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js-oop #605
js-oop #605
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Hey! Congratulations on your PR! 😎😎😎 Let's do some self-checks to fix most common issues and to make some improvements to the code before reviewers put their hands on the code. Go through the requirements/most common mistakes linked below and fix the code as appropriate. If you have any questions to requirements/common mistakes feel free asking them here or in Students' chat. When you genuinely believe you are done put a comment stating that you have completed self-checks and fixed code accordingly. Also, be aware, that if you would silently ignore this recommendation, a mentor can think that you are still working on fixes. And your PR will not be reviewed. 😒 Please, make sure that your code follows the requirements In addition to the bot's suggestions above, please post a link to the app demo in Students' chat, collect feedback and fix bugs if any based on that. When user tests are done post here a comment on that. Universal recommendations:
By the way, you may proceed to the next task before this one is reviewed and merged. Sincerely yours, |
Reviewed and fix the code. All done. |
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@merowing good job!
Although improvements are required.
Check the requirements, in particular items 3 and 4.
Check your entire code against the requirements.
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@merowing almost there.
You moved "global variable" problem from one method to another method within the class.
But we need to eliminate the problem, not just push it around.
submissions/merowing/js-oop/app.js
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this.player = player; |
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A global variable.
The requirements provide a hint to resolution.
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done
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@merowing great job!
js-oop
Demo |
Code base
The code is submitted in a dedicated feature branch.
Only code files are submitted.
Please, review.