update telemetry banner notice text

resolves #50245
elastic · Nov 12, 2019 · f68c610 · f68c610
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diff --git a/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/common/constants.ts b/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/common/constants.ts
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ export const LOCALSTORAGE_KEY = 'telemetry.data';
 /**
  * Link to the Elastic Telemetry privacy statement.
  */
-export const PRIVACY_STATEMENT_URL = `https://www.elastic.co/legal/telemetry-privacy-statement`;
+export const PRIVACY_STATEMENT_URL = `https://www.elastic.co/legal/privacy-statement`;
 
 /**
  * The type name used within the Monitoring index to publish localization stats.

diff --git a/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/public/components/opt_in_banner_component.tsx b/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/public/components/opt_in_banner_component.tsx
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ export class OptInBanner extends React.PureComponent<Props> {
     const title = (
       <FormattedMessage
         id="telemetry.welcomeBanner.title"
-        defaultMessage="Help us improve the Elastic Stack!"
+        defaultMessage="Help us improve the Elastic Stack"
       />
     );
     return (
@@ -45,12 +45,18 @@ export class OptInBanner extends React.PureComponent<Props> {
         <EuiFlexGroup gutterSize="s" alignItems="center">
           <EuiFlexItem grow={false}>
             <EuiButton size="s" onClick={() => this.props.optInClick(true)}>
-              <FormattedMessage id="telemetry.welcomeBanner.yesButtonLabel" defaultMessage="Yes" />
+              <FormattedMessage
+                id="telemetry.welcomeBanner.yesButtonLabel"
+                defaultMessage="Enable"
+              />
             </EuiButton>
           </EuiFlexItem>
           <EuiFlexItem grow={false}>
             <EuiButton size="s" onClick={() => this.props.optInClick(false)}>
-              <FormattedMessage id="telemetry.welcomeBanner.noButtonLabel" defaultMessage="No" />
+              <FormattedMessage
+                id="telemetry.welcomeBanner.noButtonLabel"
+                defaultMessage="Disable"
+              />
             </EuiButton>
           </EuiFlexItem>
         </EuiFlexGroup>

diff --git a/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/public/components/opt_in_message.tsx b/src/legacy/core_plugins/telemetry/public/components/opt_in_message.tsx
@@ -21,8 +21,7 @@ import * as React from 'react';
 import { EuiLink } from '@elastic/eui';
 import { FormattedMessage } from '@kbn/i18n/react';
 
-import { getConfigTelemetryDesc, PRIVACY_STATEMENT_URL } from '../../common/constants';
-import { OptInExampleFlyout } from './opt_in_details_component';
+import { PRIVACY_STATEMENT_URL } from '../../common/constants';
 
 interface Props {
   fetchTelemetry: () => Promise<any[]>;
@@ -46,60 +45,22 @@ export class OptInMessage extends React.PureComponent<Props, State> {
   };
 
   render() {
-    const { showDetails, showExample } = this.state;
-
-    const getDetails = () => (
-      <FormattedMessage
-        id="telemetry.welcomeBanner.telemetryConfigDetailsDescription"
-        defaultMessage="No information about the data you process or store will be sent. This feature
-          will periodically send basic feature usage statistics. See an {exampleLink} or read our {telemetryPrivacyStatementLink}.
-          You can disable this feature at any time."
-        values={{
-          exampleLink: (
-            <EuiLink onClick={this.toggleShowExample}>
-              <FormattedMessage
-                id="telemetry.welcomeBanner.telemetryConfigDetailsDescription.exampleLinkText"
-                defaultMessage="example"
-              />
-            </EuiLink>
-          ),
-          telemetryPrivacyStatementLink: (
-            <EuiLink href={PRIVACY_STATEMENT_URL} target="_blank">
-              <FormattedMessage
-                id="telemetry.welcomeBanner.telemetryConfigDetailsDescription.telemetryPrivacyStatementLinkText"
-                defaultMessage="telemetry privacy statement"
-              />
-            </EuiLink>
-          ),
-        }}
-      />
-    );
-
-    const getFlyoutDetails = () => (
-      <OptInExampleFlyout
-        onClose={() => this.setState({ showExample: false })}
-        fetchTelemetry={this.props.fetchTelemetry}
-      />
-    );
-
-    const getReadMore = () => (
-      <EuiLink onClick={() => this.setState({ showDetails: true })}>
-        <FormattedMessage
-          id="telemetry.welcomeBanner.telemetryConfigDescription.readMoreLinkText"
-          defaultMessage="Read more"
-        />
-      </EuiLink>
-    );
-
     return (
       <React.Fragment>
-        {getConfigTelemetryDesc()} {!showDetails && getReadMore()}
-        {showDetails && (
-          <span style={{ display: 'block', paddingTop: '10px' }}>
-            {getDetails()}
-            {showExample && getFlyoutDetails()}
-          </span>
-        )}
+        <FormattedMessage
+          id="telemetry.telemetryBannerDescription"
+          defaultMessage="Want to help us improve the Elastic Stack? Data usage collection is currently disabled. Enabling data usage collection helps us manage and improve our products and services. See our {privacyStatementLink} for more details."
+          values={{
+            privacyStatementLink: (
+              <EuiLink href={PRIVACY_STATEMENT_URL} target="_blank">
+                <FormattedMessage
+                  id="telemetry.welcomeBanner.telemetryConfigDetailsDescription.telemetryPrivacyStatementLinkText"
+                  defaultMessage="Privacy Statement"
+                />
+              </EuiLink>
+            ),
+          }}
+        />
       </React.Fragment>
     );
   }