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<p><a class="logo" href="https://whatwg.org/"><img alt="WHATWG" height="100" src="https://resources.whatwg.org/logo-fetch.svg" width="100"></a>
<h1 id="cors">Fetch</h1>
<h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="living-standard-—-last-updated-25-january-2016">Living Standard — Last Updated 25 January 2016</h2>
<h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="living-standard-—-last-updated-2-february-2016">Living Standard — Last Updated 2 February 2016</h2>

<dl>
<dt>Participate:
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<var>request</var>'s <a href="#concept-request-body" title="concept-request-body">body</a> is read from (i.e.
is transmitted or read by script), increase <var>request</var>'s
<a href="#concept-request-body" title="concept-request-body">body</a>'s
<a href="#concept-body-transmitted" title="concept-body-transmitted">transmitted</a> with the amount of payload body
<a href="#concept-body-transmitted" title="concept-body-transmitted">transmitted bytes</a> with the amount of payload body
bytes transmitted and then <a href="#queue-a-fetch-task">queue a fetch task</a> on <var>request</var> to
<a href="#process-request-body">process request body</a> for <var>request</var>.
<!-- XXX xref "read", "payload body" -->
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<h4 id="bodies"><span class="secno">3.1.4 </span>Bodies</h4>

<p>A <dfn id="concept-body" title="concept-body">body</dfn> consists of a
<a href="#concept-readablestream"><code title="concept-ReadableStream">ReadableStream</code></a> object and accompanying data.
<p>A <dfn id="concept-body" title="concept-body">body</dfn> consists of:

<p>A <a href="#concept-body" title="concept-body">body</a> has an associated
<dfn id="concept-body-stream" title="concept-body-stream">stream</dfn> (a
<a href="#concept-readablestream"><code title="concept-ReadableStream">ReadableStream</code></a> object).
<ul>
<li>
<p>A <dfn id="concept-body-stream" title="concept-body-stream">stream</dfn> (a
<a href="#concept-readablestream"><code title="concept-ReadableStream">ReadableStream</code></a> object).

<p class="XXX"><a href="https://github.com/whatwg/streams/issues/379">This might become a
<code>ReadableByteStream</code> object</a>. While the type might change, the behavior specified will
be equivalent since the hypothetical <code title="">ReadableByteStream</code> object will have the same
members as the <a href="#concept-readablestream"><code title="concept-ReadableStream">ReadableStream</code></a> object has today.
<p class="XXX"><a href="https://github.com/whatwg/streams/issues/379">This might become a
<code>ReadableByteStream</code> object</a>. While the type might change, the behavior specified
will be equivalent since the hypothetical <code title="">ReadableByteStream</code> object will have
the same members as the <a href="#concept-readablestream"><code title="concept-ReadableStream">ReadableStream</code></a> object has today.

<p>A <a href="#concept-body" title="concept-body">body</a> has an associated
<dfn id="concept-body-transmitted" title="concept-body-transmitted">transmitted</dfn> (an integer). Unless stated otherwise it is 0.
<li><p>A <dfn id="concept-body-transmitted" title="concept-body-transmitted">transmitted bytes</dfn> (an integer), initially 0.

<p>A <a href="#concept-body" title="concept-body">body</a> has an associated
<dfn id="concept-body-total-bytes" title="concept-body-total-bytes">total bytes</dfn> (an integer). Unless stated otherwise it is 0.
<li><p>A <dfn id="concept-body-total-bytes" title="concept-body-total-bytes">total bytes</dfn> (an integer), initially 0.
</ul>

<p>To <dfn id="concept-body-clone" title="concept-body-clone">clone</dfn> a <a href="#concept-body" title="concept-body">body</a>
<var>body</var>, run these steps:
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<li>Return <var>stream</var>.
</ol>

<p>To <dfn id="concept-get-reader" title="concept-get-reader">get</dfn> a reader from a
<p>To <dfn id="concept-get-reader" title="concept-get-reader">get a reader</dfn> from a
<a href="#concept-readablestream"><code title="concept-ReadableStream">ReadableStream</code></a> object <var>stream</var>, run these steps:

<ol>
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<li><p>Return <var>reader</var>.
</ol>

<p>To <dfn id="concept-read-all-bytes-from-readablestream" title="concept-read-all-bytes-from-ReadableStream">read</dfn> all bytes from a
<p>To <dfn id="concept-read-all-bytes-from-readablestream" title="concept-read-all-bytes-from-ReadableStream">read all bytes</dfn> from a
<a href="#concept-readablestream"><code title="concept-ReadableStream">ReadableStream</code></a> object with <var>reader</var>, run these
steps:

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<ol>
<li><p>Increase <var>response</var>'s
<a href="#concept-response-body" title="concept-response-body">body</a>'s
<a href="#concept-body-transmitted" title="concept-body-transmitted">transmitted</a> with <var>bytes</var>'
<a href="#concept-body-transmitted" title="concept-body-transmitted">transmitted bytes</a> with <var>bytes</var>'
length.

<li><p>Let <var>codings</var> be the result of
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non-null, or an <a href="#concept-empty-readablestream" title="concept-empty-ReadableStream">empty</a>
<a href="#concept-readablestream"><code title="concept-ReadableStream">ReadableStream</code></a> object otherwise.

<li><p>Let <var>reader</var> be the result of <a href="#concept-get-reader" title="concept-get-reader">getting</a>
a reader from <var>stream</var>. If that threw an exception, return a new promise rejected
<li><p>Let <var>reader</var> be the result of <a href="#concept-get-reader" title="concept-get-reader">getting
a reader</a> from <var>stream</var>. If that threw an exception, return a new promise rejected
with that exception.

<li><p>Let <var>promise</var> be the result of
<a href="#concept-read-all-bytes-from-readablestream" title="concept-read-all-bytes-from-ReadableStream">reading</a> all bytes from
<a href="#concept-read-all-bytes-from-readablestream" title="concept-read-all-bytes-from-ReadableStream">reading all bytes</a> from
<var>stream</var> with <var>reader</var>.

<li><p>Return the result of transforming <var>promise</var> by a fulfillment handler that
returns the result of the <a href="#concept-body-package-data" title="concept-body-package-data">package data</a> algorithm
with its first argument, <var>type</var> and <a href="#concept-body-mime-type" title="concept-body-mime-type">MIME type</a>.
with its first argument, <var>type</var> and this object's
<a href="#concept-body-mime-type" title="concept-body-mime-type">MIME type</a>.
<!-- XXX IDL really needs to define "transforming". For now it is defined in
https://www.w3.org/2001/tag/doc/promises-guide -->
</ol>
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<a href="#concept-body-stream" title="concept-body-stream">stream</a> is <var>stream</var>.

<li>
<p>Let <var>reader</var> be the result of <a href="#concept-get-reader" title="concept-get-reader">getting</a> a reader
<p>Let <var>reader</var> be the result of <a href="#concept-get-reader" title="concept-get-reader">getting a reader</a>
from <var>stream</var>.
<p class="note no-backref">This operation will not throw an exception.

<li>
<p><a href="#concept-read-all-bytes-from-readablestream" title="concept-read-all-bytes-from-ReadableStream">Read</a> all bytes from
<p><a href="#concept-read-all-bytes-from-readablestream" title="concept-read-all-bytes-from-ReadableStream">Read all bytes</a> from
<var>stream</var> with <var>reader</var>.
<p class="note no-backref">This operation makes <var>stream</var> disturbed.
</ol>
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<var>request</var>'s <span title=concept-request-body>body</span> is read from (i.e.
is transmitted or read by script), increase <var>request</var>'s
<span title=concept-request-body>body</span>'s
<span title=concept-body-transmitted>transmitted</span> with the amount of payload body
<span title=concept-body-transmitted>transmitted bytes</span> with the amount of payload body
bytes transmitted and then <span>queue a fetch task</span> on <var>request</var> to
<span>process request body</span> for <var>request</var>.
<!-- XXX xref "read", "payload body" -->
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<h4>Bodies</h4>

<p>A <dfn title=concept-body>body</dfn> consists of a
<code title=concept-ReadableStream>ReadableStream</code> object and accompanying data.
<p>A <dfn title=concept-body>body</dfn> consists of:

<p>A <span title=concept-body>body</span> has an associated
<dfn title=concept-body-stream>stream</dfn> (a
<code title=concept-ReadableStream>ReadableStream</code> object).
<ul>
<li>
<p>A <dfn title=concept-body-stream>stream</dfn> (a
<code title=concept-ReadableStream>ReadableStream</code> object).

<p class="XXX"><a href="https://github.com/whatwg/streams/issues/379">This might become a
<code>ReadableByteStream</code> object</a>. While the type might change, the behavior specified will
be equivalent since the hypothetical <code title>ReadableByteStream</code> object will have the same
members as the <code title=concept-ReadableStream>ReadableStream</code> object has today.
<p class="XXX"><a href="https://github.com/whatwg/streams/issues/379">This might become a
<code>ReadableByteStream</code> object</a>. While the type might change, the behavior specified
will be equivalent since the hypothetical <code title>ReadableByteStream</code> object will have
the same members as the <code title=concept-ReadableStream>ReadableStream</code> object has today.

<p>A <span title=concept-body>body</span> has an associated
<dfn title=concept-body-transmitted>transmitted</dfn> (an integer). Unless stated otherwise it is 0.
<li><p>A <dfn title=concept-body-transmitted>transmitted bytes</dfn> (an integer), initially 0.

<p>A <span title=concept-body>body</span> has an associated
<dfn title=concept-body-total-bytes>total bytes</dfn> (an integer). Unless stated otherwise it is 0.
<li><p>A <dfn title=concept-body-total-bytes>total bytes</dfn> (an integer), initially 0.
</ul>

<p>To <dfn title=concept-body-clone>clone</dfn> a <span title=concept-body>body</span>
<var>body</var>, run these steps:
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<li>Return <var>stream</var>.
</ol>

<p>To <dfn title=concept-get-reader>get</dfn> a reader from a
<p>To <dfn title=concept-get-reader>get a reader</dfn> from a
<code title=concept-ReadableStream>ReadableStream</code> object <var>stream</var>, run these steps:

<ol>
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<li><p>Return <var>reader</var>.
</ol>

<p>To <dfn title=concept-read-all-bytes-from-ReadableStream>read</dfn> all bytes from a
<p>To <dfn title=concept-read-all-bytes-from-ReadableStream>read all bytes</dfn> from a
<code title=concept-ReadableStream>ReadableStream</code> object with <var>reader</var>, run these
steps:

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<ol>
<li><p>Increase <var>response</var>'s
<span title=concept-response-body>body</span>'s
<span title=concept-body-transmitted>transmitted</span> with <var>bytes</var>'
<span title=concept-body-transmitted>transmitted bytes</span> with <var>bytes</var>'
length.

<li><p>Let <var>codings</var> be the result of
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non-null, or an <span title=concept-empty-ReadableStream>empty</span>
<code title=concept-ReadableStream>ReadableStream</code> object otherwise.

<li><p>Let <var>reader</var> be the result of <span title=concept-get-reader>getting</span>
a reader from <var>stream</var>. If that threw an exception, return a new promise rejected
<li><p>Let <var>reader</var> be the result of <span title=concept-get-reader>getting
a reader</span> from <var>stream</var>. If that threw an exception, return a new promise rejected
with that exception.

<li><p>Let <var>promise</var> be the result of
<span title=concept-read-all-bytes-from-ReadableStream>reading</span> all bytes from
<span title=concept-read-all-bytes-from-ReadableStream>reading all bytes</span> from
<var>stream</var> with <var>reader</var>.

<li><p>Return the result of transforming <var>promise</var> by a fulfillment handler that
returns the result of the <span title=concept-body-package-data>package data</span> algorithm
with its first argument, <var>type</var> and <span title=concept-body-mime-type>MIME type</span>.
with its first argument, <var>type</var> and this object's
<span title=concept-body-mime-type>MIME type</span>.
<!-- XXX IDL really needs to define "transforming". For now it is defined in
https://www.w3.org/2001/tag/doc/promises-guide -->
</ol>
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<span title=concept-body-stream>stream</span> is <var>stream</var>.

<li>
<p>Let <var>reader</var> be the result of <span title=concept-get-reader>getting</span> a reader
<p>Let <var>reader</var> be the result of <span title=concept-get-reader>getting a reader</span>
from <var>stream</var>.
<p class="note no-backref">This operation will not throw an exception.

<li>
<p><span title=concept-read-all-bytes-from-ReadableStream>Read</span> all bytes from
<p><span title=concept-read-all-bytes-from-ReadableStream>Read all bytes</span> from
<var>stream</var> with <var>reader</var>.
<p class="note no-backref">This operation makes <var>stream</var> disturbed.
</ol>
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