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Co-authored-by: Ted Thibodeau Jr <tthibodeau@openlinksw.com>

spec/index.html

@@ -734,8 +734,8 @@ <h2>Literals</h2>
 
     <p>A literal is a <dfn id="dfn-dir-lang-string">directional language-tagged string</dfn>
       if both the third element and fourth elements are present.
-      Language tags are treated identically to <a>language-tagged string</a>,
-      and the fourth element , <a>base direction</a> MUST BE either `ltr` or `rtl` in lower case.</p>
+      The third element, the language tag, is treated identically as in a <a>language-tagged string</a>,
+      and the fourth element, <a>base direction</a>, MUST be either `ltr` or `rtl`, which MUST be in lower case.</p>
 
     <p>Please note that concrete syntaxes MAY support
       <dfn data-lt="simple literal" class="export">simple literals</dfn> consisting of only a
@@ -787,7 +787,7 @@ <h2>Literals</h2>
       the two <a>datatype IRIs</a>,
       the two <a>language tags</a> (if any), and
       the two <a>base directions</a> (if any)
-      all compare equal,
+      all compare equal
       (see description of string comparison in <a href="#rdf-strings" class="sectionRef"></a>).
       Thus, two literals can have the same value
       without being the same <a>RDF term</a>. For example:</p>
@@ -807,15 +807,15 @@ <h3>Initial Text Direction</h3>
 
       <p>The <a>base direction</a> of a <a>directional language-tagged string</a>
         provides a means of establishing the initial direction of text,
-        including text which is mixture of right-to-left and left-to-right scripts.
+        including text which is a mixture of right-to-left and left-to-right scripts.
         The [[[?UAX9]]] [[?UAX9]] provides support for automatically rendering
         a sequence of characters in logical order,
         so that they are visually ordered as expected.
         However, this is not sufficient to correctly render bidirectional text.</p>
 
        <p>For example, some text with a language tag "`he`" might be displayed
          in a left-to-right context (such as an English web page) as
-         <bdi dir=ltr>פעילות הבינאום, W3C</bdi>, which is incorrect. When provided
+         <bdi dir="ltr">פעילות הבינאום, W3C</bdi>, which is incorrect. When provided
          to a user agent including base direction information (such as using
          HTML's `dir` attribute) it can then be correctly presented as:
        </p>