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Optimizing performance #122

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@uehaj uehaj commented Feb 14, 2019

This PR is part of Issue #4.
レビューを宜しくお願いします。

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遅くなりましたが、全体を確認しました。

  • 数が多かったので個別に指摘していませんが、「レンダリング」は「レンダー」で統一でお願いします(名詞として使用される場合も動詞として使用される場合も同じ)。
  • 原文にないところで改行が含まれていたり、逆に原文に存在する空行を消してしまっているところがたくさんあり、GitHubの差分で見ても左右で文章が一致していないところが多くあります。今後原文の翻訳が更新されたときの自動マージに悪影響があるため、改行位置を統一するようお願いします。

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uehaj commented Mar 2, 2019

遅くなりましたが、全体を確認しました。

  • 数が多かったので個別に指摘していませんが、「レンダリング」は「レンダー」で統一でお願いします(名詞として使用される場合も動詞として使用される場合も同じ)。
  • 原文にないところで改行が含まれていたり、逆に原文に存在する空行を消してしまっているところがたくさんあり、GitHubの差分で見ても左右で文章が一致していないところが多くあります。今後原文の翻訳が更新されたときの自動マージに悪影響があるため、改行位置を統一するようお願いします。

レビューいただきありがとうございます。修正しました。改行については今後も英文版とdiff常にとるように留意します。よろしくおねがいします。

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@uehaj レイアウトと、単語の言い換えが中心ですが、コメントしたので確認お願いします 🙏

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smikitky commented Mar 6, 2019

ここまで確認しました。4箇所不必要な改行(ないし <br> 直書き)が残っている以外はOKそうです

  • 163行目: <br><br>
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  • 423行目付近
  • 438行目付近(最終行の直上)

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smikitky commented Mar 6, 2019

よさそうです、ありがとうございました!

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koba04 commented Mar 6, 2019

@uehaj mergeしました! 🚀 ありがとうございます!! 🎉🎉🎉

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uehaj commented Mar 7, 2019

ありがとうございました! もう他には翻訳未着手はないですね。(ほぼ)おめでとうございます!

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