@leplatrem review.

content/services/fxa-oauth-integration.rst

@@ -7,14 +7,14 @@ How we implemented a Firefox Account OAuth service provider with Cornice
 :tags: FxA, python
 :lang: en
 
-Daybed is user agnostic, when you logs in you grab an Hawk Token
-derives into credentials that are used to sign every request made to
-the API.
+Daybed is user agnostic. It does not handle users and passwords but
+tokens, using Hawk. When you log in, you obtain a Hawk Token derived
+into credentials that are used to sign every request made to the API.
 
-This token can then be linked to anything: the user, the device or a
-group with share credentials.
+This token can then represent anything: the user, the device or a
+group of users that share the same token.
 
-This lets people use daybed the way it fits their software.
+This lets people use Daybed the way it fits their software.
 
 Also when you want user's devices to use the same token, you need a way
 to share it.