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holocene upgrade notice page and docs updates #1108

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Holocene is being shipped to the superchain, this documentation helps chain and node operators prepare for activation.

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The last thing we need in this PR is the actual releases of the op stack and op-geth binaries. Its ready for review and we just need to add those links before merging.

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@sbvegan this looks good to me, has all the details from our notion doc.
I would like us to get reviews from @sebastianst @ajsutton @mds1 before we merge it.

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The changes involve updates to the documentation regarding network upgrades, specifically focusing on "Superchain network activations." The content has been restructured to emphasize activation timestamps and governance aspects, with a new upgrade "Holocene" introduced. Additionally, a new card related to Holocene breaking changes has been added to the notices, and a comprehensive guide for operators regarding the Holocene upgrade has been created. The words.txt file has also been modified to reflect updated terminology relevant to the context.

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pages/builders/node-operators/network-upgrades.mdx Updated title and description, restructured activations section, added "Holocene" upgrade, removed summary of changes for each upgrade.
pages/builders/notices.mdx Added a new card titled "Preparing for Holocene Breaking Changes" with a hyperlink.
pages/builders/notices/_meta.json Introduced a new key for Holocene breaking changes.
pages/builders/notices/holocene-changes.mdx Created a new file detailing breaking changes for the Holocene upgrade, including activation dates and necessary preparations.
words.txt Modified entries by adding and removing several terms to update the terminology list.

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  • Create Granite notice page skeleton #870: The creation of a notice page for the Granite upgrade is related as it provides context for the network upgrades, similar to the updates made in the main PR regarding the structure and content of network upgrades.
  • Add Granite to network upgrades page. #890: This PR adds Granite to the network upgrades page, which directly relates to the main PR's focus on network upgrades and their activation details.
  • making updates after the granite activation #899: This PR makes updates after the Granite activation, which connects to the main PR's updates regarding network upgrades and their activation details.
  • adding bedrocks activation time #1069: The addition of the Bedrock upgrade's activation time in this PR is directly relevant to the main PR's updates on network upgrades, as both involve documenting upgrade details and timelines.
  • Update cross-chain-message.mdx #1103: The update to the cross-chain messaging documentation enhances understanding of interoperability, which is relevant to the main PR's focus on network upgrades and their implications for node operators.

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pages/builders/notices.mdx (2)

Line range hint 1-5: Update the frontmatter description to reflect both notices

The current description only mentions "Sdk Deprecation" but should include both the SDK deprecation and Holocene breaking changes notices.

Apply this diff to update the description:

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title: Notices
-description: Documentation covering Sdk Deprecation in the Notices section of the OP Stack ecosystem.
+description: Documentation covering breaking changes and deprecation notices in the OP Stack ecosystem.
lang: en-US
---

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The content description should be consistent with the frontmatter and reflect all notices.

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# Notices

-Documentation covering Sdk Deprecation in the Notices section of the OP Stack ecosystem.
+Documentation covering breaking changes and deprecation notices in the OP Stack ecosystem.
pages/builders/notices/holocene-changes.mdx (3)

11-12: Improve clarity and accessibility in the introduction

  1. Add Oxford comma in the list: "chain operators, node operators, and"
  2. Use more descriptive link text instead of generic "developer support"
-This page outlines breaking changes related to the Holocene network upgrade for chain operators, and node operators.
-If you experience difficulty at any stage of this process, please reach out to [developer support](https://github.com/ethereum-optimism/developers/discussions).
+This page outlines breaking changes related to the Holocene network upgrade for chain operators, node operators, and maintainers.
+If you experience difficulty at any stage of this process, please reach out to the [Optimism Developer Support Team](https://github.com/ethereum-optimism/developers/discussions).

27-27: Enhance link text specificity

Make the link text more descriptive of its destination.

-For more information on the Holocene implementation details, please review [Holocene specification](https://specs.optimism.io/protocol/holocene/overview.html).
+For more information on the Holocene implementation details, please review the [Holocene Technical Specification](https://specs.optimism.io/protocol/holocene/overview.html).

81-82: Replace placeholder timestamp references

Replace the generic "activation-timestamp" placeholder with the actual timestamps mentioned in the callout section.

-  *   Check that the Holocene time is set to `activation-timestamp` in the op-node startup logs
-  *   Check that the Holocene time is set to `activation-timestamp` in the op-geth startup logs
+  *   Check that the Holocene time is set to `1732633200` (Sepolia) or the approved Mainnet timestamp in the op-node startup logs
+  *   Check that the Holocene time is set to `1732633200` (Sepolia) or the approved Mainnet timestamp in the op-geth startup logs
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  1. Capitalize "English" as it's a proper noun
  2. Restructure the overview to be more formal
-This page has the hardfork activation timestamps and the links to the details outlined in the specs.
-It also outlines the hardfork release process.
-The network upgrade naming scheme after the Bedrock upgrade has a geology themed name based on the next letter in the english alphabet.
+This page contains hardfork activation timestamps and links to detailed specifications.
+Additionally, it documents the hardfork release process.
+Network upgrades following Bedrock follow a geology-themed naming scheme, progressing alphabetically through the English alphabet.

18-19: Add comma in compound sentence

Add a comma before "and" in the compound sentence to improve readability while maintaining the important warning:

-Network upgrades are activated by timestamps. Failing to upgrade your OP Stack software before the timestamp will cause a chain divergence and you will need to resync the chain.
+Network upgrades are activated by timestamps. Failing to upgrade your OP Stack software before the timestamp will cause a chain divergence, and you will need to resync the chain.
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14-15: Review proper noun capitalization in the card title

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400-408: Verify the alphabetical ordering and completeness of new entries.

The new entries maintain alphabetical order, but there's an opportunity to ensure completeness of related terms:

  1. Consider adding "Holocene" since it's mentioned in the PR objectives and related documentation.
  2. Consider adding common variations of "Immunefi" (e.g., "Immunefi's") for consistency with other entries that include possessive forms.
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14-18: LGTM! Clear presentation of activation dates

The callout effectively communicates the activation schedule with both human-readable dates and Unix timestamps.


35-37: Deployment addresses need to be updated

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The title and description are well-structured and maintain proper capitalization of the term "Superchain".


20-28: LGTM: Well-structured activation table

The table maintains consistent formatting and proper capitalization of upgrade names. All specification links follow the correct pattern.

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The pull request introduces significant updates to the documentation related to network upgrades, particularly focusing on the "Superchain network activations." It includes restructuring the content to emphasize activation timestamps, governance review periods, and detailed upgrade processes across different environments. Additionally, a new card for "Preparing for Holocene Breaking Changes" has been added to the notices section, along with a new document outlining the Holocene upgrade's implications for chain and node operators. The vocabulary in the words.txt file has been refined with additions and removals of relevant terms.

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pages/builders/node-operators/network-upgrades.mdx Updated title and description, restructured activations section, added new entry for "Holocene," and expanded upgrade process details.
pages/builders/notices.mdx Added new card titled "Preparing for Holocene Breaking Changes" linking to /builders/notices/holocene-changes.
pages/builders/notices/_meta.json Added new key-value pair for "holocene-changes" in the JSON structure.
pages/builders/notices/holocene-changes.mdx Created new document detailing the Holocene upgrade, its breaking changes, and upgrade instructions.
words.txt Added new blockchain-related terms and removed several outdated terms.

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  • Add Granite to network upgrades page. #890: This PR adds the Granite upgrade to the network upgrades page, which is directly related to the main PR's focus on network upgrades and the inclusion of new entries for upgrades.
  • adding bedrocks activation time #1069: This PR adds the Bedrock upgrade details, including activation timestamps, which aligns with the main PR's updates on network upgrades and their activation processes.
  • Add block numbers of network upgrades #912: This PR enhances the network upgrades documentation by adding block numbers for each upgrade activation, which complements the main PR's focus on the structured presentation of network upgrades.
  • making updates after the granite activation #899: This PR updates documentation following the Granite activation, which is relevant to the main PR's changes regarding network upgrades and their implications.
  • adding op-conductor documentation #818: This PR introduces documentation for the op-conductor, which is related to the overall network upgrade process and governance, connecting to the main PR's focus on structured upgrade documentation.

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pages/builders/notices.mdx (2)

Line range hint 1-5: Fix capitalization in the description

The term "Sdk" should be "SDK" as it's an acronym.

-description: Documentation covering Sdk Deprecation in the Notices section of the OP Stack ecosystem.
+description: Documentation covering SDK Deprecation in the Notices section of the OP Stack ecosystem.

Line range hint 10-12: Fix capitalization in the body text

The term "Sdk" should be "SDK" as it's an acronym.

-Documentation covering Sdk Deprecation in the Notices section of the OP Stack ecosystem.
+Documentation covering SDK Deprecation in the Notices section of the OP Stack ecosystem.
pages/builders/notices/holocene-changes.mdx (1)

14-18: Enhance clarity and consistency in date formatting.

Consider these improvements:

  1. Use consistent date formatting between Sepolia and Mainnet dates
  2. Be more explicit about the Mainnet schedule's tentative nature
  The Holocene upgrade for the Sepolia Superchain will be activated at **Tue Nov 26 at 15:00:00 UTC** (`1732633200`).

-  The Holocene upgrade for the Mainnet Superchain is optimistically scheduled for **Thu 9 Jan 2025 18:00:01 UTC**, pending governance approval.
+  The Holocene upgrade for the Mainnet Superchain is tentatively scheduled for **Thu Jan 9 2025 at 18:00:01 UTC**, subject to governance approval.
pages/builders/node-operators/network-upgrades.mdx (2)

18-18: Add missing comma in compound sentence

Add a comma before "and" to improve readability in this compound sentence.

-Network upgrades are activated by timestamps. Failing to upgrade your OP Stack software before the timestamp will cause a chain divergence and you will need to resync the chain.
+Network upgrades are activated by timestamps. Failing to upgrade your OP Stack software before the timestamp will cause a chain divergence, and you will need to resync the chain.
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20-28: Consider adding timestamp format explanation

The table effectively presents activation information, but it would be helpful to add a note explaining the timestamp format (UTC and Unix timestamp) for clarity.

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> Note: Activation times are shown in both UTC and Unix timestamp format (in parentheses).
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14-14: LGTM! Card addition follows documentation standards

The new card for Holocene Breaking Changes is properly formatted and follows the established pattern.

words.txt (2)

400-408: LGTM! The new terms are relevant and properly formatted.

The added terms (Sepolia, Pyth, Ankr, Mitigations, Immunefi) are appropriate additions given the context of the Holocene upgrade documentation. The multiple cases for Sepolia follow the established pattern in the file.

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400-408: Verify completeness of Holocene-related terminology.

Let's ensure we haven't missed any important terms related to the Holocene upgrade that might appear in the documentation.

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No Holocene-related terms found requiring dictionary updates

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1-8: LGTM! Frontmatter and imports are properly structured.


9-13: LGTM! Title and introduction are well-structured.


20-28: LGTM! Clear and well-structured overview of changes.


33-37: ⚠️ Potential issue

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1-12: LGTM! Clear and well-structured introduction

The metadata and introduction section effectively communicates the purpose and provides appropriate support resources.


14-18: LGTM! Clear presentation of activation dates

The Callout component effectively highlights the important dates and their status.


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35-36: Deployment addresses need to be populated

The SystemConfig implementation addresses are currently marked as TBD for both networks.

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1-19: LGTM! Consider adding timezone clarification

The metadata and introduction are well-structured. The activation dates are clearly specified, but consider adding "(UTC)" after each time for additional clarity, even though UTC is mentioned in the timestamps.

-  The Holocene upgrade for the Sepolia Superchain will be activated at **Tue Nov 26 at 15:00:00 UTC** (`1732633200`).
+  The Holocene upgrade for the Sepolia Superchain will be activated at **Tue Nov 26 at 15:00:00 (UTC)** (`1732633200`).

-  The Holocene upgrade for the Mainnet Superchain is optimistically scheduled for **Thu 9 Jan 2025 18:00:01 UTC**, pending governance approval.
+  The Holocene upgrade for the Mainnet Superchain is optimistically scheduled for **Thu 9 Jan 2025 18:00:01 (UTC)**, pending governance approval.

61-62: Fix list formatting for consistency

The release links are properly populated, but the formatting can be improved for consistency:

-  *   [`op-node`, `op-batcher`, and `op-proposer` at `v1.10.0`](https://github.com/ethereum-optimism/optimism/releases/tag/op-node%2Fv1.10.0)
-  *   [`op-geth` at `v1.101411.2`](https://github.com/ethereum-optimism/op-geth/releases/tag/v1.101411.2)
+  * [`op-node`, `op-batcher`, and `op-proposer` at `v1.10.0`](https://github.com/ethereum-optimism/optimism/releases/tag/op-node%2Fv1.10.0)
+  * [`op-geth` at `v1.101411.2`](https://github.com/ethereum-optimism/op-geth/releases/tag/v1.101411.2)
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82-83: Add placeholder for actual timestamp

The verification steps reference a generic activation-timestamp placeholder. Consider replacing it with the actual timestamps mentioned earlier in the document.

-  *   Check that the Holocene time is set to `activation-timestamp` in the op-node startup logs
-  *   Check that the Holocene time is set to `activation-timestamp` in the op-geth startup logs
+  *   Check that the Holocene time is set to `1732633200` (Sepolia) or the appropriate timestamp for your chain in the op-node startup logs
+  *   Check that the Holocene time is set to `1732633200` (Sepolia) or the appropriate timestamp for your chain in the op-geth startup logs
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20-29: LGTM! Clear and comprehensive overview

The overview effectively outlines the three main changes in Holocene with appropriate technical detail and links to specifications.

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18-18: Improve clarity and readability of the activation warning

The sentence structure could be improved for better readability and grammatical correctness.

-Network upgrades are activated by timestamps. Failing to upgrade your OP Stack software before the timestamp will cause a chain divergence and you will need to resync the chain.
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4-4: LGTM: Description is more focused and specific

The updated description better reflects the document's focus on Superchain network activations.


12-14: LGTM: Overview section follows style guidelines

The overview section is clear, concise, and follows proper capitalization rules.


20-28: LGTM: Activation table is well-structured and consistent

The table maintains consistent formatting for:

  • Links to specifications
  • Governance approval references
  • Timestamp and block number formatting
  • New Holocene upgrade information

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1-19: LGTM! Clear and well-structured introduction

The metadata and introduction section effectively communicates the purpose and timing of the Holocene upgrade. The inclusion of specific UTC timestamps and a link to developer support enhances clarity.


20-29: LGTM! Comprehensive overview of changes

The section effectively summarizes the three main changes in Holocene and provides a link to detailed specifications for further reading.


52-84: LGTM! Clear and comprehensive upgrade instructions

The node operators section provides well-structured instructions with:

  • Specific version requirements
  • Clear configuration options
  • Detailed verification steps
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37-37: ⚠️ Potential issue

Contract addresses need to be populated

The Mainnet addresses are still marked as TBD. These addresses are critical for chain operators and should be populated before the documentation is published.

Also applies to: 48-48

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