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P doc updates #342
P doc updates #342
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Hey @mbfrahry
Thanks for this - I've left a couple of minor 🤔 but this otherwise LGTM :)
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### Creating a Service Principal in the Azure Portal | |||
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There's a couple of phases to create a Service Principal via [the Azure Portal](https://portal.azure.com): | |||
We need to do two more steps to create a Service Principal via [the Azure Portal](https://portal.azure.com): |
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I think this'd read better as There's two tasks needed to create a Service Principal via [the Azure Portal](https://portal.azure.com):
or Two tasks are needed to create a Service Principal via [the Azure Portal](https://portal.azure.com):
- what do you think?
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That sounds good to me!
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# Authenticating to Azure Resource Manager using the Azure CLI | |||
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Terraform supports authenticating to Azure through a couple of different means - via a Service Principal and using the Azure CLI. | |||
Terraform supports authenticating to Azure through two different means; a Service Principal or the Azure CLI. |
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🤔 reading this again, I'm wondering if this might read better as ...through the Azure CLI or a Service Principal (Shared Account)
- what do you think?
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Can do!
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LGTM - thanks for this :)
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Hey Tom. I just wanted to reword a few things. Take or leave any of these changes!