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Docs: Corrected incorrect instances of (setup|set up) #2692

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@philnichol philnichol commented Sep 28, 2020

What this PR does / why we need it:
Corrects incorrect usage of (setup|set up) in the docs
Which issue(s) this PR fixes:
No linked issue

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I ran this in Grafana and they suggested I do it here too.
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  • Documentation added
  • Tests updated

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Thanks! Couple of editing suggestions.

@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ value is larger than the hash of the stream. When the replication factor is
larger than 1, the next subsequent tokens (clockwise in the ring) that belong to
different ingesters will also be included in the result.

The effect of this hash set up is that each token that an ingester owns is
The effect of this hash setup is that each token that an ingester owns is
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This version of "setup" is a noun. Please revert this change.

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Obviously happy to revert this, but shouldn't it be a noun?
Or should it be "The effect of this hash being set up is that..."?

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"Setup" is the noun version of the word. If you revert it and change nothing else, then it is correct.

Your version is also correct, but would require more words. I suggest going with the reversion.

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gotcha, apologies! Cheers for the feedback, I've reverted that change

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If you are ready for another review, I suggest clicking "Re-request review." People don't always notice comments, but the request for review sends a separate (and more visible) notification.

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Thanks, didn't know that!

docs/sources/clients/aws/eks/_index.md Outdated Show resolved Hide resolved
Co-authored-by: Diana Payton <52059945+oddlittlebird@users.noreply.github.com>
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codecov-commenter commented Sep 28, 2020

Codecov Report

Merging #2692 into master will increase coverage by 0.02%.
The diff coverage is n/a.

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pkg/promtail/targets/file/tailer.go 73.03% <0.00%> (+4.49%) ⬆️

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LGTM! Thanks for contributing to our docs!

@owen-d owen-d merged commit 851dbc2 into grafana:master Sep 28, 2020
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owen-d commented Sep 28, 2020

Thanks!

@philnichol philnichol deleted the docs-correcting-setup branch September 28, 2020 20:57
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