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tiny-world task #294
tiny-world task #294
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Hey! Congratulations on your PR! 😎😎😎 Let's do some self-checks to fix most common issues and to make some improvements to the code before reviewers put their hands on the code. Go through the requirements/most common mistakes listed/linked below and fix the code as appropriate. If you have any questions to requirements/common mistakes feel free asking them here or in Students' chat. When you genuinely believe you are done put a comment stating that you have completed self-checks and fixed code accordingly. Also, be aware, that if you would silently ignore this recommendation, a mentor can think that you are still working on fixes. And your PR will not be reviewed. 😒 A Tiny JS World -- (pre-OOP) exercise check listRelates to Object-Oriented JavaScript task. Check-list - definition of done
Universal recommendations:
Also take a note of the requirements above and follow them in all your future projects. By the way, you may proceed to the next task before this one is reviewed and merged. Sincerely yours, |
I have completed self-check! |
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@pashapushak1996 quite a decent job.
Please check comments below.
Although one item from the checklist is missed massively:
- Give variables and functions meaningful names. Avoid generic names like
item
,element
,key
,object
,array
or their variations. Exception: helper functions that are specifically and intentionally designed to be multipurpose.
const pullValuesOfObj = (obj) => { | ||
const array = []; | ||
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arrayOfKeys.forEach((key) => array.push(obj[key])); |
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A classic use case for Array#map
const arrayOfValues = pullValuesOfObj(inhabitant); | ||
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const stringToPrint = arrayOfValues.join('; ') + ' ;'; | ||
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print(stringToPrint); |
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Why do we need interim variables here?
In most cases, if a defined variable is used immediately after and only once, then you do not need it.
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@pashapushak1996 well done!
tiny-world
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Code base
The code is submitted in a dedicated feature branch.
Only code files are submitted.
Please, review.