away.
 
-Basil walks away, back into the throng of dancing partygoers.
+Basil walks away, back into the throng of dancing party goers.
 
 * [[Return to the Foyer|The Foyer.]]
 
@@ -359,7 +358,7 @@ Money! You have money, you tell him!
 
 "I dunno if you've seen my house, but I'm *really* not that susceptible to bribery." He pokes your outline. "Jeez, you're really taking your time in there. Most meals woulda softened up by now. And I'd *reeally* like you to stop talking now."
 
-You're too light-headed to respond. You need to rest, you decide, before you can struggle any more. Just a short nap. You close your eyes, and drift off into oblivion.
+You're too light-headed to respond. You need to rest, you decide, before you can struggle any more. Just a short nap. You close your eyes, and drift off into oblivion.
 
 "Nothing else to say? Phew, finally..."