further wording improvements

lifted from #9990

docs/postgres.md

@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ different locales can cause issues if the locale library is updated from
 underneath the database, or if a different version of the locale is used on any
 replicas.
 
-The safest way to fix the issue is to take a dump and recreate the database with
+The safest way to fix the issue is to dump the database and recreate it with
 the correct locale parameter (as shown above). It is also possible to change the
 parameters on a live database and run a `REINDEX` on the entire database,
 however extreme care must be taken to avoid database corruption.