Some LoAF explainer edits for TAG review #118
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clelland
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Oct 11, 2023
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| ## Value to End Users & Publishers | ||
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| Several case studies like [The Economic times](https://web.dev/economic-times-inp/#how-has-improving-inp-helped-the-economic-times) and [RedBus](https://web.dev/redbus-inp/#business-impact), that improving page responsiveness via the INP metric directly helps with user delight and has a business impact. |
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I think this sentence is missing a verb -- "have shown that improving page responsiveness", or "suggest that improving page responsiveness", maybe?
| for this type of performance issue. | ||
| what was blocking, e.g. long scripts or layout, LoAF can potentially become a powerful tool, enabling the use of real-user monitoring (RUM) to diagnose for this type of performance issue. | ||
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| ## Value to End Users & Publishers |
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I like this section, but I would switch the order of the two paragraphs in it -- start with the motivation (why INP is insufficient) and then follow up with the evidence (case studies)
yoavweiss
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| See [this success story](https://www.linkedin.com/posts/erwinhofman_performance-javascript-corewebvital-activity-7122519650461958144-FFK5/) from | ||
| a participant of the origin trial - they ran LoAF (using [RUMVision](https://www.rumvision.com/)) in user sessions, and identified that using a particular 3P JavaScript was causing sluggishness (bad INP). They refactored to not use that 3rd party, and their responsiveness | ||
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| ### Business Value | ||
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| Several case studies like [The Economic times](https://web.dev/economic-times-inp/#how-has-improving-inp-helped-the-economic-times) and [RedBus](https://web.dev/redbus-inp/#business-impact), demonstrate that improving page responsiveness via the INP metric directly helps with user delight and has a business impact. |
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s/business impact/positive business impact/?
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