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 page_title: "Consul Protocol Compatibility Promise"
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-  We expect Consul to run in large clusters as long-running agents. Because upgrading agents in this sort of environment relies heavily on protocol compatibility, this page makes it clear on our promise to keeping different Consul versions compatible with each other.
+  We expect Consul to run in large clusters of long-running agents. Because safely upgrading agents in this sort of environment relies heavily on backwards compatibility, we have a strong commitment to keeping different Consul versions protocol-compatible with each other.
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 # Protocol Compatibility Promise
 
-We expect Consul to run in large clusters as long-running agents. Because
-upgrading agents in this sort of environment relies heavily on protocol
-compatibility, this page makes clear our promise to keep different Consul
-versions compatible with each other.
+We expect Consul to run in large clusters of long-running agents. Because
+safely upgrading agents in this sort of environment relies heavily on backwards
+compatibility, we have a strong commitment to keeping different Consul
+versions protocol-compatible with each other.
 
 We promise that every subsequent release of Consul will remain backwards
 compatible with _at least_ one prior version. Concretely: version 0.5 can
-speak to 0.4 (and vice versa), but may not be able to speak to 0.1.
+speak to 0.4 (and vice versa) but may not be able to speak to 0.1.
 
-The backwards compatibility is automatic unless otherwise noted. Consul agents by
-default will speak the latest protocol, but can understand earlier
-ones. If speaking an earlier protocol, _new features may not be available_.
-The ability for an agent to speak an earlier protocol is so that they
-can be upgraded without cluster disruption.
+Backwards compatibility is automatic unless otherwise noted. Consul agents by
+default will speak the latest protocol but can understand earlier ones. Note:
+if speaking an earlier protocol, _new features may not be available_.
 
-This compatibility guarantee makes it possible to upgrade Consul agents one
-at a time, one version at a time. For more details on the specifics of
-upgrading, see the [upgrading page](/docs/upgrading.html).
+The ability for an agent to speak an earlier protocol is to ensure that any agent
+can be upgraded without cluster disruption. Consul agents can be updated one
+at a time, one version at a time.
+
+For more details on the specifics of upgrading, see the [upgrading page](/docs/upgrading.html).
 
 ## Protocol Compatibility Table