rtcwake: add page #2098

FraYoshi · 2018-05-06T00:52:28Z

Added rtcwake Linux page and examples

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common/ if it's common to all platforms, linux/ if it's Linux-specific, and so on.
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sbrl

Hey, thanks for the new page! I've left a comment or two below for you to review.

You don't need to open a fresh pull request - simply appending commits to this one is fine (we've got a special button that squashes them all for us, so you don't need to worry about that) - you can even use GitHub's web interface!

Looks like you've had some issues with the linter. I'm not sure on that "command descriptions should begin with a capital letter" problem, but normally you should eb able to push a new commit and it will re-check for you, rather than opening a new pull request.

The @tldr-bot account actually just reports the result from the continuous-integration testing (which I think runs through Travis CI IIRC).

sbrl · 2018-05-06T09:27:24Z

pages/linux/rtcwake.md

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+`rtcwake -m show -v`
+
+- Show if an allarm is set:


Typo here? allarm -> alarm

Yes, typo.. gonna correct thanks =)

sbrl · 2018-05-06T09:28:05Z

pages/linux/rtcwake.md

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+- Suspend to ram and wakeup after 10 seconds:
+
+`# rtcwake -m mem -s {{10}}`


Is the hash needed here? If it's denoting a superuser command, perhaps you could use sudo instead?

It's needed to be superuser, sincerely, I was unsure about using the hash or the sudo.. Gonna switch to the last one =)

sbrl · 2018-05-06T09:28:53Z

pages/linux/rtcwake.md

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+`# rtcwake -m mem -s {{10}}`
+
+- Suspend to disk _(higher power saving)_ and wakeup 10 minutes later:


Not sure on italics and whether it renders correctly in the terminal. @agnivade, could you confirm?

I don't think it usually does, at least not with a few of the clients. 🤔

It works fine on the node client. But usually we avoid markdown in the description, and this seems to be an incorrect usage of italicizing a text anyways. We should remove the underscores.

sbrl · 2018-05-06T09:29:41Z

pages/linux/rtcwake.md

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+`# rtcwake -m disk --date +{{15}}m`
+
+- Suspend to disk and wakeup 1 hour later so play some music with mpv:


Maybe ....so play some music with mpv would read better as ....and play some music with mpv?

I was also unsure about the use of mpv.. It's a cool combination but maybe "and run a command" could be better because not every system has mpv installed.. i.e. they could have vlc

alarm typo. hashes to sudo. italics to plain text. "so play" to "and play".

sbrl

Looks ok to me! Thanks, @FraYoshi :D

agnivade

Lots of comments. This page introduces lot of concepts in an out-of-order fashion. I just wanted to clarify things a bit.

Thanks for the page !

agnivade · 2018-05-08T05:52:36Z

pages/linux/rtcwake.md

+# rtcwake
+
+> Enter a system sleep state until specified wakeup time relative to your bios clock.
+> Commands need to be run as superuser since shutdowns are involved.


I think it's better to have all the commands have the sudo prefix. Currently, only some of them have it which is incorrect. Then we can remove this line which is redundant information.

agnivade · 2018-05-08T05:57:43Z

pages/linux/rtcwake.md

+> Enter a system sleep state until specified wakeup time relative to your bios clock.
+> Commands need to be run as superuser since shutdowns are involved.
+
+- Check your hardware clock info and exit:


This and the example after this are the same. I think this one is not necessary to be in a tldr page.

So removing It but keeping the -v flag since avoiding implies a CTRL-C command after.

agnivade · 2018-05-08T05:58:51Z

pages/linux/rtcwake.md

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+`rtcwake -m show -v`
+
+- Show if an alarm is set:


This can mean that show only if an alarm is set. Perhaps - "Show whether an alarm is set or not:" is better.

agnivade · 2018-05-08T05:59:41Z

pages/linux/rtcwake.md

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+`rtcwake -m show`
+
+- Disable a previous set alarm:


This needs to be after the examples where an alarm is set. We always mention examples in the order of usage. So you cannot disable an alarm if it is not set in the first place.

Also - "Disable a previously set alarm:"

agnivade · 2018-05-08T06:02:09Z

pages/linux/rtcwake.md

+
+`sudo rtcwake -m mem -s {{10}}`
+
+- Suspend to disk (higher power saving) and wakeup 10 minutes later:


The description mentions 10 minutes, but example has 15 minutes. Please choose one.

Also, we should be consistent in the language. The description before has "after 10 seconds", but this one has "10 minutes later". We should choose one and be consistent.

Yes, I thought that adding more examples was better for a higher understanding of how the thing works.. so s for seconds, m for minutes and so on.. Or maybe Is better a longer description?

Or maybe a standard time like 1h and the thing written in 3 different ways in 3 different examples like: 3600s, 60m and 1h!

We already have 15m and 1h, so I think it is clear enough that different units can be used.

agnivade · 2018-05-08T06:03:14Z

pages/linux/rtcwake.md

+
+`sudo rtcwake -m disk --date +{{15}}m`
+
+- Suspend to disk and wakeup 1 hour later and play some music with mpv:


Why is this example necessary ? I don't see it adding anything new except using hour as a unit.

It's a useful usage example imo... for example, I use the command mainly as a wake-up alarm.

This is showing composition of one command with another command. You are combining the wakeup action with playing music after it to make it behave like an alarm. Strictly speaking, this behavior is outside the scope of a tldr page for rtcwake, which should just be focused on explaining the command usage. A user can easily construct an example like this if he/she understands the command well enough (which should be our primary aim).

agnivade · 2018-05-08T06:05:33Z

pages/linux/rtcwake.md

+
+`sudo rtcwake -m freeze --date {{YYYYMMDDhhmm}}`
+
+- Run a test (CTRL-C to abort) in which the computer is waked at a given time:


What does the "test" do ? Is this sort of a dry run ?

Yes, a sort of dry run. So maybe better adding It at the top?

It's fine. But perhaps we can modify the description to - Perform a dry run to wakup the computer at a given time. (Press Ctrl + C to abort):

Added "sudo" to all the commands so removed the second line. Removed a redundant example. Modified a description. Changed orders. Still to define some esamples involving a different time in s, m, h....

long form of the time unit: m → min. removed a composited example. modified last description about the test.

FraYoshi · 2018-05-10T00:39:22Z

Now It should be more clear.
I take a moment to thank you for enduring my mistakes ^^"

now there's an example involving -s (seconds) and one involving --date (time_units)
do you think It's fine keeping both?

agnivade · 2018-05-10T04:34:35Z

Yes it's fine. Thanks.

agnivade · 2018-05-10T04:35:06Z

@sbrl / @pxgamer - PTAL. Merge if you think it's fine.

owenvoke

Looks good to me. 👍

FraYoshi added 3 commits May 6, 2018 02:31

Added rtcwake linux page and examples

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alarm typo. hashes to sudo. italics to plain text. "so play" to "and play".

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Added "sudo" to all the commands so removed the second line. Removed a redundant example. Modified a description. Changed orders. Still to define some esamples involving a different time in s, m, h....

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long form of the time unit: m → min. removed a composited example. modified last description about the test.

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		- Suspend to ram and wakeup after 10 seconds:

		`# rtcwake -m mem -s {{10}}`


		`# rtcwake -m mem -s {{10}}`

		- Suspend to disk _(higher power saving)_ and wakeup 10 minutes later:


		`# rtcwake -m disk --date +{{15}}m`

		- Suspend to disk and wakeup 1 hour later so play some music with mpv:


		`sudo rtcwake -m mem -s {{10}}`

		- Suspend to disk (higher power saving) and wakeup 10 minutes later:


		`sudo rtcwake -m disk --date +{{15}}m`

		- Suspend to disk and wakeup 1 hour later and play some music with mpv:


		`sudo rtcwake -m freeze --date {{YYYYMMDDhhmm}}`

		- Run a test (CTRL-C to abort) in which the computer is waked at a given time:

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FraYoshi commented May 6, 2018

Added rtcwake Linux page and examples

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