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Added IPV6 information to setup cluster using kubeadm #6465

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@jamiehannaford Can you do a tech review for this? Thanks.

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Good first step. Please implement the change requests and resubmit.

@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ something provider-specific. The tabs below will contain a notice about what fla
on `kubeadm init` are required.
- Unless otherwise specified, kubeadm uses the default gateway's network interface
to advertise the master's IP. If you want to use a different network interface, specify
`--apiserver-advertise-address=<ip-address>` argument to `kubeadm init`.
`--apiserver-advertise-address=<ip-address>` argument to `kubeadm init`. To configure IPV6 for apiserver, this argument should be specified with IPV6 enclosed in square brackets `--apiserver-advertise-address=[ipv6-address]`
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Brackets are not needed when specifying an apiserver-advertise-address IPv6 address. Brackets should only ever be required when specifying an IPv6 tuple, i.e. [fd00:db01::100]:8080.

Instead of the docs you added to line 118, consider the following "To deploy an IPv6 Kubernetes cluster using IPv6 addressing, you must specify an IPv6 --apiserver-advertise-address".

nit: Please replace all references of IPV6 with IPv6 (lowercase v)

@@ -371,6 +386,8 @@ The nodes are where your workloads (containers and pods, etc) run. To add new no
kubeadm join --token <token> <master-ip>:<master-port> --discovery-token-ca-cert-hash sha256:<hash>
```

Please note that to specify IPV6 for master-ip it must be enclosed in square brackets, for instance `[fd00::100]`.
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sub Please note with Note:

@@ -211,7 +226,7 @@ supports Container Network Interface (CNI) based networks (and does not support

Several projects provide Kubernetes pod networks using CNI, some of which also
support [Network Policy](/docs/concepts/services-networking/networkpolicies/). See the [add-ons
page](/docs/concepts/cluster-administration/addons/) for a complete list of available network add-ons.
page](/docs/concepts/cluster-administration/addons/) for a complete list of available network add-ons. IPV6 support was added in CNI v0.6, so for IPV6 based network please use CNI version 0.6 or higher.
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sub IPV6 with IPv6

sub 0.6 with 0.6.0 and link to the cni 0.6.0 release page: https://github.com/containernetworking/cni/releases/tag/v0.6.0

Please note that CNI bridge and local-ipam are the only supported drivers in 1.9. Link to these drivers:
https://github.com/containernetworking/plugins/blob/master/plugins/main/bridge/README.md
https://github.com/containernetworking/plugins/blob/master/plugins/ipam/host-local/README.md

@@ -125,6 +125,21 @@ components. This may take several minutes.
- You can't run `kubeadm init` twice without tearing down the cluster in between
([unless you're upgrading from v1.6 to v1.7](/docs/tasks/administer-cluster/kubeadm-upgrade-1-7/)),
see [Tear Down](#tear-down).
- Optionally, to specify IPV6 for liveness probe for control-plan components and etcd server, you can specify extraArgs in kubeadm.conf file as mentioned in example below. ${APISERVER_ADVERTISE_ADDRESS} is your IPV6 enclosed in square brackets.
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Substitute control-plan with controlplane or control plane
Substitute IPV6 with IPv6

Instead of adding line 128. I would add to line 119. Line 119 is already referring to using custom args to customize the controlplane.

Then update /docs/admin/kubeadm#custom-args with your example kubeadm.conf with a sentence that states this is an example of setting an IPv6 address for controller-manager, scheduler and etcd. Replace ${APISERVER_ADVERTISE_ADDRESS} with an example IPv6 apiserver address.

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looking good! just a few minor edits

@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ following steps:
See [Securing your installation](#securing-more) for hardening.

1. kubeadm installs add-on components via the API server. Right now this is
the internal DNS server and the kube-proxy DaemonSet.
the internal DNS server and the kube-proxy DaemonSet. There is no requirement for specifying kube-proxy bind address in kubeadm.conf. The kube-proxy bind address is dynamically assigned based on the address type of API server (i.e. v4 will assign 0.0.0.0 & v6 will assign :: ).
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replace kubeadm.conf with the kubeadm configuration file

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based on the address type of API server

do you mean the --bind-address of the API server? If so, can we explicit reference that

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The proxy address is determined based on the address type (IPv4 or IPv6) of the
--apiserver-advertise-address. However, this should not be mentioned b/c the kubeadm conf file is not used for managing the proxy config.

@@ -1020,8 +1020,19 @@ apiVersion: kubeadm.k8s.io/v1alpha1
kind: MasterConfiguration
apiServerExtraArgs:
feature-gates: APIResponseCompression=true
apiServerExtraArgs:
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I'm not sure IPv6 args should be placed in a default section. Can we create a new section called IPv6 configuration or something?

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Optionally, IPv6 for liveness probe for control plane components and etcd server can also be specified using extra args as mentioned in the example above. Please note that whenever IPv6 is specified as a tuple of IP:Port, IPv6 must be enclosed in square brackets.
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the IPv6 hostname must be enclosed

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"...whenever an IPv6 address is...IP:Port, the IPv6 address must be..."

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Optionally, IPv6 for liveness probe for control plane components and etcd server can also be specified using extra args as mentioned in the example above. Please note that whenever IPv6 is specified as a tuple of IP:Port, IPv6 must be enclosed in square brackets.
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"...whenever an IPv6 address is...IP:Port, the IPv6 address must be..."

@@ -111,8 +111,8 @@ flags that can be used to customise the Kubernetes installation.
- `--apiserver-advertise-address`

This is the address the API Server will advertise to other members of the
cluster. This is also the address used to construct the suggested `kubeadm
join` line at the end of the init process. If not set (or set to 0.0.0.0) then
cluster. API server IP address can either be IPv4 or IPv6.This is also the address used to construct the suggested `kubeadm
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Nit: Space after period.

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Almost there.

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apiVersion: kubeadm.k8s.io/v1alpha1
kind: MasterConfiguration
apiServerExtraArgs:
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Lines 1040 and 1041 should be removed from the IPv6 kubeadm conf file example.

`--apiserver-advertise-address=<ip-address>` argument to `kubeadm init`.
- If you would like to customise control plane components, you can do so by providing
extra args to each one, as documented [here](/docs/admin/kubeadm#custom-args).
`--apiserver-advertise-address=<ip-address>` argument to `kubeadm init`. To deploy an IPv6 Kubernetes cluster using IPv6 addressing, you must specify an IPv6 `--apiserver-advertise-address=<IPv6-address>`
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Please update this portion:

you must specify an IPv6 address --apiserver-advertise-address=<ipv6-address>

@@ -211,7 +210,7 @@ supports Container Network Interface (CNI) based networks (and does not support

Several projects provide Kubernetes pod networks using CNI, some of which also
support [Network Policy](/docs/concepts/services-networking/networkpolicies/). See the [add-ons
page](/docs/concepts/cluster-administration/addons/) for a complete list of available network add-ons.
page](/docs/concepts/cluster-administration/addons/) for a complete list of available network add-ons. IPv6 support was added in [CNI v0.6.0](https://github.com/containernetworking/cni/releases/tag/v0.6.0), so for IPv6 based network please use CNI version 0.6.0 or higher. [CNI bridge](https://github.com/containernetworking/plugins/blob/master/plugins/main/bridge/README.md) and [local-ipam](https://github.com/containernetworking/plugins/blob/master/plugins/ipam/host-local/README.md) are the only supported drivers in 1.9.
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substitute "supported drivers in 1.9" with "supported IPv6 network plugins in 1.9"

delete ", so for IPv6 based network please use CNI version 0.6.0 or higher"

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@mmueen 👋 Because this is documentation for a 1.9 release feature, it needs to base off of release-1.9 instead of master. I'll make the change; just wanted to surface it for visibility.

@zacharysarah zacharysarah changed the base branch from master to release-1.9 November 30, 2017 19:59
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@mmueen 👋 Please resolve the merge conflicts.

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UPDATE 2: No autogenerated docs are included, changes are LGTM as given. 👍

UPDATE: Like #6498, this PR makes changes to autogenerated files that will be overwritten the next time docs are generated. Waiting on confirmation for locations of origin files.

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@mmueen Docs code freeze begins today at 7pm Pacific time. Without resolving merge conflicts, this feature documentation will not be included in the 1.9 release. Please:

  1. Resolve the merge conflicts ASAP.
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* Couple nits for dnsConfig doc (#6652)

* Add doc for AllowedFlexVolume (#6563)

* Update OpenStack Cloud Provider API support for v1.9 (#6638)

* Flex volume is GA. Remove alpha notation. (#6666)

* Update generated ref docs for Kubernetes and Federation components. (#6658)

* Update generated ref docs for Kubernetes and Federation components.

* Rename kubectl-options to kubectl.

* Add title to kubectl.

* Fix double synopsis.

* Update Federation API ref docs for 1.9. (#6636)

* Update federation API ref docs.

* Move and redirect.

* Move generated Federation docs to the generated directory.

* Fix titles.

* Type

* Fix titles

* Update auto-generated Kubernetes APi ref docs. (#6646)

* Update kubectl commands for 1.9 (#6635)

* add ExtendedResourceToleration admission controller (#6618)

* Update API reference paths for v1.9 (#6681)
zacharysarah added a commit that referenced this pull request Dec 16, 2017
* Trivial change to open release branch

* Undo trivial change

* add service ipvs overview

* Add instructions on how to setup kubectl

* Document conntrack dependency for kube-proxy

* Add an a

This is kind of jarring / missing an article. I'm guessing it should either be ' to a rack of bare metal servers.' or '...to racks of bare metal servers.'.

* adding example responses for common issues

 - support request
 - code bug report

* Trivial change to open release branch

* Undo trivial change

* Signed-off-by: Ziqi Zhao <zhaoziqi@qiniu.com> (#5366)

Fix the not-working test case yaml for /doc/concepts/storage/volumes.md

* kubectl-overview

* temp fix for broken pod and deployment links

* Update Table of Solutions for Juju

* Revise certificates documentation (#5965)

* Update review-issues.md

Some edits for clarity and condensed language.

* Update init-containers.md

Fix leading spaces in commands.

* Update kubectl-overview.md

Fix format.

* Update clc.md

Fix format.

* Update openstack-heat.md

The url no need. just  highlight.

* Typo

I believe this should be "users" not "uses"

* making explicit hostname uniq requirement

* Update scheduling-hugepages.md

* Update update-daemon-set.md

* fix redirection of PersistentVolume

* Update hpa.md

* update kubectl instruction

* Use the format of kubeadm init

* fix spelling error

guarnatees  to guarantees

* add matchLabels description (#6020)

* search and replace for k8s.github.io to website (#6019)

* fix scale command of object-management (#6011)

* Update replicaset.md (#6009)

* Update secret.md (#6008)

* specify password for mysql image (#5990)

* specify password for mysql image

* specify password for mysql image

* link error for run-stateless-application-deployment.md (#5985)

* link error for run-stateless-application-deployment.md

* link error for run-stateless-application-deployment.md

* Add performance implications of inter-pod affinity/anti-affinity (#5979)

* 404 monthly maintenance - October 2017 (#5977)

* Updated redirects

* More redirects

* Add conjure-up to Turnkey Cloud Solutions list (#5973)

* Add conjure-up to Turnkey Cloud Solutions list

* Changed wording slightly

* change the StatefulSet to ReplicaSet in reference (#5968)

* Clarification of failureThreshold of probes (#5963)

* Mention usage of block storage version param (#5925)

Mention usage of block storage version (bs-version) parameter to
workaround attachment issues using older K8S versions on an OpenStack
cloud with path-based endpoints.

Resolves: #5924

* Update sysctl-cluster.md (#5894)

Include guide on enabling unsafe sysctls in minikube

* Avoid Latin phrases & format note (#5889)

* Avoid Latin phrases & format note

according the Documentation Style Guide

* Update scratch.md

* Update scratch.md

* resolves jekyll rendering error (#5976)

- chinese isn't understood for keys in YAML frontmatter in jekyll, so
   replaced it with the english equivalent that doesn't throw the
following error on rendering:

Error reading file src/kubernetes.github.io/cn/docs/concepts/cluster-administration/device-plugins.md: (<unknown>): could not find expected ':' while scanning a simple key at line 4 column 1

* Change VM to pod. (#6022)

* Add link to custom metrics. (#6023)

* Rephrase core group. (#6024)

* Added explanation on context to when joining (#6018)

* Update create-cluster-kubeadm.md (#5761)

Update Canal version in pod network apply commands

* Fixes issue #5620 (#5869)

* Fixes issue #5620

Signed-off-by: Brad Topol <btopol@us.ibm.com>

* Restructured so that review process is for both current and upcoming
releases.  Added content describing the use of tech reviewers.

* Removed incorrect Kubernetes reviewer link.

* Fixed tech reviewer URL to now use website

* Update pod-priority-preemption.md

fix-wrong-link-to-pod-preemption

* pod-security-policy.md: add links to the page about admission plugins.

* Adding all files for BlaBlaCar case study (#5857)

* Adding all files for BlaBlaCar case study

* Update blablacar.html

* Fix changed URL for google containers

* Add /docs/reference/auto-generated directory

* correct the downwardapi redirect

* Remove links using "here"

* Rename to /docs/reference/generated directory

* add Concept template

* Change title to just Ingress

* Link mistake (#6038)

* link mistake

* link mistake

* skip title check for skip_title_check.txt

* skip title check for skip_title_check.txt

* remove doesn't exist link.

* Fix podpreset task (#5705)

* Add a simple pod manifest to pod overview (#5986)

* Split PodPreset concept out from task doc (#5984)

* Add selector spec description (#5789)

* Add selector spec description

* Fix selector field explanation

* Put orphaned topics in TOC. (#6051)

* static-pod example bad format in the final page (#6050)

* static-pod example bad format in the final page

* static-pod example bad format in the final page

* static-pod example bad format in the final page

* static-pod example bad format in the final page

* static-pod example bad format in the final page

* Fix `backoffLimit` field misplacement (#6042)

It should be placed in JobSpec according to:
https://github.com/kubernetes/kubernetes/blob/master/api/swagger-spec/batch_v1.json#L1488-L1514

* Update addons.md (#6061)

* add info about VMware NSX-T CNI plugin (#5987)

* add info about VMware NSX-T CNI plugin

Hello,

I'm VMware Networking and Security Architect and would like to include short information about our CNI plugin implementation similar to what other vendors did

Best regards

Emil Gagala

* Update networking.md

* Update networking.md

* Update networking.md

* Update: Using universal zsh configuration (#5669)

* Update install-kubectl.md

Zsh is not only oh-my-zsh, so I added universal configuration for zsh that also can be used in prezto.

* fix merge error after rebase

* Operating etcd cluster for Kubernetes bad format in the final page (#6056)

* Operating etcd cluster for Kubernetes bad format in the final page

* Update configure-upgrade-etcd.md

* Update configure-upgrade-etcd.md

* Usage note and warning tags. (#6053)

* Usage note and warning tags.

* Update configure-upgrade-etcd.md

* Update configure-upgrade-etcd.md

* Document jekyll includes snippets

* Add jekyll includes to docs home toc

- Remove extra kubernetes home in toc

* document docker cgroupdriver req (#5937)

* Update test blacklists (#6063)

* Update toc check blacklist

* Update title check blacklist

* wip

* wip

* Fix typo

* Document unconfined apparmor profile

* Revert "Document the unconfined profile for AppArmor" (#6268)

* CRD Validation: remove alpha warning, change enable instructions to (#6066)

disable

* Documented service annotation for AWS ELB SSL policy

* kubeadm: add a note about the new `--print-join-command` flag.

This is a new flag for the `kubeadm token create` command.

* Add a note to PDB page

* Improve Kubeadm reference doc (#6103)

* automatically-generated kubeadm reference doc

* user-mantained kubeadm reference doc

* Documentation for CSIPersistentVolume

* change replicaset documentation to use apps/v1 APIs

* Update service.md

ipvs alpha version -> beta version

* Updated Deployment concept docs (#6494)

* Updated Deployment concept docs

* Addressed comments

* Documentation for volume scheduling alpha feature

* Update admission control docs for webhooks

* Improve DNS documentation (#6479)

* update ds for 1.9

* Update service.md

* Update service.md

* Revert "begin updating webhook documentation" (#6575)

* Update version numbers to include 1.9 (#6518)

* Update site versions for 1.9

* Removed 1.4 docs

* Update _config.yml

* Update _config.yml

* updates for raw block devices

* rbac: docs for aggregated cluster roles (#6474)

* Added IPv6 information for Kubelet arguments (#6498)

* Added IPv6 info to kube-proxy arguments

* Added IPv6 information for argument for kubelet

* Update PVC resizing documentation (#6487)

* Updates for Windows Server version 1709 with K8s v1.8 (#6180)

* Updated for WSv1709 and K8s v1.8

* Updated picture and CNI config

* Fixed formatting on CNI Config

* Updated docs to reference Microsoft/SDN GitHub docs

* fix typo

* Workaround for Jekyllr frontmatter

* Added section on features and limitations, with example yaml files.

* Update index.md

* Added kubeadm section, few other small fixes

* Few minor grammar fixes

* Update access-cluster.md with a comment that for IPv6
the user should use [::1] for the localhost

* Addressed a number of issues brought up against the base PR

* Fixed windows-host-setup link

* Rewrite PodSecurityPolicy guide

* Update index.md

Signed-off-by: Alin Balutoiu <abalutoiu@cloudbasesolutions.com>
Signed-off-by: Alin Gabriel Serdean <aserdean@ovn.org>

* Spelling correction and sentence capitalization.

- Corrected the spelling error for storing, was put in as 'stoing'.
- Capitalized list items.
- Added '.' at end of sentences in the list items.

* Update index.md

* Update index.md

* Addressed comments and rebased

* Fixed formatting

* Fixed formatting

* Updated header link

* Updated hyperlinks

* Updated warning

* formatting

* formatting

* formatting

* Revert "Update access-cluster.md with a comment that for IPv6"

This reverts commit 31e4dbd.

* Revert "fix typo"

This reverts commit c056787.

* Revert "Workaround for Jekyllr frontmatter"

This reverts commit b84ac59.

* Fixed grammatical issues and reverted non-related commits

* Revert "Rewrite PodSecurityPolicy guide"

This reverts commit 5d39cfe.

* Revert "Spelling correction and sentence capitalization."

This reverts commit 47eed43.

* Fixed auto-numbering

* Minor formatting updates

* CoreDNS feature documentation (#6463)

* Initial placeholder PR for CoreDNS feature documentation

* Remove from admin, add content

* Fix missing endcapture

* Add to tasks.yml

* Review feedback

* Postpone Deletion of a Persistent Volume Claim in case It Is Used by a Pod (#6415)

* Postpone Deletion of a Persistent Volume Claim in case It Is Used by a Pod

A new feature PVC Protection was added into K8s 1.9 that's why this documentation change is needed.

* Added tag at the top of each new area.

* Fix typo

* Fix: switched on in (all kubelets) -> (all K8s components).

* Added link to admission controller

* Moved PVC Protection configuration into Before you begin section.

* Added steps how to verify PVC Protection feature.

* Fixes for admission controller plugin description and for PVC Protection description in PVC lifecycle.

* Testing official rendering of enumerations (1., 2., 3., etc.)

* Re-write to address comments from review.

* Fixed definition when a PVC is in active use by a pod.

* Change auditing docs page for 1.9 release (#6427)

* Change auditing docs page for 1.9 release

Signed-off-by: Mik Vyatskov <vmik@google.com>

* Address review comments

Signed-off-by: Mik Vyatskov <vmik@google.com>

* Address review comments

Signed-off-by: Mik Vyatskov <vmik@google.com>

* Address review comments

Signed-off-by: Mik Vyatskov <vmik@google.com>

* Fix broken link

Signed-off-by: Mik Vyatskov <vmik@google.com>

* short circuit deny docs (#6536)

* line wrap

* short circuit deny

* address comments

* Add kubeadm 1.9 upgrade docs (#6485)

* kubeadm: Improve kubeadm documentation for v1.9 (#6645)

* Update admission control docs for webhooks (re-send #6368) (#6650)

* Update admission control docs for webhooks

* update in response to comments

* Revamp rkt and add CRI-O as alternative runtime (#6371)

Signed-off-by: Lorenzo Fontana <lo@linux.com>

* Documented NLB for Kubernetes 1.9 (#6260)

* Added IPV6 information to setup cluster using kubeadm (#6465)

* Added IPV6 information to setup cluster using kubeadm

* Updated kubeadm.md & create-cluster-kubeadm.md with IPv6 related information

* Added IPv6 options for kubeadm --init  & automated address binding for kube-proxy based on version of IP configured for API server)

* Changes to kubeadm.md as per comments

* Modified kubeadm.md and create-cluster-kubeadm.md

* Implemented changes requested by zacharysarah

* Removed autogenerated kubeadm.md changes

* StatefulSet 1.9 updates. (#6550)

* updates sts concept and tutorials to use 1.9 apps/v1

* Update statefulset.md

* clarify pod name label

* Garbage collection updates for 1.9 (#6555)

* 1.9 gc policy update

* carify deletion

* Couple nits for dnsConfig doc (#6652)

* Add doc for AllowedFlexVolume (#6563)

* Update OpenStack Cloud Provider API support for v1.9 (#6638)

* Flex volume is GA. Remove alpha notation. (#6666)

* Update generated ref docs for Kubernetes and Federation components. (#6658)

* Update generated ref docs for Kubernetes and Federation components.

* Rename kubectl-options to kubectl.

* Add title to kubectl.

* Fix double synopsis.

* Update Federation API ref docs for 1.9. (#6636)

* Update federation API ref docs.

* Move and redirect.

* Move generated Federation docs to the generated directory.

* Fix titles.

* Type

* Fix titles

* Update auto-generated Kubernetes APi ref docs. (#6646)

* Update kubectl commands for 1.9 (#6635)

* add ExtendedResourceToleration admission controller (#6618)

* Update API reference paths for v1.9 (#6681)
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