fix up language in the packaging tutorial (#887)

* fix up language in the packaging tutorial - make many sentences shorter - add links - expand on finding things - use more domain-specific headings - add next steps Co-authored-by: Henrik <i97henka@gmail.com> Co-authored-by: Olivia Crain <olivia@olivia.dev> Co-authored-by: Silvan Mosberger <github@infinisil.com>
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@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@ This file can be shared with anyone to recreate the same environment on a differ
 
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-### What will you need?
+### What do you need?
 
-- A basic understanding of the [Nix language](reading-nix-language)
+- A rudimentary understanding of the [Nix language](reading-nix-language)
 
 ## Entering a temporary shell