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P doc updates #342

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Hey Tom. I just wanted to reword a few things. Take or leave any of these changes!

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Hey @mbfrahry

Thanks for this - I've left a couple of minor 🤔 but this otherwise LGTM :)

@@ -113,14 +113,14 @@ $ az account list-locations

### Creating a Service Principal in the Azure Portal

There's a couple of phases to create a Service Principal via [the Azure Portal](https://portal.azure.com):
We need to do two more steps to create a Service Principal via [the Azure Portal](https://portal.azure.com):
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I think this'd read better as There's two tasks needed to create a Service Principal via [the Azure Portal](https://portal.azure.com): or Two tasks are needed to create a Service Principal via [the Azure Portal](https://portal.azure.com): - what do you think?

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That sounds good to me!

@@ -9,13 +9,13 @@ description: |-

# Authenticating to Azure Resource Manager using the Azure CLI

Terraform supports authenticating to Azure through a couple of different means - via a Service Principal and using the Azure CLI.
Terraform supports authenticating to Azure through two different means; a Service Principal or the Azure CLI.
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🤔 reading this again, I'm wondering if this might read better as ...through the Azure CLI or a Service Principal (Shared Account) - what do you think?

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Can do!

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LGTM - thanks for this :)

@tombuildsstuff tombuildsstuff merged commit a4ab26b into master Sep 19, 2017
@tombuildsstuff tombuildsstuff deleted the p-doc-updates branch September 19, 2017 18:36
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