docs: Fix issues found in Queeny's test #507
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@lilin90 Is this space necessary?
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| curl -o aws-iam-authenticator https://amazon-eks.s3-us-west-2.amazonaws.com/1.12.7/2019-03-27/bin/darwin/amd64/aws-iam-authenticator | ||
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Maybe using the code below is simpler and more general
os=$(uname -s| tr '[:upper:]' '[:lower:]')
curl -o aws-iam-authenticator https://amazon-eks.s3-us-west-2.amazonaws.com/1.12.7/2019-03-27/bin/$os/amd64/aws-iam-authenticator
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I don't have any mac for test, if you can confirm this works for macOS?
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Yes, it works for macOS and Linux
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@AstroProfundis The link you mentioned already has an elegant way to install aws-iam-authenticator.
For macOS, install with homebrew. For linux install with the curl to fetch the binary. It's inappropriate to provide the tricky script in the guide.
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I don't think homebrew is available to every macOS installation by default...
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Yes, it's not builtin on macOS. But almost all technical users install that. So I think provide homebrew command is reasonable.
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This definitely can't pass Queeney's test, the "almost all technical users" is not fitting the target user groups.
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You can add a note in the document that before users install aws-iam-authenticator with homebrew, they need to make sure that they have installed homebrew first, then providing the homebrew way is totally acceptable for queeny's test.
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Then we're introducing new dependency and copying almost all major parts of AWS document, what's the point of avoiding out-linking again?
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Yeah, you are right. So if the curl way does not require any new dependency for macOS, I suggest we introduce the curl way in our document then. If users prefer the homebrew way, they can still click the link and find the guide in the AWS document.
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LGTM. Thanks a lot for your support during the test. @AstroProfundis
What problem does this PR solve?
Make the documents more clear to newbies.
What is changed and how it works?
Fix various issues found in Queeny's test
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#502