Simplify the section Member Submissions #936
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| One of the [=Submitters=], | ||
| copying the [=Advisory Committee representatives=] of the other [=Submitters=] (if any), | ||
| sends a request to the Team to acknowledge the Submission request. | ||
| The [=Team=] and [=Submitter=](s) communicate to ensure that the [=Member Submission=] is complete. |
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This might call for an edit of the dfn to add the submitter(s) synonym.
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| The [=Team=] and [=Submitter=](s) communicate to ensure that the [=Member Submission=] is complete. | |
| The [=Team=] and [=Submitter(s)=] communicate to ensure that the [=Member Submission=] is complete. |
| to evaluate whether it would be appropriate | ||
| and to ensure it complies with expectations: | ||
| to evaluate its scope, quality, and compliance with the Submission requirements, | ||
| including licensing requirements: | ||
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| The [=Submitter=](s) |
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I guess this might also call for a document-wide search-and-replace. (Reason is that [=Submitter=](s) renders poorly; [=Submitter(s)=] renders better.)
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| The [=Submitter=](s) | |
| The [=Submitter(s)=] |
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| <li>If <dfn>rejected</dfn>, | ||
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| If <dfn>rejected</dfn>, | ||
| the [=Team=] <em class=rfc2119>must</em> inform the [=Advisory Committee representative=](s) of the [=Submitter=](s), |
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[=Advisory Committee representative(s)=] synonym also needed.
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| the [=Team=] <em class=rfc2119>must</em> inform the [=Advisory Committee representative=](s) of the [=Submitter=](s), | |
| the [=Team=] <em class=rfc2119>must</em> inform the [=Advisory Committee representative(s)=] of the [=Submitter(s)=], |
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Filed speced/bikeshed#2948. If/when bikeshed addresses that, I'm happy to go along with your suggestion, but until then, that seems like too much work for not enough benefit.
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| and <em class=rfc2119>must</em> provide rationale if requested by the [=Submitter=](s). | ||
| The [=Submitter=](s) <em class=rfc2119>may</em> initiate a [=Submission Appeal=]. |
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| and <em class=rfc2119>must</em> provide rationale if requested by the [=Submitter=](s). | |
| The [=Submitter=](s) <em class=rfc2119>may</em> initiate a [=Submission Appeal=]. | |
| and <em class=rfc2119>must</em> provide rationale if requested by the [=Submitter(s)=]. | |
| The [=Submitter(s)=] <em class=rfc2119>may</em> initiate a [=Submission Appeal=]. |
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I'm fine to merge this PR without my plural tweaks. A new issue on process or bikeshed or wherever makes sense to you would be welcomed. |
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Cuts down the Process part of Member Submissions to the bare minimum, with the expectation that all the detailed requirements and guidance will be shifted to /Guide.
Addresses #648, #421
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