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Uncertain meaning ch01-03-hello-cargo #2525

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eisenhaus335 opened this issue Dec 11, 2020 · 3 comments · Fixed by rust-lang/rust#87312
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Uncertain meaning ch01-03-hello-cargo #2525

eisenhaus335 opened this issue Dec 11, 2020 · 3 comments · Fixed by rust-lang/rust#87312

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@eisenhaus335
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https://doc.rust-lang.org/book/ch01-03-hello-cargo.html
"(We call libraries your code needs dependencies.)"

Can this line edited to be more elaborate word? The meaning are kinda vague for me

@carols10cents
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Hi, can you explain more about what's vague for you? I'm not sure how to clarify it until I understand what's confusing :)

@eisenhaus335
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Thank you for replying

I think the writer want to write as "We call libraries your code needs" but the "dependencies" that is included in there is make it vague for me atleast.

I think the meaning want as "We call libraries your code needs, and thats what we call dependencies". Are this normal in some english literature? To tell synomnym on some line with italic word

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gtsop commented Dec 21, 2020

@carols10cents Although I can understand what this sentence means I agree the wording tripped me up as well a bit. It's not wrong, but I had to look at it twice to make sure I read it correctly. May I suggest these:

Suggestion 1: "(We refer to the libraries your code needs as dependencies.)"
Suggestion 2: "[...] downloading the libraries your code depends on (also known as dependencies), and building those libraries"

bors added a commit to rust-lang-ci/rust that referenced this issue Jul 20, 2021
Update books

## reference

6 commits in ab60513a3a5a0591e237fddff5d027a982648392..82d75cf423e4a7824fb36e73ccb18519d6900610
2021-07-05 08:27:31 -0700 to 2021-07-15 06:49:08 -0700
- fix wording/punctuation in "Lifetime bounds" (rust-lang/reference#1062)
- mention implicit `Sized` bound in more places (rust-lang/reference#1053)
-  (rust-lang/reference#1060)
- Remove inner attributes from non-block expressions. (rust-lang/reference#1051)
- Add note about the sign of the remainder (rust-lang/reference#1073)
- Clarify closure capture modes slightly (rust-lang/reference#1064)

## book

21 commits in a90f07f1e9a7fc75dc9105a6c6f16d5c13edceb0..eac55314210519238652f12b30fec9daea61f7fe
2021-07-05 14:43:12 -0400 to 2021-07-19 11:08:01 -0400
-  (rust-lang/book#2791)
- Add Deref trait to overload the deref operator in appendix table
- Revise linker installation instructions. Fixes rust-lang/book#2151.
- Clarify number literal type suffixes. Fixes rust-lang/book#1979.
- Add a note that lifetimes are coming up but aren't required
- Zip creates an iterator, not a vector. Fixes rust-lang/book#2762.
- Add Thai translation to the appendix. Connects to rust-lang/book#2636
- Derive Copy and Clone for Point to match stdlib docs example; fixes rust-lang/book#2657
- Make the definition of Option match the stdlib's, fixes rust-lang/book#2634
- Explain double quote backslash; closes rust-lang/book#2597
- Don't use the term 'anonymous struct' to fix rust-lang/book#2584
- Reword a sentence to fix rust-lang/book#2525
- Add Hindi translation. Connects to rust-lang/book#2496
- Remove unsafe Ferris designations from code. Fixes rust-lang/book#2555
- Add Traditional Chinese translation. Connects to rust-lang/book#2470
- Remove some more references to the authors field
- Make Appendix E be a link
- fix line wrapping
- remove description about the authors field
- remove the authors field
- remove the authors field

## rust-by-example

6 commits in 028f93a61500fe8f746ee7cc6b204ea6c9f42935..1db6bb483cc87ad3b424d9aba764fe622960a1be
2021-07-06 06:28:53 -0300 to 2021-07-15 06:17:42 -0300
- Updated the file destructure_tuple.md (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1452)
- Fix nomenclature around methods (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1450)
- std_misc/path.md: update `Show` to `Display` (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1449)
- Fix up github action (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1451)
- Remove github pages
- Support GitHub Actions (rust-lang/rust-by-example#1330)

## rustc-dev-guide

2 commits in 60e2825..93422c2
2021-07-05 11:21:03 -0400 to 2021-07-13 12:45:58 -0400
- Update for merge of CrateDisambiguator into StableCrateId
- Minor capitalization fix (rust-lang/rustc-dev-guide#1170)

## edition-guide

8 commits in 5d57b3832f8d308a9f478ce0a69799548f27ad4d..af696ce8ea526445590ae0ca66a8128d2a95a69a
2021-07-05 10:33:32 +0200 to 2021-07-20 11:38:03 -0400
- Add migration section for panic-macro-consistency (rust-lang/edition-guide#258)
- Update transitioning chapter. (rust-lang/edition-guide#255)
- Add details on migrating the Cargo feature resolver. (rust-lang/edition-guide#259)
- Improve panic macro consistency summary (rust-lang/edition-guide#256)
- Add migration details to or-patterns guide (rust-lang/edition-guide#252)
- Add migration section to into-iterator (rust-lang/edition-guide#253)
- Add Rust 2021 prelude migration details (rust-lang/edition-guide#251)
- Provide more information about disjoint capture in closures and migration instructions (rust-lang/edition-guide#246)

## embedded-book

1 commits in 506840eb73b0749336e1d5274e16d6393892ee82..09986cd352404eb4659db44613b27cac9aa652fc
2021-06-24 00:01:32 +0000 to 2021-07-18 19:26:46 +0000
- Stop referring to the alloc crate as unstable  (rust-embedded/book#297)
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