Merge pull request #2373 from rust-lang/gh2287

Clarify some package/crate distinctions in chapter 14

src/ch14-03-cargo-workspaces.md

@@ -28,7 +28,8 @@ Next, in the *add* directory, we create the *Cargo.toml* file that will
 configure the entire workspace. This file won’t have a `[package]` section or
 the metadata we’ve seen in other *Cargo.toml* files. Instead, it will start
 with a `[workspace]` section that will allow us to add members to the workspace
-by specifying the path to our binary crate; in this case, that path is *adder*:
+by specifying the path to the package with our binary crate; in this case,
+that path is *adder*:
 
 <span class="filename">Filename: Cargo.toml</span>
 
@@ -65,7 +66,7 @@ in your *add* directory should look like this:
 ```
 
 The workspace has one *target* directory at the top level for the compiled
-artifacts to be placed into; the `adder` crate doesn’t have its own *target*
+artifacts to be placed into; the `adder` package doesn’t have its own *target*
 directory. Even if we were to run `cargo build` from inside the *adder*
 directory, the compiled artifacts would still end up in *add/target* rather
 than *add/adder/target*. Cargo structures the *target* directory in a workspace
@@ -75,9 +76,9 @@ recompile each of the other crates in the workspace to have the artifacts in
 its own *target* directory. By sharing one *target* directory, the crates can
 avoid unnecessary rebuilding.
 
-### Creating the Second Crate in the Workspace
+### Creating the Second Package in the Workspace
 
-Next, let’s create another member crate in the workspace and call it `add-one`.
+Next, let’s create another member package in the workspace and call it `add-one`.
 Change the top-level *Cargo.toml* to specify the *add-one* path in the
 `members` list:
 
@@ -125,9 +126,10 @@ In the *add-one/src/lib.rs* file, let’s add an `add_one` function:
 {{#rustdoc_include ../listings/ch14-more-about-cargo/no-listing-02-workspace-with-two-crates/add/add-one/src/lib.rs}}
 ```
 
-Now that we have a library crate in the workspace, we can have the binary crate
-`adder` depend on the library crate `add-one`. First, we’ll need to add a path
-dependency on `add-one` to *adder/Cargo.toml*.
+Now that we have another package in the workspace, we can have the `adder`
+package with our binary depend on the `add-one` package, that has our
+library. First, we’ll need to add a path dependency on `add-one` to
+*adder/Cargo.toml*.
 
 <span class="filename">Filename: adder/Cargo.toml</span>
 
@@ -149,8 +151,8 @@ function to call the `add_one` function, as in Listing 14-7.
 {{#rustdoc_include ../listings/ch14-more-about-cargo/listing-14-07/add/adder/src/main.rs}}
 ```
 
-<span class="caption">Listing 14-7: Using the `add-one` library crate from the
-`adder` crate</span>
+<span class="caption">Listing 14-7: Using the `add-one` library crate from the 
+ `adder` crate</span>
 
 Let’s build the workspace by running `cargo build` in the top-level *add*
 directory!
@@ -187,12 +189,12 @@ Hello, world! 10 plus one is 11!
 
 This runs the code in *adder/src/main.rs*, which depends on the `add-one` crate.
 
-#### Depending on an External Crate in a Workspace
+#### Depending on an External Package in a Workspace
 
 Notice that the workspace has only one *Cargo.lock* file at the top level of
 the workspace rather than having a *Cargo.lock* in each crate’s directory. This
 ensures that all crates are using the same version of all dependencies. If we
-add the `rand` crate to the *adder/Cargo.toml* and *add-one/Cargo.toml*
+add the `rand` package to the *adder/Cargo.toml* and *add-one/Cargo.toml*
 files, Cargo will resolve both of those to one version of `rand` and record
 that in the one *Cargo.lock*. Making all crates in the workspace use the same
 dependencies means the crates in the workspace will always be compatible with
@@ -237,7 +239,7 @@ The top-level *Cargo.lock* now contains information about the dependency of
 `add-one` on `rand`. However, even though `rand` is used somewhere in the
 workspace, we can’t use it in other crates in the workspace unless we add
 `rand` to their *Cargo.toml* files as well. For example, if we add `use rand;`
-to the *adder/src/main.rs* file for the `adder` crate, we’ll get an error:
+to the *adder/src/main.rs* file for the `adder` package, we’ll get an error:
 
 <!-- manual-regeneration
 cd listings/ch14-more-about-cargo/output-only-03-use-rand/add
@@ -256,14 +258,14 @@ error[E0432]: unresolved import `rand`
   |     ^^^^ no `rand` external crate
 ```
 
-To fix this, edit the *Cargo.toml* file for the `adder` crate and indicate that
-`rand` is a dependency for that crate as well. Building the `adder` crate will
+To fix this, edit the *Cargo.toml* file for the `adder` package and indicate
+that `rand` is a dependency for it as well. Building the `adder` package will
 add `rand` to the list of dependencies for `adder` in *Cargo.lock*, but no
 additional copies of `rand` will be downloaded. Cargo has ensured that every
-crate in the workspace using the `rand` crate will be using the same version.
-Using the same version of `rand` across the workspace saves space because we
-won’t have multiple copies and ensures that the crates in the workspace will be
-compatible with each other.
+crate in every package in the workspace using the `rand` package will be
+using the same version. Using the same version of `rand` across the workspace
+saves space because we won’t have multiple copies and ensures that the crates
+in the workspace will be compatible with each other.
 
 #### Adding a Test to a Workspace